Unit6 Giving a helping hand.ppt

Unit6 Sunshine for all Task:Giving a helping hand Learning aims1.Learn to organize the ideas according to the type of writing；2.Learn to write a letter about asking for peoples help；3.Be aware of giving a helping hand and take action.survivors of disastersn.幸存者幸存者children without familiespeople with a serious diseasen.疾病疾病operation n.手术手术HMany people in the world need special care.1._ people cant see anything while _ people cant hear any sound.2.We can provide some walking aids for the _(able).3.When people grow old,some may move to the home for the _(old).4.Many survivors of the earthquake became _(home).People in needBlinddeafdisabledelderlyhomelessHow can we help them?Giving a helping handGiving a helping handMy students have written a letter to ask for help.Listen and answer1.What is wrong with Xiao Wei?He has a serious blood disease.2.What kind of help do his family need?They need money for Xiao Weis operation.3.How can we help Xiao Wei?We can donate money to him.1.He has been ill in hospital since last month.他从上个月开始生病住院了。他从上个月开始生病住院了。本句用的是本句用的是现现在完成在完成时时，表示从，表示从过过去某去某一一时间时间开始一直持开始一直持续续到到现现在的在的动动作或事作或事情。情。e.g.They have worked here since 1975.他他们们从从1975年开始就在年开始就在这这工作了。工作了。2.have a serious blood disease 有有严严重的血液疾病重的血液疾病 表示表示“生生病病”通常用通常用动词动词have。如：如：头头疼疼 have a headache 3.as soon as possible 尽可能快的尽可能快的 e.g.请请尽快把尽快把书还给书还给我。我。Please return my book as soon as possible.4.lose ones life 失去生命失去生命,丧丧生生 e.g.许许多人在多人在这这次次地震中地震中丧丧生了。生了。Many people lost their lives in the earthquake.5.Many hands make light work.人多力量大。人多力量大。6.give a helping hand 帮助帮助,伸出援助之手伸出援助之手7.get well 康复康复 句中句中well是是形容形容词词,表示表示“健康的健康的”。e.g.Are you OK?Yes.Im well.你好你好吗吗？是的，我很好。是的，我很好。What are the main parts of an article?How can we organize our ideas before writing?Dear all,A Grade 9 student at No.2 Middle School needs our help!The students name is Xiao Wei.He has been ill in hospital since last month.The doctor says that he has a serious blood disease.An operation may save him,but it will cost over 300,000 yuan.Xiao Weis parents are both farmers.They do not have enough money for such an operation.However,it is important for Xiao Wei to have the operation as soon as possible.Otherwise,he may lose his life.I am writing to ask for your help.Please donate money.Many hands make light work.If all of us can give a helping hand he may get well again soon.Thanks a lot for your help!PeterGiving a helping handPara 1 _ needs help?Para 2 _ about the person or group in needPara 3 _do they need our help?Para 4 What kind of help do they need?_ can we help them?Para 5 _ for helpWhoInformationWhyHowThanksPara 1 Who needs help?Para 2 Information about the person or group in needPara 3 Why do they need our help?Para 4 What kind of help do they need?How can we help them?Para 5 Thanks for helpIntroduction介绍介绍Main body正文正文Conclusion总结总结Giving a helping handan article Giving a helping handintroductionmain bodyconclusionGiving a helping hand2022/12/24IntroductionructionMain bodyCConclusionclusionWho needs help?Thanks for helpAn articledetailed structure1.Information about the person in need2.What kind of help do they need?3.How can we help?Before writing,its necessary for us to organize our ideas first.When we write a letter for help,we need to tell others two points:who needs help how we can helpDear all,A Grade 9 student at No.2 Middle School needs our help!The students name is Xiao Wei.He has been ill in hospital _ last month.The doctor says that he has a serious blood disease.An operation may save him,_it will cost over 300,000 yuan.Xiao Weis parents are _ farmers.They do not have enough money for such an operation._,it is important for Xiao Wei to have the operation_._,he may lose his life.I am writing to ask for your help.Please donate money.Many hands make light work._ all of us can give a helping hand he may get well again soon.Thanks a lot for your help!PeterTransitional words and phrasesMake your writing read bettersincebutbothHoweveras soon as possibleOtherwiseIfDear all,A Grade 9 student at No.2 Middle School needs our help!The students name is Xiao Wei.He has been ill in hospital since last month.The doctor says that he has a serious blood disease.An operation may save him,but it will cost over 300,000 yuan.Xiao Weis parents are both farmers.They do not have enough money for such an operation.However,it is important for Xiao Wei to have the operation as soon as possible.Otherwise,he may lose his life.I am writing to ask for your help.Please donate money.Many hands make light work.If all of us can give a helping hand he may get well again soon.Thanks a lot for your help!PeterGood sentencesMake your writing vivid(生动的生动的).People with a serious disease Blind and deaf people Children in poor areas Children without parents Earthquake survivors 地震幸存者地震幸存者 Lost children /the child beggar(s)儿童乞丐儿童乞丐 The elderly from empty-nest families 空巢老人空巢老人 Discuss in groups who you want to help and what you can do.Use the following ideas to help you.Pre-writingHow can we help them?1.be patient to them 2.help them cross the road 3.stop taking up the sideway for the blind4.try to help them with body languagesblind and deaf peoplethe elderly from empty-nest families 1.Its useful to chat with them.2.help them do some housework 3.walk with them4.build homes for the elderly 敬老院敬老院How can we help them?children in poor areas1.donate money,books etc.2.volunteer to teach 3.develop these areas and make them rich 4.ask Project Hope for help .children without parents or families1.donate money and things2.help them return to school3.visit and chat with them 4.care for them5.provide an environment full of love6.build homes for children without families .earthquake survivors 1.Its kind of you to donate money and things to them.2.help them rebuild their home 3.care for them.lost children1.Its important to show their photos on the Internet and ask more people to look for.2.send them to the assistance station (救助站救助站)3.call the TV station .child beggar(s)儿童乞丐2022/12/24Giving a helping handIntroductionructionMain bodyCConclusion Who needs help?1.Information about the person in need2.What kind of help do they need?3.How can we help?Thanks for helpWhile-writing An articleWhile-writing Write an article about asking for help.Checklist评估标准评估标准：作文总分作文总分10分分1.结构合理结构合理（3分）分）2.适当运用本节课所学的适当运用本节课所学的useful expressions（3分）分）3.鼓励使用谚语、从句等。鼓励使用谚语、从句等。（1分）分）4.书写工整，整体美观书写工整，整体美观（2分）分）5.没有或较少语法错误没有或较少语法错误（1分）分）Choose and Write a letter to ask for peoples help Each student writes an article.(5 minutes)The fastest three groups can get a present each.Useful expressionsneeds our help.We must do something to help Itll costto do/does not have enough money for Its important/dangerous/forto If all of us can give a helping hand,may Thank you for your help/support.Some linking words:but,however,otherwise,first,next,then,finallyWhile-writing Times up!Post-writing 1.Work out your points.2.Find out the best one in your group and show it to others.3.Find out the mistakes in your articles and correct them.Checklist评估标准评估标准：作文总分作文总分10分分1.结构合理结构合理（3分）分）2.适当运用本节课所学的适当运用本节课所学的useful expressions（3分）分）3.鼓励使用谚语、从句等。鼓励使用谚语、从句等。（1分）分）4.书写工整，整体美观书写工整，整体美观（2分）分）5.没有或较少语法错误没有或较少语法错误（1分）分）Change your writing,correct it and give him a mark in this way.summary1.How do we write an article to ask for help?2.What should we pay attention to when we write it?很多时候，很多时候，帮助别人就是帮助自己。帮助别人就是帮助自己。你在帮助别人的时候，你在帮助别人的时候，你的收获也许会远远大于你的付出。你的收获也许会远远大于你的付出。The roses in her hand,the flavor in mine.赠人玫瑰，手有余香。赠人玫瑰，手有余香。2022/12/24Homework 1.Remember the useful expressions we may need.2.Rewrite your article to make it perfect.Goodbye!