读后续写：助人类（故事构造“三部曲”）-2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能.docx

读后续写：助人型Parti：经典例文（披萨店员工救人）2Part2： 助人类故事构造三部曲5第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境）5第二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链）6第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华）6Part3：助人场景描写9一、帮助他人之后9二、发生水灾之后10三、发生误解之后11四、发生火灾之后12五、感受善良之后13六、感受幸福之后14七、发生误解之后15八、获得勇气16九、获得自信17十、接收礼物之后18十一、老师的帮助19十二、陌生人的帮助21Part4：灵活应用22例1：老夫妇帮助我22例2：帮助老妇人24Part5：高考真题再现27真题1：好心的墨西哥家庭【2021年八省联考】 27真题2：买爆米花助穷人【2020年7月山东卷】 29better or for worse.我笑着。直到那一刻，我才意识到一个小小的手势对他产生了多么大的不同。 我甚至看到他的爸爸妈妈看着我，也带着同样感激的微笑。我意识到，我们永远 不应该低估我们行动的力量。只要用一个小小的手势，我们就可以改变一个人的 生活。为好或坏。二、发生水灾之后The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue. The hours passed. Jason and Andrew didn't dare to move for fear of slipping. They dozed off and then jerked themselves awake. Every once in a while,one of them turned on his headlamp to check the water level. An hour later, the water level went down enough that they could try an escape. Stiff from keeping in one position for 12 hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies. Jason screamed in pain, but he was determined not to let it stop him.水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。几个小时过去了。杰森和安德鲁不敢动， 因为害怕滑倒。他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。每隔一段时间，其中一 个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃 跑。他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。杰森痛苦 地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward. Still, each time Jason moved a leg, he cried out. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way toward the entrance, at times in chest-high water. Now, in a passage that was high enough for them to walkupright, Jason saw something flicker in the distance."Lights! I see lights!" Jason shouted out.For the first time since entering the cave, over 20 hours earlier, Jason's emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。几个小时过去了。杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。每隔一段时间，其中一 个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃 跑。他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。杰森痛苦 地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。三、发生误解之后As she reached in her baggage, she gasped with surprise. At that moment, in her sight came the packet of cookies, which had beenjust bought by her, unopened at all. Ashamed and feeling like a thief, she finally got that the cookies were not hers but belonged to the man sitting next to her, who had calmly offered to share his last cookie with her.A sudden rush of shy blood filling the face, she instinctively look around with the hope of finding the very man to make an h apology.当她伸手拿行李时，她惊讶地喘了一口气。就在这时，她看到了她刚买的一包饼干，根本没有打开。她.感到羞愧，感觉自己像个小偷，终于明白了这些饼干.不是她的，而是属于坐在她旁边的男人，他平静地提）出和她分享他的最后一块饼干。脸上突然涌满了害羞j的鲜血，她本能地环顾四周，希望能找到那个男人来 道歉。Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her. He was just looking up and met her eyes,also with a smile on his face.The woman was at an absolute loss but gave the man a nervous laugh in return. Witha quite open mouth, she was unable to say any apology to him. Murmuring "Sorry, sorry.It was I myself who was the real cookie thief." After a while, she fell asleep on her seat with the plane flying steadily. The next day, when she arrived at her new company, the biggest surprise was waiting for her.令人惊讶的是，她发现那个男人就坐在她身后。他只是抬头看了看她的眼 睛，脸上也带着微笑。女人完全不知所措，但却给了男人一声紧张的笑声作为 回报。她张开嘴，不能向他道歉。“对不起，对不起。真正偷饼的是我自己。” 过了一会儿，她在座位上睡着了，飞机平稳地飞着。第二天，当她来到她的新 公司时，最大的惊喜就是在等她。四、发生火灾之后Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot. He comprehended the gravity of the situation and held Jane's hand tightly. By then, both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes. Tom begged Jane to run for safety as quickly as possible.Jane tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head. She kept pounding against the door. Tom burst out crying.汤姆注意到火焰正在升起。他吓得僵住了，站在原地。他明白形势的严重 性，紧紧地握住简的手。到那时，他们俩都在咳嗽，眼睛刺痛。时间似乎静止 不动，虽然他们可能只在那里两三分钟。汤姆恳求简尽快跑过去寻求安全。简 想保护她的鼻子免受呛人的烟雾，摇了摇头。她不停地敲门。汤姆突然哭了起 来。Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help. A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Jane's mind. She told them Ms. Makcik must be still in the room. They forced the door open with all their might. Sure enough, Makcik was lying in bed,unconscious. She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where she finally came to herself. People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Jane and Tom's joy was immense.幸运的是，一些邻居路过时停下来，并提供了帮助。一种力量感立刻取代了 简心中日益增加的恐惧和焦虑。她告诉他们，马克奇克女士一定还在房间里。他 们竭尽全力地强行打开了门。果然，马克西克正躺在床上，失去了知觉。她被带 下楼，然后被紧急送往医院，终于苏醒过来。附近的人都松了一口气，简和汤姆非常高兴。五、感受善良之后Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground.Then he picked it up and tapped the man on the shoulder and said,"Excuse me, sir, this fell out of your pocket/ The man turned around and saw the money. He knew what was going on,he looked straight into my dad's eyes, took my dad's hand in both of his, squeezed tightly onto the $20 bill, and with his lip shaking and a tear running down his cheek, he replied,"Thank you, thankyou, sir. This really means a lot to me and my family.水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。几个小时过去了。杰森和安德鲁不敢动， 因为害怕滑倒。他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。每隔一段时间，其中一 个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃 跑。他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。杰森痛苦 地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。That day my father andl went back to our car and drove home without any tickets.We didn't go to the circus that night, when I asked dad why he did so, Dad saidJMy child, it was a desperate, heartbreaking and embarrassing situation for a father. Surely he wasn't begging fora handout, but he reminded me of my father, when I was young.n He paused for a while, as if wandering in his memory/*We should appreciate what we have obtained from life and seize every opportunity to help others.We didn't go to the circus tonight, but we didn't go without. Now, who wants an ice cream?。那天，我和我父亲回到我们的车里，没有任何票就开车回家了。那天晚上 我们没有去马戏团，当我问爸爸为什么这么做时，爸爸说：“我的孩子，对一个 父亲来说，这是一个绝望、令人心碎和尴尬的情况。他当然不是乞求施舍，但 他让我想起了我年轻时的父亲。”他停顿了一会儿，仿佛在记忆中徘徊。我们 应该珍惜从生活中获得的东西，抓住一切机会帮助别人。我们今晚没有去马戏 团，但我们没有去。谁要冰淇淋？。六、感受幸福之后The driver responded/It must feel good to be taken care of and protected like you are every day."Confused by what the driver talked about,she asked, nWhat do you mean?*1 The driver answered, "Every morning in the past week,a fine looking gentleman ina military uniform has been standing across the street watching you getting off the bus.He makes sure you cross the street safely and he watches until you enter your office building.Then he blows you a kiss,gives you a lite salute and walks away. You are one lucky lady/司机回答说：“像每天一样被照顾和保护一定会感觉很好。她对司机所说的 话感到困惑，她问道，“你是什么意思？ ”司机回答说：“在过去的一周里，每天 早上，一个漂亮的军装绅士都站在街对面看着你下车。他确保你安全过马路，他 看着，直到你进入你的办公楼。然后他打了你一个吻，向你轻轻地敬礼，然后走 开了。你是一位幸运的女士。”Tears of happiness poured down Susan's cheeks. She stood motionlessly facing the opposite side of the street as if gazing at someone. Although she couldn't physically see him, she definitely felt Mark's presence. Susan thought she was actually lucky, for he had given her a gift more powerful than sight,a gift of love that can bring light where there is darkness.Just as Mark grew a little worried, he saw his wife break into a radiant smile and blow a kiss to his direction. Finally she found back herself blind but attractive and confident as she used to be.司机回答说：“像每天一样被照顾和保护一定会感觉很好。她对司机所说的 话感到困惑，她问道，“你是什么意思？”司机回答说：“在过去的一周里，每天 早上，一个漂亮的军装绅士都站在街对面看着你下车。他确保你安全过马路，他看着，直到你进入你的办公楼。然后他打了你一个吻，向你轻轻地敬礼，然后走 开了。你是一位幸运的女士。”七、发生误解之后A seat beside her was empty, and Dannis occupied it.He felt a wave of anger swept over him. nWhere is my wallet?11 he yelled. The black-haired girl glanced up from her reading, with a confused look on her face. Dannis stood up,glared at her and shouted,nYou stole my wallet!" The crowds began to gossip.The girl turned deadly palejooking so restless that words failed her.A strange silence hung in the air. Abruptly, she leaped from the seat.她旁边的一个座位空着，丹尼斯坐着。他感到一阵愤怒席卷了他。“我的 钱包呢？ ”他大叫。黑发女孩从阅读中抬起头来，脸上露出困惑的神色。丹尼 斯站起来，瞪了她一眼，喊道：“你偷了我的钱包！ ”人群开始闲聊起来。那女 孩脸色惨白，神情不安，言语使她失望。一种奇怪的沉默挂在空中。她突然从 座位上跳了起来。The girl ran and Dannis ran after her. After a while, Dannis finally grabbed her by the arm.At exactly that momenta policeman approached them and asked about what happened.Dannis hastened to explain it while the girl frowned with a shake of her head. After further enquiries, the policeman took out a wallet and handed it to Dannis, adding that someone had found it in the toilet. What a mistake he had made! Overwhelmed by guilt, Dannis made an apology to the girl.女孩跑了，丹尼斯追了她。过了一会儿，丹尼斯终于抓住了她的手臂。就 在这时，一个警察走近他们，问他们发生了什么事。丹尼斯急忙解释，而女孩 皱着眉头摇了摇头。经过进一步的询问，警察拿出一个钱包递给丹尼斯，并补 充说有人在厕所里发现了它。他犯了什么错误！由于内疚,丹尼斯向女孩道歉。八、获得勇气The boy started running again to give the kite lift.The wind on the kite was at once strong and swift, carrying him up high into the air.Closing his eyes tight, he trembled all over in panic,not daring to look down.But with the boy's inspiring words in mind, he got up his nerve and managed to keep the balance and let his fear go.As the wind carried him upward, he slowly opened his eyes, only to see the whole town from a brand-new dimension!"Give more string, please. More! he yelled to the boy excitedly. With courage,he made a great dance in the air, making other kids cheering wildly那男孩又开始跑去放风筝了。风筝上的风立刻强烈而迅速，把他从高空吹到 空中。他紧紧地闭上眼睛，惊恐得浑身发抖，不敢低头看。但考虑到男孩鼓舞人 心的话，他鼓起了勇气，设法保持平衡，释放了他的恐惧。当风带着他向上走时， 他慢慢地睁开眼睛，却从一个全新的维度看到了整个城镇！ “请再多写信吧。请 了解更多信息！他兴奋地对那男孩大喊大叫。他鼓着勇气在空中跳了一场舞，让 其他孩子疯狂地欢呼The kite felt peaceful and delighted and new. With other kites flying around, he floated, twirled,stretched his wings and waved his rag tail, a broad smile spreading on his face. The higher he went, the greater the view. Seeing the scared, timid kite now dancing confidently, the boy was touched, believing that the kite had learned a new lesson-the best way to defeat fear is to face it bravely and optimistically.风筝感到平静、快乐和新鲜事物。其他风筝四处飞着，他漂浮着，旋转着, 展开翅膀，摇着破尾巴，脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。他走得越高，视野就越大。看 到害怕的、胆小的风筝现在自信地跳舞，男孩被感动了，相信风筝已经吸取了新 的教训战胜恐惧的最好方法是勇敢而乐观地面对它。九、获得自信Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation.Jenny didn't answer. How could she explain about the watch and its magic? No one could understand. No one could believe. nBut I saw you wearing it yesterday/ Miss Walker gently reminded him. For a moment Lee remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that.Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech. Everybody was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless.每个人都把眼睛盯着珍妮，等待着解释。珍妮没有回答。她怎么能解释一下 这只手表和它的魔力呢？没人能理解。没有人能相信。“可是我昨天看到你戴着 它，”沃克小姐温柔地提醒他。李沉默了一会儿，然后他道歉了，他只记得这一 点。珍妮在回家的路上找到了它，并决定在演讲后归还。每个人都很困惑，并被 问及为什么。珍妮又说不出话来了。Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech firstJenny walked slowly to the front. She couldnft think properly. All round her, a sea of faces was watching.She felt so frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walker's encouraging eyes.Jenny took a deep breath."I'm going to talk about swimming.n Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny's wonderful speech. Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence.沃克老师笑了笑，让全班同学先听珍妮的演讲。珍妮慢慢地走到前面。她 无法正常思考。她的四周，一片面海在看着。她感到很害怕，手表看起来一点 也不神奇。突然，她看到沃克小姐鼓励的眼睛。珍妮深吸了一口气。“我要谈 谈游泳的事”十分钟后全班同学起立为珍妮的精彩演讲鼓掌。珍妮笑了， 因为她最终意识到了自信的真正来源。十、接收礼物之后I was stopped by my mother's eager,joyful look."Lets see what it is, honey. Hurry and open it."It was a blow dryer. Though this may seem but a simple gift, to me it was so much more. Being an eleven-year-old girl, I was stunned.In my world, where receiving lately outweighed giving, my mom's act of selflessness was incomprehensible. It was a huge act Tears filled my eyes and I thought in disbelief about how much my mom must love me to give up her Christmas so-could have a few more presents.我被我母亲急切而快乐的目光拦住了。“让我们看看那是什么事吧，亲爱的。 赶快打开它。“那是一个吹风机。产a乎只产砂单的礼物，但对我来说， 它更多了。作为一个11岁的女展白寿6岁“世界里，最近接受的东西 超过了付出，我妈妈的无私行为是通融纥金/个白大的夹演,眼泪充满 了我的眼睛，我不相信我妈妈一定是多么：晨嘉她的圣诞节，所以可以再 有几份礼物。As an adult with chilin my life whomadore, Iand my mom'sactions.I see actually, swas not ""giving*p her Cftdsta/I hwought, butI have always remembered that Christnic s fondly: It had such an impact on me.better thanwas finding an even greater joy in her Christmas breceiving. My mom's simple act meant the world to me. Whendier I look back on my mom's giving, I will choose to give in my life.II我一直深情地记得那个圣诞节它对我有如此的影响。作为一个在我的生 活中有孩子的成年人，我现在可以理解我妈妈的行为。实*上，我知道，她并 没有像我想的那样“放弃她的圣诞节”，而是在她的圣诞节，卜到了更大的乐趣, 因为真正的给予比接受更好。我妈妈的简单行为对我来说#味着世界。每当我 回首妈妈的付出，我都会选择在我的生命中付出。 u十一、老师的帮助Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation. Jenny didn't answer. How could she explain about the watch and its magic? No one could understand. No one could believe. nBut I saw you wearing it yesterday/ Miss Walker gently reminded him. For a moment Lee remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that.Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech.Everybody was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless.每个人都把眼睛盯着珍妮，等待着解释。珍妮没有回答。她怎么能解释一下 这只手表和它的魔力呢？没人能理解。没有人能相信。“但我昨天看见你戴着它，” 沃克小姐温柔地提醒他。李沉默了一会儿，然后他道歉了，他只记得这一点。珍 妮在回家的路上找到了它，并决定在演讲后归还。每个人都很困惑，并被问及为 什么。珍妮又说不出话来了。Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first.Jenny walked slowly to the front. She couldn't think properly.All round her,a sea of faces was watching. She felt so frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walker's encouraging eyes. Jenny took a deep breath.nI'm going to talk about swimming.n Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny's wonderful speech.Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence.沃克老师笑了笑，让全班同学先听珍妮的演讲。珍妮慢慢地走到前面。她 无法正常思考。她的四周，一片面海在看着。她感到很害怕，手表看起来一点 也不神奇。突然，她看到沃克小姐鼓励的眼睛。珍妮深深地吸了一口气。十 分钟后，全班同学起立为珍妮的精彩演讲鼓掌。珍妮笑了，因为她最终意识到 了自信的真正来源。Parti：经典例文（披萨店员工救人）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的 短文。续写的词数应为150左右。When the employees at the Domino's pizza place in Salem, Oregon, hadn't received any order from Kirk Alexander for more than 2 weeks, they knew something wasn't right. Kirk was a loyal customer and the staff all knew him. So it was natural that they got worried when they had no news about him. Their concern saved his life.Sarah Fuller, the general manager at the Domino's branch, said that Kirk, who was 48 years old, had been a loyal customer since 2009. "He orders every day, or every other day," Sarah said.Normally, his order came up on the screen because he ordered online. So we saw it came across the screen and we were thinking, “Oh, Kirk's order/9 After a few days without a single order, Sarah and the staff started to worry.A few Domino's drivers had mentioned that they hadn't seen his order come across their screen in a while. Sarah checked the system and saw that no order had come in 11 days. So they decided to investigate.Sarah decided to send Tracy Hamblen, a deliver driver, to Kirk's place. When hegot there, he immediately knew something was wrong. While the lights and TV were on, Kirk