小升初英文写作专题训练题100题(含范文).docx
小升初英文写作专题训练题100题（含范文）学校:姓名：班级：考号：一、图画作文1 .书面表达。下面图片是你的五位笔友及其爱好，请根据提示介绍你们的爱好。MikeJohnOliverZhang Peng AmyMy pen pals' hobbiesI have many pen pals. We have many hobbies. I like flying the kites.【答案】范文：1 have many pen pals. We have many hobbies. I like flying the kites. Mike is a very handsome boy. He is from Canada. Mike likes Chinese guessing games. John likes writing Chinese characters. Oliver likes Chinese stamps. Zhang Peng likes traveling, and Amy likes watching TV at home. They often write to me and I often write to them, too. We are good pen pals.【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：介绍自己的五位笔友及其爱好，请根据图画提示介绍你们的爱好。注意时态用一般现在时。2 .参考词汇：pen pals笔友，bobby爱好，Chinese stamps中国邮票，watching TV看电视，write to写信3 .参考句型：I have many.； They often .； We are.同学们，我们读过好多童话故事，如The mouse and the lion等。请你仔细观察上面的图片，展开你的想象，编写一个故事。要求语句通顺，条理清楚，语法正确，不少于8句。答案】 One day, a duck and a monkey played on the grass. The duck is too careless. He fell into a hole in the grass. The hole was too deep. He couldn't get out. The monkey put a bamboo pole into the hole and tried to pull up the duck out. But the duck couldn't catch the bamboo pole. A dog saw it and he had a good idea. The dog brought some water with a bucket and poured the water into the hole. But it was too slow. Just then, an elephant walked by. He sucked a lot of water with his nose and filled the hole at once. The duck was rescued. From then on, they became good friends. Help others more and create more happiness.【解析】【详解】考查要点：1、作文时态前后一致。可以用一般过去时，也可以用一般现在时。2、每幅画都应该描述。3、每个单词拼写应该正确，每个句子的语法不能出错。4、加入时间，地点或自己的感想则更好。（共8分）4 .作文。假如你是Chen Jie,下面是你一天活动的照片，通过日记把它们记录下来吧。图片上的内容必须写出来，其他内容，可以自由想象，意思连贯即可。至少写出5句话，注意书写和标点。Today was a busy and fun day.【答案】参考范文（划线的部分为要点）：Today was a busy and fun day. I got up early at 6:00.1 washed clothes and cleaned the room in the morning. In the afternoon, I went to a park with dad and mom. We rowed a boat in the lake and took many pictures. Then we ate some good food near the park. It was delicious. In the evening I watched TV and then went to bed at 9:00. I was busy but happy today.【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己一天活动的照片，通过日记把它们记录下来。注意文章为一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。2 .参考词汇与句型：参考单词：busy最忙的，fun有趣的，washed clothes洗衣服，cleaned the room打扫房间，went to a park去公园，watched TV看电视，went to bed上床睡觉参考句型：Today was .； I went to . in the morning. It was .； I was .；4.看图写作，不少于30个单词。Five years ago Three years ago NowFive years ago, I【答案】参考范文：Five years ago, I planted a small tree. It was short. It was much smaller than now. Three years ago, it was bigger. It was still smaller than now. Now it is much bigger than before. It is taller and stronger.【解析】【分析】【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目要求描述图中树木逐渐长大的情景。注意文章时态的变化并要符合单词数量要求。2 .参考词汇与句型：参考单词：Five years ago五年以前，Three years ago三年以前，now现在，smaller较小的，bigger较大的，than比，taller较高的，stronger较壮的参考句型：Five years ago, I planted.； It was.； Now it is.；5 .看图写作，不少于30个单词。Then and now【答案】参考范文:Then and nowOur school is a famous one with a long history. Before ifs old and small. There was no playground in my old school. There was no gym in my old school. There was no library in my old school. There were no computers or Internet in my old school.It's very beautiful now. There are a lot of trees, flowers and grass in it. We have two teaching buildings, a computer room and a large library. There are six grades in our school, and there are eight classes in each grade. Above all, there are many good teachers in our school, so classes are very interesting and lively. All of the teachers are friendly to us. I love our school.【解析】【分析】【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目要求看图片写出学校现在和过去的变化。根据提示图片先写过去的情况，再写现在的情况，两者对比，注意逻辑性，最后表达对学校的感情。注意写过去的情况用一般过去时态，写现在的情况用一般现在时。2 .参考词汇和句型：参考单词：old and small又旧又小，big and beautiful又大又漂亮参考句型：There was no；There are a lot of.； I go to school.二、提纲作文6 .书面表达。假如你是John,根据下面的表格，写一写你和家人平时都会去哪里，去做什么，怎样去的。要求：语句通顺、意思连贯，不少于5句话。WhereWhatHowJohnbookstorebuy some bookson footJohn's fatherlibraryread booksby carJohn's motherpost officebuy a postcardby bike【答案】参考范文I'm John. I often go to the bookstore on foot to buy some books. My father usually goes to the library to read books. He goes by car. My mother usually goes to the post office to buy a postcard. She goes there by bike.【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写一写你和家人平时都会去哪里，去做什么，怎样去的。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2 .参考词汇与句型：参考单词：bookstore书店,on foot步行，library图书馆，read books读书，by car乘车,post office邮局，postcard明信片，by bike骑自行车。参考句型：I often go to .； My father ususally goes to .； He goes .；【点睛】7 .书面表达。你了解你的家庭成员的爱好吗？它们分别是什么呢？根据下面表格所给的提示，写一篇英语短文，要求不少于5句话。成员喜好爷爷go fbr a walk奶奶plant flowers爸爸watch TV妈妈cook我（根据实际情况描写）【答案】参考范文：I have a happy family. We all have different hobbies. My grandfather likes going for a walk. My grangmother likes planting flowers. My father hobby is watching TV. My mother likes cooking. She often cooks for us in the kitchen. As fbr me, I like going ice-skating and drawing cartoons.【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目要求用根据表格所给的提示，写家庭成员的爱好。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2 .参考词汇与句型：参考单词：different不同的，hobby爱好，go for a walk散步，plant种，watch TV看电视，kitchen 厨房,ice-skating 滑冰，draw cartoons 画漫画参考句型：Ihave.； We all.； My father's hobby is.； As for me.8 .书面表达。ActivitiesWhenplay sportsthis eveninggo to the supermarkettomorrow morningread bookstomorrow afternoonvisit my grandparentson Sundaysee a filmnext Friday根据表格所提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍一下你的活动计划。开头已给出。要求：不少于5句话。Today is Friday. I,m going to play sports this evening.【答案】例文：I have no classes tomorrow. I'm going to the supermarket tomorrow morning. In the afternoon, Fm going to read books. I,m going to visit my grangparents on Sunday. Fm going to see a flim next Friday.【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写自己的计划活动。根据提示句可知可以写每天计划要做的事情，注意逻辑性，注意文章为一般将来时态。2 .参考词汇和句型：参考单词：play sports做运动，read books看书，see a film看电影参考句型：Fm going to play sports.9 .书面表达。根据下面的表格介绍家庭成员的职业、工作地点及出行方式。要求：书写工整，语句通顺，不少于5句话。my mothermy fatherIjobworkerpostmanstudentwherefactorypost officeschoolhowby carby bikeon footHello! My name is Mike.【答案】范文：There are there people in my family. My mother is a worker; She works in a factory. She often goes to worke by car. My father is a postman. He works in a post office. He always goes to work bu bike. Tm a student. I go to school on foot.【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目要求根据表格内容，用第一人称介绍家庭成员的职业、工作地点及出行方式注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2 .参考词汇与句型：参考单词：family家，worker工人，posterman邮递员，student学生，factory工厂， post office 邮局，on foot 步行，by bike 骑车，by car 乘车。参考句型：Thereare ； My mother is .； She works .； He goes .；10.书面表达。你喜爱旅游吗？给你留下最深印象的是哪一次，请你写一写你去了哪里，都做了什么以及有什么美味的食物等。答案范文：I like travelling. Last summer holiday, I wen to Beijing. I visited the Palace Museum. I went to the Great Wall. I ate a lot of snacks. I had a good time there.（不是唯一答案）【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己印象最深的一次旅行。然后阐述自己去了哪里，都做了什么以及吃了什么美食。注意文章为一般过去时态。2 .参考词汇与句型：参考单词：travel旅游，visit参观，delicious food美食参考句型:I went to.； I visited.； I ate.；【点睛】11.写作园地。你是Mary,毕业前夕，你的好朋友Amy希望你在她的毕业留言册上留言，写下你们的美好回忆。请参考以下提示信息，写一篇毕业留言，不少于5句话。1 .参考词汇：表达性格的词汇：kind, clever, nice, naughty, shy.美好经历的词汇：had a picnic together, helped, taught, wonderful friend.祝福的词7匚：good luck for the future, best wishes, wishing you happiness every day.2 .要求：语句通顺，无语法错误；书写清晰规范；至少写5个完整的句子。Dear Amy,Love,Mary【答案】范文：Dear Amy,It's time to say goodbye, my wonderful friend. It's time to recall those beautiful days we spent together. You are a kind and clever girl, but I am naughty. Still remember that days two years ago? We had a picnic together. I suddenly felt ill. It was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. You took good care of me and helped me with my lessons. Without your help. I would have failed in the examination. Best wishes for you!Love,Mary【解析】【分析】【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目要求在毕业前夕，根据参考词汇，用第一人称给好朋友Amy写一篇毕业留言，写下我们的美好回忆，不少于5句话。注意文章为一般过去时态。2 .参考词汇与句型：参考单词：kind和蔼的，clever和蔼的，nice好看的，naughty淘气的，shy害羞的，参考句型：It's time to.； Still.that.； help sb. with sth.【点睛】12.同学们，暑假就要来啦!这个暑假你想干什么呢，你有计划吗？请你拟个计划，说一说暑假你和家人想去哪里、想做什么。要求：1.短文连贯通顺，条理清楚，句式丰富。2.45个词左右，至少8句。【答案】无【解析】【详解】书面表达，制定一个暑假计划，说说你和家人准备怎样度过这个暑假。作文评分要求，根据学生所写的内容和语言要求，初步确定其所属档次，然后赋分。如果书写差，格式、标点符号错误较多，以至于影响卷面，降低一个档次。评分共分为五个档次，每个档次给分范围和要求。第一档（7-8分）1 .契合主题，字迹工整，字数在要求范围内。2 .应用了恰当的语法结构和词汇，语法结构正确，没有词汇拼写错误。3 .具有较强的语言表达能力，语句流畅，适当使用了修饰词（如：形容词和连接词等）。格式和标点规范。4 .行文连贯，表达清晰明了，适当使用了一些句型（如感叹句、问句或复合句等）。5 .可读性强，完全达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（5-6分）1 .完成了试题内容，覆盖所有内容要求，字迹工整，字数在要求范围内。2 .应用的语法结构和词汇基本准确，仅有1-2处语法或拼写错误。3 .具有较好的语言表达能力，语句较流畅，格式和标点规范，但几乎没有用到修饰1司O4 .行文较连贯，表达较清晰。但几乎没有用到其他句型。5 .可读性较强，达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（3-4分）1 .基本完成了试题内容，虽然漏掉一些内容，但覆盖了主要内容，字迹较工整，但字数没有达到要求。2 .语法结构较简单，词汇有限，有34处语法或拼写错误。3 .行文基本连贯，从整体而言，初步达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（1-2分）1 .为恰当或为完成试题规定的内容，字迹潦草，字数没有达到要求。2 .漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容，写了一些无关的内容。3 .有较多的语法和词汇错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。4 .信息未能清楚地表达出来。第五档1 .未能传达给任何有关写作信息。2 .零散的几个单词，没有成句。单词拼写错误严重。3 .写的内容均与所要求的内容无关或写的内容无法辨认。（满分8分）13.小作文。想一想，参考下图，写一写你梦想的初中生活。至少5句话哦。friends subjectsbig/small/far/near. by bus/by dikc.After this summer holiday, I will go to a middle school. Til start a new middle school life.【答案】参考范文：After this summer holiday, I will go to a middle school. I'll start a new middle school life. I am looking forward to it. First, the school is not far away from my home and I will get there on foot. Second, my teachers will be so kind that they won't give us too much homework. Third, I think I will make so many friends that I won't be lonely. And I can turn to them fbr help when I am in trouble. Last but not least, I will enjoy all the subjects.【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己理想的中学。然后再阐述自己理想中学的具体的样子。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。2 .参考词汇与句型：考单词：middle school 中学;first 第一;second 第二；third 第三；last 最后；enjoy 喜欢：subjects 学科；参考句型：I will.； The school is.； My teachers will be.； I think I will.；14.习作。请试着用英语描述一下Kitty过去和现在的外貌、年龄，并进行比较。（要求：语句通顺，条理清楚，字迹工整，不少于5句话）【答案】范文:My name is Kitty. I am eleven years old. I am tall and pretty. I was five years old in the photo. I was small and cute. My hair was long.【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目要求描述Kitty的过去好和现在对比情况。根据提示句写她过去的的外貌，年龄，然后在写现在的情况。注意文章为一般现在时态和一般过去时。2 .参考词汇和句型：参考单词：name名字，years old岁参考句型：1am；Iwas15.书面表达。徐州市一个美丽而富有（rich）的城市，这里有许多高楼，公园。这里的人们勤劳，友好，人们开心地在这里生活着，请以“My hometownXuzhou”为题，写一篇60字左右的短文。注意：不遗漏介绍的信息，你可以适当发挥。My hometownXuzhouMy hometownXuzhouXuzhou is my hometown. There are many tall buildings and many parks in Xuzhou. She is a beautiful and rich city. There is fresh air and blue sky. The people are hardworking and friendly. Most of them go to work by bus and underground. They are happy. I believe our hometown will be more beautiful.【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：这是一篇提纲作文，以“My hometownXuzhou”为题，要求描写我的家乡徐州。写作时可以以第一人称为主，使用一般现在时，首先描述徐州市一个美丽而富有的城市，其次描述有许多高楼，公园，接着描述这里的人们勤劳，友好，人们开心地在这里生活着。注意一般现在时，主谓一致。2 .参考词汇和句型：参考单词：building建筑，park公园，city城市，hardworkiing勤劳,friendly善良。参考句型：there are.； there is.； they are.16. Mike想要了解一些关于中国的信息，以便向他的同学们介绍中国，他上网找了一些内容，请根据以下思维导图，帮他完成一篇小短文。About China【答案】About ChinaChina is a beautiful country. There are many interesting things in this country. Today I will tell you about it.Do you like animals? People there like pandas. They're lovely. Sport-lovers will like table tennis because it's very exciting. You will also find many cities in China, for example, Shanghai, Nanjing, Beijing, Suzhou.They're beautiful cities. You will like a lot of Chinese food, like Beijing Roast Ducks, Chongqing hot pot.There are many wonderful places in China. You can visit the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace, Shanghai Museum.You will learn more about its cultures.Many people visit China every year. People in China welcome visitors from all over the world.【解析】【详解】（共8分）17.英语写作。暑假节马上就要来了，你在暑假里准备做些什么呢，请说说你的打算。要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，表达有条理，书写规范，不少于5句。Summer vacation is coming. I have some plans fbr my summer vacation. First,1 will go to visit my grandfather and grandmother. Second, I will go on a trip to Beijing. Third, I will learn to play pipa. What about you?【解析】【分析】【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己暑假打算做什么。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。2 .参考词汇与句型：参考单词和短语：summer vacation暑假，plan计划，first第一，second第二，third第三，go on a trip 旅行，play pipa 弹琵琶参考句型：is coming.； First/Second/Third, I will .；【点睛】18 .作文。给你英国的笔友Amy写一个E-mail,把你的班级好友Jack介绍给她，Jack, II 岁，热爱篮球，游泳。擅长英语和语文，经常帮助你学英语。有关他在这半个学期的学习和生活情况，日常作息、最喜欢的学科及原因、等等。不少于70个词。Dear Amy,How are you going? I'd like to tell you something about my classmate, Jack.【答案】范文:Dear Amy,How are you going? I'd like to tell you something about my classmate, Jack. He is eleven years old. He likes playing basketball and swimming. He is good at English and Chinese. English is his favourite subject. Because he thinks English is very easy. He is very kind. He often help me learn English. He gets up early and goes to bed eraly. He is never late for school. He is a good student.【解析】【分析】【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目要求用第三人称介绍自己的班级好友。注意根据提示介绍清楚，还可自由发挥，单词和语法要正确。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词数量要求。2 .参考词汇与句型：参考单词：eleven 11, basketball 篮球，swim 游泳,English 英语,Chinese 语文, subjece科目，favourite最喜欢的参考句型： He is .； He likes .；. is his favourite subject.； He get up early and go to bed eraly.；【点睛】19.书面表达。Jack打算来中国游玩，请向他推荐一个城市，可以是你曾经去过的一个城市，也可以是你现在居住的城市或者是你了解的一个城市，主题自拟，给Jack写一封不少于5句话的邮件。To: Jack®r>Subject:Dear Jack,How are you?Hope you have a good time!Yours, xxx【答案】范文：Dear Jack,How are you? You are going to China. You can come to Beijing. It is our capital city. The Summer Palace is so beautiful. The Palace Museum is very famous in the world. And you can visit the Great Wall. It is the longest wall in the world. There are many visitors visiting it. Hope you have a good time.【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目要求用第三人称介绍一个城市。然后再阐述喜欢该城市的原因。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2 .参考词汇与句型：参考单词：The Summer Palace 颐和园；The Palace Museum 故宫；the Great Wall 长城；参考句型：You can.； There are.；【点睛】20 .写作。现在点外卖已成为社会常态，假如让你电话订购一次午餐，你会点什么？几人餐？你应该告诉商家或配送员哪些重要信息，以便你想要的午餐送到手中呢？想一想，写一写。要求：语句通顺，条理清楚，不少于50个单词。【答案】范文：Take-out food becomes more popular now, especially among the teenagers and thechildren. If I want take-out food for lunch. I want to order beef and fish. I will want a dinner for three. I will tell them my address and my telephone number.【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出订外卖注意的事项。然后再阐述自己想要点的食物，出自己的地址和电话号码。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。2 .参考词汇与句型：参考单词：popular受欢迎的，especially尤其；teenagers青少年；address地址；参考句型：I want.； I will.；21.书面表达。下面是Mike给他的笔友Zhang Peng写的一封信，请你帮助Zhang Peng给Mike 回一封信。要求：不得照抄范文，书写规范，不少于5句，可适当增加。Dear Zhang Peng:How are you these days? I am very busy every day. I get up at 7:00. Then I have breakfast. I go to school at 8:00 in the morning. I often have English, maths and science in the morning. In the afternoon, I have P.E. and music. I go home at 3:
