英语中考高频写作话题复习简单句培训资料.ppt

英语中考高频写作话题复习简单句*there be 句型 e.g.There are some advantages.*形式主语句型 e.g.Its important to have enough sleep.*动名词作主语：e.g.Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes.善用简单句：善用简单句：1.善用定语*e.g.Beijing is one of the liveliest cities2.善用状语 e.g.By taking notes,you can concentrate more in class.e.g.In the past few months,my life has changed a lot.简单句简单句+定语定语+状语状语1.并列 e.g.I am a middle school student and I study in No.1 Middle School.2.转折 e.g.I work hard at English but my English is not good enough.3.因果 e.g.He is good at English so I often ask him for help.并列句并列句1.并列 *Enjoy it,and youll live a happy life.2.转折 *Some agree with it while others dont.3.因果*I love reading,for I can learn a lot without experiencing hard.善用并列句善用并列句主从复合句主从复合句：（一）简单句（一）简单句+状语从句状语从句1.时间 when，notuntil，as soon as2.条件 if，unless(除非)，as long as(只要)3.原因 because 4.目的 so that,in order that(in order to do)5.结果 so that(too to do)6.比较 asas，not soas，than7.让步 though，although，even though，even if,no matter what/when/where /who/which/how（二）主句（二）主句+宾语从句：宾语从句：*e.g.I think/believe that he is helpful.*e.g.I hope I can be a volunteer some day.*e.g.I understand why you are worried.（三）主句（三）主句+定语从句：定语从句：*e.g.I love music that I can dance to.*e.g.My parents are the people who I love most.*e.g.I love places where the people are friendly.1.表文章结构顺序：first of all,firstly/first,secondly/second,next,and then,finally,in the end,at last,the last but not the least,2.表并列补充关系：what is more,besides,moreover,in addition,furthermore，3.表转折对比关系：however，on the contrary，but,after all,although/though,in spite of+n/doing,for one thing,for another,on one hand on the other hand,while 4.表因果关系：because,as,so,thus,therefore,as a result5.表换一种方式表达：in other words,that is,6.表举例说明：for example/for instance,such as+n./doing7.表陈述事实：in fact,actually,8.表达自己观点：as far as I know，in my opinion,in my point of view9.表总结：in all,in short,in a word,in conclusion,in summary常用连接词：常用连接词：五五.写作训练的具体流程写作训练的具体流程1.根据话题，分类汇总教材知识2.根据例文，分部细化写作过程3.根据话题，分子话题补充例文例文审题头脑风暴翻译单句连句成篇亮点提升主题升华实践练笔评价修改一、环保提建议话题一、环保提建议话题第第1 1段段：Beginning:Beginning:引入话题（环境正变得恶劣）引入话题（环境正变得恶劣）+过渡过渡句句第第22？段？段：Body:Body:分层展开分层展开顺序连接词顺序连接词+建议句型建议句型(我们我们)+)+合理建议合理建议+评论评论最后最后1 1段段：EndingEnding：总结自己的观点：总结自己的观点+号召号召记住加入好句子提升文章水平：记住加入好句子提升文章水平：It seems that if we try our best to.it can not It seems that if we try our best to.it can not onlybut also,onlybut also,sothat,sothat,its our duty toits our duty to，定语从句等复杂句定语从句等复杂句中文模板：中文模板：第第1段：段：beginning:As we all know,the environment is getting worse and worse引入引入.Its our duty to protect the environment.We must do something to prevent people from polluting the environment过过渡句渡句.英文模板：英文模板：第第25段：段：body:First of all,建建议议we should so that目的目的Besides,in order to目的目的,we are supposed to.instead of建建议议,Whats more,to reduce thepollution,目的目的 wed better建建议议In addition,建建议议its important for us to Only in this way can we目的目的 Last but not the least important,dont forget toto make.目的目的 英文模板：英文模板：1.交通方式交通方式(自己、告自己、告诉他人他人)In order to reduce the air pollution,1)we should either walk or take the bus to school.2)we are supposed to tell our parents to ride bikes or take the subway as much as possible.2.水水(节水方法水方法)To make the limited water last long,1)wed better turn off the taps or showers while we are washing hair or brushing teeth.2)its good to save water by reusing the used water to flush the toilet冲冲厕所所.环保建议素材环保建议素材(6(6大项大项)3.3.电电(节电方法节电方法)Dont forget to Dont forget to turn off lights and TVs turn off lights and TVs when we leave the room when we leave the room so that we can so that we can save the energysave the energy目的目的.4.4.纸纸In order to make full use of paper,In order to make full use of paper,1)1)its necessary for us to its necessary for us to collect used collect used paper and books and recycle them.paper and books and recycle them.2)we need to use both sides of it.2)we need to use both sides of it.环保建议素材环保建议素材5.购物袋物袋To reduce the white pollution,we are supposed to take our own bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping.6.植植树造林造林 Wed better plant trees as many as possible instead of cutting them down.Only in this way can we make the world green and the air fresh目的目的.环保建议素材环保建议素材最后最后1段：段：Ending:As a result/All in all/In a word,its time for us to raise peoples environmental awareness and take actions.The more beautiful the world is,the happier lives we will have./Lower carbon,happier life(低碳低碳话题话题用用这这句句).英文模板：英文模板：First of all,we should either walk or take the bus to school as much as possible so that we can reduce the air pollution.Besides,in order to make full use of paper,we are supposed to not only recycle the used paper and books but also use both sides of it.Whats more,to reduce the white pollution,wed better take our own bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping.In addition,its important for us to plant trees as many as possible instead of cutting them down.Only in this way can we make the world green and the air fresh.Last but not the least important,dont forget to turn off the lights and taps when we dont use them to make the limited energy last as long as possible.相关相关例例题题一、一、节约资源节约资源,保护环境保护环境.从我们身边的小事做起，假设从我们身边的小事做起，假设你是一个注重你是一个注重“低碳低碳”生活的中学生生活的中学生,请以请以“My Low-“My Low-carbon Life”carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文，简单描述自己的为题，写一篇短文，简单描述自己的“低低碳生活碳生活”。二、二、6 6月月5 5日日(June 5)(June 5)是世界环境保护日，是世界环境保护日，我们周围的我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重。假如你是。假如你是学生学生PeterPeter，你校要进行，你校要进行“如何保护我们的环境如何保护我们的环境?”?”专题演专题演讲比赛。讲比赛。要求：要求：1 1、举例说明环境存在的问题、举例说明环境存在的问题1313方面方面;2 2、如何保护好我们的环境，采取怎样的措施，、如何保护好我们的环境，采取怎样的措施，举例举例1313方面进行说明，字数方面进行说明，字数8080一、环保话题一、环保话题二、难忘的二、难忘的/感动的感动的/感激的感激的（校园生活（校园生活/人人)特点：特点：1 1、事离不开人、人离不开事（既是写人也是叙事）、事离不开人、人离不开事（既是写人也是叙事）2 2、选材内容必须积极向上，发自真心。、选材内容必须积极向上，发自真心。3 3、混合时态：、混合时态：描述描述过去过去我我现在现在感受感受对于我对于我今后今后的启迪的启迪4 4、“难忘难忘”与与“最令我感动最令我感动”话题相似，素材可通用，话题相似，素材可通用，只需要变换关键词。只需要变换关键词。unforgettable unforgettable难忘的难忘的movingmoving感人的感人的gratefulgrateful感激的感激的相关考题分析相关考题分析相关考题：相关考题：知恩、感恩是人类的美德。父母、老师、朋友和同学知恩、感恩是人类的美德。父母、老师、朋友和同学都会是你的感恩对象。请你写一篇短文，表达感激之情，都会是你的感恩对象。请你写一篇短文，表达感激之情，介绍他（她）或者他们对你的帮助，如何使你感动的，介绍他（她）或者他们对你的帮助，如何使你感动的，以及你的感受。要求意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于以及你的感受。要求意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于6060词。词。相关考题分析相关考题分析读题目要求：读题目要求：1 1、“父母、老师、朋友和同学都会是你父母、老师、朋友和同学都会是你的感恩对象的感恩对象”从上面列举的人物中选一个来写从上面列举的人物中选一个来写一般现在时一般现在时2 2、“表达感激之情，介绍他（她）或者表达感激之情，介绍他（她）或者他们对你的帮助他们对你的帮助,以及你的感受以及你的感受”叙事文体叙事文体一般过去时一般过去时审题确定写作内容审题确定写作内容第第1 1段：段：beginning:beginning:引入话题（身边很多人都帮助过你以及你对他们的感引入话题（身边很多人都帮助过你以及你对他们的感激之情）激之情）+过渡句（引出其中最令你感动的人物）过渡句（引出其中最令你感动的人物）第第2 2段：段：body:body:叙事手法描述与该人物有关的让你感动的某一件或某叙事手法描述与该人物有关的让你感动的某一件或某几件事。几件事。时态：一般过去时时态：一般过去时 注意：选择事件时，突出注意：选择事件时，突出“感动感动”，紧扣主题，详，紧扣主题，详 略得当略得当第第3 3段：段：ending:ending:总结全文：总结全文：由由“感动感动”“感谢感谢”给我今后的启迪给我今后的启迪 OutlineOutline提纲提纲第一段：第一段：There are many people in my life who helped or are helping me now.I feel grateful to them引入引入话题话题.Without their help,I cant imagine how my life will be like感激感激.Among them,I should give my special thanks to Miss Wang,my English teacher,who helps a lot with my English(定定语语从句从句).过过渡句渡句Sample Sample 范文范文第二段：第二段：I remember the first day when I came to the school as a middle school student.I was both shy and short at that time.Everything was new to me.Whats more,my English was rather poor.I had trouble learning English.I didnt dare to speak or to answer the questions in class.I didnt know how to learn English.In order to help me with my English,Miss Wang not only encouraged me to be brave and active in class but also told me many useful ways to learn English.With her great help,I changed a lot and became more interested and confident in English.I tried my best to study English so that I wouldnt let her down.In this way,my English became better and better.范文范文第三段：第三段：Thank you,Miss Wang.Thanks a lot感感激激.I will learn from you and become a both caring and helpful person like you启迪启迪.Sample Sample 范文范文三、志愿者话题三、志愿者话题1 1、敬老院（老人）、敬老院（老人）visit the old peoples home;visit the old peoples home;1)not only sing songs but also perform a play for 1)not only sing songs but also perform a play for them to make them happy.them to make them happy.2)help the old people do some cleaning and 2)help the old people do some cleaning and washing so that we can make the old peoples washing so that we can make the old peoples home clean and tidy.home clean and tidy.2 2、公共场所（公园、公交车站）、公共场所（公园、公交车站）1)clean up the city parks 1)clean up the city parks 2)assist people to stand in line while waiting for 2)assist people to stand in line while waiting for the coming busthe coming bus志愿者活动素材志愿者活动素材3 3、儿童医院（患病儿童）、儿童医院（患病儿童）visit the Childrens Hospital visit the Childrens Hospital give them some toys and tell funny stories to give them some toys and tell funny stories to them to cheer them upthem to cheer them up4 4、孤儿院、孤儿院(orphanage(orphanage孤儿院孤儿院/orphan/orphan孤儿孤儿)visit the orphanage visit the orphanage have a birthday party with the orphans so have a birthday party with the orphans so that they can feel the care and love from that they can feel the care and love from other people who are like their family.other people who are like their family.5 5、志愿者宣传（演讲、报告）、志愿者宣传（演讲、报告）give a speech to others and ask more people give a speech to others and ask more people to join usto join us志愿者活动素材志愿者活动素材考题特点：考题特点：1 1、内容积极向上、有意义（结合志愿者）、内容积极向上、有意义（结合志愿者）2 2、混合时态：一般过去时、混合时态：一般过去时+一般将来时一般将来时+一般现在时一般现在时相关考题：相关考题：上周日上周日，你所在的志愿者你所在的志愿者小组参加了社区的志愿者活小组参加了社区的志愿者活。请你描述请你描述你们你们所有的志愿者活动，并谈谈你对志愿者活所有的志愿者活动，并谈谈你对志愿者活动的动的认识认识。相关考题分析相关考题分析1第第1 1段段Beginning:Beginning:引入话题引入话题+过渡句（一般现在时）过渡句（一般现在时）第第2 2段段Body:Body:描述上周日你们志愿小组的活动（一般过描述上周日你们志愿小组的活动（一般过 去时）去时）过渡句过渡句+顺序连接词顺序连接词+活动活动第第3 3段段Ending:Ending:总结总结+你对志愿者的认识（一般现在时）你对志愿者的认识（一般现在时）提升提升+好句子好句子Outline Outline Im a member of a volunteer group.As a volunteer,I always try my best to help others.Last Sunday,our volunteer group took part in the volunteer work in a neighborhood.First of all,we helped clean up the yard.After that,we went to a local hospital to visit the sick kids.Whats more,we visited an old peoples home and sang songs for some lovely old people to make them happy.Finally,we gave a speech to children so that we could ask them to join us.We all thought we put our time to good use.On one hand,being a volunteer is great.Its a good experience for us.On the other hand,it can not only develop our interests but also improve our ability and social skills.Lets be a volunteer today!范文范文范文范文考题特点：考题特点：1 1、内容积极向上、有意义（结合志愿者）、内容积极向上、有意义（结合志愿者）2 2、混合时态：一般过去时、混合时态：一般过去时+一般将来时一般将来时+一般现在时一般现在时相关考题：相关考题：暑假要到了暑假要到了，你所在的志愿者小组，你所在的志愿者小组要要参加社区的志愿者参加社区的志愿者活活。请你描述你们请你描述你们要做的要做的志愿者活动，并谈谈你对志愿志愿者活动，并谈谈你对志愿者活动的者活动的认识认识。相关考题分析相关考题分析2第第1 1段段Beginning:Beginning:引入话题引入话题+过渡句（一般现在时）过渡句（一般现在时）第第2 2段段Body:Body:介绍暑假你们志愿小组的打算（一般将来时）介绍暑假你们志愿小组的打算（一般将来时）过渡句过渡句+顺序连接词顺序连接词+愿望打算句型愿望打算句型+活动活动愿望句型：愿望句型：1.sb will do 2.sb be going to do1.sb will do 2.sb be going to do 3.sb plan to do 3.sb plan to do 4.sb want to do 4.sb want to do第第3 3段段Ending:Ending:总结总结+你对志愿者的认识（一般现在时）你对志愿者的认识（一般现在时）提升提升+好句子好句子Outline Outline Im a member of a volunteer group.As a volunteer,I always try my best to help others.This summer holiday,our volunteer group will take part in the volunteer work in a neighborhood.First of all,we will help clean up the yard.After that,we want go to a local hospital to visit the sick kids.Whats more,we plan to visit an old peoples home and sing songs for some lovely old people to make them happy.Finally,we are going to give a speech to children so that we can ask them to join us.We all believe we will put our time to good use.On one hand,being a volunteer is great.Its a good experience for us.On the other hand,it can not only develop our interests but also improve our ability and social skills.Lets be a volunteer today!范文范文范文范文考题特点：考题特点：1 1、内容积极向上、有意义（结合志愿者）、内容积极向上、有意义（结合志愿者）2 2、混合时态：一般过去时、混合时态：一般过去时+一般将来时一般将来时+一般现在时一般现在时相关考题：相关考题：假设你是初三假设你是初三1 1的王林，你想要参加的王林，你想要参加社区的志愿者社区的志愿者小组。小组。给他们写一封给他们写一封自荐信自荐信，介绍，介绍你你平时平时的的志愿者活动，并谈志愿者活动，并谈谈你对志愿者活动的谈你对志愿者活动的认识认识。相关考题分析相关考题分析3第第1 1段段Beginning:Beginning:自我介绍自我介绍+过渡句（一般现在时）过渡句（一般现在时）Body:Body:第第2 2段段介绍暑假平时的志愿者活动（一般现在时）介绍暑假平时的志愿者活动（一般现在时）过渡句过渡句+顺序连接词顺序连接词+活动活动第第3 3段段:总结总结+你对志愿者的认识（一般现在时）你对志愿者的认识（一般现在时）第第4 4段段Ending:Ending:表达你希望被接收的迫切愿望表达你希望被接收的迫切愿望提升提升+好句子好句子Outline Outline Dear Chairman,I am a student from Class 1,Grade 3.Id like to be a member of the volunteer group自我介自我介绍绍.I like helping others and I always do something helpful in my spare time.For example,I help clean up the yard and go to a local hospital to visit the sick kids.Whats more,I often visit an old peoples home and sing songs for some lovely old people to make them happy.Besides,I sometimes give a speech to children with my classmates so that we can ask them to join us.We all think we put our time to good use by doing volunteer work.On one hand,being a volunteer is great.Its a good experience for us.On the other hand,it can not only develop our interests but also improve our ability and social skills.I will be glad if I can become a member of your group.I am looking forward to your answer.Yours sincerely,WangLinWangLin四、回信建议劝告四、回信建议劝告1.Why not(do)2.Why dont you(do)3.Youd better(do)4.You should/can/could/need(do)5.How/What about doing?6.Would you mind doing7.You are supposed to(do)8.If I were you,I would(do)9.doing is helpful.10.Its helpful for you to(do)11.Its a good idea for you to(do)提建议句型总结：提建议句型总结：1.要点：齐全要点：齐全enough2.内容：建议合理、具说服力内容：建议合理、具说服力 reasonable/3.结构：文段连贯、逻辑结构：文段连贯、逻辑4.语法：标点词句准确语法：标点词句准确correct5.语言：词句多样语言：词句多样 colorful作文修改对照评价表作文修改对照评价表convincingcoherent/logical Finally,youd better understand your parents.First of all,you can ask teachers for help.Second,you can take exercise.In my opinion,taking exercise can make you energetic so that you wont feel so sleepy.I think its really helpful to both your health and your study.Examples Examples ReasonsReasons 对比下面的建议对比下面的建议convincing convincing（有说服力的）（有说服力的）Although she is a little girl,she knows something about science.First of all,Besides,Whats more,In addition,At first,In the beginning，finally，at lastOn one hand,.On the other hand,.Not only.but also.so that./in order to.for example,/such as./for instance,Coherent连贯连贯&Logical有有逻辑逻辑第第1段段beginning:寒暄寒暄+同感（共情）同感（共情）+我的立我的立场场+安慰安慰+过过渡句渡句 Im sorry to hear you are in trouble now.I can understand your feeling.Actually,I dont think its right for you to/I think you are absolutely right to do so(根据来信内容根据来信内容选择选择).Dont worry.Here is my advice.回信提建议模板：回信提建议模板：第第2？段？段body:分分层层+建建议议句型句型+合理有效建合理有效建议议+评论评论+举举例例First of all,youd better for example,.Besides,if I were you,I would in my opinion,.not onlybut alsoIn addition,doing.is also a good idea for you.Particularly,.I believe you will.if youWhats more,its helpful to Trying to.as much as possible.回信提建议模板：回信提建议模板：结结尾段尾段Ending:总结总结+美好祝愿美好祝愿 All in all,I hope my advice can help you solve your problem and Im looking forward to hearing your good news.回信提建议模板：回信提建议模板：1.1.学习方面学习方面2.2.压力大、精神和气色不佳压力大、精神和气色不佳3.3.自卑（身材、样貌）自卑（身材、样貌）4.4.与同学相处（借钱不还、不合作、向你要作业抄）与同学相处（借钱不还、不合作、向你要作业抄）5.5.与家长相处（家长管教严）与家长相处（家长管教严）6.6.网瘾、电脑游戏瘾、电视瘾网瘾、电脑游戏瘾、电视瘾不同烦恼素材不同烦恼素材Alice，I feel more and more stressed out in Junior Three.First,I study hard,but I still cant get good grades.Then,I often