英语作文之数据描写.ppt

图表式作文的几种形式图表式作文的几种形式:一是以一是以表格表格形式形式,将统计的数据或被说明的将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来事物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表。即统计表。表格表格:table二是以二是以图形图形形式形式 A 表示数据变化的表示数据变化的曲线图曲线图;B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异 的的柱状图柱状图;C 表示总体内部结构变化的表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图扇形图。图图表表:chartGraph表示两组数的关系表示两组数的关系-通常为通常为函数关系函数关系图图Pie Chart饼状图饼状图Bar Chart/Graph 柱状图柱状图Table矩形的矩形的竖行竖行和和横行横行进行排列的表格进行排列的表格 Item19941995199619971998Food65%60%48%42%35%Clothing8%9%12%15%17%Recreation 3%5%7%8%10%Others24%26%33%35%38%Total100%100%100%100%100%图表式作文写作分三步图表式作文写作分三步:表格表格:table图表图表:chart第一步：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题第一步：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题 第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。第二步：第二步：分析数据间的分析数据间的主要差异及趋势主要差异及趋势，描写数据间变化及总趋势特征。描写数据间变化及总趋势特征。陈述陈述 facts 分析分析 reasons第一步：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题第一步：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题常用常用:recently最近最近interview采访采访survey调查调查questionaire问卷问卷Recently,XX have made a survey among about 最近，最近，XX在在当中当中做了一份关于做了一份关于的调查问卷的调查问卷Recently,XX have interviewed about Recently,XX have an interview with about 最近，最近，XX对对进行了一次进行了一次关于关于的采访。的采访。第二步：第二步：分析数据间的分析数据间的主要差异及趋势主要差异及趋势，描写数据间变化及总趋势特征。描写数据间变化及总趋势特征。陈述陈述 facts 分析分析 reasons常用句型：常用句型：1.The chart/table above shows 以上图表显示以上图表显示2.From the chart,it can be seen that.从图表我们可以看到从图表我们可以看到.3.From the chart,we can see that 从图表我们可以看到从图表我们可以看到.4.As is shown in the chart,.在图表当中显示，在图表当中显示，.5.According to the chart/table/data/survey 根据图表根据图表/表格表格/数据数据/调查，调查，.上升上升(动词动词)：increase,rise,go up下降下降(动词动词):decrease,fall,drop,reduce平稳平稳(形容词形容词):stable,steady 波动波动(动词动词):,rise and fall,(介词短语介词短语)up and down 占占(动词动词):occupy,take up最高点最高点(名词名词):the highest,the top,the peak,the most 最低点最低点(名词名词):the lowest,the bottom,the least平均平均(名词，形容词名词，形容词):average 赞成不赞成6 agree withdisagree with7 approve of disapprove of8 be in favor of be opposed to 9 be for be against“有多少百分比的人支持有多少百分比的人支持/反对反对/认为认为”，怎么说？怎么说？X%of 人人/物物 agree with/be in favor of 观点观点(名词名词)X%of 人人/物物 agree/believe/think that 观点（句子）观点（句子）“的人数是多少的人数是多少/占多少比例占多少比例”的时候，怎么说？10 the number of people who are opposed to this idea is over 5,000.反对该观点的人超过5千。11 the number of people who are opposed to this idea only takes up 10%.反对该观点的人只占了10%the number of people who is/reach(数字数字)的人数是的人数是(数字数字)the number of people who takes up X%的人占的人占(百分比百分比)“有多少人做什么的有多少人做什么的”时候，怎么说？There are people who 反对该观点的人超过5千。The number of people who are opposed to this ideais over 5,000.There are more than 5000 people who are opposed to this idea.而而:while,however,whereas,on the other hand,相比相比:by contract,on the contrary,compared with,by comparison with 趋势趋势:tendency,trend 在在*中占中占*:*gain the percentage of 1在地震中死亡的人数超过了2000。The number of people who died in the earthquake is/was/reaches/reached over 2,000.There are more than 2000 people who died in the earthquake.2如图2所示，体育活动只占了10%的时间From Chart 2,sports activities occupy/occupied/take/took up 10%of time.3在我们班里，有三十多个同学反对这个提议。In our class,there are more than 30 students who are opposed to the advice/suggestion/idea.The number of students in our class who are opposedto this idea is more than 30.4 55%的同学认为他们应该每天都要进行各种各样的锻炼。55%of students think that they should do a variety of exercises every day.various kinds of5死于车祸的人数占了总人口的30%。6近年来，越来越多的人有手机。7有手机的人数是1995年的十倍之多。8与上个学期相比，学生人数达到500人。常用句型：常用句型：Facts:1.There was a great/slight increase/drop in 在在方面有了明显方面有了明显/轻微的增长轻微的增长/减少。减少。2.A is 20%lower/higher thanB A比比B高了高了/低了低了20个百分比个百分比3.The number of A is times as much as that ofB.A的数量是的数量是.B的几倍。的几倍。4.It increases/rises/decreases/reduces by%.增长增长/减少了减少了%.5.By comparison withA,it decreased/increased fromto 与与相比，它减少相比，它减少/增长增长,从多少到多少。从多少到多少。第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。常用词汇：常用词汇：1.in a word,/in short,/generally speaking 总而言之总而言之/简短来说简短来说/一般说来一般说来2.Its clear from the chart that 从图表中我们清楚知道从图表中我们清楚知道3.In summary,it is important 总结来说，总结来说，是很重要的。是很重要的。4.From what has been discussed above,we can draw the conclusion that 从以上我们讨论的内容看，我们得出以下结论从以上我们讨论的内容看，我们得出以下结论 5.Obviously,if we want to,it is necessary 很明显，如果我们想要很明显，如果我们想要，我们必须，我们必须某学校对学生课外活动进行了调查，结果如下：请根据图表反映的数据，描述学生每天的课外活动，以及针对该现象发表一下你的看法。1吸烟人数：约3.5亿2分布：男性75%女性25%3受二手烟影响人数约5.4亿4因二手烟死亡人数超过10万1年 the number of people who is(数字)的人数是(数字)the number of people who takes up X%的人占(百分比)1吸烟人数：约3.5亿The number of people who smoke is about 350,000,000.2分布：男性75%女性25%The number of men who smoke takes up 75%.The number of women who smoke takes up 25%.3受二手烟影响人数约5.4亿The number of people who are affected by second-hand smoke is about 540,000,000.4因二手烟死亡人数超过10万1年The number of people who died from second-hand smoke is over 100,000 every year.1吸烟人数：约3.5亿，其中男性75%女性25%，The number of people who smoke is about 350,000,000，and 75%are male while 25%are female.3受二手烟影响人数约5.4亿，而因此死亡人数超过10万1年The number of people who are affected by second-handsmoke is about 540,000,000.What is the worst,the number of people who died from it is over 100,000 every year.Smoking in public will be banned throughout the whole nation from January 1st,2011.To realize the aim that there is no smoking in all indoor places in public,we should put up some signs of smoking ban.As the related data shows,the number of people who smoke is about 350,000,000,75%of 75%of whom are male while 25%are femalewhom are male while 25%are female.The number of people who are affected by second-hand smoke reaches 540,000,000.What is worse,the number of people who died from it is more than 100000 every year.(every year more than 100000 deaths are caused by the second-hand smoke!)Smoking ban in public will be carried out throughout China from January 1st,2011,which aims that there will be no smoking in all the public places inside office across the whole country.To realize this goal effectively,we should take some measures,such as putting up signs of smoking ban where there are people who aresmoking.There are approximately 350 million smokers all over the country,and among them the number of male smokers takes up 75%,female smokers occupies about 25%and what is worse,the number of people who are affected by second-hand smoke is unbelievable,reaching about 540 million.Some 100 thousand people die from the serious illnesses caused countless smokers die from the serious illnesses caused by smoking every year.It is high time to take strong action to forbid smoking in our country for peoples health.