九年级英语写作.pptx
如何写好英语作文如何描述过去发生的事情书面表达的六步法一.审题.二.抓要点.三.扩展成句.四.连句成文.五.查错改错.六.抄写审题确定基本要素(5W1H)何时-When何地-Where何人-Who为何-Why如何-How何事-What抓要点确定主要行为What happened？a hard-working studentget up early to read book ()do his homework during the lunch break ()stay up to study（）play computer games（）chat with others on the internet（）扩展成句形成基本语义单位Who did something连句成文（时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应）查错改错（要尽量剔除错误）抄写（卷面不工整扣分）writing a picture storywriting a picture story 根据下根据下列图画中列图画中 Tom Tom 骑自骑自行车的经行车的经历，用英历，用英语写一篇语写一篇故事。故事。短文要写短文要写得连贯、得连贯、完整。完整。Sample 11.topic:2.Tense(generally):3.Person:1.Go over the requirementA story（a traffic accident)past tenseTom,he Tom/ride a bike Along the street/roadA few days ago/the other day/one day2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)A car/run fast to/run into himTom/fall off his bikeSuddenly 2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)The driver/frightened/run away 2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)A woman/remember the number of the car The police The driver/catch2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)Key wordssentencesA woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car.She called the police.The driver was caught.ride a bike/run fast tosee the accident/remember the number/call the police /be caught be frightened /run awayhit him/fall off his bikeWhen Tom was riding along the street.A car ran fast to him.The car hit him.And he fell off his bike.The driver was so frightened that he ran away.Tom was riding along the street.A car ran fast to him.The car hit him and he fell off his bike.The driver was frightened.He ran away.A woman saw the accident.She remembered the number of the car.She called the policeman.The driver was caught.Passage 13.Writing a passage The other day,Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him.He turned left quickly but it was too late.The car hit him and he fell off his bike.The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could.He was soon out of sight,leaving Tom helpless on the spot.Fortunately,a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car.She called the policeman and told him what had happened.Finally,the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.passage 2 The other day,Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him.He turned left quickly but it was too late.The car hit him and he fell off his bike.The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could.He was soon out of sight,leaving Tom helpless on the spot.Fortunately,a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car.She called the policeman and told him what had happened.Finally,the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.Passage 2 Using connectives1.并列并列 2.转转折折 3.因果因果 4.其他其他and,bothand but,however,though,while so,therefore,because when,suddenly,immediately,as soon as,unfortunately,sothat,finally,as a result,What was worseGo over the requirement（person,tense,style）Summary:How to write a picture story?Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)Write a passage（using connectives and adding details and specific information.)基本篇章结构基本篇章结构 点题（时间、地点、点题（时间、地点、人物、事件人物、事件）事件的起因事件的起因 事件的发展事件的发展/过程过程 事件的结果事件的结果 扣题扣题 Clear idea Correct grammar Complete passage Beautiful language Beautiful handwriting What is good writing?What is good writing?Writing a storyThink about the story you want to tell.Think about the purpose and focus of your story.Why are you telling the story?Make a list of all the things that happen.Add details and specific information.Tell the reader what things look like and what people say.TIPS
