连词在书面表达中的作用.ppt
What should a good composition be?What do you think of this composition?Is it a good one?If not,whats the problem?I got up early.I was very happy,it was a fine day.I got to the beach,lots of people had been there.It was very cold,no one complained.Someone shouted:”Look”,the clouds were turning red.A small part of the sun was appearing.it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea.The clouds and the sea water became red and bright.All were excited to see the sun rising.1.I got up early.1.I got up early.2.I was very happy.2.I was very happy.3.It was a fine day.3.It was a fine day.4.I got to the beach.4.I got to the beach.5.Lots of people had been there.5.Lots of people had been there.6.It was very cold.6.It was very cold.7.No one complained.7.No one complained.8.Someone shouted:”Look”.8.Someone shouted:”Look”.9.The clouds were turning red.9.The clouds were turning red.10.A small part of the sun was appearing.10.A small part of the sun was appearing.11.It broke through the red clouds and jumped above the 11.It broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea.sea.12.The clouds and the sea water became red and bright.12.The clouds and the sea water became red and bright.13.All were excited to see the sun rising.13.All were excited to see the sun rising.Then,how to write a good English composition?专题复习Ding Ding dingding连接词在英语书面表达中的使用连接词在英语书面表达中的使用 to write a good composition,we should know how to use linking words correctly.In a word,lets learn some useful linking words.Now,意义意义意义意义(meaning)(meaning)连接词连接词连接词连接词(linking words)(linking words)表示顺序表示顺序表示顺序表示顺序表示列举表示列举表示列举表示列举表示并列关系表示并列关系表示并列关系表示并列关系表示意义转折表示意义转折表示意义转折表示意义转折表示时间顺序表示时间顺序表示时间顺序表示时间顺序表示结果表示结果表示结果表示结果表示解释说明表示解释说明表示解释说明表示解释说明表示让步关系表示让步关系表示让步关系表示让步关系表示原因表示原因表示原因表示原因表示概括总结表示概括总结表示概括总结表示概括总结表示意义增补表示意义增补表示意义增补表示意义增补first,second,then,finally,next,after thatsuch as,for exampleor,and,also,toobut,however,insteadnow,at first,when,afterso,sothat,as a result,thereforethat is to say,in other wordsthough,although.because,since,as,forin all,in short,in one word.besides,whats more.PracticeUse linking words to link the sentence.1.His train ride seemed really short,_ his memory of the happy trip will last long.butPracticeUse linking words to link the sentence.2._ he is not very tall in the basketball field,his wonderful skill always helps him to win the games.Though/AlthoughPracticeUse linking words to link the sentence.3.I didnt forget to set the alarm clock _ hoped that it would call me at 6:30 in the morning.andPracticeUse linking words to link the sentence.4._ I got on the bus,I found I got on the wrong bus._ I got off _ called a taxi.After/When/As soon asSoandPracticeUse linking words to link the sentence5._ tell myself not to worry about exams,I always do!_ I am not surprised that my students worry about them too,even though they usually dont need to._,since it is hard not to worry at all,we must try not to worry too much.Though/AlthoughSoHoweverPracticeAdd some linking words to improve this passage I got up early.I was very happy,it was a fine day.I I got up early.I was very happy,it was a fine day.I got to the beach,lots of people had been there.got to the beach,lots of people had been there.It was very cold,no one complained.Someone It was very cold,no one complained.Someone shouted:“Look”,the clouds were turning red.A shouted:“Look”,the clouds were turning red.A small part of the sun was appearing.it broke through small part of the sun was appearing.it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea.The the red clouds and jumped above the sea.The clouds and the sea water became red and bright.All clouds and the sea water became red and bright.All were excited to see the sun rising.were excited to see the sun rising.I got up early.I was very happy,it was a fine day.I got to the beach,lots of people had been there.The next morning I got up early.I was very happy because it was a fine day.By the time I got to the beach,lots of people had been there.It was very cold,no one complained.Someone shouted:“Look”,the clouds were turning red.It was very cold,but no one complained.Suddenly someone shouted:“Look”,the clouds were turning red.A small part of the sun was appearing.it broke through the red clouds and sea water became red and bright.All were excited jumped above the sea.The clouds and the to see the sun rising.At first,a small part of the sun was appearing.Then it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea.At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.As last all were excited to see the sun rising.The next morning I got up early.I was very happy because it was a fine day.By the time I got to the beach,lots of people had been there.It was very cold,but no one complained.Suddenly someone shouted:“Look”,the clouds were turning red.At first,a small part of the sun was appearing.Then it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea.At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.As last all were excited to see the sun rising.Write a passage according to the pictures.Try to use linking words in your writing.右边5幅图是Mr.Black和他的儿子Mike在星期天去湖边钓鱼的故事.请把整个故事的情节写出来,单词数80个左右.要求用过去时态来叙述.One of the possible version On Sunday morning,Mr.Black and his son,Mike,got up very early and went fishing by a lake.They didnt catch any fish until noon.Though they caught only one fish,they felt happy because the fish was quite big.When they were leaving,Mike noticed a board by the lake side.Then Mike returned and threw the fish back into the lake.At first,Mr.Black was surprised.Then Mike pointed to the board which said:“No fishing”.Summary 在写好文章内容的基础上在写好文章内容的基础上,恰恰当地选用连接词当地选用连接词,能使文章通顺连能使文章通顺连贯贯,逻辑严密逻辑严密,从而提高文章的档次从而提高文章的档次.Homework1.Read two compositions and correct the mistakes.2.Write another composition,pay attention to the use of linking words in your composition.
