英语四级作文ppt课件.ppt

认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Gene专治各种写作疑难杂症认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目应对考试是有方法的，但学好英语本身没有捷径。英文写作本身是一个博大精深的话题，四级作文不过是沧海一粟。认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Question 1How do you put a giraffe into a refrigerator?认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Open the refrigerator,put in the giraffe and close the door.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Question 2：How do you put an elephant into a refrigerator?认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Correct answer:Open the refrigerator,take out the giraffe,put in the elephant and close the door.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Question3认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Question4Thereisariveryoumustcross.Butitisinhabitedbycrocodiles.Andtherearenobridgesoranyothermeans.Howdoyoumanagetocrosstheriver?认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目You swim across!Because all the crocodiles are attending the animal meeting!认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目ProfessionalspreschoolersResults：认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Think in another way!认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目现象现象四级英语评分标准解读四级英语评分标准解读四级英语写作八大误区四级英语写作八大误区四级英语作文十大禁忌四级英语作文十大禁忌英语写作语言的丰富性英语写作语言的丰富性四级英语写作闪光句型四级英语写作闪光句型图表式作文图表式作文应用文写作应用文写作范文赏析及点评范文赏析及点评预测范文预测范文认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目1 1 1 1：写不完：写不完：写不完：写不完：2 2 2 2：想写，不知道写啥；：想写，不知道写啥；：想写，不知道写啥；：想写，不知道写啥；3 3 3 3：想写，写不出来；：想写，写不出来；：想写，写不出来；：想写，写不出来；4 4 4 4：想到哪儿，写到哪儿；：想到哪儿，写到哪儿；：想到哪儿，写到哪儿；：想到哪儿，写到哪儿；5 5 5 5：写了，自己都不知道对不对；：写了，自己都不知道对不对；：写了，自己都不知道对不对；：写了，自己都不知道对不对；6 6 6 6：没有框架意识；上来就写，一气呵成！：没有框架意识；上来就写，一气呵成！：没有框架意识；上来就写，一气呵成！：没有框架意识；上来就写，一气呵成！7 7 7 7：句式单一；：句式单一；：句式单一；：句式单一；8 8 8 8：汉化句子；：汉化句子；：汉化句子；：汉化句子；9 9 9 9：时态跳跃，穿越时空；：时态跳跃，穿越时空；：时态跳跃，穿越时空；：时态跳跃，穿越时空；10101010：单词拼写拿不准；：单词拼写拿不准；：单词拼写拿不准；：单词拼写拿不准；11111111：字母大小写不注意；：字母大小写不注意；：字母大小写不注意；：字母大小写不注意；12121212：从来不注意标点符号的使用；：从来不注意标点符号的使用；：从来不注意标点符号的使用；：从来不注意标点符号的使用；认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目对策对策构思简单，少犯错误。外语考试的作文，考查的构思简单，少犯错误。外语考试的作文，考查的目标不是考生的思维水平或逻辑分析能力，而是目标不是考生的思维水平或逻辑分析能力，而是考核语言表达能力。所以建议采取的措施是，简考核语言表达能力。所以建议采取的措施是，简化自己的思维和分析。也就是，如何降低自己的化自己的思维和分析。也就是，如何降低自己的思维水平，来迎合自己有限的语言状况。语言上，思维水平，来迎合自己有限的语言状况。语言上，关键在于变化，变化不分难易，只要有变化就行。关键在于变化，变化不分难易，只要有变化就行。变化分为词的变化、句的变化。在用词上，同一变化分为词的变化、句的变化。在用词上，同一文章中，相同意义的词要争取不断的用近义词替文章中，相同意义的词要争取不断的用近义词替换。换。认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目四级英语评分标准解读认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Global scoringReward Scores 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目2分分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分 句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较 多的严重语言错误。多的严重语言错误。8分分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字 勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严 重错误。重错误。11分分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语 言错误。言错误。14分分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较强切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较强 基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目四级英语写作误区四级英语写作误区认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目过分注重内容而忽略了语言过分注重内容而忽略了语言简单翻译简单翻译outline中提出的中文中提出的中文过分迷恋所谓的过分迷恋所谓的“万能模式万能模式”，企图以，企图以“模式模式”来代替大量的写作实践。来代替大量的写作实践。使用句型太复杂以致出错使用句型太复杂以致出错加入太多的想象成分，使内容细节过多，加入太多的想象成分，使内容细节过多，文章冗长。意识流倾向。文章冗长。意识流倾向。用中文思维串联英文词汇用中文思维串联英文词汇 过分过分“精雕细琢精雕细琢”而忽视了而忽视了“大局大局”认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目英语作文十大英语作文十大禁忌禁忌忌忌中国式英语中国式英语忌忌字迹潦草字迹潦草忌忌语言口语化语言口语化忌忌标点和首字母错误标点和首字母错误忌忌一味的使用从句一味的使用从句忌忌意识流写作意识流写作忌忌句式单一，关键词重复句式单一，关键词重复忌忌时态跳跃，穿越时空时态跳跃，穿越时空忌忌重大语法错误重大语法错误忌忌单词拼写错误单词拼写错误认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目American Chinese not enough heart flower angry openYou have seed，I will give you some color to see see,brothers！together up！认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目汉式表达（汉语思维）汉式表达（汉语思维）Chinglish way of expression1.a）However,everything has its black side.b)However,there are two sides to everything./everything has its drawbacks./everything has its pros and cons./nothing is perfect.2 a）There is no doubt that proper physical activities keep our bodies fit.b）There is no doubt that proper physical activities keep us fit3 a）In a word，I want to find a job that fits me，and money and other things are out of thought b）In a word，I want to find a job that suits me，and money and other things are not my chief concern认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目4 a）Taking part in sports and games will give us a good body b)Taking part in sports and games will keep us fit and healthy5 a）Just open the TV set，you can know everything，and wont have to go out b）Simply by switching on the TV set，you can learn everything without having to go out.6、a）Smoking cigarettes will do harm to our body.b）Smoking cigarettes harms our health7a）We should put our hearts into the studyb）We should pay wholehearted attention to our studies认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目8a）TV can widen our eyesb）Watching TV can broaden our minds/horizons9a）If a student only has knowledge of natural science，he will become a one-legged man when he comes out of university doorsb）If a student only has knowledge of natural science，he wont be a well-rounded man when he graduates10a）At this point in time，we were completely exhaustedb）By then，we were completely exhaustedWe were completely exhausted by that time认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目汉式“有”的概念Chinglishhave1 a）The chief reason for the change have five points b）There are five main reasons for the change2 a）Traffic is a serious problem，one of the reasons is that Shanghai have over ten million people b）Traffic is a serious problem，and one of the reasons is that there are over ten million people in Shanghai认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目汉式“越来越多少”的概念Chinglish“moreandmore”“lessandless”1 a）Nowadays，young people who seek to go abroad are becoming more and more b）Nowadays，more and more young people are seeking to go abroad2 a）People begin to eat grain less and less，while they eat fruit more and more b）People are beginning to eat less grain but more fruit3 a）With the development of cities，green land becomes more and more less b）With the development of cities，green land is decreasingEver more rapidly.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目汉式的多个动词连用1 a）People think go to a movie will cost a lot of money b）People think going to a movie will cost a lot of money.2 a）The best way to the traffic problem in Shanghai is build subways b）The best way to solve the traffic problem in Shanghai is to build subways3 a）There are many people take part in sports now b）There are many people who take part/taking part in sports now认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目4 a）Make cities greener has many advantages.b）Making cities greener has many advantages5 a）Now people go abroad is not easy b）It is not easy for people to go abroad now.6 a）Although difficulty is exist，but we can overcome it.b）Although difficulty（do）exist，we can overcome them认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目英汉语序机械对应ChinglishSentenceOrder1 a）Because with the development of industry，energy is much neededb）With the development of industry，energy is much needed.2 a）If no electricity，we will have no TV to watch，and no radio to listen tob)If there is no electricity，we will have no TV to watch and no radio to listen to/If there were nowe would3 a）Although everyone is equal to an opportunity，but not every one can seize it.b）Although opportunity comes to everyone，not everyone can seize it.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目4 a）My examination didnt pass b）I failed my examination5 a）He has come back for 2 weeksb）He has been back for 2 weeks6 a）The sky is raining heavily b）It is raining heavily7 a）He only said a few sentencesHe made us very disappointed b）We were quite disappointed that he only said a few words认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Ok,yes,no,allright,Ithink,very,good，much,Inmyopinion,important,so,because,hi,Well,say,howareyou?Whatsup?Mygod!,bye,goodbye,comeon,Hey,sorry,look!认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目1 a）Many students who are studying at this university are from foreign countries b）Many students studying at this university are from foreign countries2 a）The presidents wife，who looked tired after the long trip，could hardly smile at the cheering crowd b)The presidents wife，tired after the long trip，could hardly smile at the cheering crowd3 a）Everyone who will go on our field trip next weekend must sign up now b）Everyone going on our field trip next weekend must sign up now认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目4 a）I decided that I should take the examinationb）I decided to take the examination5 a）The professor was absorbed in work who did not notice my presence b）Absorbed in work，the professor did not notice my presence6 a）If you start early，you will get there soon b）Starting early will get there soon.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目7 a）During the four years when she studied at college she seldom watched TV b）During her four years at college she seldom watched TV8 a）Beijing，which is the capital of China，is a famous ancient city b）Beijing，the capital of China，is a famous ancient city9 a）The splendid displays in shop windows have a fascination which is irresistible b）The splendid displays in shop windows have an irresistible fascination认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目（1）We can imagine the beautiful surroundings（2）There are many trees along the streets（3）There is a clean river in the city（4）There are many fishes in the river（5）There are willow trees on the one side（6）There are some pieces of grassland on the other side（7）There are many flowers on them 文中七个句子都是简单句，句型结构单一，而且句文中七个句子都是简单句，句型结构单一，而且句子长短同一，都在七、八词左右，十分单调。子长短同一，都在七、八词左右，十分单调。认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目（1）Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we make our cities greener（2）Green trees line the streets（3）A clean river winds through the city，in which a lot of fishes abound（4）On the one side stand rows of willow trees（5）On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers改写后的这段文字，有长句（改写后的这段文字，有长句（1）、（）、（3）、）、（5），也有短句（），也有短句（2）和（）和（4），一长一短，），一长一短，抑扬顿挫的节奏感就出来了。不仅句子长短交抑扬顿挫的节奏感就出来了。不仅句子长短交插，而且句型结构变化也很大，使文章流畅自插，而且句型结构变化也很大，使文章流畅自然，生动活泼。然，生动活泼。认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目In the past five years there have been many changes in peoples diet.From the table listed above,we can find that people eat more and more milk and meat than they used to.On the other hand,they eat less grain,fruit and vegetables today than before.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目1 a）People now pay much attention to nutrition，so they chose to eat meat and drink milk b）People now pay much attention to nutrition，so they choose to eat meat and drink milk2 a）There are so many countries using English that it had been regarded as an international language.b)There are so many countries using English that it is regarded as an international language3 a）The rain makes the road muddy，and often resulted in car accidents b）The rain makes the road muddy，and often results in car accidents4 a）A person who has good friends enjoyed life more b）A person who has good friends enjoys life more认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目1 a）When I was nine years old，my grandfather said，“the world is a large one”b）When I was nine years old，my grandfather said，“The world is a large place.2 a）As far as money is concerned，my opinion is，“money is not everything！”b）As far as money is concerned，my opinion is：money is not everything！认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目ThispictureshowthatloveisalampwhichleadabrightlightandhopewhenoneinvolvedindarkInChina，wecanseemanystoriesaboutlove，forexampleFromnews-paperwecanoftenreadabout“TheProjecthope.”TherearemanypeopledelvatehimselftohelpothersInremotecountry，somechildrencantgotoschoolbecausenomoney.However，inotherdistrict，therearemanypeopletoprovidemoneytohelpthesechildren.Fromthispicture，asmalllightbrightsomearea.Wecanreadmuchfromit.Asauniversitystudents，wecandomuch，dobest.WecanstudyhardscienceknowledgeWeshouldimproveourfromallkindofaspect.Aslongaswedevoteoneselftohelpthosetroublesomeman.（128words）认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Variety语言的丰富性只有句式多样化，文章才会生动有趣，充满活力。只有句式多样化，文章才会生动有趣，充满活力。认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目一、改变句子开头许多学生在写作中倾向于用与人有关系的词性，用名词和代词作为句子的开头，如People，We，I，He，They，She等。但这种开头见多了，难免让人厌倦。APeoplethroughoutthecountryhavegreatlydemandedallkindsofnutritiousfoodBThereisagreatdemandacrossthecountryforallkindsofnutritiousfood认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目除了用主语开头外，还可以用句子的其他成分开头。1用副词开头Toooften，studentsstrayintothehabitofcheatingontests2用状语开头Darkandempty，thehouselookedverydifferentfromthewayIrememberedit认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目3.以分词短语开头以分词短语开头 Disturbed by the discord of American life in recent decades，Manchester took flight for the pacific islands 4.以不定式短语开头以不定式短语开头 To pass the exam，you should work very hard 认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目二、巧用连接词有的学生在作文中使用过多简单句，成了简单句堆砌；有的写复杂句时，动辄用so，and，then，but，or，however，yet等非但达不到丰富表达方式的目的，反而使句子结构松散、呆板。为了避免这种现象，可以通过使用连接词，尤其是一些表示从属关系的连接词，如who，which，that，since，although，after，as，before，when，whenever，if，unless，asif等，不仅能够丰富句型，而且还能够把思想表达得更清楚，意义更连贯。认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Natural resources are very limitedThey will be exhausted in the near futureIt is not trueBut it becomes a major concern around the worldThis is a widely accepted fact这段文字用简单句表达，它们之间内在的逻辑关这段文字用简单句表达，它们之间内在的逻辑关系含糊不清，意思支离破碎。如果使用连接词，系含糊不清，意思支离破碎。如果使用连接词，将单句与其前后合并，形成主次关系，就把一个将单句与其前后合并，形成主次关系，就把一个比较复杂的内容和关系表达得层次清楚、结构严比较复杂的内容和关系表达得层次清楚、结构严谨。谨。It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future，though it is unlikely to be true 认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目The Mississippi River is one of the longest rivers in the world，and in spring time it often overflows its banks，and the lives of many people are endangered The Mississippi River，which is one of the longest rivers in the world，often overflows its banks in the spring time，endangering the lives of many people 认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目四、利用倒装结构四、利用倒装结构英语的基本句型是英语的基本句型是SVO，如，如果偶尔打破常规，改变某一成分的位果偶尔打破常规，改变某一成分的位置，不仅可以丰富句型，而且能强调、置，不仅可以丰富句型，而且能强调、突出被倒装的部分，收到意想不到的突出被倒装的部分，收到意想不到的表达效