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第一节If you want something you never had,you have to do something you have never done!QQ：3328222985毕云BrittanyWarm UpHowdoyouthinkwritingshouldbeprepared?要不要记忆素材？要不要背模板？要要要-上从第一个字开始计算字数?脑子一片空白？刑场什么感觉考考-大作文分类之横看成岭1、教育2、建筑3、科技4、旅游5、交通6、文化7、环境8、传媒9、政府（5,10%）10、社会11、抽象（快乐，成功）-社会类包括：食品安全，快乐生活，男女平等平分家务；大城市生活社会政府教育-2015作文分布教育27%社会21.2%政府11.5%-2015作文题目汇总-雅思作文之横看成岭侧成峰侧成峰-大作文分类之侧成峰1、原因措施原因措施/原因结果原因结果/问题措施问题措施Inmanycountries,ahighproportionofcriminalactsarecommittedbyteenagers.Whatarethereasonsandwhatdoyousuggesttosolvethisproblem？2、一石二鸟（、一石二鸟（killtwobirdswithonestone）:混合题目混合题目例如：政府例如：政府+教育教育2016.1.9;犯罪与教育；传媒与犯罪等犯罪与教育；传媒与犯罪等Some people think that the government should invest more money in teachingsciencethanothersubjectsfortheprogressofthecountry.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?3、优势弊端，消极积极影响2015.1.29Scientistsandtouriststraveltoremotenaturalenvironments,suchastheSouthPole.Doyouthinktheadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages?-4、讨论双方，发表意见2015.1.17Somepeoplethinkthattheamountofnoisepeoplemakehavetobecontrolledstrictlywhileothersaythatpeoplearefreetomakeasmuchnoiseastheywish.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.5、同意不同意2015.1.10Theleadersordirectorsoforganizationsareoftenolderpeople.Butsomepeoplesaythatyoungpeoplecanalsobealeader.Doyouagreeordisagree?-教育1、In some countries,parents expect their children to spend long timestudyingbothinandafterschoolandhavelessfreetime.Whatarethepositiveandnegativeeffectsonchildrenandsocietytheylivein?长时间学习好不好2013.1.122、Caring for children is important in any society.All parents should berequiredtotakechildcarecourses.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?父母参加育儿课2013.1.193、Somepeoplebelievethatstudyinginacollegeoruniversityisthebestwayforstudentstopreparefortheirfuturecareer.Othersthinktheyshouldleaveschoolassoonaspossibletodeveloptheircareerthroughworkexperience.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.2013.3.9大学教育对就业的帮助4、universitiesandcollegesarenowofferingqualificationsthroughdistancelearningfromtheInternetratherthanteachersintheclassroom.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofthisdevelopmentoutweighthedisadvantages?2013.3.2远程教育好坏-5、Somepeoplethinkthatolderschoolchildrenshouldlearnawiderangeofsubjectstoacquiremoreknowledge,whileotherpeoplebelievetheyshouldlearnasmallnumberofsubjectsindetails.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinions.2013.4.27通才还是专才6、Somepeoplethinkitisimportantforallchildrentolearnhistoryinschool.Othersbelievethatothersubjectsaremorerelevanttochildrenslivestoday.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.2013.5.18是否应该学习历史7、Somepeoplethinkfamilyhasthemostpowerfulinfluence onchildrensdevelopment.Others，however,believethatotherthingshavegreatereffects.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.2013.6.15家庭教育重要吗？8、Some people think secondary school students should learn internationalnews as one of their subjects,while others believe that this is a waste ofvaluabletime.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion2013.6.22学生应该学国际新闻9、Manyparentsthesedaysworkinothercountries,takingtheirfamilieswiththem.Do you think advantages of the development outweigh itsdisadvantages?2013.10.19-10、Aspartofeducation,studentsshouldspendaperiodoftimestudyingandlivinginadifferentcountytolearnlanguageandculture.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2013.11.21学生应该在国外生活一段时间学习国外的语言文化11、Childrenfinditdifficulttoconcentrateonorpayattentiontotheirstudyinschool.Whatarethereasons?Howcanwesolvethisproblem?2014.1.18学生不能专注学习的原因解决措施12、Childrenseducationisexpensive.Insomecountries,thegovernmentpayssomeorallofthecosts.Dotheadvantagesoutweighitsdisadvantages?2014.2.22义务教育以及免费教育，教育很贵13、Somepeoplethinkthatallyoungpeopleshouldberequiredtohavefull-timeeducationuntiltheyareatleast18yearsold.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree？2014.3.818岁之前强制教育14、Somepeoplebelievethepurposeofeducationistopreparepeopletobeuseful members for society.Others say that the purpose of education is toachieve personal ambitions.Discuss both views and give your ownopinion.2014.4.12教育的功能是成为栋梁或者满足个人雄心-15、Somepeoplethinkthatchildrencanlearnefficientlybywatchingtelevision.Therefore,childrenshouldbeencouragedtowatchTVregularlybothatschoolandathome.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree？2014.5.17看电视是否应该被鼓励对儿童教育来说16、Manyyoungpeopleleaveschoolwithanegativeattitudetowardslearning.Whatarethereasonsandhowcanweencouragethemtostudy?2014.5.24学生厌学的原因以及解决措施17、Somepeoplethinkadultsshouldlearnpracticalskillsbythemselves,whileothers think they should learn with teachers in the classroom.Discuss bothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.2014.6.19成人实际能力（成人教育）提升靠自己还是靠老师18、Some people say that it is better to teach language students in smallclasses,whileothersthinkthenumberofpeopledoesnotmatter.Discussbothviewsgiveyourownopinion2014.12.4英语授课大班还是小班19、somepeoplethinkpaintinganddrawingsareasinprotantasothersubjects,andtheyshouldbecompulsoryinhighschooleducation.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagress?2014.12.20学生应该学习画画20、Insomecountriesmanyyoungpeoplechoosetoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.Discuss-theadvantagesanddisadvantages.2015.2.28间隔年21、Someworkingparentsbelievechildcarecenterscanprovidebest care for children,while others think family members likegrandparentscandoitbetter.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion2015.3.14谁来管孩子，幼儿园还是祖父母22、Some people think that only the best students should berewarded.Others,however,think that it is more important toreward students who show improvements.Discuss both theseviewsandgiveyourownopinion2015.4.18最好的学生还是进步最大的学生应该收到表扬23、Some people believe that in order to improve educationalquality,weshouldencouragestudentstomakecommentsorevencriticismontheirteachers,butothersthinkitwillleadtothelossofrespectanddisciplineintheclassroom.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion2015.5.16是否应该挑战教师权威-24、Itissuggestedthatyoungadultsshouldundertakeaperiodofunpaid work in the community.Does it bring more benefits ordrawbackstothecommunityandyoungpeople?2015.7.4年轻人应该参加公益25、Somepeoplesaythatthebestwaytoletchildrenknowthedangerofcrimesisforthemtobeeducatedbythosewhowereonceinprisonbutnowhavebecomegoodcitizens.2015.8.8让罪犯来教育小孩26、Studentsinschooloruniversitycanlearnmorefromclassesandteachersthanfromothersources(e.g.theInternetorTV）.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2015.9.12学校教育最重要-27、Insomecountries,schoolsprovidegeneraleducationwithawiderangeofsubjects,whileinsomeothercountries,students learn a narrow range of subjects related to aparticularcareer.Whichoneismoreappropriateintodaysworld?2015.10.8 学生是否应该多学科目28、Somepeoplesaythatplayingcomputergamesisbadforchildrenineveryaspect,whileothersthinkithaspositiveeffectsonchildrensdevelopment.Discussbothviewsandgive your opinion.电子游戏是否有利于小孩的发展2015.10.2429、Someschoolleaversgotravelingorworkforaperiodoftimeinsteadofgoingdirectlytouniversity.Doyouthinktherearemoreadvantagesordisadvantagesfortheirstudies？间隔年 2015.11.7-30、AThebestwaytoteachchildrentocooperatewithothersisthroughteamsportsatschool.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(团队体育活动是教孩子合作的最好办法，是否同意？)2015.11.1431、Inmanysocieties，theroleofamotherdiffersinsomewaysfromtheroleofafather，Whydoyouthinkthesedifferencesexist?Howmighttheparentalroledevelopinthefuture?麻麻的角色比爸爸的角色重要2015.11.2132、对孩子而言，读书比看电视和玩电子游戏更好。Readingstoriesinbooksisbetterforchildrenthanwatchingtelevisonorplaying computer games.To what extent do you agree ordisagree?2015.12.12-教育教育谁来教？谁来教？家长（爷爷奶奶）V.S.老师（学校）政府V.S.社会犯人V.S.学校?为了教育，父母应不应该参加育儿培训？粑粑麻麻谁的角色更重要？课堂外课堂外电视，电子游戏，网络对教育有好处吗？远程教育？长时间学习行么?Gapyear?教育与就业？要不要参加课外活动？体育对教育有木有好处？课堂内课堂内教什么偏才V.S.通才历史要不要学？政治要不要学？美术要不要学？能不能挑战老师权威？教学方法教学方法进步最大的还是学习最好的应该被表扬？教育的功能是成为栋梁或者满足个人雄心？义务教育(谁掏钱)？大班小班？国外读语言好不好？-谁来教Some working parents believe childcare centers(儿童保育中心)canprovidebestcareforchildren,whileothersthinkfamilymemberslikegrandparentscandoitbetter.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion2015.3.14谁来管孩子，幼儿园还是祖父母-谁来教？Some working parents believe childcare centers(儿童保育中心)canprovidebestcareforchildren,whileothersthinkfamilymemberslikegrandparentscandoitbetter.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion2015.3.14谁来管孩子，幼儿园还是祖父母教育引发热议，为什么？Youngstersdevelopmentisessentialtothe（long-termprosperious）prosperityofanationinthelongrun.如果是你，你打算怎么写？题目中暗示哪些点需要做回应（taskresponse）taskresponse:workingparents;childcarecenters;grandparents;比较；giveyouropinion-粑粑麻麻去上班，我去幼儿园去幼儿园有什么好处？1、爸妈忙，没时间照看小孩.workingparents.Lookafter.bebusywith.beoccupiedwith2、基于这个情况，.是个趋势.tend to do.（there is a tendency that.）;giventhefactthatGiventhefactthat,workingparentsareusuallyoccupiedwithfull-timejobs,theytendtosendtheirchildrentothechildcarecenters3.幼儿园，这个地点，有哪些好处(老师专业，)Giventhefactthat,workingparentsareusuallyoccupiedwithfull-timejob,theytendtosendtheirchildrentothechildcarecenterswhereprofessionalteachersareavailablewhilechildrencanreceiveearlychildhoodenlightenment除了得到好的教育还能接触到各种游戏Giventhefactthatworkingparentsareusuallyoccupiedwithfull-timejob,theytendtosendtheirchildrentothechildcarecenterswhereprofessionalteachersareavailablewhilechildrencanreceivebothearlychildhoodenlightenmentandgetaccesstoavarietyofgames.-连接词的使用 besides；in addition to;additionally;4、玩游戏有哪些好处Whatsmore,childrenwillbenefitalotfromplayinggames5、举例子.is(being)oneofthisexample，手眼协调能力Whats more,children will benefit a lot from playing games,takingbaseballforinstance.Theirhand-eyecoordinationiswelldevelopedduringthecompetitions.6、其他好处?7、团队合作，如何与同伴相处，促进，givenaboostto社交能力peerpressure8、Besides,teamsportswilldefinitelygiveaboosttocultivatingteamspiritsmeanwhileprovidingkidsthepossibilitytolearnhowtogetalongwithothers(theirpeers).Nevertheless,thosewhoarenurturedathomearelesslikelytodevelopsuchcertainskills.-去幼儿园的坏处儿园过度句Thoughvariousadvantagesofkindergartenmentionedabove,itsundesirableeffectsshouldnotbeignored.1.老师精力有限，不是每个学生都能得到无微不至的照顾面对这一现状facedwith，结果是学生没法得到.本应该有的关心Firstly,facedwiththelimitedresourcesavailableinthekindergarten,itturnsoutthatchildcannotreceivetheequaltreatment,nottomentiontheexpectedconsideratecaring.虐童.abuseBesides,somenurseriesproved/reportedtohaveabusingscandals使家长很担心，用主语从句Besides,thatsomenurseriesprovedtohaveabusingscandalsworriesparentsalot.-论点2 综上，另一个观点是可以理解的（另外一种趋势是被理解的）祖父母溺爱Thusitisunderstandablethathomenurturingenjoyspopularitythaneverbefore.However,inmyopinion,familymembers,especiallythegrandparentsaremorelikelytospoiltheirgrandsonorgranddaughterinamorematerialway.Exposedtosuchfloodsofspoiling,nowonderthatthereisanincreasingnumberofyoungstersmisbehavewhencomparedwiththeirparentswhoarewell-disciplined.二孩政策放开，最大的阻碍来自哪里？老大why?小孩学会分享，不自私sharing，selfish.以自己为中心，认为是理所应当due to lack of experience in playing with their peers,home-educatedchildren are always self-centered,having no idea of sharing plus takingeverythingtheyhaveforgranted.-结尾Asallthefactorsmentionedabove,thepositiveeffectsofbeingeducatedinkindergartenfaroutweighsthatoflearningathome.-应不应该学政治新闻Somepeoplethinksecondaryschoolstudentsshouldlearninternationalnewsasoneoftheirsubjects,whileothersbelievethatthisisawasteofvaluabletime.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion2013.6.22学生应该学国际新闻Whatwasyourfavoritesubjectwhenyouwereasecondarystudent,howabout international news?Recently,whether juveniles should learninternational news as a subject has arisen a wide spread topic underdiscussions.看新闻是趋势tendency，tendto;接触新闻getaccessto;Peoplewhosupportthisideamayarguethatitisadefinitetendencyforyoungsterstogetaccesstotheglobalnewssincethepastseveraldecadeshadwitnessedtremendouschangesinthecomplexrelationshipsamongcountries.-读新闻的人更受欢迎；拓宽学生视野，促进giveaboostto学生的成熟maturity；Globalnewsenjoyedincreasingpopularityamongteenagers.Thus,youngindividualswhoarefamiliarwithinternationalnewsaremorelikelytomakefriends.Inaddition,theglobalrelatedinformationcanhelptobroadourhorizons,givingaboosttothemindmaturityofyoungsters,byofferingoverallviews.反对学国际新闻依然有道理makesenseHowever,ifwetakealookattheoppositeviewpoints,wemayalsofindthatitmakesense.-理想是美好的，现实是残酷的given the fact that学生时间都是被其他科目占满了这些科目为什么这么重要?升学要考面对这么紧张的学业压力学生不大可能挤出时间学新科目Given the fact that students in secondary schools are always occupied bymajorsubjects,likemath,English,physics,whichaccountforalargeproportionintheirentrancetestsproceedingtothenextperiod.Soitisunderstandablewhenyoungguysareexpectedtofocusonthesecrucialsubjects.Facedwithalotofhomeworkandacademicpressure,studentsarelesslikelytosparetimeforanewsubject.-国际化跟我有毛关系，我还是土鳖一只，在本地住Besides,regardlessofglobalization,mostofuslivelocallyratherthanglobally,whichmeansthatstudyinginternationalnewscanbeawasteoftimeformanyinthefuture.而且政治给人一种而且政治给人一种boring的感觉的感觉Whatsmore,relatingtopoliticalaffairs,internationalnewsleavesthepublictheboringimpression,whichisoflittleattractivetoteenagers.-学什么谁应该说了算priorityNevertheless,whenitcomestomyperspective,thepriorityofdecidingwhattolearnshouldrelymoreonthestudentsthemselves.(Asforme,Ithinkthatthisproposalgoestoofarbeyondareasonableconsiderationforcurriculumdesign.)想学的应该如何对待，不想学的应该如何对待想学的多给支持，不想学的不要逼迫Whencertainsubjectsareavailableatschools,thosewhoareinterestedinglobalnewsshouldbeexposedtomorerelated materials and supports while who shows littleinterestshouldnotbeforcedtolearn.(281)-其他观点补充Nonetheless,schoolcurriculumcannotincludeeveryimportantaspectofhumanwisdom.Instead,itisthosedomainsthatofferfundamentalknowledgeandskillssuchasmathandscienceorbasicwaysofthinkinglikephilosophyandliteraturethatshouldbeconsideredtobecompulsoryforschoolchildrentomakeefforton.Homework：Somepeoplethinkallchildrenlearnhistoryinschoolisimportant;someothersthinklearningsubjectsmorerelevanttolifeisimportant.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.（2013.05.18）-是否应该学单一科目 素材积累somepeopleitisuncessaryforstudentstolearn.thatisnotrelevanttotheirlives.They should put their efforts in a more useful subjects for betterindividualdevelopment.Ifastudentwanttobeanengineer,theyshouldconcentrate on the study of science subjects.If they want to studyabroad,theyshouldworkhardonimprovingtheirEnglishskills.No company or university will consider the students knowledge ofhistoryinjobintervieworenrollmentofuniversities.,whichisconsideredasessentialforenhancingtheirsenceofhonor.by analysizing the causes and effects of 2 world wars,people wouldbettercherish(aremorelikelytoworth)thepeacetodayandpreventsuchdisastershappeningagain.curriculumdesign;eliminationofXXXsubject.-Theypresumethathistoryisabouteverythingthathappenedinthepast;thereforehasnothingtodowithourpresentlifewhichhaschangedintoacompletelydifferentworld.Childrenlearninghistorycanbetterappreciatetheirtraditionalculture.Historyisabestwayforustoseethecurrentworldandpredictthefuture.Historyisespeciallyimportantforchildrentolearnbecauseitmakesthemmoreawareofthemselvesandtheworldandprovideculturalidentityaswell.-政府话题20131.Governmentshouldgivemoremoneytosupportartists,agreeordisagree?2.The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world spendsnumerous government expenditures.This money should be used in newhousingandroaddevelopment.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?3.Somepeoplethinkthatthegovernmentshouldofferfinancialsupportandcare to the elderly people,while others think that old people should savemoneyfortheirfuturelife.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion？4.Somepeoplebelievethatgovernmentshouldhelpandlookafteroldpeople,butothersbelievethatpeopleshouldsavemoneyfortheirlivesintheirfuture.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.（2013.06.06）5.Inso
