用教材提供的素材写好游记作文 讲义--2023届高三英语写作复习备考.docx

用教材提供的素材写好游记作文人教版必修一二三本书中都谈到place,只是在不同书中角度不同。如：必修 一 unit2 traveling around 中 Travel Peru,必修二 unit 4 History and Tradition 中 WhaVs in a Name?及 Beautiful Ireland and its Tradition,必修三 unit 3 Diverse Cultures 中 Travel Journal和Welcome to Chinatown。给我们提供了丰富多样的写作素材，值得我 们好好整理归纳，以便吸收运用。开头整体印象1 .Pisa is a fine old city.2 .The Chinatown in San Francisco is the biggest in America, and also theoldest.3 .The Chinatown is a very popular tourist draw that receives morevisitors each year than even the Golden Gate Bridge.赏析：这句话通过跟金门大桥比较旅客数量方面的多少来突出唐人街的受欢迎程 度。启示：用比较句4 .The capital city London is a great place to start, as it is an ancient port city that has a history dating back to Roman times.赏析：历史悠久体现在可以追溯到罗马时代。启示：掌握“某地+is+adj+place to do sth”句型，用as引导的原因状语从句来丰富内 容。5.If the Taj Mahal is a celebration of heart, then the Imperial Tombs of the Ming and Qing Dynasties are a monument to the mind and spirit.赏析：通过比较泰姬陵来突出明清皇陵的特点。启示：用“if A示,then B is”，来进行比较,积累优美的短语:a celebration ofheart（一 曲心灵的赞歌），a monument to the mind and spirit（一座精神丰碑）理位置be located / situated insit / stand in（坐落于.）1 .Guangzhou is located in Guangdong province.历史悠久2 .The country boasts a long history of producing great writers and poets.赏析：这个国家历史悠久，文人骚客辈出。启示:"A boast a long history of.”用 boast/enjoy 代替 has.3 .The United Kingdom has a long and interesting history to explore, whichcan help you understand much more about the country and its traditions.启示：用非限制定语从句来丰富探索某地历史的意义。4 .Porsmouth Square enjoys a long and famous history, with the author Robert having spent much time writing there.历史背景知识.is a place where.1 .Fishman's Wharf is a place where Italian fishmen first came here and set up the fishing industry.2 .Angel Island was a famous immigration station where many Chinese immigrants applied to live in the USA.3 . Historically, Chinses immigrants settled in the area during the railroad construction and gold rush period.启示：这里用了一个高级副词historically（历史上），住在某地除了用"live in"还可以用 “settle in"o景点:1 .The churches are built with taste and well-decorated.教堂建造雅观，装饰精美。启示：积累好词：built with tastezwell-decorated.2 .Visitors to Maori historic buildings, such as tribal meeting halls, can see beautifully carved wooden architecture.赏析：游客去参观毛利人历史建筑，如部落会议大厅，就可以看到雕刻精美的木 制建筑。这里把"游客去参观毛利人历史建筑“用一个静态的“介词to”就表达出来，非 常简洁。启示：语言要简洁，用副词beautifully修饰形容词carved wooden。3 .There are countless historic sites to explore, and lots of museums with ancient relics from all over the UK.启示：博物馆里面有来自全英国的古代文物，很多小朋友可能会这样翻译 ".museums which has ancient relics from all over the UK",而教材用“介词 with"就简单 描写了 museum里面展览东西，更加简洁。4 .The peaceful landscape of the the "Emerald Isle" and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.赏析：这里的形容词用的很好，如peaceful,特别是green counties,给人一种这 个县城到处都是绿树成荫的感觉。如果下一次遇上white village,也可能是描写村庄 白雪皑皑的美景哦。它的后面用了 with表示伴随，进一步补充了绿意在于连绵不绝的 青山上，点缀着星星点点的牛羊。启示："sth is a true feast for the eyes（赏心悦目）"，很绝的表达方法。she is a feast of our eyes.意为：她长得很养眼。要灵活运用形容词，with介词短语。5 .The Taj Mahal, which was built between 1631 and 1648, is a masterpiece of architecture.启示：which定从来丰富内容。6 .What makes the Ming and Qing Tombs unique even among amzing buildings such as the Taj Mahal and Angkor Wat（吴哥窟）is that they bring together architeture and philosophy.启示：even among amzing buildings9 对比。such as 例举来丰富内容。bring together A and B：把 A 跟 B 融合在一起。they bring together architeture and philosophy 明清皇陵兼具艺术性与哲理性。7 .The museum did a really good job of showing how America was built by immigrants from different countries and cultures.启示：用 sth did a good job of doing sth 来表达出 museum 的功能。8 .Other famous sites, including Tin How Temple and the Bank of Canton enables visitors to spend hourss exploring the interesting sights, smells and sounds of China.赏析：这里写Tin How Temple and the Bank of Canton属于略写，一笔带过。只是 说这两个地方可以供人们探索有趣的景点，寻找令人垂涎的中国美食，聆听动听的中 国音符。sights, smells and sounds of China） 具有韵律的美。启示：写景要详略得当。including=such as, enable sb to do sth=allow sb to do sth.9 .Visitors who walk among the buildings can feel both the weight of history and a wonderful sense of peace.启示:积累好词:feel both the weight of history and a wonderful sense of peace（感 受深厚的历史底蕴，体会美好又平和的心境。）10 These days, the square is a great place to see traditional Chinese culture in real life, such as games of Chinese chess, and people practising tai chi.启示：用”评价+具体展开”，来描写一个地方。A is a great place to do sth:A是做 某事的好去处。11 .There are Chinese tea stores, where visitors can taste and buy varieties of Chinese tea.启示：用where引导的定从来丰富内容。人情1 .The number of people there is rather small, which gives the place an air of wonderful quietnesso赏析：一方水土养育一方人，一方人也是这一方水土的不可缺少的一部分，也影 响着这个地方，打上了人文的烙印。这个地方人少，所以给人一种美好又宁静的感觉。启示：an air of ： 一种的氛围、感觉2 .A most intersting person you might meet in Italy is the improvisatore, who have the ability to make up poems on any subject you suggest.赏析：在意呆利，你最有可能遇见的是即兴诗人，他们能够就你提出的任何话题 创作出一首诗歌。在旅游城市，我们常会遇到某些有特色的人，比如，去广西听山歌， 就会看到穿着有民族特色衣服的人们。这句话值得我们去模仿。3 .The majority of residents in Chinatown are still ethnic Chinese, many of whom do not speak English fluently. This allows visitors to experience a real taste of China.赏析：从这句话我们可以看出，练好口语环境很重要，唐人街的华侨抱团在一起 自然就失去了练好英语的动力，所以还是要走出自己的舒适区才能变得更加美好。当 然，这也有利有弊。文章从游客角度出发，谈了这一现象的好处，即游客能体验到纯 正中国味。启示：积累好词：experience a real taste of sth.体验到纯正的.4 .If you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first hand.赏析：a friendly face这里运用了提喻，以部分代替整体，意为友善的人们。又如： they are short of hands,这里用hands来代替了 labor。这个句子告诉我们，在旅游时， 若我们主动跟友善的当地人攀谈，更有可能直接了解当地文化风俗。艺术1.Another well-known part of Maori culture is the traditional Kapa dance, which is performed for celebrations and special guests.启示：用了 which非限制性定从，补充说明了 Kapa dance的功能，即：庆祝，欢迎客人.be performed for:为.而表演。1 .1 walked around looking at the street art for a few hours. It was quite modern and lively.启示:quite代替了俗气的very, modern and lively,这形容词值得积累。美食2 .Afterwards, I ate some delicious Mexican-Chinese noodles from a food truck.启示：描写美食，很多小朋友只会用delicious,tasty,现在记得要用Mexican-Chinese, 这种多国特色的形容词哦。3 . I selected a Cantonese restaurant that served its food on beautiful china plates.启示：某饭店有美食要用"serve”。这句很好，答应我，背下来。4 .There is Chinese food to suit everyone's taste, with traditional dishes from all over China.启示：这里又是写美食的好句，用了 suit everyone" taste（符合每个人的胃口）， traditional dishes from all over China（中国各地传统菜肴），体现了唐人街里面中国美食 的博大精深，应有尽有。体现了一个词：diversity/variety游后感想/评价可以用上形容词，如：impressive, unique, fancy, delicate, enjoyable, peacefulamazing, fantastic, fascinating, 01 .Tired as it may be, it is all worth it to stop by such a place.启示：Tired as it may be=as it may be tired, it is worth to do sth,这些都值得去记 下来。2 .The visit to Angel Island made me think about my life. I am thankful for my easy life today.启示：如果我们去一些爱国基地，也会有作者同样的感受，thankfuL3 .The UK is a fascinating mix of history and modern culture, with both new and old tradditions.启示：想起必修三第三单元的阅读有一句：a real mix of culture!编教材的教授有 心了，一直在螺旋出现某个绝了的句子，不背，小朋友你良心不会痛吗？4 .Chinatown are an important part of the diverse culture of the USA. They allow visitors who have never been to China to experience traditional Chinese culture first hand.启示：A be an important part of,体现出A的重要性。first hand又重复出现了