高中英语 短文改错及写作讲评课件 新人教必修1.ppt

高一写作指导高一写作指导2021/8/11 星期三1 无论从词法还是句法上讲，英语中动无论从词法还是句法上讲，英语中动词是最关键的。而在高考英语书面表达评词是最关键的。而在高考英语书面表达评分中，动词错误往往又是扣分的重点。所分中，动词错误往往又是扣分的重点。所以同学们在写作时要特别注意动词的正确以同学们在写作时要特别注意动词的正确使用。一般来说，中学生在写作中出现的使用。一般来说，中学生在写作中出现的动词错误主要有以下几个方面：动词错误主要有以下几个方面：一、一、时态误用时态误用二、二、语态错误语态错误 三、三、词形错误词形错误四、四、词性错误词性错误五、五、词义错误词义错误六、六、句式错误句式错误2021/8/11 星期三2一一、时态误用时态误用一般来说，根据写作要求能够非常明确地判断出一般来说，根据写作要求能够非常明确地判断出应该主要用什么时态，像写日记、看图书面表达，应该主要用什么时态，像写日记、看图书面表达，讲述发生的一件事，其主要时态就是一般过去时。讲述发生的一件事，其主要时态就是一般过去时。出现时态错误的主要原因是：（出现时态错误的主要原因是：（1）对各种时态的）对各种时态的基本概念不清楚（基本概念不清楚（2）时间立足点把握不准（）时间立足点把握不准（3）母）母语干扰语干扰 由于汉语动词没有时态变化，许多同学缺乏由于汉语动词没有时态变化，许多同学缺乏时态概念（时态概念（4）考场时间不够）考场时间不够2021/8/11 星期三3 He is working in this company ever since he was graduated from college.The teacher explained that light trvaeled faster than sound.has been working travels2021/8/11 星期三4二、语态错误二、语态错误Mary was dressing in white.The story was happened long long ago.We watched the train till it was disappeared.dressed英语中英语中seat，dress，devote 等动词常用被动语态等动词常用被动语态belong to,break out,disappear,happen,occur,take place,等词无被动语态等词无被动语态2021/8/11 星期三5三、词形错误三、词形错误动词有过去式、过去分词、现在分词、单数第三动词有过去式、过去分词、现在分词、单数第三人称形式。人称形式。In short,things have began to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.I was studiing in my room when the telephone rang.The driver drived so fast that the car knocked into a truck.The balloon bursted suddenly.begunstudyingdroveburst2021/8/11 星期三6四、词性错误四、词性错误1.及物动词与不及物动词混用及物动词与不及物动词混用The teacher entered into the classroom.We all agreed Marys idea.The suggestion was come up at the meeting.My hometown has taken place great changes in the past twenty years.withcameGreat changes have taken place in my hometownin the past twenty years.2021/8/11 星期三7易用错的这类不及物动词有易用错的这类不及物动词有happen,take place,occur,break out,run out,come up,come true,go out,belong to,remain,disappear等等及物动词有及物动词有marry,enter,serve,reach等等 2021/8/11 星期三82.实意动词和系动词的误用The music sounds well.This record is sold good.good英语中英语中look,sound,taste,smell,feel等等表示感觉的连系动词后接形容词作表语表示感觉的连系动词后接形容词作表语sellswell英语中有些说明主语自身特性的动词常用英语中有些说明主语自身特性的动词常用主动语态表被动含义，如主动语态表被动含义，如sell,wash,write等等This cloth _.(好洗）好洗）This pen _.(书写流利书写流利)The door _.(好关好关)washes easilywrites smoothlycloses well2021/8/11 星期三93.动词形容词介词的混用动词形容词介词的混用Our PE teacher is ill.Who will instead of him?They all against your plan.I favourite English.instead of 为介词，应改为为介词，应改为take the place of,或者说或者说Who will take his class instead?arefavourite 可用作形容词或名词不能做谓语，可用作形容词或名词不能做谓语，应改为应改为My favourite is English.或或English is my favourite(subject).2021/8/11 星期三104.瞬间动词和延续性动词的混用瞬间动词和延续性动词的混用A.A.英语中瞬间动词不能语英语中瞬间动词不能语“段段”时间连时间连用应将其替换为状态动词或延续性动用应将其替换为状态动词或延续性动词词He lent me a book and told me that Icould borrow it for a week.keep注意此类动词的替换注意此类动词的替换arrive-be;buy-have;die-be dead;join-be in;leave-be away;fall in love-be in love;get married-be married2021/8/11 星期三11B.瞬间动词与瞬间动词与till或或until引导的时间状语从句引导的时间状语从句或构成的短语连用时，应使用否定形式，否或构成的短语连用时，应使用否定形式，否则应使用状态动词或延续性动词则应使用状态动词或延续性动词He went to bed until eleven oclock.He stopped talking until the teacher came.He fell asleep until 9 oclock the next morning.didnt go或改为或改为He worked until 11 oclock.didnt stop或改为He kept talking until the teacher came.slept2021/8/11 星期三12五、词义错误五、词义错误We all persuaded Father to give up smoking,but he wouldnt listen.The young man pointed to a policeman over there,explained and said,“He stopped us an hour ago.”tried to persuadeand explained2021/8/11 星期三13六、句式错误六、句式错误My classmates suggest me to study hard.Welcome you to visit our school.There used to have two trees in the yard.adviseMy classmates suggest that I(should)study hard.studyingYou are welcome to(come to)our school for a visit有些动词不能接不定式作补语，这类动词有有些动词不能接不定式作补语，这类动词有agree,demand,hope,insist,suggest,welcome等等be2021/8/11 星期三14II.Get to know sentencesWhat is a sentence?1.The rain stopped him from going to school.主语主语+谓语（谓语（+宾语宾语+宾补宾补+状语）状语）=简单句简单句2.The rain stopped and then he went to school.主句主句+从句从句=复合句复合句简单句简单句+简单句简单句=并列句并列句3.The rain stopped when I got home.2021/8/11 星期三15vI believe that everything is going on well.vShe was reading a novel when I came in.vShe is the girl who sings best in my class.vWhat we need is time.vThe question is where we should go tomorrow.宾语从句宾语从句状语从句状语从句定语从定语从句句主语从主语从句句表语从表语从句句主句主句+从句从句=复合句复合句2021/8/11 星期三161.This earthquake was very large.2.Many people was lost their houses and parents.3.luckily,with the help of goverment,we can eat delicious food and live good houses.4.In a world,we are determined to rebuilt our country.III.Errors in your writingterriblegovernmentinwordrebuild2021/8/11 星期三175.To my sad,thousands of people lost their families or seriously injured.6.After this disaster,we all become more stronger.7.Now there is still many people come and look we.8.Im sure that our dream will be come true.III.Errors in your writingsadnessweremucharecoming toseeus2021/8/11 星期三18 2021/8/11 星期三192021/8/11 星期三20