高考写作新题型读后续写,概要写作和应用文及答案6.docx

2020新高考作文综合练习-续写，概要，应用文专练六1 .阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Several years ago, I was living in New York and working for an airline, so I never got back home for Christmas. My Christmas was happy too with some other colleagues around. But in my heart I was sad because I couldn't stay with my family. Sometimes my colleagues would say our Christmas was filled with tears. But this Christmas was different. I was lucky. I had the whole day off, which meant I could stay with my family on Christmas Eve.When Christmas morning came, I awoke to a small hand rubbing my face. "Dad, Merry Christmas!” was all my younger son had time to say. He seemed to be racing against time. I knew he was hunting for gifts with his brother eagerly. I got downstairs just to see the two little boys I faces as they looked at the pocket rockets Santa Claus had left them. I realized that the real Christmas was for the children who had deep belief in the amazing power of Santa Claus. At first, their fingers went almost shyly over their toys. When their inspection had been completed, the two boys ensured that the gifts were really delivered by Santa Claus and they dragged everything into the center of the living room.Delight flooded the room. As their mother began giving out gifts, I smiled to myself, wondering how my unexpected gifts this year would be received. With so many Christmas spent outside, I had prepared so many gifts for my children and together with my wife I hid them in several secret places. But the children were excellent detectives and they found all of them. They were happily opening packages constantly thanking considerate Santa Claus for his kindness and ability to know their desires. But I had not received a single one. I knew they had fongotton my existence with my absence from their Christmas these years.注意：2 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；3 .至少使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；4 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；5 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily.Paragraph 2:Suddenly my wife walked up to me.答案【写作提示】这是一篇描写家庭亲情的故事。作者多年没有在家过圣诞节。这一年来家里过圣诞节，家人都非 常快乐。但是，作者自己作为父亲“被遗忘”了。当然，这个故事的结尾肯定不是如此。因此续写时要设 计暖心的故事情节。【参考范文】Paragraph 1:I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily. I was wondering whether I could get a gift when my younger son ran to me, who was really kind enough to save my face. He asked me to admire his gift which he deeply believed was carefully chosen by Santa Claus. He said happily that he would sharesome of the gifts of his and allow me to choose one from them. I thanked him from the bottom of my heart, still feeling disappointed.Paragraph 2:Suddenly my wife walked up to me. It seemed that she had guessed how I felt. She asked me to look at the Christmas tree which was decorated with so many boxes. I think she was showing off her efforts on the decoration but she took off a small box and passed it to me smiling and saying it was for me. I opened it and saw a letter which read “We will never forget you. Merry Christmas!” Under the letter was a watch which was clicking with delight. I was moved with tears.1.下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。TAKING a shower is relaxing. You can hum a song, daydream or think about nothing, leaving the real world behind you. But did you know that showering can also benefit your mind?A piece of research by Scott Barry Kaufman, a psychologist from Yale University in the US interviewed over 3,000 people around the world. It turned out that nearly two-thirds of the interviewees said they had experienced new ideas in the shower and were more likely to have them in the shower than at work.So why does a simple shower have such magic power? Science can explain it.Showering can help to raise our level of dopamine（多巴胺）,a ho rnione （荷尔蒙）closely related to ourcreativity, ''People vary in terms of their level of creativity according to the activity of dopamine, "explained Alice Flaherty, a famous American neuro scientist （神经系统科学家）Taking awarm shower can make us feel relaxed and therefore make the dopamine level rise and bring the 'Aha!' moment to us.”Besides the chemical changes, showering may give you a break from what you feel you have been stuck with. Especially when you have thought hard all day about a problem, jumping into the shower can keep you from the outside world so that you can focus on your inner feelings and memories. In this way, according to American psychologist Shelley H. Carson, author of Your Creative Brain, “a showering hour may turn into an 'incubation（孵化period，for your ideas”.Compared with sitting in front of a computer, taking a shower is something we do less frequently in our daily lives. When showering, we get a fresh experience with the change of location, temperature and humidity. ''New and unexpected experiences can lead to positive changes in thinking,explained Kaufman. "'Getting off the couch and jumping in the shower may create a distance and force you to think from a new point of view,Showering allows us to enjoy the creative juices of our minds, which makes the bathroom an alternative where you get your inspiration. So next time you consider ways to free your mind, count it in.答案【写作提示】这是一篇科普文章，文章认为淋浴会增加一个人的创造力，并给出了很多调查的实证资料。文章信 息比较多，有很多背景信息和分支补充信息，而且自然段落也比较多。因此阅读时一定要仔细，理出 其中的关键信息。【参考范文】Showering is of great benefit to our mind.（要点 1） It is found that relaxation in the shower helps raise the level of dopamine and bring new ideas.（要点 2） Showering can also provide a new, unexpected and fresh experience that can make it possible to stop thinking about yvhat we are stuck with, resulting in positive changes in thinking.（要点 3） So if you want to have a change and make new ideas, go for a shower.（要点4）3.书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，你在华工作的英国朋友Tom想深入学习中文。请你给他发邮件，告知每周有个“朗 读者”（The Reader）活动,参与者须朗读自选中文经典并相互交流心得，内容包括：1 .时间和地点；2.活动内容；3.准备朗读材料。注意：1 .词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考范文Dear Tom,Learning that you are eager to improve Chinese, I'm writing to inform you of an activity, The Reader, where you can get close to the language and Chinese culture as you always wish.Held at People's Park every Saturday afternoon, the activity attracts readers of all ages and fields. They choose their favorite reading classic materials, including poems, essays and novels. Every participant is required to read the text emotionally. Meanwhile, readers can share reading experience and communicate with each other in Chinese.If you plan to participate in this activity, be sure to have your reading material ready in advance. For someone so fond of Chinese like you, it is absolutely a great opportunity you can't miss.Best wishes.