教育专题：英语作文公开课.ppt

Unit Unit 7 7 My life in 20 years.My life in 20 years.No.4 Middle School Zhao WeiweiLets watch viedos.1.Do you like the life in the videos?2.Why or why not?3.Is the life the same as yours?Some questions3a Dead Jills answer to the question“What will your life be like in the future?”Fill in the blanks with the words in the box.meet work live look keep wear more less fewer take In 20 years,I think Ill be a newspaper reporter.Ill _in Shanghai,because there will be_ jobs in that city.As a reporter,I think I will _ lots of interesting people,so Ill have more friends.livemoremeetIll have _ pets,though,because Ill have _ free time.And my apartment will be no good for pets because itllbe too small.So Ill probably just _a bird.During the week,Ill_ smart clothes.On the weekend,Ill_ less smart but Ill be more comfortable.In the future,people will _more so theyll probably have fewer vacations,but I think Ill _ a holiday in Hong kong when possible.One day Ill even go to Australia.fewerlesskeepwearworktakelookneighborhood jobfree time activitieshousefamilyMy life in 20 yearsLets talk about the life in 20 years.free timeactivitiesneighborhoodDo you have some good ideas or good expressions?Discussion TopicPamer imaginationJobHouseFamilyFree timeactivitiesNeighborhood.Give a report about your jobs/houses/familiesending The things we shoud do now.My life in 20 years Structure+You can choose three or four.A 6-star articleAssessment:How many stars can it get?All about the topic (围绕围绕主主题题)Good structure (结结构合理构合理)Rich expression (丰富表达丰富表达)Conjunctions&associated words (使用使用连词连词和关和关联词联词)Correct spelling (拼写正确拼写正确)Good handwriting (书书写写优优美美)Useful sentencesFirst of allIm going to be a .,beause I.So I will I will have a house,and I love.,so I will have.every day.And I will with In my free time,I will Because I like/I am good at There will be .in my neighborhood.I will This is.What about yours?In a wordThats all.In 20 years,I think I will_Write about your life 20 years from now.Useful sentencesFirst of allIm going to be a .,beause I.So I will I will have a house,and I love.,so I will have.every day.And I will with In my free time,I will Because I like/I am good at There will be .in my neighborhood.I will This is.What about yours?In a wordThats all.Assessment:How many stars can you get?All about the topic (围绕围绕主主题题)Good structure (结结构合理构合理)Rich expression (丰富表达丰富表达)Conjunctions&associated words (使用使用连词连词和关和关联词联词)Correct spelling (拼写正确拼写正确)Good handwriting (书书写写优优美美)Correction Love my lifeLove my workLove my familyLove myselfHave a dream,Please work hard and try your best!1.Self-edit your own writing according to the writing evaluation table.2.依据写作评价表对自己的文章进行自评。依据写作评价表对自己的文章进行自评。2.After self-editing,revise your drafts.自评完成后对草稿有针对性地加以修改。自评完成后对草稿有针对性地加以修改。Homework