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【方法一：首位呼应法写】考点47读后续写12高分结尾技万：主旨升华（解析版）【命题解读】结尾句是全文的收尾处，需要起到点睛的作用，给读者留下深刻的印象。怎么做到呢？今天老师就带 着你灵活运用首尾呼应、直白叙述、应用名言等多种方法进行结尾，对故事主题进行深化，使人物情感得 到升华，让你的文章的结尾更加出彩！今天分享三个常见的方法：收尾呼应法；名言结尾法和情感升华法。【思维导图】方法一：首位呼应法写出彩收尾设计L 方法二：名言式结尾法方法三：情感升华法助人型主旨升华句成长型主旨升华句脱险型主旨升华句模拟演练请看第一例子，2017年高考真题，讲述的是与健忘妈妈一块去旅游的故事。文章的开头， 是这么写的：I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my motherloving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful.我有个有趣的童年， 充满了惊喜和 娱乐，都是因为我的母亲可爱，却心不在焉，健忘。那么续写结尾的时候可以回到文章的开头再次重申妈妈的性格，来深化主题。文章结尾可以用首尾呼应的写作手法，请看这一句：Despite monfs being absent-minded and forgetful, she was still a kind and nice mom.尽管妈妈总是心不在焉，健忘，但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈。再来看第二个例子，2018年高考真题，讲述的是爸爸带儿子去朋友家农场游玩迷路的故事。 遇到危险后，勇敢面对，才能解决问题。这个句子突出了“勇敢”这个核心，这在“脱险型''的故事里，是非 常恰当的。这句话使用了倒装的结构和强调结构结合的方式，也属于高分亮点句。【主旨句三：高级句】It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with （= we may face）, we mustn't give up our hope.“正是这种独特的经历使我理解了我们所面临的任何困难，我们不能放弃我们的希望。”这个句子也是把强调句，定语从句，宾语从句结合在一起，句式结构比较高级。同学们不妨挑战一下？【主旨句四：综合型】即把前几种方式进行组合，我们可以记住这个组合公式：结果+难忘的经历+体悟我们再说具体点儿，“结果”指的是获救的结果，如走出森林，获救后见到家人等。“难忘的经历”就是我们 刚刚学到的第一个主旨句。“体悟”在这种“脱险型”里，无非就是突出冷静，勇敢，不放弃希望等信念的重 要性。我们来一个例句：Finally, we did sth. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there's always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.最后，我们做某事。（这里写结果）多么难忘的经历啊！（这是一个万能句）事实证明，只要我们保持 冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。（作者的体悟，可以把“保持冷静”，换成”不放弃希望”等。）我们看2018年高考英语浙江卷的读后续写，爸爸带儿子去朋友家农场游玩迷路的故事。文章的最 后，我们可以用这句：Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there's always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆 脱困境。我们也可以把第一句改成:Finally, we arrived home safely just in time for supper （我们安全回家，正 好赶上吃晚饭），也就是说，不管怎么写，第一句是脱险后的结果。我们再看2016年10月高考英语浙江卷的读后续写，夫妻俩野外露营，因小事发生争执，女主人 独自走进森林迷路的故事。文章最后，我们也可以用上这句：Finally, she saw her husband. As tightly as possible, she hugged him and was too thrilled to say anything.What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there's always a way out of any plight as long as we never give up our hope.最后，她看到了她的丈夫。她尽可能地紧紧地抱着他，激动得说不出话 来。多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们不放弃我们的希望，任何困境都有出路。2017年高考英语的读后续写，和朋友一起骑车游玩，途中遇狼的故事。我们可以这样写：Finally, the wolf ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance ."We are safe!”Mac said in a pleasant tone. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there's always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm. 最后，狼从路上跑开，消失在远处。“我们很安全！ ”麦克以一种愉快的语气说。多么难忘的经历啊！事 实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。篌拨检狈【模拟题11 （2022.辽宁实验中学模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I sat at my desk and stared at the screen. I waited patiently for ideas to come to me as I tried to think up exam questions for a test T would give my English students. My wife was off to a party somewhere, but I was not alone. Meghan, our 22-month-old angel, kept my company. Yet her plans seemed to go against mine.She followed a daily routine that was both time-consuming and challenging. It included certain basic tasks: watching the fish, sweeping the floor in her room, climbing up and down on her bed.At first I was able to concentrate on designing my test paper. But I was soon distracted. I had not expected the arrival of the "bib-bibs""bib-bibs“ were birds. "Bib-bibs!” Meghan screamed excitedly, her eyes alive with expectation. She insisted that I come with her to the window.“In a minute. Just let me finish this question.1 said. She pulled me by the hand （two fingers, actually） toward the window. I saw myself as a fbol, being led to watch the “bib-bibs”. They sang and leaped back and forth on the lawn just outside our apartment window. Meghan was absorbed, but as I watched them, I still thought about my work. With her attention off me, I left the window and went back to my desk.Five minutes later, she returned. She reached up to my keyboard and pressed a bunch of keys, adding a long line of scrabbled （舌L 的）letters to my question. I struggled to bring my annoyance under control. "No, thank you, Meghan. Daddy9s seen your work. Til do it myselfy' She backed off.注意：1.词数150字左右；2.按照格式在答题卡相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:A few minutes later, she stood in front of me with her shoes and socks in her hand.Paragraph 2:I finally decided to take Meghan to the park.参考答案：A few minutes later, she stood in front of me with her shoes and socks in her hand. I got it一she wanted me to take her out to the park. I pretended I hadn't paid attention. She stepped forward, staring at me with her innocent eyes. "Leave me alone for a while, Meghan. I said without looking at her. After a few seconds, out of the comer of my eye, I saw tears rolling down her cheek. I felt so terrible that I regretted what I had said. I had to correct my mistake.I finally decided to take Meghan to the park. I turned to her and said, “Sorry, let's go to see more 'bib-bibs'!” She was so excited that she smiled through tears. I held her hand as we walked outside. Wandering through the park, Meghan was like a free bird enjoying herself in the wide blue sky. Seeing her smiley face, I felt much happier than I would have been doing my work. I could catch up on it in the evening. Work can always wait, but love cannot.【解析】本文讲述了一个关于爱的故事。一天，作者坐在桌前为学生出试卷，因为妻子外出，家里只有 22个月大的女儿陪着他，作者需要分心去照顾女儿。正在作者集中精力设计试卷时，女儿兴奋地叫着让 作者陪她去窗前看鸟，当女儿看鸟时，作者仍在思考工作，并再次回到桌前。五分钟后，女儿回到作者 身边，用手在键盘上乱按，这让作者有些生气。1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“几分钟后，她站在我面前，手里拿着鞋子和袜子。”可知，第一段可描写女儿的请求 和作者的反应。由第二段首句内容“我最终决定带梅根去公园。”可知，第二段可描写父女二人在公园做了什么及作者的 感悟。2 .续写线索：女儿想去公园作者拒绝女儿流泪作者后悔来到公园享受快乐时光 作者的感悟3 .词汇激活 行为类 .明白:get it/understand .盯着：stare at/fix one's eyes on .玩得愉快：enjoy oneself/have fun 情绪类,兴奋的:excited/thrilled.更高兴的：happier/more pleased高分句型 1. She was so excited that she smiled through tears.（由 sothat引导的结果状语从句）高分句型2. I held her hand as we walked outside.（由as引导的时间状语从句）【模拟题2 （2022广东广州三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。People use the proverb “seeing is believing to describe situations where it's hard to believe something is possible if you haven51 seen it happen. I am here today to tell you that the proverb is true and to share with you how a girl and her grandmother made a positive transformation in a community.It was a year ago when I was studying life cycles in my science class. I wrote a paper about the life cycle of the monarch butterfly （帝王蝶）and received a perfect score. 1 was so thrilled; I called my grandmother Nana and told her the exciting news. My talk recalled memories from Nana's childhood. remember when I was a girl,“ she said, “those orange and black butterflies were a common sight. Come late summer, there would suddenly be hundreds of them, and before long there were so many it felt like you were standing in an orange cloud.”“It sounds like you witnessed a migration （迁徙）,but what happened to them? I asked. "To be honest, Tve never known/9 Nana admitted. "But there do seem to be fewer monarchs around the neighborhood.Nana and I decided to investigate.That weekend, we met at the public library. Our research produced plenty of information: some fascinating and some concerning. Apparently, the number of monarchs has been in decline for the last several decades. Housing developments have destroyed much of their habitat （栖息、土也）.Some information was hopeful, though, like how conservationists are working to save them.The best was this it doesn't take lots of money or equipment to do so. It takes only a little bit of land, some seeds, and dedicated people to create whafs called a Monarch Waystation （驿站）.“What if we set up our own Monarch Waystation? I suggested. "We'll need people to help. Nana responded immediately and didn't waste time to get started.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The next day, Nana presented the idea to her garden club and I talked to my friends.Nana and I created a blog and frequently updated about the community's efforts.参考答案：The next day, Nana presented the idea to her garden club and I talked to my friends. Many people started to plant flowers in their gardens. Nana's garden club convinced the city government to plant a butterfly garden next to the city fountain. My friends and I spread leaflets telling people how to build Monarch Waystations. More and more people took action to make our community monarch-friendy. As spring turned into summer, we found our efforts started to work! A few dozen orange and black butterflies were spotted visiting the waystations. As summer progressed, the monarchs grew more plentiful.Nana and I created a blog and frequently updated about the community's efforts. Monarch enthusiasts from across the country contacted us with their own observations, ideas and reflections. Then it happened one day when the sun was shining and the sky was a deep blue, just like Nana remembered a few fluttering （颤动的）orange wings soon became hundreds of soaring butterflies. As monarchs sailed above and around us, Nana cried tears of happiness and gave me an enormous hug. It was truly a spectacular experience. Now I know what it means to stand in an orange cloud of monarchs. I know what people mean when they say, “Seeing is believing. I learn that if we believe in something strong enough and work to make it happen, we will see our goal become a reality.【解析】本文讲述了一个关于州艮见为实”的故事。作者在科学课上写了一篇关于帝王蝶生命周期的论文并 且得了满分，作者和祖母分享了这个好消息。祖母告诉作者自己小时候曾经见过很多帝王蝶，但不知道 为什么，随着时间的推移，帝王蝶越来越少了，作者和祖母开始研究为什么会有这种现象。调查发现， 住房开发破坏了帝王蝶的大部分栖息地，导致帝王蝶数量减少，但“帝王蝶驿站”可以缓解这一现象，于 是，作者和祖母决定建立他们自己的“帝王蝶驿站二1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“第二天，娜娜把这个想法介绍给了她的花园俱乐部，我和朋友们聊了聊。”可知，第 一段可描写作者和祖母如何建立他们自己的“帝王蝶驿站”。由第二段首句内容“我和娜娜创建了一个博客，并经常更新社区的努力。”可知，第二段可描写作者和祖 母的努力获得收获，他们再次看到了大量的帝王蝶。2 .续写线索：我们的努力努力开始奏效少量帝王蝶出现全国各地的支持大量帝王蝶出现 明白了“眼见为实”3 .词汇激活行为类 .开始做某事：start to do sth./begin to do sth. .说月艮：convince/persuade .联系某人：contact sb./get in touch with sb.情绪类 .愉快：happiness/pleasure .令人惊叹的：spectacular/amazing高分句型 1. As spring turned into summer, we found our efforts started to work!（由 As 引导的时间状语从 句）高分句型 2. Now I know what it means to stand in an orange cloud of monarchs.（由 what 引导的宾语从句）【模拟题31 （2022湖北荆州中学三模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节和给定段落开头语进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。When I was six years old, I visited my grandfather farm in Kansas and he sent me into the woods to gather pecans （胡桃）for us to enjoy later. The pecans were about the size of a man's thumbnail and just about the tastiest snack I'd ever had.However, pecan picking was really tiring and my little bucket was only half full after working hard for a long time. I thought I wouldn't let Grandpa down. Just then something caught my eye. A large brown squirrel was a few feet away. I watched as he picked up a pecan, hurried to a tree, jumped up to the trunk and disappeared in a large hole. A moment later the squirrel popped back out and climbed down to the ground to pick up another nut. Once again, he took the pecan back to his hiding place inside the hollow of the tree.Not so secret anymore, I thought. I dashed over to the tree and looked into the hole. It was filled with pecans! Golden pecans were right there for taking. This was my chance. Handful by handful, I scooped all of those pecans into my bucket. Now it was almost full! I was so proud of myself that I couldn't wait to show Grandpa all the pecans.I ran back and shouted, "Look at all the pecans!” He looked into the bucket and asked, “Well, well, how did you find so many? I told him how I'd followed the squirrel and taken the pecans from his hiding place.Grandpa congratulated me on how smart I'd been in observing the squirrel and his habits. Then he did something that surprised me. He handed the bucket back to me and put his arm gently around my shoulders. 注意：L续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:“That squirrel worked very hard to gather his winter supply of fbod J he said.Paragraph 2:I picked up that little bucket full of pecans and carried it back to the tree.参考答案：“That squirrel worked very hard to gather his winter supply of fdodj he said. "Now that all of his pecans are one, don't you think that little squirrel will be hungry when it gets cold?” Grandpa asked me. "I didn't think about that J I murmured with shame, blood rushing to my face. Grandpa told me seriously that a good man should never take advantage of someone else's hard work, even the squirrels. I drooped my head, feeling as hollow as that old tree.The image of that starving squirrel wouldn't leave my mind. There was only one thing I could do.I picked up that little bucket full of pecans and carried it back to the tree. Lifting the bucket up, T poured all of the nuts back into the hole, refilling it with not only all of the squirrel's pecans but also the ones I had collected on my own. I breathed a sigh of relief and returned home with the empty bucket. I didn't eat any of the sweet pecans that night, but I had something much more filling, which was the satisfaction of knowing I had done just the right thing.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者六岁那年去爷爷农场采摘胡桃发生的事情。在采摘的过程 中，作者发现了一只松鼠，它的窝内储存了很多胡桃。当作者把松鼠的胡桃全部拿走展示给爷爷的时 候，爷爷的话让作者明白到：一个好人永远不应该占别人的便宜，即使是松鼠。1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“爷爷说，那只松鼠非常努力地收集冬天的食物。”可知，第一段可描写爷爷责备了作 者，表达作者羞愧的情绪，同时也要阐述爷爷给作者讲述的道理：一个好人永远不应该占别人的便宜， 即使是松鼠。由第二.段首句内容“我捡起那一小桶山核桃，把它带回树上。”可知，第二段可描写作者将山核桃还给松 鼠，其中可以对动作和情绪变化进行描述。同时还可以表述：虽然作者在晚间并没有食用任何食物，但 是精神上和心灵上的收获远比食物的带来的满足更富足，即上升到文章的主旨，阐述作者的感悟。2 .续写线索：爷爷讲道理我的羞愧返还核桃收获感悟3 .词汇激活 行为类©.起走路： walk together/accompany him/keep him company.回家：go back home/return home收集：gather/collect情绪类.难过：disappointed/upset/depressed/frustrated.积极：positive attitude/act positively高分句型1. I murmured with shame, blood rushing to my face.（运用了独立主格结构作伴随状语）高分句型 2. I had something much more filling, which was the satisfaction of knowing I had done just the right thing.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）高分句型 3. Lifting the bucket up, I poured all of the nuts back into the hole.（使用现在分词作伴随状语）【模拟题4 （2022湖南师大附中三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。My daughter and I were fans of Mister Rogers "Neighborhood, an educational children's television series that was created and hosted by Fred Rogers, more commonly known as Mister Rogers.Around my daughter's second birthday, I had a Mister Rogers-inspired idea. Why not invite one key person in my daughter's world to dinner each month? The local children's librarian could visit one evening, and perhaps the borough mayor （区长）could drop by a few weeks later.But I wanted to start at the top.“Let's invite Mister Rogers himself, “ I said to my wife. "After all, he lives just a few neighborhoods away. I bet he'd come.She looked at me as if I wanted to invite the President. "You really think Mister Rogers would come to our house for dinner? Fat chance.Undeterred （不气馁的）,I sent a letter to Mister Rogers that fall, telling him of my newfound delight in his show and my idea for inviting neighborhood people over to talk about their lives, and asking him