06 读后续写：人与动物类（故事构造“三大套路”）-2022年高考英语读后续写技巧与训练（新高考专用）.docx

读后续写：人与动物类Part1：经典例文 （小狗救人）1Part2：人与动物故事构造套路3套路一：可爱型动物故事情节3套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节6套路三、主题升华句8Part3：人与动物场景素材积累8Part4：灵活应用11例1：人与麻雀11Part5：高考真题再现13真题1：:小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】13真题2：拍照北极熊遇险【2020年7月浙江卷】16从历年高考的读后续写话题中可以看出人和动物的话题备受命题者青睐。试题文本一般从两个角度展开，一个就是人和动物和谐相处, 要么是人类帮助动物解决问题，要么是动物帮助人类解决问题；另外一个就是，人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，后来向别人求助，之后成功脱险的故事。例如：人狼大战：骑车旅途遭遇狼wolf追赶，脱险经历（2017年6月浙江高考）；人熊大战：北极探险者给北极熊拍照，遭遇polar bear追赶的惊险经历（2020年6 月浙江高考）；人狗和谐：父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴，帮助Poppy摆脱孤独和想念的故事（2020年1月浙江高考）；人猫和谐：作者的丈夫从讨厌猫到向猫求助，赶走土拨鼠的故事（2021年3月临沂市一模）。Part1：经典例文 （小狗救人）Just as many families do at a point, Catherine chose to add a new family member by adopting a pet. Shortly after her daughter Kates birth, Catherine decided she wanted a close bond with a dog for Kate. Thus, Catherine called the dog shelter close by to inquire about adoption. After hearing about the available animals, she chose a Doberman Pinscher. Once they signed adoption papers, they named the dog Khan.Catherine was hopeful this would provide valuable lessons for her baby, such as sharing, learning to love and responsibility to care for animals. She was looking forward to having the dog join the family.Hearing of Khans rough background, Catherine immediately loved the dog. She was overjoyed to bring this special dog back to her family. Of course, she realized there were risks involved. Well, the obvious risks from bringing a large, potentially dangerous animal to her young baby, Catherine pushed them aside. If she had not adopted Khan, he would have been killed just a week later. So, this was his new life and second chance, and the family was hoping for the best.Everything began smoothly. They trained Khan during the first few days. However, everything changed on that fourth day when the dog acted completely out of character.The fateful day began with the usual playtime in the yard. Although baby Kate had her parents watching from a distance, they did not notice anything out of the ordinary. Kate and the new dog had been making a habit of playing out back like this. However, things were different this day.So what was actually happening out there? The two were not being loud or crazy. They began running through the backyard grass together. Again, Catherine watched the two closely. Surprisingly, things had changed within an instant!注意：1.续写词数应为150词左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Khan began acting wildly all of a sudden,_Obviously, it was Khan who saved her baby but he barked weakly and then fell down with dying eyes._One possible version:Khan began acting wildly all of a sudden. With her mouth wide open, Catherine watched Khan dragging her child, hoping he would stop. Just as she was wondering how he could suddenly become this way, Khan put down Kate outside the yard. Catherine rushed to Kate and carried her to safety while Khan barked towards the yard wildly. Catherine returned, only to find a poisonous snake crawling in the yard and she drove it away.可汗突然开始疯狂地表演起来。凯瑟琳张开嘴，看着汗拖着她的孩子，希望他能停下来。就在她想知道他怎么会突然变成这样的时候，汗把凯特放在院子外面。凯瑟琳冲到凯特身边，把她抱到安全的地方，而汗则疯狂地向院子走去。凯瑟琳回来了，结果发现一条毒蛇在院子里爬行，她把它开走了。Obviously, it was Khan who saved her baby but he barked weakly and then collapsed with dying eyes. Khan protected Kate from the poisonous creature and was attacked. Although living with the family for merely four days, he became the protector as Catherine had hoped. Catherine rushed Khan to the vet. “May God bless you”, Catherine murmured. The vet tried his best to save him. Eventually, he made it and Catherine shed a tear of relief.显然，是汗救了她的孩子，但他的吠声很微弱，然后瘫倒了，眼睛垂死了。可汗保护凯特不受有毒生物的伤害，并遭到了袭击。虽然他只和家人一起生活了四天，但他还是像凯瑟琳所希望的那样成为了保护者。凯瑟琳冲着可汗去看兽医。“愿上帝保佑你。”凯瑟琳喃喃地说。兽医尽力去救了它。最后，他成功了，凯瑟琳如释了一口气。Part2：人与动物故事构造两大故事套路套路一：可爱型动物故事情节可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。1、外貌1. a pair of large watery eyes 一双水汪汪的大眼睛2. two big round eyes 两只圆溜溜的大眼睛3. beady/sparkling/twinkling eyes 小珠般圆亮的/亮晶晶的/闪闪发亮的 眼睛4. a nose like a small black gem 一颗黑宝石般的鼻子5. long/muscular/skinny/spindly legs 长的/肌肉发达的/皮包骨的/干瘦的 腿6. fur is as white as snow 皮毛像雪一样洁白7. a long little tail 一条长长的小尾巴2、动作wag the tail 摇尾巴smell/sniff 嗅bark/yap/yelp 狗吠lick 舔put the ears up 把耳朵竖起来shake the whole body 抖动全身bite the corner of the coat 咬住衣角rub their necks and backs with their paws 用爪子摩擦它们的脖子和背部hold it tightly with the paws 用爪子紧紧按住fall on its back 摔得四脚朝天run around me 围着我跑keep scratching you with his front paws 用前爪不停挠你raise its whole body on its hind legs 用后腿支起全身leap to its feet 跳起来rest the nose in its paws 把鼻子搁在爪子里 keep its fore legs doubled up 保持前腿弯曲3、高兴1. They were glad to see Poppy coming back to her usual self（他们很高兴看到Poppy又回到以前的自己）, guiding the little dog on daily walks and even introducing to it her favorite toys.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）2. Smiling ever so bright（笑得更加灿烂。）, he called out to his parents, who tugged him in for a long hug. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）3. Her parents watched them playing around and smiled with relief（轻松地笑了）Poppy was back to her old cheerful self!（2020年1月高考浙江卷）3、常见动物鹿：1. A mother deer with a huge pair of deer horns （有一对大的鹿角）appeared in front of him, with a baby fawn(幼鹿) lying on the dry ground. （202103宁波十校）2. The poor creature, apparently in desperate need of water, licked it up quickly with its shell-pink tongue（很快用它贝壳粉的舌头舔乾净）.（202103宁波十校）3. The mother deer lowered her head and licked my boys cheek gently, as if expressing gratitude（低下头舔我的男孩的脸颊，好像在表达感激）. （202103宁波十校）马：1. At the pen, Gina saw the horse. It was of medium size. It had a fine, soft blackcoat and one white foot（它的毛细腻柔软,油黑油黑的,有一只脚是白色的）. There was a wide white patch (斑纹)that ran down the center of its face. Gina fell in love with it at first sight.“Wow! What a horse.” （英语周报高三第十期 2020.9.4）2. The horse seemed to feel her kindness, sniffing her（闻了闻她）. （英语周报高三第十期 2020.9.4）狗：1.They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasnt her usual cheerful self（不像往常那么快乐）. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）2. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging（她的尾巴开始摆动）ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）3. Poppy approached with caution, trying not to scare the puppy. Sure enough, it was only moments later that the ball of fur lifted its head out of the box（把它的头伸出盒子） to peek at its new home and its new friend. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）4. Hearing his bags unloaded on the driveway, Poppys ears pricked up（竖起耳朵） and suddenly she was on all fours（四脚着地）. The boy was greeted with a cheerful high-pitched bark. Then the front door popped open and Poppy darted to his embrace, followed by the little one who licked his fingers fondly. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。1、害怕1. Terrified（非常害怕）, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. （2020.7高考浙江卷）2. Seeing the approach of the polar bear, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch（被恐惧吓呆，害怕到动也不能动）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）3. My wife Elli grasped my clothes and trembled, swallowing hard（抓住我的衣服，颤抖着，使劲吞口水）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）4. A numbing chill gripped me（一种麻木的寒战擢紧了我）.（2020.11金华十校）5. Thinking of the wolfs bloody mouth, Mac was nearly dead with fright（几乎给吓死） （2017年6月高考浙江卷）6. I was seized by a strong sense of horror（被一种强烈的恐惧感所控制）, my palms sweating.（山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）2、求助与获救1. At the sight of it, Elli waved her hands wildly（疯狂地挥手）, screaming, “Help!” （2020.7高考浙江卷）2. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot （惊奇地发现）that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. （2020.7高考浙江卷）3. Having pulled the massive body out of the stump, Brian cleaned the wounds （清洁伤口）and then gave him careful treatment. Becky knelt down and tended to the wolf（蹲下来照顾狼）together with Brian. （2020.11金华十校）4. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy（擦干小狗） till he had become dry. （山东模拟）5. Using a rock as the supporting point, I unlocked the chain and set the wolf free（放走这只狼）. （山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）3、熊：1. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread（嗅着，闻着我们的大蒜面包）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）2. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs（用他的后腿站起来） and pushed at the wooden fence posts.（2020.7高考浙江卷）3. The bear reared up ,attacked the fence and even desired to tear down us（想要撕裂我们） with flames blazing in its eyes（怒火在他的眼里燃烧）owing to the dreadful spray. （2020.7高考浙江卷）4. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag（撕开他的帐篷袋）.（2017年6月高考浙江卷）5. One of Macs friends picked out some raw meat and threw it to the wolf. Satisfied with what he got（对他得到的很满意）, the wolf ran into the woods. （2017年6月高考浙江卷）4、狼：1. Pale-yellow eyes narrowed. Black lips tightened. Double sets of two-inch sharp teeth were exposed（露出它那两排两英寸宽的利牙）. Suddenly the wolf trembled. Its teeth clacked, and a painful cry rose from its throat（它的牙齿咔嚓响，从它的喉咙里发出一声痛苦的喊叫）.（2020.11金华十校）2. The wolfs head sank to the ground, sad yellow eyes looking at us（黄色的眼睛悲伤地看着我们）. （2020.11金华十校）3. So angry was the wolf that it kept roaring（那只狼的太生气了，一直咆哮） and smacking the window violently.（2020.7高考浙江卷）套路三：主题升华设计可爱型动物主题：陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。凶猛型动物主题：难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。1. Elli and I learned our lesson（学到一个教训）: Be aware of a bear with a toothache.（2020.7高考浙江卷）2. Despite the chill autumn wind, their home was filled with the warmth of love and reunion（充满爱和团聚的温暖）.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）3. The rain that came that day was a miracle（那天下的雨是一场奇迹）, saving our farm, just like my boy saved a life.（202103宁波十校）4. Appearing to be feeling better, the wolf slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Beckys hand as if to express thanks（好像在表达感谢）. What a warm scene! （2020.11金华十校）Part3：人与动物场景素材积累(01)Paragraph 1: Harry turned and ran from the pond. “Wait for me! It wont be long,” he exclaimed to me. Desperate and hopeless, I closed my eyes, praying this was all a dream. And even worse, the water was so cold it felt like millions of needles were stabbing me. How I wished that I could fly out of the icy water like a bird! After what seemed to be ages, Harry returned to the pond, with a long oak branch in his hand. As I grabbed hold of one end of the branch, my brother started to drag the other with every last ounce of his strength. Thank goodness, I was able to climb out of the ice hole and then we galloped home. Paragraph 2: The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over. “Oh, my God! Where have you been?” she said in surprise. “You're completely wet.” “Its Harrys fault!” I complained to her through my chattering teeth. When I told her what had happened to me, her eyes were wide with horror. All of a sudden, she took my arm, pulled me into the bathroom and then gave me a warm bath. After that, mum dressed me in a warm coat, wrapped me in a blanket and poured me a cup of hot milk. She sat next to me, smiling, relieved that I was all right. Sure enough, my brother was criticized by mum for his lack of safety awareness.(02)Paragraph 1：Sam arrived very early the next morning. He rang the doorbell and politely waited for Mrs. Proudfoot to answer. Then he could hear Roland barking and whining inside, frantic to get out. Sam stood by the door, debating with himself whether to walk the unfriendly dog to help his best friend. After a while, the door flung open and Mrs. Proudfoot came out, greeting him with a beaming smile. Surprisingly, the lazy dog grinned up at him and wagged his tail, eager to go out with him. Mrs. Proudfoot put a leash on the dog, stroked his glossy head and said, “Have a good time, dear!” Without saying goodbye, Sam and the dog danced around and then dashed out of the house.Paragraph 2：A month later, Mrs. Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic. Obviously, Sams efforts paid offRoland was healthy and active. But what pleased her most was that Sam, together with the other kids, would stay with her on weekends, chatting and laughing. Besides, they would help her clean up the yard. From then on, laughter filled her house and she no longer felt lonely. Then came the moment Sam had been looking forward tothe day he was paid for his work. What a big surprise! Tears of gratitude welled up in Barrys eyes as he knew what Sam had done for him. Sam just stood there, smiling, glad that he could wholeheartedly support his friend when he was in trouble.(03)Paragraph 1: All of a sudden, Betty felt something touching the bottom of her foot. What was that? She wondered. A sea fish? Before she could get on the surfboard, it bumped her in the foot once again. She suddenly had the feeling that an enormous fish, bigger than her, was circling around her. A chill feeling crept up her spine as she thought of the joke Uncle Mark played on her. And then Betty saw it: a gray triangle fin sticking up through the water, heading right for her. It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming around, not far away from her. For a split second, her heart practically skipped a beat.Paragraph 2: “Help! Help!” Betty screamed in horror. Hearing the terrible scream for help, Uncle Mark instantly realized that something bad was happening. Without thinking, he swam as quickly as he could towards Betty and yelled, “Get out! .” But Betty seemed stuck, too scared to move. At the very moment, the sharks jaws opened wide, showing rows of razor-sharp teeth. With all his might, Uncle Mark stabbed it in the mouth with his surfboard, scaring the monster away. And then he grabbed hold of Bettys arm and dragged her to the beach. All this took only a few minutes, but Betty would never forget the frightening experience.(04)Paragraph 1: He was sentenced to be torn by a lion in the public arena (竞技场). The terrifying day finally arrived. All the people in the city went there to see the brutal fight between the poor slave and a bloodthirsty beast. When Androcles appeared in the arena, they began to cheer and hoot. All eyes were on him, and time seemed to stop. Overcome by a stab of fear, he almost collapsed to the ground, his heart pounding and his knees shaking. And then came a furious roar and the great lion charged at him with its flaming eyes and gaping jaws. Desperate and hopeless, the slave closed his eyes and dropped his sword, thinking that he was done for. Paragraph 2: However, the lion didnt act as most had imagined. Much to their surprise, the savage beast stopped short , knelt down and then lickedthe slaves hands and feet. He behaved like a pet dog. And then he let out a low roar, as if wh