广东省惠州市2012届高三第二次调研考试作文评讲 原创.ppt

英语试卷作文评讲英语试卷作文评讲广东省惠州市广东省惠州市2012届高三第二次调届高三第二次调研考试研考试基础写作指导1.找出要点，写出简单句；找出要点，写出简单句；2.借助连词，介词，从句的运用，合并信息，借助连词，介词，从句的运用，合并信息，整理为整理为5个句子；个句子；3.检查时态。检查时态。4.修改润色。修改润色。广东省惠州市广东省惠州市2012届高三第二次调研考试届高三第二次调研考试1.当地政府正在实施快速公交和桥梁建设，结果当地政府正在实施快速公交和桥梁建设，结果（）引起了人们的广泛争议。（）引起了人们的广泛争议。2.一些人赞同（）因为她解决交通问题，方便人一些人赞同（）因为她解决交通问题，方便人们的生活。们的生活。3.（）有助于发展经济，提高人民生活水平。（）有助于发展经济，提高人民生活水平。4.（）有助于提高惠州作为现代化旅游城市的形（）有助于提高惠州作为现代化旅游城市的形象。象。5.反对的人认为（）会造成环境污染。反对的人认为（）会造成环境污染。6.（）会产生噪音，打扰居民的平静生活。（）会产生噪音，打扰居民的平静生活。7.（）时常造成交通堵塞。（）时常造成交通堵塞。第一步：找出要点，写简单句第一步：找出要点，写简单句当地政府正在实施快速公交和桥梁建设，结果（）当地政府正在实施快速公交和桥梁建设，结果（）引起了人们的广泛争议。引起了人们的广泛争议。Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads to build BRT,which has caused a heated discussion among the local people.The local government decide to build BRT and overpass,as a result,it caused a heated discussion.检查时态，合并句子，完善句子检查时态，合并句子，完善句子广东省惠州市广东省惠州市2012届高三第二次调研考试届高三第二次调研考试1.一些人赞同（）因为她解决交通问题，方便人们的生活。一些人赞同（）因为她解决交通问题，方便人们的生活。2.（）有助于发展经济，提高人民生活水平。（）有助于发展经济，提高人民生活水平。3.（）有助于提高惠州作为现代化旅游城市的形象。（）有助于提高惠州作为现代化旅游城市的形象。Some agree to carry out the project because it can solve some traffic problems and convenient to peoples life.It help promote the economy and improve peoples living environment as well as the image of Huizhou as a modern tourist city.Some agree that we should carry out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problems and make our life convenient and comfortable.Besides,it helps promote the economy and improve peoples living environment as well as the image of Huizhou as a modern tourist city in the northeast of Guangdong province.检查时态，合并句子，完善句子检查时态，合并句子，完善句子反对的人认为（）会造成环境污染。反对的人认为（）会造成环境污染。（）会产生噪音，打扰居民的平静生活。（）会产生噪音，打扰居民的平静生活。（）时常造成交通堵塞。（）时常造成交通堵塞。广东省惠州市广东省惠州市2012届高三第二次调研考试届高三第二次调研考试2)But others believe that the project may cause air pollution and traffic jams may appear now and then.Whats worse,the people who are against the construction think that the noise produced by the work will disturb peoples peaceful life.People against the project think that it will cause environment pollution and produce noise,disturb peoples peaceful life.It will cause traffic jams now and then.1)Others believe that the project may cause environ-ment pollution and produce noise,disturbing/which may disturb peoples peaceful life.Also it may cause traffic jams now and then.检查时态，合并句子，完善句子检查时态，合并句子，完善句子A POSSIBLE VISIONRecently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads to build BRT,which has caused a heated discussion among the local people.Some agree that we should carry out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problems and make our life convenient and comfortable.Besides,it helps promote the economy and improve peoples living environment as well as the image of Huizhou as a modern tourist city in the northeast of Guangdong province.But others believe that the project may cause air pollution and traffic jams may appear now and then.Whats worse,the people who are against the construction think that the noise produced by the work will disturb peoples peaceful life.写作基本句型参考表明观点与看法：1.People have(take,adopt,assume)different attitudes towards 2.People have different opinions on this problem.3.People take different views of(on the question.4.Some people believe that,others argue that