英语观点对比类作文写作分析资料.ppt

英语观点对比类作文写作分析 观点对比类作文观点对比类作文 写作技巧写作技巧 高三英语写作高三英语写作-How to write-How to write an argumentationan argumentation（议论文）（议论文）词汇词汇,句型句型,语法多样化语法多样化 1.覆盖了所有的覆盖了所有的要点要点 2.应用了较多的语法结构应用了较多的语法结构和词汇和词汇 3.有效地使用了语句间的有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要要点点全全连连接接词词如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？1.(因为因为)_ his help,I finished the work at last.Thanks toAs a result ofOwing to Due to 因为因为Because of /with2.More roads will have to be built with more cars,_（所以）（所以）well have less field to grow rice.thereforeSo as a result/consequence thus 结果结果3.The rent is reasonable,_,the location is perfect.房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。whats moremoreover/furthermorein addition besides 另外另外(递进）递进）4.The young man didnt enjoy his old job._(相反相反)he finds the new job very interesting.On the contrary,However,转折转折But/yet/while5._(总之总之),we should make good use of computer.In generalIn a word/all in all总结总结In short/briefGenerally speaking6._(我认为我认为),students had better not buy a cellphone.we should spend time and money on other more important things.As far as Im concernedIn my opinion/its my opinion that个人观个人观点点I think/believe the structure of the article topic sentence for the opinion against the opinionending sentence 介绍讨论的主题介绍讨论的主题(开头句开头句)：1.我们举行了一场讨论我们举行了一场讨论/调查，讨论内容是调查，讨论内容是Recently we had a heated discussion on/aboutWe had a discussion/survey onAccroding to a recent survey,There is much discussion today about2.当说到当说到 时时When it comes to，3.问题引起了越来越多的关注问题引起了越来越多的关注The topic of is becoming more and more popular recently.There is a widespread concern over the issue thatnOpinions are divided on this issue.nOpinions are mainly divided into two groups.nDifferent people,however,hold/have different opinions on this matter.nDifferent people,however,think quite differently on this matter.nPeople,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.nPeople,have taken/adopted different attitudes towards this matter.过渡句过渡句介绍正方观点：介绍正方观点：nSome people agree with/approve/support the opinion/decision/idea/view thatnSome of them hold the opinion/view thatnMost of then are in favor of the idea thatnPeople who are for the idea think thatnThose who support it think thatnSixty percent of the students are for the idea.nSupporters think/believe that介绍反方观点介绍反方观点nHowever/But/On the contrary/In contrast/On contrast/On the other hand/,others are opposed to/are against/disagree with the opinion.nPeople who are against it dont think so.nHowever,of them hold a different view.nDifferent from those,people thinkn of the students think thatnHowever,others have different opinions.nOthers argue that idea,in their opinion,they think/believe that.进一步介绍进一步介绍 观点观点nWhats morenFurthermore/moreover,.nMeanwhile,nWhats worsenIn addition,nBesides,nPlus,nFirst,Second,Third,总结句总结句(未达成一致未达成一致)nIn short,no agreement has been reached yet.nSo far,no agreement has been reached.nIn short,the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.本人观点：本人观点：As far as I am concerned,In my opinion,From my point of view,Personally,For me,Its my opinion that,because/the reason is that/for one thing,.for another thing,.I think.I firmly supportthe view that Im for the first/second view.对比类写作对比类写作 实战模版实战模版 过渡句过渡句观点一观点一论据一论据一论据二论据二论据三论据三观点二观点二论据一论据一论据二论据二总结总结可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出观点一观点一(支持支持)，并用一系列，并用一系列论据论据进行阐明。说明完观点一之进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，再提出后，再提出观点二（反对）观点二（反对），继续用论据进行，继续用论据进行说明。最后总结自己的观点。说明。最后总结自己的观点。你班同学组织了一场讨论。主题是：城市是否你班同学组织了一场讨论。主题是：城市是否可以养宠物。请根据以下信息，介绍讨论情况，可以养宠物。请根据以下信息，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点和建议。并说明自己的观点和建议。Recently we had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities._支持饲养宠物支持饲养宠物反对饲养宠物反对饲养宠物1.安慰孤寡老人安慰孤寡老人2.人与动物和谐相处，增添生人与动物和谐相处，增添生活情趣活情趣3.促进体育锻炼，提供人与人促进体育锻炼，提供人与人交流的机会交流的机会1.造成环境污染造成环境污染2.吵闹声，甚至伤人吵闹声，甚至伤人3.花钱花钱赞成：赞成：安慰孤寡老人安慰孤寡老人和谐相处，增添生活乐趣和谐相处，增添生活乐趣促进锻炼，提供交流机会促进锻炼，提供交流机会反对：反对：环境污染环境污染噪音，伤人噪音，伤人花费大花费大 my opinionbe bad for environmentmake too much noiseattack peoplecost a lot of moneyget comfort from pets/get along get on well with animals/make life interesting/keep fit/communicate with others1.have different views on sth 2.react to sth in different ways.3.differ in their attitudes towards sth.Recently we had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities.BeginningconclusionRecently we had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities.nOpinions are divided on this issue.Some of the students think it is a good idea to keep pets because many old people who live alone at home can get more comfort from pets.Whats more,getting along well with animals will make our life interesting.People who own pets will have more chances to walk,thus giving them a time to communicate with others.n On the other hand,the other students are against the idea.In their opinions,if too many people keep pets at home,it is bad for the environment.Whats worse,pets may make too much noise and even attack people.In addition,it costs lots of money to keep pets.n In short,they have not arrived at any agreement yet.some过渡句过渡句观点一观点一论据一论据一论据二论据二论据三论据三观点二观点二论据一论据一论据二论据二论据三论据三In my opinion,I like animals,so I dont think it is bad to keep pets at home.But we must takesome measures to prevent them from pollutingour environment.总结总结 作文模板作文模板1n _ had a discussion about whether_.Opinions are divided on this issue._of the students think _ _.Whats more,_.n On the other hand,_ of the students think _.Whats worse,_.n In short,_ have not arrived at any agreement yet.本人观点：本人观点：As far as I am concerned./(In my opinion,.;Its my opinion that),For one reason,.For another reason In a word,.模板模板2We had a heated discussion about/on_.Studentsviews/ideas/opinions on it vary/differ from person to person.Some students say/think/believe that,However,others hold the view thatAs far as I am concerned,I am in favor of the first/second view/I would like to./The reasons are as follows.Firstly,Secondly,In conclusion/In a word,n模板模板3n There is a widespread concern over the issue that（作文题目）（作文题目）But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.nA majority of people think that _ 观观点一点一_.In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows:in the first place,原因一原因一.Furthermore,in the second place,原因原因二二.So it goes without saying that观点观点一一.People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeoplehold the idea that观点二观点二.In their point of view,for one thing，原因一，原因一.For another thing,原因二原因二.Therefore,thereis nodoubtthat观点二观点二_.As far as I am concerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat观点一或二观点一或二.Itis not only because _,but also because _.n对比观点题型 n（1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1 有一些人认为.2 另一些人认为.3 我的看法.The topic of _（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say _（观点一）.They hold their view for the reason that _（支持的理由一）What is more,_理由二).Moreover,_(理由三).n While others think that _(观点二）in the following three reasons.Firstly,_(支持的理由一).Secondly(besides),_（理由二）.Thirdly(finally),_(理由三).n From my point of view,I think _（我的观点）.The reason is that _(原因).The topic of using cell phones in school is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say cell phones can do good to us students.They hold their view for the reason that cell phones can be used to help us keep in touch with others.What is more,they can help us when we are in danger.n While others think that cell phones can do harm to us students in the following reasons.Firstly,we would spend too much time on them and affect our study.Secondly,they can destroy our body health.n From my point of view,I think we should not use cell phones in school.The reason is that as students,we should pay more attention to study.最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。注意：注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。、信的开头已为你写好。2、词数：、词数：100左右。左右。3、参考词汇：门票：、参考词汇：门票：entrance feeDear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.60%的同学认为的同学认为40%的同学认为的同学认为1、不应收门票、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，、如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象会影响城市形象1、应收门票，但票价不宜高、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资、支付园林工人工资3、购新花木、购新花木2002年高考题范文年高考题范文Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks(提出问题提出问题).Opinions are divided on the question.60of the students are against the idea of entrance fee.They believe a public park should be free of charge.People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves.Changing entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.What is more,it will become necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appearance of a city.过渡句过渡句观点一观点一论据一论据一论据二论据二On the other hand,40 think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers,and to buy plants and young trees.They suggest,however,fees should be charged low.Yours truly Li Hua 可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出观点一，并用一系即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出观点一，并用一系列论据进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，再提出观点列论据进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，再提出观点二，继续用论据进行说明。如果需要说明自己的观二，继续用论据进行说明。如果需要说明自己的观点，可接下来说明自己的观点。点，可接下来说明自己的观点。观点二观点二论据一论据一论据二论据二n人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。参考词汇：参考词汇：网络朋友网络朋友on-line friend(s)，上，上当受骗当受骗to be cheated赞赞成的理由成的理由反反对对的理由的理由你的看法你的看法1广交朋友广交朋友2可自由表达可自由表达思想思想3利于外利于外语语学学习习1浪浪费时间费时间2影响学影响学习习3可能上当受可能上当受骗骗？此课件下载可自行编辑修改，仅供参考！此课件下载可自行编辑修改，仅供参考！感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！谢谢感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！谢谢