热点07 校规-备考2022年中考英语作文热点素材+精彩范文.pdf

热点热点 7 校规校规校规无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的 2020 年中考英语写作预测话题是：校规。【预测题目】（一）随着“创建全国文明城市”活动的开展， 中学生报开展了校规校纪大讨论。现该报正在向各校学生征文。请你以“Rules of My School”为题，写一篇征文，谈谈你对校规的了解和认识。要点如下：1你所知道的校规(列举 3 条)；2你对这些校规的认识；3请你对改善校规提建议。本篇习作是一篇议论文写作，主要写对校规的了解和认识。同学们至少要列出 3 条校规，写出自己赞成的校规及原因以及不赞成的校规及原因。_【参考范文】Rules of My SchoolThere are lots of rules in my school. For example, we must clean our classroom every morning. I think itsvery necessary for us to keep it clean.And its good for our health. Besides, we have to wear school uniforms everyday. I think the uniforms are ugly. In my opinion, we should be allowed to choose our own clothes because they canmake us feel more comfortable. Whats more, we cant talk loudly in the classroom. I agree that we should try tokeep quiet in the classroom for its good for our study.【解析】这是一篇给出写作要点和题目的提纲类作文。内容为你以Rules of My School为题，写一篇征文，谈谈你对校规的了解和认识。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。写作要点包括：1. 列举学校的校规；2. 对这些校规的认识；3. 对不满意的校规的意见。可以先总写我们学校有许多校规校纪，然后分别列举三条校规，每条校规都要交代清楚“是什么”，“为什么”，“怎么样”，对于不完善的校规，还要提出改进建议。常用到的重点句型和短语：there be 句型，It is+ adj. +for sb. to do sth.，have to do sth.，in ones opinoin，should beallowed to do sth.，be bad for；have to；try to do。（二）俗话说,无规矩不成方圆,各个学校都会有自己的校规来规范同学们的行为。校规在学生学习和生活中扮演着很重要的角色。它们可以规范我们的行为，可以让我们成为文明合格的中学生。然而，也有部分学生认为很多校规管的太宽，让正常的学习生活受到太多的约束。作为中学生，你一定有自己不同的见解和认识。请按以下要求写一篇短文，谈谈你对校规的认识和看法。要求：1. 词数不少于 80 词,提示词仅供参考；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。_【参考范文】Hello, everyone.Id like to introduce my class rules made in our school. First, we should come to school ontime.Also, we ought to do our homework carefully and hand it in on time.And were required to wear the schooluniforms at school and so on.I remember one day I didnt wear my school uniform because it was quite dirty. When I got to school, myteacher asked me to his office and gave me a lesson. I was asked to wear it every day except on weekends, or Iwould be punished.As for me, its our duty to follow the school rules. But not all the rules are perfect. I think we should beallowed to wear our own clothes. So I hope the school rules should be made according to the surveys on thestudents to make sure they are reasonable.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文，谈谈你对校规的认识和看法。写作时人称为第一人称。由于是写规章制度，因此会用到一些情态动词，一定要掌握情态动词的用法。根据参考词汇，可以列出写作提纲，我们要用简单准确的句子把它们表达出来。写作中要注意运用一般现在时与一般过去时这两种时态。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。（一）国有国法，校有校规。在你的学校中一定有很多规章制度来规范中学生的行为，使学生们都能健康成长。请你写一篇英语小短文向大家介绍一两条校规、校纪。_【参考范文】There are many rules in our school,At our school we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that allmy classmates think the uniforms are ugly. I think young people should look smart and so Id like to wear my ownclothes. If we have to wear uniforms, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. That would be a good wayto keep both teachers and students happy.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，材料中给出的写作要点是写出校规。这个要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。（二）国有国法，校有校规。在你的学校中一定有很多规章制度来规范中学生的行为，使学生们都能健康成长。请你列举五条校规、校纪_【参考范文】We dont pick flowers。We dont destroy our tables and chairs.We should keep the classrooms clean and tidy every day.We should respect each other.We shouldnt play dangerous games.【解析】试题分析：本题答案不唯一，只要语法基本正确，句子语意通顺即可。学习中应注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。（三）不以规矩， 无以成方圆 国有国法， 校有校规 请以 My school rules 为题， 写一篇 60 词左右的文章 文中不能出现自己的真实名字、学校、班级等。提示：1学校有哪些校规；（不少于 5 条）2对校规的感受。_【参考范文】My school rulesWe have a lot of school rules at our school.And we arent allowed to break the rules. I think some of the rulesare necessary. For example, students must listen carefully in class and finish homework carefully.And we arentallowed to make noise in library. We have to be friendly to classmates. Its helpful to get along with classmates.At our school, we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniformsare ugly. I think young people should look smart and so Id like to wear my own clothes. If we have to wearuniforms, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms.【解析】本文属于话题作文，介绍你们学校的校规以及你的感受。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致， 特别使用一些亮点词句， 如 be allowed to do, break the rules, necessary, for example, make noise, haveto, be friendly to, get along with 以及 that 引导的表语从句。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。（四）人们常说：“没有规矩，不成方圆”，合理的校规对于学生的健康成长至关重要。请你根据以下所给内容要点，以“Our school rules”为题写一篇英文短文，谈谈你们的校规。内容要点：1.你们学校有哪些校规；2.谈谈你对这些校规的看法；3.请说说你的好建议；4.要求：1.文中必须包括所给提示中 13 项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；2.文中不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息；3.不少于 80 词。_【参考范文】Our School RulesThere are many rules in our school.From Monday to Friday，we have to get to school before 7：00 in themorning. We must wear school uniforms， and I think it is good for us because uniforms can make us look smart. Wemust listen to our teachers carefully in class and finish our homework after school. We are not allowed to usemobile phones in class. I think the rules are very strict but useful， and we should follow them. However， we have somuch homework that we have little free time to do what we love to do.In my opinion，we should have more free time to take part in all kinds of activities and improve our abilities.1. We dont pick flowers。2. We dont destroy our tables and chairs.3. We should keep the classrooms clean and tidy every day.4. We should respect each other.5. We shouldnt play dangerous games.6. There are many rules in our school.7. I think the rules are very strict but useful8. In my opinion，we should have more free time to take part in all kinds of activities and improve our abilities.9. Its helpful to get along with classmates.10. As for me, its our duty to follow the school rules.11. Whats more, we cant talk loudly in the classroom.12. I agree that we should try to keep quiet in the classroom for its good for our study.13. I think it is good for us because uniforms can make us look smart.14. However，we have so much homework that we have little free time to do what we love to do.15. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.（一）假如你是 Sally，进入初中将近一年的你，在学校的生活得还好吧？请你根据下面的提示内容，向你的朋友 Jane 介绍你的初中生活吧。大约 80 词左右。( 15 分)提示内容：1. 你的特长和能力；2. 你的学校距离，上学的方式和时间；3. 喜欢和不喜欢的课程及原因； 5. 介绍至少两条校规及对校规的看法。要求：语句通顺，语意连贯，语法正确，字迹工整。My School Life_【参考范文】Dear Jane,How are you these days? Well, I want to tell you something about me and my school life. I have a good time atschool. I am good at drawing and join the drawing club. My house is not far away from school. I usually ride abike to go to school. It takes me about ten minutes. My favorite subject is English. I think it is interesting. But Idont like math, because it is difficult for me and boring. There are many rules in our school. We have to wearschool uniforms on school days. I think it is not good, because the uniforms are not beautiful and we dont likethem.And we cant run in the hallway. It can keep us from danger.Can you tell me your school life?Yours,Sunny【解析】试题分析：本文是叙述自己在学校的学习情况，所以句子的主语一般用第一人称，因为叙述的是平常里的情况，所以应该用一般现在时，不要遗漏，要点，要注意上下文之间的衔接，要使用高级词汇，缩写的句子应当符合英语语法。写作亮点： 短文用了一些短语和句式， 如： have a good time 玩儿的开心； be good at 擅长； It takes sb sometime to do sth 花费某人多长时间;it is +形容词+for sb 对某人来说是怎样的。用了 because，that 引导的从句，增加了文章的亮点。（二）同学们，中考过后，你们即将告别亲爱的母校。回首三年的母校生活，学校里的很多规则 有助于你的健康成长。你能谈一谈你们学校的校规吗？你对这些校规有何看法？你对母校有 哪些合理化建议？请你以 My school rules 为题写一篇短文。要求：1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；2. 书写工整、规范；3. 根据所给内容，请做适当发挥；4. 词数 80 左右。文章的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。My school rulesWe have many rules in our school._【参考范文】My school rulesWe have many rules in our school. I think most of them are good for us, but some are not so good.Here are some good rules. We cant be late for school. We must listen carefully to teachers in class. Mobilephones are not allowed to bring into the school. These rules are good for our study and I like them.I think there are also a few unnecessary rules. For example, students are not allowed to wear long hair. I thinkgirls should be allowed to wear long hair. I hope these rules can be changed.【解析】本文谈一谈对母校校规的看法，提出一些合理性的建议。所以句子的主语应该用第一人称，句子的时态用一般现在时，所写的句子应该用一些高级词汇及句式，不要写汉语式的英语。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：be good for 有益；be allowed to do sth 被允许做某事；I think most of them are good for us, but some arenot so good.I think there are also a few unnecessary rules.I think girls should be allowed to wear long hair. I hopethese rules can be changed.用了 that 引导的宾语从句，是亮点句。（三）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Jason 发电子邮件向你询问你们学校的校规，请你根据以下提示给他回复一封邮件介绍你们学校的校规。提示：（1）不能迟到早退。（2）禁止在课堂上吃东西。（3）禁止从楼上往下扔垃圾。（4）玩耍时不能使用危险的器械。（5）不抽烟、不喝酒。要求：（1）内容须包括所有提示内容。（2）语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯。（3）词数 80 词左右，电子邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jason，_Yours，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Jason,Im glad to get your email. In the email, you asked me about my school rules. Here I will tell you about them.Firstly, we cant be late for class or leave school before it is over. Secondly, we mustnt eat anything in class.Thirdly, we mustnt throw rubbish out of the windows of tall buildings. Fourthly, we mustnt use dangerous toolswhen we play with our classmates. Lastly, we mustnt smoke or drink.Thats all. What about yours?Yours,Li Hua【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时开头介绍写信的目的；第二段介绍我校的校规；第三段询问对方的校规。2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时，介绍我校的校规，叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。3.高分亮点：短语：ask sb about sth；be late for；in class；throwout of；play with；what about。句型：时间状语从句 before it is over 和 when we play with our classmates。（四）假如你是 Li Hua， 给你的英国笔友 Tom 写一封信，讲讲你们学校的校规以及你的感受。1. 不少于 60 词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数2. 不要出现真实的校名、班名和姓名_【参考范文】Dear Tom，I am writing to tell you something about our school rules. School rules are very important. There are manyrules in our school. For example, we should wear our school uniforms at school and we should go to school on time.We are required to keep the classroom clean and tidy. We cant eat, drink or sleep in class. We must do ourhomework, too. I think these rules are good for our study and school life. Some students dont like wearing schooluniforms all the time because its boring. But its ok with me.Yours,Li Hua【解析】这篇书面表达要求学生写一封信给 Tom，介绍自己学校的校规，并简述自己感受。这篇书面表达没有给出具体的材料， 考生需根据要求， 结合自己学校的校规来写作。 例如常见的 Be quiet onclass.上课安静。Dont throw rubbish casually.不要随处乱扔垃圾。No smoking or drinking.不要吸烟喝酒。Dontfight or say rude words.不打架不骂人。Dont bully girls.不要欺负女生。Ask for leave on emergency.有事请假。Be friendly to classmates.友好待人。No cheat in exam.考试不能作弊。Dont wear strangely.不要穿奇装异服，等等。考生可以根据自己熟悉的点来写，此外还要描述自己对这些校规的感受。【点睛】在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。