读后续写写作主题“人与动物”讲义--2023届高三英语二轮复习写作专项.docx

读后续写写作主题人与动物讲义01A heroic dogLike most dogs whose homes are situated on large plots of land, one New Zealand dog regularly went off exploring through the farmland around his home for hours at a time.But as Louie, a sheepdog rescued from a shelter when he was just a puppy, got older, his trips got shorter and shorter. Now that Louie is 12 years old, he chooses to stay close to home and hardly ever goes out to explore any more, which is why his family was so worried when he recently disappeared and didn't return home as usual.“My mother was a little upset as he had stopped his wandering, " said Marolyn Diver, whose parent sown Louie. "We were very concerned that he might forget where his home was." But thankfully, Louie turned up at the house a few hours later. “He looked so tired and had basically just collapsed（崩溃），“Marolyn said/We were concerned that someone might have hurt him. But then we realized there was a small note attached to Louie's collar. After reading the note, I felt complete relief and relaxed, and then my heart melted.”“Louie is the hero of the day, " read the note, which was written by a neighbor about a mile away. "He led me to Maddy in distress stuck under a pile of branches. Cheers, Rob. " /"According to Rob, Louie was waiting for him at his house and demanded to be followed. Rob said that he was 100 percent sure that Louie knew what he was doing, and leading him to Maddy was his pure focus, " Marolyn explained.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1：Once Rob found Maddy, Louie helped him dig her out.Paragraph 2：“That night we were very worried about Louie, " Marolyn said.【参考范文】Once Rob found Maddy, Louie helped him dig her out. According to Rob, Louie pulled at branches and dug her out of the ground. Rob said that as soon as Maddy was free, both dogs ran to a nearby pond and jumped into it and began to drink water. Then he gave Louie a huge handful of dog biscuits as a thank-you. He knew that Louie might get in trouble for being late for home, so he thought he would write a small note to explain why Louie was absent.“That night we were very worried about Louie, “ Marolyn said/'He could hardly walk and looked terrible. We were concerned that he might not make it through the night." Thankfully, Louie was back to normal the next morning when Rob came by with Maddy for a visit. Marolyn said, “It has changed the way I look at him. And I think my parents feel the same way. I'm so proud of him."02阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完 整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。It was one of the hottest days of the dry season. We had not seen rain in almost a month. The crops were dying. Cows had stopped giving milk. The streams were long gone back into the earth. If we didn't see some rain soon we would lose everything.I was in the kitchen making lunch for the family when I saw my six- year- old son, Billy, walking toward the woods. I could only see his back. He wasn't walking in his usual way. He was obviously walking with a great effort, trying to be as still as possible. Minutes after he disappeared into the woods, he came running out again, toward the house.Moments later, however, he was once again walking in that slow and purposeful step toward the woods. This activity went on for over an hour： walking cautiously to the woods, then running back to the house. Finally, my curiosity got the best of me .1 crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked； Being very careful not to spill the water he carried. Branches and thorns slapped（拍打）his little face but he did not try to avoid them. He had a much greater purpose. As I leaned against a tree to spy on him, I saw the most amazing site.Several large dears appeared threatening in front of him. But Billy walked right up to them. I almost screamed for him to get away. And I saw a baby deer laying on the ground, obviously suffering from heavy loss of water and heat exhaustion, lift its head with great effort to lap（舔饮）up the water in my beautiful boy's hand.Paragraph 1：When the water was gone, Billy jumped up to run back to the house. Paragraph 2：And later I knew what was going on.【参考范文】When the water was gone, B川y jumped up to run back to the house. My curiosity once again drove me to follow him back .After he reached the kitchen, he turned on the tap. As he was trying hard to cup both hands to receive the water, it was still running away through his fingers. And he also had great difficulty turning off the tap with hands occupied. He seemed to be so sorry and self-condemned for his wasting of water. Wearing a note of upset on his face, he carried it carefully toward the woods.And later I knew what was going on. It began to make sense to me why he wasn't walking in his usual way. I stood on the edge of the woods watching the most beautiful heart working so hard to save a life. As my tears began to hit the ground, they were suddenly joined by other drops.And more drops. It was as if the nature itself was moved by the great effort made by my son and began to weep with pride.03阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整 的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Little snow had fallen this winter. For Reuven the frier"（皮衣制作工）it was a bad year, and after long hesitation he decided to sell Zlateh the old goat. The town butcher had offered eight silver coins for the goat. Reuven told his oldest boy, Aaron, to take the goat to town. Aaron understood what it meant, but he had to obey his father. His sisters cried loudly.Aaron took along two slices of bread to eat on the road. He needed to deliver the goat by evening and return the next day with the money. While the family said goodbye, Zlateh stood as patiently as ever. Zlateh trusted human beings.The sun was shining when Aaron left. Suddenly the weather changed, and after a while it began to snow. Soon their path was completely covered and Aaron got lost. Beneath the snow Aaron's boots touched the softness of a plowed field. He realized that he was no longer on the road. Zlateh bleated （哀鸣）as if asking to be taken home. Aaron looked around hoping to find a farmer driving a sleigh（雪橇）along the way. But he could see nothing.Aaron knew that if they did not find shelter, they would freeze to death. Suddenly he made out the shape of a hill. When he came near it, he realized that it was a large haystack （大干草堆）covered by snow. Aaron knew that they were saved. When he reached the hay, he dug a nest for himself and the goat. It was always warm in the hay. And hay was food for Zlateh.Zlateh, sat down and seemed to have regained her confidence in man. Aaron ate his bread, but after the difficult journey he was still hungry. He looked at Zlatehand realized that he would not be starved to death. Goat's milk was sweet.Zlateh ate frequently and her body gave forth animal warmth, and Aaron hugged her tightly. The snow fell for 3 days and the wind quieted down.Paragraphl:.On the morning of the fourth day, Aaron heard the ringing of sleigh bells.Paragraph2:The news that Aaron and Zlateh were coming up the road was a great joy in the family.04阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。At Dana's yard sale, Tim chose a baseball from the toys spread on the card table and asked about the price. Dana told him everything was a quarter except Nezumi, a cotton toy rat. It was gray withsome cotton sticking out from the hole where an ear had been torn off. "Nezumi is extra special, so he has ten dollars. He needs a safe new home, "Dana sighed.Tim laughed saying he didn't have ten dollars. Dana laughed, too and gave Nezumi to Tim as a free gift because he was her friend. When Tim whispered it was sort of old, Dana said old toys were the best, She then invited Tim to her birthday party the next evening, adding that her parents were giving her a real rat for her birthday. Tim was amazed and asked if it was a live rat, "Of course, "Dana said.At home, Tim's mother showed him the gift she had bought for Dana. It was a knitting spool（编织线轴）shaped like a mushroom. Mom said Dana could knit a scarf for her doll. Tim sighed that Dana wasn't a knitting kind of person but a rat kind of person. Mom laughed after knowing what had happened. Together they drove to the pet store, where Tim searched and searched and selected a clear plastic ball ,one in which the rat could run around on the floor safe from cats and dogs. Tim thought of Nezumi's ear and decided Dana's new rat would need this ball.The next day, Dana brought cupcakes to class. When she handed a cupcake to Tim, she asked ifTim brought Nezumi to school as Nezumi liked to ride in backpacks. Tim was at a loss becauseNezumi was at home on his bed. Then Dana asked what gift he was giving her. Tim replied it was a surprise. In silence they sat for a while before he heard Dana say her parents were giving her a new bike for her birthday instead of a live rat because they thought rats would bite things.注意：Paragraph 1:At home that afternoon, Tim stared at the plastic rat ball.Paragraph 2:All of a sudden, he had an idea.【参考范文】At home that afternoon, Tim stared at the plastic rat ball. Wondering about the use of the clear plastic ball if Dana had no rat, he started walking up and down the room with a frown on his face. Mom was surprised and asked him whatwas happening. Tim told her Dana wasn't getting a live rat from her parents but a bike. As they were racking their brains to come up with an appropriate gi代,Tim turned around and saw Nezumi on his bed.All of a sudden, he had an idea. Z/What about buying a live rat for Dana as she likes rats so much?" Tim asked. Mom smiled and gave him a thumbs-up. Again they drove to the pet store, where Tim found some lovely small rats, each in its own cage running around full of energy. Carefully he examined them one by one and finally chose a gray one looking quite like Nezumi. Z/This certainly is a surprise yet the best!"Tim beamed at it.