Unit 6 I’m more outgoing than my sister.写作课.ppt

Writing About Personal TraitsLuo Tingtingfrom Wenzhou No.23 Middle SchoolUnit 6 Im more outgoing than my sister.My FriendPaopao Soldiermake new friendsenjoy partiesPaopao Soldier is outgoing.Paopao Soldier is outgoing.He enjoys all kindsof parties and often plays the guitar happily there.He likes to make new friends in school.Paopao Soldier is outgoing.He enjoys all kindsof parties and often plays the guitar happily there.He likes to make new friends in school.topic sentence主题句主题句All sentences in this paragraph(段落段落)tell us _.Paopao Soldier is outgoingPaopao Soldier is funny.A.He has big bright eyes.B.He never gets out of bed before lunch.C.He is good at telling jokes.D.He often makes us laugh when he dances.E.He swims 1000 meters every morning.Paopao Soldier is funny.He is good at tellingjokes.He often makes us laugh when he dances.Paopao Soldier is funny.He is good at telling jokes.He often makes us laugh when he dances.+outgoing funny Paopao Soldier is outgoing and funny.Paopao Soldier is outgoing and funny.He enjoys all kinds of parties and often plays the guitar happilythere.He likes to make new friends.Also,he is good at telling jokes.He often makes us laugh when he dances.topic sentence主题句主题句 Paopao Soldier is outgoing.He enjoys all kindsof parties and often plays the guitar happily there.He likes to make new friends in school.All sentences in this paragraph(段落段落)tell us _.Paopao Soldier is outgoing and funny Paopao Soldier is kind and popular.He gets to school early every morningand read English books for 30 minutes.Also,he is good with his friends andtells a lot of jokes.His friends like him.Paopao Soldier is kind and popular.He is friendly to other students and often helps them to study English.Also,he hasa lot of good friends and they really like him very much.All sentences in the paragraph(段落段落)tell us _Paopao Soldier is kind and popular.My FriendWang Yiming(Xiaobao)have new ideasfor dancingXiaobao is smart and hard-working.get good gradesin do lots of homeworkspend much timereading booksMy FriendKung Fu PandalazyathleticstrongerKung Fufastbestnever stop eatingsleep a lotKung Fu Panda is athletic but a little lazy.Competition TimeTask:To write a paragraph about personal traits.(段落段落)(个人特征个人特征)1)All sentences in your paragraph tell the topic sentence.2)There are some good sentences.Topic Sentence:My friend Tina is beautiful but a little quiet.bright eyeslistenalonelove readingdoesnt like partiesIt is not enough to succeed.Be stronger!Failure is the mother of success.Try another!Level A:Write a paragraph with the topic sentence“John is athletic and popular”.You can use phrases like“be good at”,“run fast”,“make new friends”and“a friendly guy”.Level B:Write a paragrapy with the topic sentence“Mary is clever but a little wild”.