高考化学 书面表达复习课件.ppt

书面表达-高三复习专题2021/8/11 星期三1南京市二模书面表达南京市二模书面表达v请你根据下面这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文。短文内容应该包括以请你根据下面这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文。短文内容应该包括以下三个方面：下三个方面：v1.描述这幅漫画的内容描述这幅漫画的内容v2.是否同意他们的教育方式，并是否同意他们的教育方式，并陈述理由陈述理由v3.对家庭教育提出建议对家庭教育提出建议vAs can be seen in the cartoon,the young couple educate their child in different ways.2021/8/11 星期三2What are preventing us from getting better grades in our writing?2021/8/11 星期三31.v 1.to my opinion as/in my point of viewv2.When educate their children,some parents are too strick with them.v3.Others are agree that children can grow up for free.v4.As far as I am considered,parents are unnecessary to spoil their children.infromeducatingconcerned,it is unnecessary for mon mistakesfreely.strict2021/8/11 星期三42.1.This picture widely exists in our parents children education way.2.One of the parents needs to take on“red face”and the other takes on“white face”.3.Praise creates good children.1.The picture is exactly the reflection of the ways in which parents educate their children nowadays.2.While its right for the parents to be strict to children,its also important for them to show children their love.Therefore,parents need to achieve a balance between love and strictness.3.Additionally,praise the children when necessary,and they will be great.2.Chinese English2021/8/11 星期三5Exercise 1:v1.这能确保这能确保有特殊才华学生有特殊才华学生进入进入一流大学。一流大学。v2.这能鼓励这能鼓励中学中学重视重视学生的学生的全面发展全面发展。It ensures students who have special talents in certain subjects to have an opportunity to enter the first-class universities.It can push/encourage high schools to pay more attention to students all-round development.2021/8/11 星期三63.poor hand-writingFrom Wu Fanfinal scores:242021/8/11 星期三7What can help us get better grades?What makes a good writing?书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求 v第五档第五档(很好很好):(21-25分分)v第四档第四档(好好)：(16-20分分)v第三档第三档(适当适当)：(11-15分分)v第二档第二档(较差较差)：(6-10分分)v第一档第一档(差差)：(1-5分分)2021/8/11 星期三8v第四档第四档(好好)：(16-20(16-20分分)v完成了试题规定的任务。完成了试题规定的任务。v1.1.虽漏掉虽漏掉1 1、2 2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。v2.2.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。v3.3.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因尝试较复语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。杂语法结构或词汇所致。v4.4.应用简单的语句间的衔接手段，使全文结构紧凑，内容较连贯。应用简单的语句间的衔接手段，使全文结构紧凑，内容较连贯。v达到了预期的写作目的。达到了预期的写作目的。v第五档第五档(很好很好):(21-25):(21-25分分)v完全完成了试题规定的任务。完全完成了试题规定的任务。v1.1.覆盖所有内容要点。覆盖所有内容要点。v2.2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。v3.3.语法结构或词汇方面有个别小错误，但为尽量使用较复杂结构或语法结构或词汇方面有个别小错误，但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。v4.4.有效地使用了衔接手段，全文结构紧凑，内容连贯。有效地使用了衔接手段，全文结构紧凑，内容连贯。v完全达到了预期的写作目的。完全达到了预期的写作目的。2021/8/11 星期三9v第四档第四档(好好)：(16-20(16-20分分)v完成了试题规定的任务。完成了试题规定的任务。v1.1.虽漏掉虽漏掉1 1、2 2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。v2.2.应用的应用的语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求能满足任务的要求。v3.3.语法结构或词汇方面应用语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确基本准确，少许错误主要是因尝试较复，少许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。杂语法结构或词汇所致。v4.4.应用应用简单的简单的语句间的语句间的衔接手段衔接手段衔接手段衔接手段，使全文结构紧凑，内容较连贯。，使全文结构紧凑，内容较连贯。v达到了预期的写作目的。达到了预期的写作目的。v第五档第五档(很好很好):(21-25):(21-25分分)v完全完全完成了试题规定的任务。完成了试题规定的任务。v1.1.覆盖覆盖所有所有内容要点。内容要点。v2.2.应用了应用了较多较多的的语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇。v3.3.语法结构或词汇方面有语法结构或词汇方面有个别小错误个别小错误，但为尽量使用较复杂结构或，但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。v4.4.有效地使用了有效地使用了衔接手段衔接手段衔接手段衔接手段，全文结构紧凑，内容连贯。，全文结构紧凑，内容连贯。v完全完全达到了预期的写作目的。达到了预期的写作目的。2021/8/11 星期三101.有效使用衔接手段，使文章紧凑有效使用衔接手段，使文章紧凑vImprove the following sentences using some transitional words.vThe father shouldnt be so strict with his child.The mother shouldnt spoil the child any more.They should use appropriate methods to educate their child.vThe father shouldnt be so strict with his child _ the mother shouldnt spoil the child any more.,they should use appropriate methods to educate their child.Instead,while2021/8/11 星期三11v起起v目前、当前、现在目前、当前、现在v_ _ _v首先，起初首先，起初v_ _ _v当提到当提到，当考虑到，当考虑到.v_ _v承承v并列、递进并列、递进v_ _ _ _nowadays,at present,currentlywhen it comes to,consideringbesides,whats more,furthermore,first of all,in the first place,on the one handadditionallyExercise 2:2021/8/11 星期三12v转转v弱转折、弱对比弱转折、弱对比 _ _v强转折、强对比强转折、强对比 _ _ _v坏中有好坏中有好 _ 每况愈下每况愈下_v合合v结果结果 _ _ _v总之、综上所述总之、综上所述v_ _ _ v就我而言、在我看来就我而言、在我看来v_ _ _though,instead(of)however,in contrast,on the contraryfortunatelywhats worsetherefore,as a result,consequentlyall in all,on my personal note,in conclusionin a word,in my sight,as for me2021/8/11 星期三132.运用较多复杂语法结构和高级词汇运用较多复杂语法结构和高级词汇v1.Moreover,it will have bad impact on children both mentally and physically.(Fan Wenyuan)v2.In my sight,family education enjoys a high level of importance in every childs life.(Hu Dining)v3.Were I the father,I would never do like him.(from Class 9)v4.From my point of view,not only shouldnt parents force the children to do what they dont like,but also its urgent and necessary that we should give the children more space.(from Class 9)v1.Moreover,it will have bad impact on children both mentally and physically.(Fan Wenyuan)v2.In my sight,family education enjoys a high level of importance in every childs life.(Hu Dining)v3.Were I the father,I would never do like him.(from Class 9)v4.From my point of view,not only shouldnt parents force the children to do what they dont like,but also its urgent and necessary that we should give the children more space.(from Class 9)2021/8/11 星期三14Exercise 3:v1.Universities should pay attention to students academic grades.They should think about students ability,too.（使用倒装句）（使用倒装句）v2.High schools are encouraged by this move.They will pay more attention to the students all-round development.(使用非谓语动使用非谓语动词词)v3.Most people are concerned about whether this move is fair enough.(使用强调句使用强调句)Encouraged by this move,high schools will pay more attention to the students all-round development.Not only should universities pay attention to students academic grades,but also they should take students ability into consideration.It is whether this move is fair enough that most people are concerned about.2021/8/11 星期三15Summary:v在保证文章语法结构和词汇基本正确的在保证文章语法结构和词汇基本正确的前提下前提下：-恰当使用恰当使用衔接手段衔接手段，使文章结构，使文章结构紧凑、内容连贯紧凑、内容连贯-适当地适当地变换使用较复杂的句型结构和较高级的词汇变换使用较复杂的句型结构和较高级的词汇，尽量避免重复和单调尽量避免重复和单调-遇到不会表达的说法，遇到不会表达的说法，尝试换一种方式表达尝试换一种方式表达，切忌，切忌中式英语中式英语-书写要认真！书写要认真！2021/8/11 星期三16Check your progressv北京大学北京大学2010年将试行由中学校长实名推荐的招生改革。被推荐的学年将试行由中学校长实名推荐的招生改革。被推荐的学生高考成绩可获得生高考成绩可获得30分的加分。分的加分。2009年年11月月16日北大公布了日北大公布了39所有推所有推荐资格的中学名单。北大这一举措在全国引起了一场激烈的争论。请荐资格的中学名单。北大这一举措在全国引起了一场激烈的争论。请根据以下要点给根据以下要点给中国日报中国日报写一篇有关这场争论的报导，并表达你写一篇有关这场争论的报导，并表达你对这场争论的看法（至少两点）。对这场争论的看法（至少两点）。支持方意支持方意见见反反对对方意方意见见1.1.是改革当前高考制度的大胆是改革当前高考制度的大胆尝试尝试。2.2.能确保有特殊才能确保有特殊才华华学生学生进进入一流大入一流大学。学。3.3.促促进进中学重中学重视视学生的全面学生的全面发发展。展。1.1.可能可能导导致作假。致作假。2.2.对对全国那么多中学不公平。全国那么多中学不公平。3.3.给给被推荐的学生加分没意被推荐的学生加分没意义义。你的看法：你的看法：1.2.1.2.1对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2词数词数150字左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。字左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。Peking University will enroll students recommended by high school principals next year.The recommended students will have an extra 30 points added to their national college entrance exam scores.Peking Universitys move has set off a nationwide debate.2021/8/11 星期三17Its your show time!2021/8/11 星期三18v Some people hold the opinions that this move is a bold attempt for the present national college entrance exam.They approve of the move as a result of ensuring high quality students and special students who have outstanding abilities to enter the excellent colleges.The most important of all is that this move can promote the high schools to attach importance to the development of the students.2021/8/11 星期三19v On the other hand,some people disapprove of it.Because of lack of experience,the policy may lead to a bad phenomenon.Besides,not only is the policy unfair to many students,but also it is meaningless for students recommended by high school principals to add points to their national college entrance exam scores.2021/8/11 星期三20v As far as I am concerned,we shouldnt turn a blind eye to the policy.After all,the policy is beneficial to our high-quality students.However,as a saying goes,dont put the cart before the horse.Therefore,only in this way can we reduce pressure.Its high time that we prepared for national college entrance exam in an orderly way2021/8/11 星期三21Thank You!2021/8/11 星期三22