读后续写写作练习主题”水中救援” 讲义--2023届高三英语二轮复习.docx

读后续写写作练习主题水中救援"讲义步骤一：语言输入【1】阅读1【2020年11月浙江五校联考阅读】At eleven, I decide to learn to swim. There was a pool at the Y.M.C.A. offering exactly the opportunity. Mother continually warned against it, and kept fresh in my mind the details of each drowning in the river. But the Y.M.C.A. pool was safe.I had a childhood fear of water. This started when I was three years old and father took me to the beach. The huge waves knocked me down and swept over me.The pool was quiet. I was afraid of going in all alone, so I sat on the side of the pool to wait for others. Then came a big boy. He yelled, zzHi, Skinny! How'd you like to be ducked?" With that he picked me up and threw me into the deep end. I I and edit a sitting position, and swallowed water. But I was not frightened out of my wits when my feet hit the bottom, I would make a big jump, come out of the surface. It seemed a long way down. I gathered all my strength when I landed and made what I thought was a great spring upwards. Then I opened my eyes and saw nothing but water. I tried to yell but no sound came out. I went down, down, endlessly.When I came to consciousness, I found myself lying on the bed in the hospital.I never went back to the pool. I avoided water whenever I could. This misadventure stayed with me as the years rolled by. It deprived me of joy of boating and swimming. Finally, I decided to get an instructor. Piece by piece, he built a swimmer. Several months later, the instructor was finished, but I was not. Sometimes the terror would return.This went on until July. I swam across the Lake Wentworth. Only once did the terror return. When I was in the middle of the lake, I put my face under and saw nothing but bottomless water. I laughed and said, “Well, Mr. Terror, what do you think you can do to me?”I had conquered my fear of water.Step 1 ：完成下列练习The ice looked solid. No water showed through it, but I hesitated. "Go ahead/' Harry urged. zzTry it. You're lighter than I am. If the ice holds, we can run and slide carefully on it. It/ll be fun." I wanted to please Harry, and I though tab out the fun of a long slide on the ice. I began to slide across the pond.In the middle of the pond, the ice gave way with a sudden crack （裂缝）! I stretched out （伸展）my arms. The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms out stretched on the ice. From my shoulders down I hung in icy water. I thought of the bottom of the pond. I knew it would be black and awful down there, full of mud and maybe rotting creatures.I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass. Again and again I tried to get out. Again and again the ice broke into pieces. The hole widened. I was wearing a coat of heavy material. As it became completely wet, it dragRed me down. I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice.I looked at Harry on shore. He seemed rooted to the spot. a can't get out! I screamed when I caught some breath.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraphl:Harry turned and ran from the pond.ParagraphZ:The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over.原文语言积累1. a stand of oak trees 橡树林 stand （植物）群丛2 .池塘里冒出一阵强烈的难闻的味道。a strong, unpleasant smell rose from it.3 . an inviting place inviting迷人的，吸引人的4. 在池塘中间，冰面忽然露出了一条裂缝。In the middle of the pond, the ice gave way with a sudden crack （裂缝）5. I was hanging on to the edge（边缘）of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched （伸展出 来） on the ice. From my shoulders down I hung in 皿 water.从肩月旁一下，我的身子者B挂 在冰冷的水里。6. I got a knee on the ice（我的膝盖碰到冰面），it broke like window glass. Again and again I tried to get out. Again and again the ice broke into pieces. The hole widened. I was wearing a coat of heavy material. As it became completely wet, it dragged me down （拽着 我下沉）.I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice.语料输入失望1. I looked at his back with a fierce frown.2. I threw a desperate look at him3. I yelled and cried in a hopeless voice4. As the figure of my brother disappeared out of sight, tears blurred my eyes.5. The thought of being deserted / abandoned by Harry occupied my mind.害怕，恐惧1. sb felt one's heart sinking horribly.2. Sb felt a coldness flooding from my back3. He tried to steady his hands, but they quivered uncontrollably.他想使自己的手稳住不 动4. Scared, he felt his throat dry, his palms sweating5. Sb could hear nothing but the sound of one's hearts throbbing(跳动， 震动)violently in his chest6. On the brink of collapse (在崩溃的边缘),sb did sth7. The icy-water pierced my skin with needle-like chill as I was soaked to the skin and trembling.营救的动作描写1 . 扔， 投， 掷, 抛 throw(threw; thrown) / toss(tossed; tossed) / fling(flung; flung) / cast (cast; cast) /He tossed the letter over to me. Tom flung his shoes into the corner. He cast one end of the rope over to me.2 . 抓， 握 grasp/ grab / seize / catch (tightly / firmly)3 .拖，拽 drag/ pull / draw / haul / towHe hauled himself to his feet 他吃力地站了起来 To haul the car out of the riverShe hauled up the window and leaned out.拉开窗户，探出身去。4 .爬crawl /climb / wriggle蠕动前进，扭来扭去 The dog wriggled free of the grasp and ran off.其他相关语料输入1. teeth-chattering chill (牙齿打架)的冷2. centuries of endless wait漫长的无尽的等待3. flop to one's stomach 彳府身4. drip （液体）滴水，滴下，滴出5. unbutton解开纽扣6. strip the clothes 脱下衣服lecture Lv训诫；give sb a stern lecture on safety 就安全问题严厉训斥了某人 scold【原文】He turned and ran from the pond. As I looked at his back, I wondered: Is he running for help, or is he running away and leaving me to slip to the bottom?I was surprised to see him bend and pick large, fallen oak limb. It was black and V-shaped. He ran with it toward pond. At the edge, he flopped to his stomach, pushed the limb before him, a wriggled toward me. When a slender top branch was within reach, I grabbed of it. It did not break.Hand over hand, I pulled myself from the hole. I began to stand. I wanted to run from the ponds as fast as I could run .Harry yelled, “Get down! Stay flat on the ice or it will break again/' I obeyed. Harry wriggled backward to ward shore, towing the limb. I hung on to a branch and wriggle toward shore on my stomach.Off the pond, we ran toward the house. My overshoes squished and squirted water. My clothes dripped. Near the house Harry said, ''I'm making myself scarce.I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, fell through the ice." Mother rushed over, un-buttoned my coat, and stripped my clothes from me. She filled a tub with hot water. The bath stopped my teeth-chattering chill, and I was able to tell her all that had happened.After the bath, I was given a cup of hot milk to drink and was sent to bed. "I don'twant you to get pneumonia/, said Mother.I heard Mother call Harry. I heard him come into kitchen. I heard loud voices. He was being lectured about getting a younger sibling into trouble. He was sent to bed as punishment.I do not think it changed him, because when summer came he wanted me to parachute from the loft of the big red barn to a small scattering of hay on the ground. He handed me a gunnysack to use as a parachute.“You go first/' he said. zzTry it, Sis, it will be fun.”But I had changed. I said no, and so got through the rest of my childhood safe of life and limb.（原文来自英语沙龙杂志）【2】Robert and Henry were two friends in the same class. They always played together and went home together. One day, Robert and Henry were going home from school, when, on turning a corner, Robert cried out, A fight! Let's go and see!”“No, "said Henry. "Let us go quietly home and not meddle with（插手）this quarrel. We have nothing to do with it and may get into trouble. Also our parents are expecting to have dinner with us together at home and I don't want them to worry about me."“You are a coward, and afraid to go, "said Robert, and off he ran. Henry want straight home, and in the afternoon went to school as usual.But Robert had told all the boys that Henry was a coward, and they laughed at him a great deal. From then on, they looked down upon Henry and didn't want to play with him together.Henry was sad but he wasn't angry with Robert for his rude behavior, because he learned that true courage is shown most in bearing misunderstanding when it was not deserved, and that he ought to be afraid of nothing but doing wrong. Thus, he just ignored the other boys'laughter and continued to go to school and study as well. However, Robert didn't invite Henry to go home with him anymore. Instead, he had some other boys who also thought Henry was a coward. Every day after school, they didn't go home directly but went to the river or somewhere to play games and had a lot of fun.A few days later, Robert was bathing with his new friends in a river, and got out of his depth. He struggled, and screamed for help, but all in vain. The boys who had called Henry a coward got out of the water as fast as they could, but they did not even try to help him.Robert was fast sinking.Thus, Robert's life was saved.参考范文Robert was fast sinking. It seemed as if Robert would be drowned. Just at the moment, Henry happened to be passing by. Hearing the scrnrms, Henry ran to the riverside, threw off his clothes and jumped into the water without hesitation. He reached Robert just as he was sinking the last time. By great effort, and with much danger to himself, he brought Robert to the shore.Thus, Robert/s life was saved. Robert and his new friends were ashamed at having called Henry a coward. They realized that Henry had true courage. They said sorry to Henry for their rude behavior and asked for his forgiveness. Henry forgave them happily. He and Robert were friends again and they went home together as usual. From this, Robert learned what true courage was: never be afraid to do good, but always fear to do evil.21. The author's original fear of water was caused by LA. his poor skill in swimmingB. his mother/s warning of drowningC an outing to the beach with his father D. an unpleasant memory of the pool 22. Why was the author not scared to death when he was thrown into the water?A. He knew how to swim in the pool.B. He felt that the Y.M.C.A. pool was safeC. He was waiting for others to save him.D. He came up with an idea to go upwards.23. By "but I was nothin paragraph 5, the author probably means "A. he was still a poor swimmerB. he had not overcome the fear yetC. he was not afraid of drowning any moreD. he was not satisfied with the swimming trainingStep 2:原文语言学习：从原文中找出下列汉语的英语表达。1 .脑海里那些在河里溺水的细节记忆犹新。2 .巨浪把我打到，席卷而来。3 .我以坐着的姿势落地，吞了好几口水。4 .当我的脚碰到地面，我将会往上跳，浮出水面。5 .当我落地的时候，我拼劲全身力气去往水面游。6 .我睁开眼睛，除了水，我什么也看不到。7 .我试着大喊出来，但是声音出不来。我不停地往下沉，往下沉。8 .当我恢复意识，我发现自己已经躺在医院的病床上了。9 .这次不幸，随着时间流逝，一直跟随着我。10 .它剥夺了我游泳和划船的快乐。11 .战胜恐惧2阅读2“Help me! I could feel my body hurt as I gasped for air and anxiously tried to touch the bottom. But the water was too deep, the waves were too strong and I couldn't swim back. The waves made it almost impossible for anyone to hear my cries. Tears mixed water as I struggled to get back to the shore. My sister, using all her strength, couldn't pull me onto the shore. The two of us, scared to death, kept crying. Another huge wave crashed over my head and pulled me under; I made my way to the top, gasped for air and then was pulled back under. I turned onto my back and tried to float to regain some energy, but the waves were too large, making it impossible to stay still or afloat. I couldn't breathe. I thought I was going to die!Two girls playing on the sandbar（沙洲）tried pulling me onto it, but as a result they couldn't stand in the water and then gave up. Still struggling, crying for the lifeguard, I used all my strength to swim to the shore. My strength was almost gone. All I could do was keep screaming.Suddenly, a man came rushing toward me. The waves acted as if they were his friends, carrying him toward me easily. When he got close, he caught my arm and calmly brought me to the shore. But before I could thank him he had disappeared. I stood there with my eyes full of tears. The waves that I had been playing in would have killed me if it had not been for the angel. I was so happy and felt grateful for the person who had saved me! Step 1:完成下列练习.What happened to the author when she played on the shore?A.She felt ill suddenlyB. She couldn't find her sisterC.She was hit by big waves D. She was injured by accident1 .Faced with the accident, the author was.A.calm and confidentB. afraid and determinedC.careful but nervousD.frigh tended and hopeless2 .How did the author escape from the danger?A.She was saved by a man B. She did it by herselfC.Her sister found her D. Two girls pulled her onto the sandbar 4.What is the best title for the text?A.A nice walk on the shore B.be grateful I am aliveC.A lesson learned from the sea D. The cost of learning to swimStep 2:原文语言学习：从原文中找出下列汉语的英语表达。1 .我大喘气，试图碰到底部。2 .浪太大了，几乎不可能有人听到我的叫喊声。3 .泪水混着海水，我努力游回岸边。4 ,拉我上岸.Another huge wave crashed over my head（撞至I我的头）and pulled me under（把握拉下 水）；I made my way to the top（我游至I水面）,gasped for air（呼吸空气）and then was pulled back under（又被拉侄|水里）.I turned onto my back and tried to float to regain some energy（重新获得能量）y, but the waves were too large, making it impossible to stay still or afloat（漂浮）.I couldn/t breathe.5 .我的力气全部用尽，我能做的就是拼命喊叫。【3】阅读3 （落水场景）It seemed a long way down. Those nine feet were more like ninety, and before I touched bottom my lungs were ready to burst. But when my feet hit bottom I summoned all my strength and made what I thought was a great spring upwards（当我的脚碰至I底 部，我积攒全部力气，试图往上跳跃）.l imagined I would bob to the surface （跳到水 面）like a cork（木头）. Instead, I came up slowly .1 opened my eyes and saw nothing. but water that had a dirty yellow tinge to it. I grew panicky. I reached up as if to grab a rope and my hands clutched only at water（我越来越慌张,伸手似乎去抓住绳子,但是我的 手握住的只有水）. I was suffocating（窒息）.I tried to yell but no sound came out. Then my eyes and nose came out of the water but not my mouth.I flailed什丁）at the surface of the water, swallowed and choked（仓）. I tried to bring my legs up, but they hung as dead weights （我的腿死一般的沉重）,paralyzed （瘫痪了的） and rigid（僵硬的）.A great force was pulling me under. I screamed, but only the water heard me. I had started on the long journey back to the bottom of the pool. I struck at the water as I went down, expending my strength as one in a night mare fights an irresistible force. I had lost all my breath. My lungs ached, my head throbbed（抽搐， 跳动）. I was getting dizzy（昏迷）.But I remembered the strategy I would spring （跳） from the bottom of the pool and come like a cork to the surface. I would lie flat on the water, strike out with my arms, and thrash with my legs. Then I would get to the edge of the pool and be safe. I went down, down, endlessl