新高考读后续写专题归类之 旅行经历----高考英语二轮复习写作专项.docx

1 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Adventures Through the GorgeWe put the raft in the calm,cold water.I looked down.The water was like a mirror.lt was a foggy morning,so I could barely make out what was down the river.When we took our places in the raft,I was in the back with my dad right across from me.Our tour guide was telling us the basics of rafting,and it seemed she was patronizing us!I was terrified.Since I was in the back,I was sure I would be the one to fall out.But I have always been an optimist,so I thought it would turn out okay.Then I looked up and saw a big,gray cloud.I looked down at the river,and it started to get louder and closer to us;soon raindrops pelted us.Once we moved out of the rain,the clouds faded away,and the sun was shining down on us for the rest of the day.As I looked around,! saw the monstrous,green trees standing over me.lt was beautiful.As we moved farther down the river,! heard the water flowing gracefully.When we moved deeper into the gorge,it got louder and louder.This was our first rapids.lt seemed that we were approaching the rapids slowly,but we were at the top of the rapids in the blink of an eye.lt felt like time frozen.I was so excited and nervous;! thought I was going to die.lt was a bumpy ride down.Getting splashed with water,we raced up and down the rocks.There was not a patch of dry skin on us by the time we hit the bottom.After we got through the rapids,! was so excited!Going down made me feel I could do anything.Our tour guide told us we were going to approach Category V rapids.lt was more intense than the Category I rapids,and I got a little more nervous.lt took us a little while to get to the rapids because we had to go down a long river.We were allowed to jump off the raft and swim down the river until we had to get back in. 注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:About three minutes later,the Category V was coming. At this point we had to change our caps, coats, gloves and trousers for T-shirts and shorts.In the early evening we always stop make camp. We put up tent and then we eat. After supper Wang Wei put her head down on her pillow and went to sleep but I stayed awake. At midnight the sky became clearer and the stars grew brighter. It was so quiet. There was almost no wind-only the flames of our fire for company. 注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。As I lay beneath the stars I thought about how far we had already traveled.We will reach Dali in Yunnan Province soon, where our cousins Dao Wei and Yu Hang will join us. We can hardly wait to see them!8阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。My family and I go to the Big Island of Hawaii in the United States every year. Each year, we do the same things-spend time at the beaches, surfing and fishing. On this trip, however, my family got tired of this holiday style and wanted to do something different. We learned from a local that there was a hot spring on the island called the Boiling Pots. Without doing any research, we decided to set off on an adventure to that spot.We drove to the destination, but were surprised to find that the area was closed off by a fence （栅栏）.Reading the sign placed in front of the gate, we found out it was, in fact, a forbidden area that lay at the bottom of the mountain. And we were on the mountaintop. Seemingly out of nowhere, a strange man came up to us. He told us he would go to the Boiling Pots and that he would show us the way down there if we would just jump over the fence and follow him. After some discussion, my family, 8 members, followed the man past the fence.The npath" was a slope （斜坡）covered in mud and high grass. Several times, our members fell but nobody gave up and turned back because it seemed an amazing adventure.After about one hour's walk, we arrived at the bottom finally, but a large river stopped us. The strange man went to borrow a boat from his friend living nearby. We stood on the bank, waiting for him and joking that we could swim across the river.Just then, I heard the voice of my father screaming at us to move. I looked up to the sky and saw a large tree falling towards us. I ran forward, pushing the people in front of me. I fell to the ground, hearing a loud sound of the tree hitting the ground, along with pieces of branches surrounding us. 注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为15。左右；.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:In a second, all went quietParagraph 2:When we had no idea what to do, the strange man came back.1【参考范文】About three minutes later,the Category V was cominq.The raft raced down the rapids.Water was splashing on the rocks,letting out louder noise.Screaming all the way down,I saw white water all over.I was so nervous because there were five big solitary rocks sticking out.If a little careless,we might hit one and get turned upside down.In the blink of an eye,we turned around the last huge rock,entering a small calm ride.When we settled at the bottom,! wanted to go back up and do it all again.After racing! down oil of the rapids,I was no longer scared.“What did you think about that Category V rapids?” my dad asked/i was super nervous at first.But when we hit the bottom,1 wanted to do it once more.” “Would you say you become more confident of yourself?” he continued/'YesJ would say I become much more confident of myself." I smiled.We walked towards our campsite.2【参考范文】The bear suddenly stood up in a threatening: wny. Meanwhile, Colin threw the sausages in his backpack towards the bear, hoping the flavor would attract it. Unfortunately, the bear rushed to him. Colin was pushed to the ground and bit in the left leg. “Ah!” he screamed with the unbearable pain. Blood flowing out, Colin suddenly remembered the knife in his pocket. He stabbed the bear's neck as fast and strong as possible. The bear roared with pain and ran away. Losing much blood, Colin lost his consciousness afterwards.After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself. He found himself surrounded by the logging workers in the camp. He was being cared for by a doctor. It was Vito who saved Colin. When he drove back, he spotted the bleeding bear and sensed that something terrible must have happened. With the blue ribbons leading his way, he finally found Colin. “You are so lucky, Colin.Without being noticed, you could have been killed for loss of blood. God help those who help themselves.said the doctor.3【参考范文】For th。moment she was determined to start our journoy. About 200 yards into the forest, the trail began to climb a steep slope. I pointed out some rarely-seen trees and flowering plants, which I explained were endangered species. She didn't share my enthusiasm. She was thirsty, tired, sweaty and bored. I handed her the water bottle as she sat on a fallen log and took a break. "You know, I think we9 re almost to the top J I told her. "You already said that three times, and we're not there yet." she replied. She grumbled another complain as we continued on. She might not have been happy, but at least I was proud that she had the determination not to quit before we reached the top.A while Inter we did make it to the top. Jannie looked up, noticing we were no longer under the trees. When she stopped, looked around and saw where we were, her jaw dropped, her eyes opened wide and she shouted: "Oh, I don't believe it. We're on top of the world. Ifs awesome!” A refreshing breeze brushed the mountaintop, not a cloud was in the sky and miles and miles of trees and lakes spread out below us. We sat on a large rock and took it in the view, while eating our sandwiches and pointing out islands and roads and, of course, the cottage where we were staying. It had taken us almost an hour to make the climb, but it was worth it.4【参考范文】Oh my goodness! The bookstore! The very one I'd so badly wanted to find on our very first day in Lisbon. I took lots of photos of it with my phone in amazement. My delight must have been noticeable because one of the guys standing outside the store started telling me that it's the smallest bookshop in the world! He was the owner of the book store. He led us inside the bookshop, which was no bigger than a walk-in closet. There was a desk at one end and shelves lined with books all round.Soon, it was time for us to say goodbye. I couldn't stop smiling. We hadn't just visited the smallest bookstore in Lisbon. We'd met the owner and taken a tour inside! If we hadn't decided to visit the flea market at the last minute, if I hadn't insisted we turn right, if we hadn't gotten lost.That moment in Lisbon wasn't just a coincidence to me. It was a reminder that when you lose your way, God will still lead you exactly where you need to be.5【参考范文】They sat quietly, my sister praying calmly and her husband getting anxious. They waited and waited. It seemed hopeless because no help came. They were feeling desperate when a man walking toward them. After knowing what happened, the man said he was a car technician who had closed his garage late and was returning home. He offered to check the car. Soon he found the problem. The car was repaired and he was ready to go. My sister and her husband felt grateful and thanked him.When my sister offered some monetary reward, the mae refused. He said, “I usually took another shorter route, but today I happened to walk on this road/9 After being directed by the helpful mechanic, they reached their hotel safely. They felt happy and grateful. They decided that from then on they would pass on the kindness because they knew that it's a beautiful circle. The person you helped is much better off now and you have raised your self-esteem, felt happier and more confident.6【参考范文】We were happy to see it all still packed, and hoped it would be packed forever. However, things came to its turning point. Mom lost Dad in the gas station when we were sleeping. Whafs more,as the dark approached, we met the same trouble again. Fearful as Mom was, she decided to camp near the road waiting for Dad. The wind cried widely like a monster. Tears took control of us. Mom embraced us tightly singing a smooth song, which really relaxed us. We didn't met Dad in the last few days, but we felt comfortable staying with MomThe tent bacame a close friennd then. Every time we camped, Mom would read a book or sing a soft song. The warmth of her arms never faded away in my memory. Though she was forgetful, laugher accompanied us along the way. We finally met poor Dad in our destination.This trip made me realize that love may have many ways, but it can always warm people in the dark.7【参考范文】As I lay beneath the stars I thouqht about how far we had already travelled.How many unforgettable experiences have we had.I turned to look at Wang Wei,my good friend,who was sleeping at the moment.Along the way no matter what difficulties we meet,she will be brave to rush ahead.In her dream she must still be riding her bike. It's amazing,the time of day seems to go through four seasons.! was too excited to sleep.We will reach Dali in Yunnan Province soon,where our cousins Dao Wei and Yu Hang will join us,We can hardly wait to see them.we haven't seen each other for a long time.I guess the first thing is to eat Yunnan snacks with them when I get there.Then we will plan the road map of our trip there.We love nature and hiking ,and we plan to go to Erhai to experience the local flavor.Our country is so vast ,and it's wonderful that I have so many places to see so much knowledge to learn.8【参考范文】In a second all went quiet. I slowly qot up, lookine around to see if anyone was hurt. However, one person did it faster than me. It was my father. He rushed to us, asking us, “Is everyone OK?n His voice was full of anxiety and love. Luckily, all were safe, except my little sister who had injured her left knee. We all surrounded her to check whether she could walk normally. She tried to stand up but failed because of the ache.When we had no idea what to do, the strange man came back. He said that the moment he heard the loud sound, he returned immediately. Seeing what we had experienced, he said sorry to us again and again, and told us the dangerous situation could be the reason why the area was a forbidden one. We had to give up our plan to the hot spring. With the strange man's help, we made a little "bed" with the branches, and carried my little sister back finally. What an adventure!Paragraph 2:After racing down all of the rapids,! was no longer scared.2阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。In July 2019, to celebrate his 45th birthday, Colin Dowler booked off a week from his job as a maintenance manager for the Vancouver Island Health Authority. He planned to spend two days on his own, finding a route he would eventually use to climb Mount Doggie Dowler.His wife Jenifer didn't like the sound of her husband's latest plan. She was used to Dowler going on adventures by himself, but this time he*d boat to an unknown bay, bike an unpopulated road , hike through grizzly bear country, and camp overnights alone. There was too much room for disaster.The night before his journey Colin packed the necessities. He filled the remaining pockets of his bag with a handheld GPS, hiking poles, his homemade sausage, and a few other essentials. Instead of his usual Swiss Army knife, he took a three-inch stainless steel pocket knife given to him by his dad.The weather that Sunday, July 28 was nice. Colin pulled his car into the Campbell River port and quickly launched and set off in his motorboat with a mountain bike on board. About eight o'clock in the morning, he arrived at Ramsay Arm, and found a spot to tie the boat near a logging （伐木）camp where he chatted with some logging workers.One of the workers , Vito, gave him a ride in his truck until the forest got too thick. Colin took off his bike and backpack from the truck and started his hiking and route searching. In order not to lose the way back, he marked his trail with blue ribbons （布条）.As he made his seven-kilometer marker, he came around a bend and suddenly put on the brakesa dirty grizzly bear stood right in the middle of the narrow road, 30 meters away. Colin calculated his chances of turning around for a quick escape, but the bear could easily catch up and stop him before he picked up speed. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The bear suddenly stood up in a threatening way.After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself.3阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。This past summer, I joined my sistefs family for their annual Adirondack vacation in a rented cottage on a lake, the same place my family has stayed since I was a little kid. There are plenty of activities to keep everyone busy: swimming, fishing and sand castle building on the beach.By the third day, I had noticed that my ten-year-old niece, Jannie, had spent most of her time watching cable TV and browsing through the gift shops in town. Not exactly the wilderness experience I remembere