高中英语概要写作课件traffic-jam概要写作ppt.ppt

在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Traffic jam在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Whats the writing style of this passage?A.Narration(记叙文记叙文)B.Argumentation(议论文议论文)C.Exposition(说明文说明文)To convince the readers that the ideas are true and worth considering.To inform or explain an opinion by providing materials.While exposition does not always contain argumentation,argumentation always contains exposition.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Para 1Para 2Para 3Para 4Traffic jam has become a major problemWhy is traffic jam a problem?At firstIn additionApart fromTraffic jam is the result of the increasing private cars.Traffic jam can be dealt with by correct means.maybe a meansin the meantimefirst reasonAnywayStep one:Find out key informationMoreover在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Para 1Para 2Para 3Para 4Traffic jam has become a major problemstructure of the passageWhy is traffic jam a problem?At firstIn additionApart fromTraffic jam is the result of the increasing private cars.Traffic jam can be dealt with by correct means.maybe a meansThe problem:traffic jamThe effects of traffic jamThe reasons of traffic jam(increasing cars)The solutions of traffic jamfirst reasonAnywayMoreoverin the meantime在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Structure of“Problem-Solution”Passageproblemreasonssolutions在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Paragraph 1:problemAt present,traffic jam has become a major problem which most city dwellers,especially those who live in metropolis have to face in their everyday lives.At present,traffic jam has become a major problem which most city dwellers have to face.at present:_ a major problem:_ city dwellers:_ face:_nowadays,currently,in the modern societya main/key problemcitizens,residents be faced with,confrontNowadays traffic jam becomes a main problem which citizens have to confront.Step Two:Rewriteconcise,coherent,correct,complete在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么At present,traffic jam has become a major problem which most city dwellers have to face.Nowadays traffic jam becomes a main problem which citizens have to confront.At present city dwellers have to face a major problem,_.the traffic jamTraffic jam now becomes a(an)_ problem for citizens.unavoidableconcise,coherent,correct,complete在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么At first,owing to the fact that the vehicles keep giving off harmful gases during traffic jams,the earth is becoming warmer and warmer.In addition,traffic jams will affect the effectiveness of work,because people have to spend much more time on way to office than necessary,and their work will be delayed.Apart from this,traffic jam might give rise to more traffic accidents and therefore becomes a great danger to peoples lives.Paragraph 2:effects在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么concise,coherent,correct,completeNowadays traffic jams becomes a major problem _ the vehicles release harmful gases and may cause accidents.becauseBecause it has caused many problems._,traffic jam leads vehicles to release more harmful gases,_(make)the earth warmer._,it also reduces the effectiveness of work.On one handmakingOn the other handBecause it has caused many problems _ leading vehicles to release more harmful gases,reducing the work efficiency and _ threatening peoples lives.such aseven在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Paragraph 3:reasonsTraffic jam is the result of the increasing private cars.Why?Personally I think,the first reason may be the remoteness of peoples workplace.Moreover,owning a private car,is a symbol of wealth and high social position is also the symbol of independence and maturity.Anyway,owning and driving cars are regarded by many people as basic human rights.The increasing private cars result in traffic jam.Traffic jam is the result of the increasing private cars.Why?Personally I think,the first reason may be the remoteness of peoples workplace.Moreover,owning a private car,is a symbol of wealth and high social position is also the symbol of independence and maturity.Anyway,owning and driving cars are regarded by many people as basic human rights.concise,coherent,correct,complete在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Paragraph 4:solutions undoubtedly:_ deal with:_ correct:_ means:_without doubt,there is no doubt thatsolve,handle,settleeffective,practical,proper,appropriateway,method,approachUndoubtedly,traffic jam must be,and can be dealt with properly by correct means.concise,coherent,correct,complete在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Paragraph 4:solutionsUndoubtedly,traffic jam must be,and can be dealt with properly by correct means.In my view,spending more money on public transportation systems may be an effective means.Needless to say,policies which encourage people to put these systems to full use,for example,giving certain subsidies,are necessary.In the meantime,measures to restrict the use of private cars,such as improving the taxes on cars or petrol,should be taken.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么It can be properly settled _ _.It can be properly settled.spend more money on public transportationrestrict the use of private cars by investing more on public transportation and limiting the use of private carsby doingIn order toIn order to settle the problem,government should invest more on public transportation and limit the use of private cars.from toMeasures should be taken to solve the problem from toMeasures should be taken to solve the problem from investing more on public transportation to limiting the use of private cars.(such as)concise,coherent,correct,complete在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么 内容:思维:语言：书写：理解正确，要点理解正确，要点齐全全逻辑清晰，上下文清晰，上下文连贯准准确，地道，丰富确，地道，丰富好概要的标准好概要的标准卷面整卷面整洁，字迹，字迹优美美concise,coherent,correct,complete在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Nowadays traffic jam.Because release affect become a danger.Actually result in the traffic jam.There is no doubt that its vital to take measuresStep Three:Combine the key information logicallyconcise,coherent,correct,complete在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么leads to Nowadays citizens have to _(face)the traffic jam.It not only _(cause)the increase of waste gases but also affects the efficiency of work and _(even/still)threatens peoples lives.Actually,_ _the private cars _ result in the traffic jams._(Undoubtedly)government should invest more on public transportation system and _(restrict)the use of private cars.(58 words)evenit isWithout doubt,limitthatconfrontconcise,coherent,correct,complete在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么 Nowadays citizens have to confront the traffic jam,which not only leads to the increase of waste gases but also affects the efficiency of work and threatens peoples lives.Actually,it is the private cars that result in the traffic jams.Without doubt,government should invest more on public transportation system and limit the use of private cars.(58 words)Step Four:Polishconcise,coherent,correct,complete在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么 Traffic jam,a major current unavoidable problem for citizens,is caused by increasing vehicles,which brings about many problems such as global warming and road safety.To solve the problem,it is vital to reduce the booming number of private cars,which people own for various concepts.Besides,concrete measures should be taken to limit the number of private cars.(59words)在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么HomeworkHomeworkWrite a summary of this passage.Pay attention to four principles:be concise,coherent,correct and complete