公开课如何写建议信.ppt

Once upon a time there was a boy who fond of reading.However,he was very poor to buy any books.That was the reason that he had to borrow books from a rich man who owned a lot of books.The boy knew clearly that he has to finish reading the books he had borrowed them and return them to the owner as soon as possible.A rich man,who was ready to lend any of his book to the boy,read few of his own books.With time going on,the boy read a lots but finally became a famous writerin his time.Though the rich man had so many books,he remained a man with little knowledge because of he seldom read his books.Recently,our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.Some of my classmates are in favor of the move.They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams.They also say that once moved,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs.However,other students are against the idea,saying that the Beijing Zoo,built in 1906,has a history of 100 years,and is wellknown at home and abroad.So it should remain where it is.Whats more,if we move the zoo,some animals may die.To move or not,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.Yours truly,Li Huawriting Dear Mr.Wang,Knowing that our library is going to buy books,Id like to give some advice.What we need most are popular science books.They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.In addition to reading for knowledge,we read for fun and inspiration.That is why I recommend another category of books:literary books.They not only offer us joy and excitement,but also encourage us to think critically.Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation.Yours sincerely,Li Yue建议信Ending express your hopeBeginning state your purposeBody give advice&reasons1.Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on2.I am writing to express my views concerning3.Knowing that,Id like to give some suggestions.A.state your purpose A.state your purpose sentence patterns B.give your advice B.give your advice 1.Its helpful/important to2.It would be a good idea to3.I would like to suggest that C.express your hopeC.express your hope1.I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.2.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.3.Im sure if you take my advice,you will 表达愿望：表达愿望：5 5、我相信如果你接受我的建议，你会变、我相信如果你接受我的建议，你会变得更加苗条和保持健康。得更加苗条和保持健康。The use of sentence patterns表明意图：表明意图：1.1.你给你给Jane 回回信就如何减肥提建议。信就如何减肥提建议。提出建议：提出建议：2 2、健康饮食、健康饮食3 3、多锻炼、多锻炼4 4、喝足够多的水、喝足够多的水Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight,Id like to give some suggestions.It is important to have a healthy diet.It is helpful to do more exercise.It would be a good idea to drink enough water.I am sure if you take my advice,you will become slimmer and stay healthy.假设你叫李华，你的好朋友假设你叫李华，你的好朋友JaneJane最近发现自己最近发现自己在发胖，很苦恼。她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议。在发胖，很苦恼。她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议。请你根据下面的内容给简写一封信，词数请你根据下面的内容给简写一封信，词数100100左右。左右。1 1、健康饮食、健康饮食 2 2、多锻炼、多锻炼 3 3、喝足够多的水、喝足够多的水 It is helpful to do more exercise.It would be a good idea to drink enough water.It is important to have a healthy diet.Dear Jane,Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight,Id like to give some suggestions.First,it is important to have a healthy diet.In addition,it would be a good idea to drink enough water.Besides,it is helpful to do more exercise.I am sure if you take my advice,you will become slimmer and stay healthy.In order to lose weight,you can eat more vegetables and fruits.The more exercise you take,the more fat you will burn off,and you will be thinner.Because water can support our body and activities,and help us lose weight.Dear Jane,Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight,Id like to give some suggestions.First,it is important to have a healthy diet.In order to lose weight,you can eat more vegetables and fruits.Besides,it also helps if you take more exercise.The more exercise you take,the more fat you will burn off,and you will be thinner.In addition,it should be a good idea to drink enough water,because water can support our body and activities,and help us lose weight.Im sure if you take my advice,you will become slimmer and stay healthy.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。引出话题，表明写作意图1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。提出建议：总结，表达愿望连接词(多个建议+多个理由)评分标准1 1、是否覆盖所有内容要点、是否覆盖所有内容要点2 2、是否恰当使用语法结构、是否恰当使用语法结构 3 3、是否运用多样句式和丰富的词汇、是否运用多样句式和丰富的词汇4 4、是否使用连接词、是否使用连接词5 5、全文结构是否完整合理、全文结构是否完整合理Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students.Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers,and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.In addition,You can also make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes,Li Hua1.memorize the sentence patterns2.polish your writing