读后续写：历险型（故事构造“三大套路”）-2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能.pdf
公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司读后续写：历险型读后续写：历险型.Part1：经典例文（森林遇险）Part1：经典例文（森林遇险）Brady was a recently retired search and rescue dog.He was not happy andmissed his owner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him.Als nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on aovernight hike.But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning andthey realized that lightning had set the woods on fire.Wind-blown flame hadleaped from the top of one tree to another.The long dry summer had turned the读后续写：历险型（故事构造“三大套路”）-2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司forest into a tinderbox(火绒箱)and the thunderstorm wasnt helping much.Ithad more wind and lightning than rain.Zach pulled Steve s arm.“Lets go!Wecan make it back to the river we crossed today.”Steve pulled Bradys leash（皮带）and their heads down against the strong fire-wind,they hurried down thepath they had followed earlier.The air was full of smoke，and pine branchesbrokefromburningtrees with a crispsound.Stevekepthiseyes onthe route.All theyhadtodo was to make itdownto the riverBrady barked a sharp warning.Ahead of them lay a dense curtain ofsmoke across the path.Theyd never make it through that.They would have tofind another escape route.The dog was pulling at his leash trying to draw themaway from the smoke.This was what Brady was trained to do,and yet Stevewas uneasy.It seemed to him they were moving away from the river.Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind.Suddenly,the dog ranaway and disappeared.The boys yelled and shouted for him，but he didnt comeback.They had no choice but to leave him behind.Heartsick,Steve and Zachwent up a slope（斜坡）.He couldnt blame Brady for panicking and escaping.He himself wanted to run even though he didnt have a clue which way.Theyhadnt gone far when there was a familiar bark,and Brady came running towardhim.注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为 150 左右；2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：“Whereve you been?”Steve cried.Paragraph 2：Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.【参考答案】【参考答案】Paragraph 1“Whereve you been?Steve cried Brady stopped directly in front of him andstarted pushing him back toward the slope theyd just climbed.When Steve still didntget it,Brady grabbed the boys jeans and pulled harder.The message was clear,butSteve hesitated.Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady savinghis life,but that had been a long time ago.Was he still sharp enough to get themthrough this?Brady pulled again,urgently,“0K,big guy,”Steve decided.Paragraph 2Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.Several times the big dogstopped to get his escape route.Often he changed direction.How long theyd walkedSteve had no idea.He just held onto Bradys leash with one hand and kept putting onefoot in front of the other.He was almost numb when he heard the wonderful sound ofrushing water.The river!With a yell the boys ran unsteadily forward until theyjumped in cool,running water.“Brady,you did it!”第 1 段：“你去哪儿了？史蒂夫叫道，布雷迪直接停在他面前，开始把他推回他们刚爬上去的斜坡。当史蒂夫仍然没有得到它，布雷迪抓住男孩的牛仔裤，并拉得更用力。信息很清楚，但史蒂夫犹豫了。他当然记得他叔叔说过布雷迪救他的命，但那是很久以前的事了。他还能让他们度过难关吗？布雷迪又紧急地拉公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司了一下，“0K，大个子，”史蒂夫决定.第 2 段：布雷迪带领他们回到斜坡上，进入树林。这只大狗停了好几次，以获得他的逃跑路线。他经常改变方向。他们走了多久，史蒂夫不知道。他只是用一只手抓住布雷迪的皮带，继续把一只脚放在另一只前面。听到哗哗的水声，他几乎麻木了。河流！孩子们大喊一声，摇摇晃晃地向前跑，直到他们跳进凉爽的流水里。“布雷迪，你做到了！”Part2：历险类细节描写海上遇难Part2：历险类细节描写海上遇难天气*阴云笼罩着天空。闪电划过天空，接着是雷声。几分钟后，下起了倾盆大雨。The sky is darkened with gloomy clouds.Lighting flashed across the sky,followed bya clap of thunder.Minutes later,there came a downpour.*风呼啸着，海浪反复拍打着她的脸。The wind was howling and the waves smackedrepeatedly against her face.海上*大海在风暴中沸腾。The sea boiled in the storm.*愤怒的海浪拍打着船舷，水溅得到处都是。The angry waves crashed against theside of the boat,with water splashing here and there.船*倾斜 Leaned sideways*船在波涛汹涌的海上颠簸。The ship wasrocking up and down in the restless sea.公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司*汹涌的海浪把他们的船灌满了水，速度比他们清空船还快。The crashing wavesfilled their boat with water faster than they could empty it.救援人*但是，当我向远处望去时，我发现一连串的三四个大浪正向岸边涌来。But then,as I looked in the distance,I discovered a series of three or four big waves headingtowards the shore.*我不假思索地跑到街上，一路上抱着自己的身体板，冲着一个陌生人喊着要报警。Without thinking,I ran down into the street,holding my body board on the wayand shouted at a stranger to call the police.*我拍着他们的脸叫醒他们，不断地告诉他们要坚强。Patting their faces to wakethem up,I continuously told them to be strong.遇难者1.*她平静下来，保持呼吸的节奏，这样她才能呼吸均匀。She calmed down tokeep the rhyme of breathing so that she could breathe evenly.2.*我感到筋疲力尽。I felt extremely exhausted（apparently worn-out）3.*看着浩瀚的大海，我感到一种恐惧感涌上全身。Looking at the vast sea,I felta sense of fear surging through my whole body.4.*盐刺痛了我的眼睛，我几乎不知道我能坚持多久。Salt stinging my eyes,Icould hardly tell how long I could hold on.5.*盐刺痛了我的眼睛，我几乎不知道我能坚持多久。But I still shouted in myhead:keep on.6.*他看见一架飞机在头顶上飞过。但没有手电筒，他在浩瀚的大海中是看不见的。He saw an airplane flying overhead.Butwith no flashlight,he was invisible in the vast ocean.7.*他脱下黄色上衣，想她应该去一个空旷的地方，如果他们回来的话，就给公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司他们打个旗子。He took off his yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to anopen area and flagged them if they came back.8.*在极度绝望的情况下，我终于看到一些救生艇朝我们驶去。谢谢你，大人。In sheer desperation,I finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on themheading towards us.Thank you,lord.9.*很快，我感觉到有力的手臂把我从海里拉到了木板上。Quite soon,I feltstrong arms pull me out of the sea onto the board.(摘自杭二中参考答案)救援过程*然后他把她从水里拖上来。Then he dragged her upper from the water,.救人未遂*他紧紧地握着她的手，但一个巨浪把他们分开了。He held her hand tightly but ahuge wave separated them.*他与海浪搏斗，试图抓住她，但失败了，她被漂走了。He fought the waves andstrove to catch her,but failed,she was drifted away.其他*能量神奇地恢复了，他站起来立即采取行动。Energy returning magically,he rose to his feet and took immediate action.*他们挥舞旗帜，大声呼救。They waved the flag and screamed for help.*熊格里尔斯看到了破旧的船和两个衣衫褴褛的人。Bear Grylls caught sight of theshabby boat and two men in rags.*他们被带到船上，一遍又一遍地感谢爱德华。They were taken on board andthanked Edward over and over again.*从那以后，他下定决心，除非能确保安全，否则决不冒险。因为这仅仅是他顽固的行为和他对的无知.From them on,he made up his mind never to take anyrisks unless he could ensure tight safety.Because it was simply his stubborn conductsand his ignorance of.that.公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司洪洪水水*水不断上涨。两个小时过去了。他不敢动一英寸，怕滑倒。The water kept rising.Two hours passed.He did not dare tomove an inch for fear of slipping.*又过了两个小时，他注意到水位下降到足以让他尝试逃跑。Another two hourslater,he noticed that the water level went down enough that he could try an escape.*由于几个小时保持一个姿势而僵硬，他慢慢地展开身体。Stiff from keeping in oneposition for hours,he slowly unfolded his bodies.*他小心而坚定地向入口走去。Cautiously and steadily,he made his way forward tothe entrance.地震地震*街道上出现了深深的裂缝。Deep cracks opened up in the streets.*墙塌了。The wall caved in.*巨大的建筑物倒塌了，尘土飞扬。Huge buildings collapsed,sending clouds of dustinto the air.*动物们变得焦躁不安，好像预见到了一场灾难。The animals grew restless as if inanticipation of a disaster.火火灾灾屋子*在风的吹拂下，房子沐浴在一股巨大的火焰中。Fanned by the wind,the house wasbathed in an immense stream of flames.*房子沐浴在一股巨大的火焰中。The house was bathed in an immense stream of公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司flames.*熊熊大火吞噬了整个房子。The roaring fire swallowed the whole house.烟*浓烟滚滚，浓烟使她窒息了一会儿。Dense smoke swirled and billowed and thefumes made her choke for a moment.*浓烟使他昏昏欲睡，灼伤了眼睛，无法呼吸。The thick smoke caused him tostumble blindly around,burned his eyes,and made it impossible to breathe.人的反应*透过办公室的门，她看到火焰爬上了墙。Through the office door,she saw flamesclimbing up the wall.*他们俩都在咳嗽，眼睛都在刺痛。Both of them were coughing and their eyes werestinging.*她紧紧抓住她，被跳跃的火焰吓坏了。She clung to her,terrified by the leapingflames.*他转过身来，在烟雾中挣扎着，跑出了房子。Turning,he fought through the smokeand ran out of the house.*她挡住烟雾发出的声音，促使他跑 向 安 全 地 带。Shielding hernoisefromthesmoke,sheprompted him to run for safety.*当他打开他们公寓的前门去调查时，一团浓密的烟雾迎接着他。When he openedthe front door of their flat to investigate,a thick cloud of smoke greeted him.*到那时，嘴被烟雾堵塞，他们都感觉到热量吞噬了一切。By then,with theirmouths choked with smoke,both of them feel the heat engulfing everything.公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司受伤受伤*她转过身来，却发现蒂姆被打在地，非常危险。She turned around,only to find Timbeaten to the ground in extreme danger.*她害怕而绝望，向他冲去。Afraid and merely desperate,she rushed towards him.*她用尽全力，立即让他坐到车上。With all her strength,she instantly seated himonto the car.*他用大力气把她拉过来。He pulled her towards him with full strength.*她的身体无力，没有呼吸。Her body was limp and she was not breathing.*他把她抱在怀里，挣扎着站了起来。He scooped her into his arms and struggled tofeet.伤情*他遭到了猛烈的袭击，身上满是抓痕。He was attacked violently and covered withscratches.*伤口上有少量的血迹。There was a trickle of blood from the wound.治疗*她在伤口上用一条干净的毛巾，紧紧地压在伤口上止血。She applies a clean towelto the wound and press firmly on it to stop the bleeding.*清洗并缝合伤口 Wash and stitched the wound*给他的伤口涂上一些药 Apply some medicine to his wound丛丛林林逃逃生生意识到不见了*他在森林里四处张望，想找她。欧洛斯他又喊道。He scanned公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司around the forest for her.“Eurus?”he shouted again.*当他意识到她已经走了时，她的心垂了下来。her heart dropped as he realized thatshe was gone.*他不遗余力地想找到她，但这一切都是徒劳的。he spared no effort to find her,butit was all in vain.*回想起他和她分享的所有美好时光，他意识到他爱她，他只希望让她回来。Thinking back to all of the good times that he had shared with her,he realized that heloved her and he wanted nothing more than for her to come back.逃生*他想走得更快，但他找不到走出灌木丛的路。He tried to get on faster,but he couldnot find the way out of the bush.*他累了，因为对于一个小男孩来说，Ceil 太重了，搬不动。He was getting tiredbecause Ceil was too heavy to carry for a young boy.*最后，他走进了一个中间有一个大水池的空地。At last he came into an open spacewith a large pool in the middle.*他很快就把衣服湿透了，因为迎面而来的烟会呛到衣服。He quickly soaked hisclothes,for the approaching smoke could choke them.救援*他立刻跑出去找，一个人追着他。He immediately ran out for searching,sb runningafter him.*我可怜的孩子们，火焰可以把他们烧死。某人绝望地想。My poor children,theflame could have burnt them to death.thought sb desperately.*当他们毫无希望地向前走着时，有人传来了一个甜美的声音。“爸爸！”While they walked on without hope,there came asweet voice.”Dad!”it was from sb.*Sb 高兴地跳了起来，拥抱了他的孩子们。Sb jumped withjoy and hugged his kids.公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司*她能听到远处有水动的声音。She could hear water tricking somewhere at adistance.Part3：历险类故事构造“三大套路”套路一：恶劣环境要烘托Part3：历险类故事构造“三大套路”套路一：恶劣环境要烘托1.于是，我和爸爸戴上了新的牛仔帽，骑上了马，慢慢地向山上走去。So,my dadand I put on our new cowboy hats，got on our horses，and headed slowly towardsthe mountains（慢慢地向山走去）.（17 年 11 月浙江高考）2.我这辈子从没见过这么可爱的生物，所以我毫不犹豫地跟着它走。Never had Iseen such a lovely creature in my life,so I followed its track without thinking twice（不假思索地追随它的足迹）.（17 年 11 月浙江高考）3.在寻找它的过程中，我完全沉浸在大自然的魅力中。In the process of seeking for it,I was totallyimmersed in the charm of nature（完全沉浸在大自然的魅力中）.（17 年 11 月浙江高考）4.更糟糕的是，他身上没有任何食物和水，更不用说他的手机或其他用品了。Whats worse,he didnt have any food or water with him,let alone his cell phone orother supplies（更不要说他的手机和其他日用品）.5.我们在一个不知名的地方，只穿着内衣，我们的物资被烧成了灰烬，包括我们的手机。We were in the middle of nowhere,wearing only underwear,with oursupplies burnt into ashes（把我们的物品烧成灰烬）,including our cellphones.公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司套路二：转折思维技巧好套路二：转折思维技巧好例如，故事中我们迷路了，正在想办法如何脱离困境。例如，故事中我们迷路了，正在想办法如何脱离困境。Suddenly it occurred to us that we could keep to the track to guide us back.Butit was getting darker and darker,thus making it increasingly difficult for us tomake out the road.（突然我们想到我们可以坚持小路引导我们回去。但天色越来越暗，使我们走道路越来越困难。）解析：这个例子属于解析：这个例子属于“正正”变变“负负”的模式。迷路后，想到了办法，属于的模式。迷路后，想到了办法，属于“正向正向”，但是外在环境不允许：天色太晚。属于但是外在环境不允许：天色太晚。属于“负向负向”。【素材积累】【素材积累】1.最终，我们平安归来。Ultimately,we were back,safe and sound（安然无恙）.（17年 11 月浙江高考）2.我们跳上温暖的车，护林员开车把我们送到护林站，在那里我们得到了衣服，并能给我们的父母打电话。We jumped into the warm vehicle and the forester droveus to the ranger station（开车送我们去巡逻站）,where we were given clothes andwere able to call our parents.套套路路三三：万万能能升升华华要要牢牢记记需要牢记，历险类的文章不要无缘无故拔高主题，一般的主题词是“勇敢”、“克服困难”，当然还有一个万能的表达“这是一次难忘的经历”。万能句万能句 1：那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。That day was so unforgettable that itwould stay in my memory forever.遇到危险并且最终成功脱险的经历，想必对我们每个人来说一定是一生中难忘的经历。所以这个句子使用的场合还是挺多的。句子中使用了 so.that 的句式结构：如此.以至于。unforgettable 是一个形容词，表示“无法忘记的”。公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司万能句万能句 2：直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。Only then did I realize thatit was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.遇到危险后，勇敢面对，才能解决问题。这个句子突出了“勇敢”这个核心，这在“脱险型”的故事里，是非常恰当的。这句话使用了倒装的结构和强调结构结合的方式，也属于高分亮点句。【素材积累】【素材积累】1.坐在客房里，有亲人陪伴在身边，我觉得很幸福。Sitting in the guestroom,I found itreally blissful to be accompanied by our beloved ones（有我们所爱的人陪伴真的很幸福）.（17 年 11 月浙江高考）2.尽管身体虚弱，尼古拉斯的身体状况总体上还是不错的，当他被抬回滑雪场与家人团聚时，他真的很高兴。Despite feeling weak,Nicholas was generally in a goodcondition,and he was really happy as hewas carried back to the ski resort to reunite with his family（和他的家人团聚）.3.当我们的货车嘎吱嘎吱地在高速公路上行驶时，我想这趟旅行也许并不那么糟糕。再见了，普通的老暑假。你好.一辈子的旅行。As our van chugged(发动机缓慢运转时)发出突突声)down the freeway,I thought this trip might not be sobad after all.Good-bye,regular old summer vacation.HelloTrip of a Lifetime（一生一次的旅程）?公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司Part4：灵活应用例 1：山洞遇险Part4：灵活应用例 1：山洞遇险阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Two months ago,my friend Lisa,Harry and I,planned to do somethingadventurous,so we decided to explore a deep cave in the outskirt of our city withsome food,water,torches and most importantly our cell phones.But things were notgoing well.We could not find any vehicle to drop us there.At long last,we managedto find a taxi which took us to the outskirt of the city.Another evidence of bad luckwas that Harry had left his cell phone at home.After we got out of the taxi,some of the locals told us the way to the cave.Thecave looked very attractive yet still mysterious:the cave was so dark,and the tinysounds made by the insects and animals could be heard properly,pulling us into thecave with some unknown supernaturalpower.As we were moving forward wemade marks on the rocks along our pathto remind us of the exit of the cave.Andwe always kept our mobiles in switch onmode to contact each other in case wegot separated and even worse,lost in thecave.As we were moving forward,Harry felt that somebody was following ourfootsteps but he left his intuition to a joke.When we reached in the deep of the cave,we lost our way and gradually the fog spread everywhere and we were not able to seeeach other properly.All of us got very scared of what was happening around us.Suddenly,we noticed that Harry was not with us and then we vaguely heard a shoutfrom the depth of the cave and we thought it was Harry,so we started searching forhim.But our torches were left no use in such thick fog.公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司续写词数应为 150 左右Paragraph 1:So we groped our way towards the direction of the shout._Paragraph 2:After we reunited with Harry,we tried to find the way out._【参考答案】So we groped our way towards the direction of the shout.Frightened as we were,we still made up our mind to search for Harry.Hardly can we see anything in thecompletely dark situation,so we had to feel our way to search Harry with all strength.Slowly and cautiously moving forward,we held our hands tightly in ordernot to beseparated.With the voice approaching,w
