英语应用文写作请假条.ppt
英语应用文写作英语应用文写作 请假条请假条1.I think she will very happy.2.Im going to by her a dress.3.I want to give she a surprise.4.Now I busy do my homework.5.My father very like light music.把下列句子错误之处改正把下列句子错误之处改正_buy_her_am busy doing_likesvery muchbe简单句的五种基本句型简单句的五种基本句型 1主语主语+不及物动词（不及物动词（+状语）状语）他们昨天到的。他们昨天到的。They arrived yesterday.2主语主语+系动词系动词+表语表语他是一位医生。他是一位医生。He is a doctor.3主语主语+及物动词及物动词+宾语（宾语（+状语）状语）他每天打篮球。他每天打篮球。He plays basketball every day.4主语主语+及物动词及物动词+间接宾语间接宾语+直接宾语直接宾语昨天他的父亲给他买了一辆自行车。昨天他的父亲给他买了一辆自行车。His father bought him a bike yesterday.5主语主语+及物动词及物动词+宾语宾语+宾语补足语宾语补足语我们必须保持课室干净。我们必须保持课室干净。We must keep our classroom clean.1)Jack,football match 1)Jack,football match yesterday,wet all overyesterday,wet all overJack had a football match yesterday with his classmates and he was wet all over.2)take off his sweater,go home with only a T-shirt2)take off his sweater,go home with only a T-shirtJack took off his sweater and went home with only a T-shirt.3)got a fever,a headache,sore throat3)got a fever,a headache,sore throatJack got a fever and had a headache and a sore throat.4)doctor,take the pills,have a good rest4)doctor,take the pills,have a good restThe doctor asked him to take the pills and have a good rest.Complete the note for sick leave.Dear Mrs.Lawson,I am sorry that I cant come to school today.I have caught a bad cold and I feel terrible.Yesterday _.Then I _ and went home _.After dinner,I felt _.The doctor _.I hope you can give me a leave.Yours,JackDearDear Mrs.Lawson,Mrs.Lawson,I am sorry that I cant come to school today.I am sorry that I cant come to school today.I have caught a bad cold and I feel terrible.I have caught a bad cold and I feel terrible.Yesterday Yesterday _.Then _.Then I _ and went home I _ and went home _.After dinner,I felt _.After dinner,I felt _.The doctor _.The doctor _._.I hope you can give me a leave.I hope you can give me a leave.Yours,Yours,Jack JackI had a football match with my classmates and was wet all overtook off my sweatertook off my sweaterwith only a T-shirtwith only a T-shirtterrible and got a fever.I had a headache and a sore throatgave me some pills and asked me to have a good rest请假条格式及表达方式请假条格式及表达方式 June 1,2011Dear Mr.Li,(1)Im sorry to tell you that I cant _.(2)_.(3)Im writing to ask you for a days leave.Yours,Wu Dong 1.开头，提出请假。开头，提出请假。I am sorry that I wont be able to I am sorry to tell you that I cant 2.文中，具体请假原因、事情由来。文中，具体请假原因、事情由来。3.结尾，希望获得准假的时间。结尾，希望获得准假的时间。I am writing to ask you for a days sick leave.I have to ask for two days leave.在在Activity 12中找出：（中找出：（1）开头；（）开头；（2）文中；（）文中；（3）结尾。）结尾。（1）I am sorry that I cant come to school today.（2）I have caught a bad cold and I feel terrible.Yesterday I had a football match with my classmates,and I was wet all over.Then I took off my sweater and went home with only a T-shirt.After dinner,I felt terrible and got a fever.had a headache and a sore throat.The doctor asked me to take some pills and have a good rest.（3）I hope you can give me a leave.应用写作应用写作（2010年广东省高职高考试题，年广东省高职高考试题，共共10分）分）【写作内容写作内容】你叫李华。请给你的班主任你叫李华。请给你的班主任王老师写张请假条。文中要包括请假的原因、王老师写张请假条。文中要包括请假的原因、时长等要点。时长等要点。【写作要求写作要求】正文约正文约40个英文单词；文中个英文单词；文中不可出现你所在学校的校名、你自己和老师的不可出现你所在学校的校名、你自己和老师的真实姓名等信息。真实姓名等信息。参考示例参考示例 Dear Miss/Mr.Wang,I am sorry that I cant come to school today.Since I got up this morning I have not been feeling well.I think I have caught a bad cold.I would like to see a doctor and get some medicine.I hope you can give me a days sick leave.Sincerely Yours,Li Hua 评分标准：评分标准：建议分五档给分。评分时，可先根据作建议分五档给分。评分时，可先根据作文的文的内容和语言内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后视具体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后视具体情况在该档次前后加减在该档次前后加减1分，确定得分。对满分者，要慎重。分，确定得分。对满分者，要慎重。对正文少于对正文少于20字的作文，至少扣字的作文，至少扣2分；对于分；对于20字以上字以上30字以下的作文，可酌情扣分，但不宜超过字以下的作文，可酌情扣分，但不宜超过2分。分。第一档：第一档：0分。分。白卷或只有几个毫无内在关联的孤白卷或只有几个毫无内在关联的孤立单词。立单词。第二档：第二档：2分。分。条理不清，语言支离破碎，且有严条理不清，语言支离破碎，且有严重语言错误；无称呼语和结尾套语。重语言错误；无称呼语和结尾套语。第三档：第三档：5分。分。连贯性较差，整体思想表达还算清连贯性较差，整体思想表达还算清楚，有一些语言错误。有称呼语和结尾套语楚，有一些语言错误。有称呼语和结尾套语(以下两档以下两档同同)。第四档：第四档：8分。分。文字比较连贯，个别地方表达思想文字比较连贯，个别地方表达思想不够清楚；仍有少数语言错误。不够清楚；仍有少数语言错误。第五档：第五档：10分。分。文字连贯性好，思想表达相当清文字连贯性好，思想表达相当清楚；只有个别轻微的语言错误。楚；只有个别轻微的语言错误。Homework 假设你患重感冒并发高烧，明天假设你患重感冒并发高烧，明天去看医生。请你给班主任苏老师写一去看医生。请你给班主任苏老师写一张请假条。字数张请假条。字数40左右。左右。Thank you and good-bye!
