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考点45读后续写10高分开头技15 （原卷版）【命题解读】一个好的故事开头就好比是一个带着香味十足的诱饵，诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地看完。而 一个拙劣的故事开头，定会让读者大倒胃口，恢恢欲睡。俗话说：“well begun is half done! ”（好的 开头就成功了一半）。可见，写好一个好故事的好开头是多么的重要。那么到底在时间紧迫的考场 上如何写出靓丽的开头呢？【思维导图】我们先来看两个例句：Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass他小心翼翼地踩过了所有的碎玻璃。JoyfuHy , he skipped up the street他很高兴地跳过了街道。这里的carefully和joyfully把后面的两个动作“step踩”和“skip跳”描写的更加细致和生动。我们来看2016年高考真题。故事大致是这样的：夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，迷路在树林 里，直升飞机来了几次救援但没有看见她，她感到很失望。第一段开头的提示句是：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.意思是：没有直升机来了，天又黑了。同学们，可以想一想，我们该怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们来看看下面的 写法: the only family she had known. In May of 2010, Bethany was placed at Helping Hand Home for Children's Residential Treatment Center, where her journey to returning to normal finally began. With the patience, support, and guidance of the Helping Hand Home staff, Bethany developed healthy, appropriate ways to express her emotions. She was taught to respect herself, and she learned that it was okay to trust others.When Bethany was introduced to the Lansing family in June of 2012, the meeting did not go as smoothly as everyone hoped. Bethany's insecurities resurfaced due to the suffering she experienced at such a young age, and she refused to talk or even look at the Lansings at their first meeting.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。But the Lansing family had no intention to give up.Later, Bethany experienced a lot of exciting things.Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest.立亥U, 一片黑暗笼罩着森林。 这里就用了：时间副词immediately衔接+环境描写，烘托了森林里迷路的紧张气氛。形容词短语开头我们先看两个例句：Curious to know what was inside, he tiptoed into the dark cave.他好奇地想知道里面是什么，踮着脚尖走 进了黑暗的洞穴。这里的“Curious to know what was inside,很想知道里面有什么东西”就是形容词短语，表明他进洞穴的原 因。相当于： He was curious to know what was inside, and he tiptoed into the dark cave.Unable to say a word, he was rooted to the spot.一句话也说不出来，他就楞在了原地。这里的“unable to say a word”也是一个形容词短语，表现了“楞在原地”这个动作伴随动作：说不出一个字。我们来看2018年高考真题，讲的是爸爸带儿子去朋友家农场游玩而迷路的故事。第一段开头给的提示 句是：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.突然，一只小兔子跳到了 我的马前。怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写：Afraid that I miqht hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse. 意思 是：我害怕我会伤害这个可爱的小生物，我自动发出一声喊叫来阻止我的马。这里用情绪形容词+从句的 形式，很好体现了后一个动作“喊叫cry”的原因。我们来看这篇文章的第二段开头：文章给的提示句是：We had no idea where we were and it got dark.我们不知道自己在哪里，天变黑了。怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写：Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back.我又累又饿，想知道我们能不能找到回 去的路。这里用情绪形容词+从句的形式,很好体现了后一个动作伴随的情况：又累又饿！适W非谓语开头先看这个例句：Lookinq around him cautiously, he slipped into the room and softly closed the door.他小心翼翼地环顾四周， 溜进了房间，轻轻地关上门。这里的“Looking around him cautiously”意思是：小心翼翼地环顾四周，是一个非谓语动词短语。我们来看2016年高考真题第一段开头，刚才提到过，讲了妻子在森林里迷路的故事。文章给的提示句是：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.但是没有直升机来了，天又 黑了。刚才我们用副词开头写了一个句子。现在我们用非谓语开头，怎么写呢？（停顿3秒钟）我 们可以这么写：Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another niqht.简感到失望，不得不再呆一夜。本句中的开 头，用了 doing的形式,即feeling disappointed感到失望。我们再来看2016年10月高考真题第二段开头：文章给的提示句是：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.简醒来的时候天已经亮了。怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写：Feeling refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.她感到神清气爽，继续沿着小 溪散步，寻找出去的路。这里用feeling refreshed的形式，很好体现了后一个动作“walk"的伴随状态。对话或独白开头先看一个例句：“Let's see who gets there first!” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.“让我们看看谁先到那里去！ "瑞秋一边叫着，一边飞快地蹬着车从珍妮身边冲过去。类似的写法，我们来看2017年高考真题，文章主要讲的是作者和朋友一起骑车游玩，途中遇狼的 故事。第一段开头文章给的提示句是：The car abruptly stopped in front of him.汽车突然停在他面 刖。怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写："Get into the car." Paul shouted at Mac.“上 车！ ”保罗对麦克喊道。三&背景描写我们来看2017年高考真题，文章讲了作者与健忘的妈妈一块去旅游的故事。第二段开头的提示语是这样的：We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way （我 们开车穿过了几个州，沿途看到了很多好风景。）怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写：I looked out of the car window, winding rivers, lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys, holding me entirely in their fascination.我望着车窗外，蜿蜒的河流，高耸的山脉，阳光明媚的海滩和深邃的山谷，完全吸引了我的注意力。这里用“视觉+环境描写+拟人”的写作手法，也成功地抓住了读者的注意力！行为描写Furry started wagging his tail and ninning around in circles when he saw his master taking a leash out from the drawer. Furry was all ready for his evening walk.当他看到他的主人从抽屉里拿出一条皮带时，Furry开始摇，绕着圈跑。Furry准备好了晚上的散 步。一连串有关Furry的动作链，像放电影一样，印刻在读者的大脑中。为后面情节发展做好了铺 垫。我们来看2017年高考真，仍然是作者与健忘妈妈一块去旅游的故事。文章的第段的提示句是：The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.（第二天， 我们想起了我们带来的那个全新的帐篷。）怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写：Dad exchanged a glance with me. Why not camp to satisfy Mom? 爸爸和我相互看了一眼。为什 么不露营来满足妈妈？这里就用到了动作描写十问句衔接。很好勾起了读者的兴趣。）改拟检吗【模拟题11 （2022.江苏南京模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数为150 左右。In 2000, when I was around seven years old, all my family were coming back from a T-ball game, which was our usual weekend adventure, but unlike every other weekend, a surprise was waiting for us in our driveway一two adult geese and a small goose. Obviously startled by our return, the adults flew away in panic, with their baby, too young to fly, left in place, tiny and delicate.Hours passed one after another, and night eventually fell. However, with it also came a deep chill and a fear of watchful animals. It was apparent that the gosling needed protection, warmth, and food to make it to the morning, so we had to help it, and we brought him onto our back yard.We all pretty much slept with one eye open till morning came. And then another morning. And still another. Each morning, we would try to drive the goose away to his parents, who kept coming back to our yard. He wouldn't go to them, though, and neither would they come close enough to claim him. We kept this up for five days, but no luck. Realizing the young goose had clearly decided we were his family by then, we had to give him a name, calling the little guy Peeper, because he would often follow us around the yard making a peeping（唧唧叫） noise, nonstop. Besides, we decided that Peeper was a boy. I don't know why; it just felt right.A year passed and we settled into a routine. Peeper slept on our back yard each night and, in typical goose fashion, used it as a latrine（公共厕所）.My dad would spray off all the goose droppings daily. Part of this ceremony included Dad throwing Peeper up into the air so he could flap its wings and flew a loop（H） around the house, and then came back again once the porch was clean.Days turned into weeks, and weeks turned into months.Paragraph 1:Before we knew it, the little thing had grown into a big bird with two powerful wins.Paragraph 2:It came as a total surprise to me when, in 2020, an adult goose made his way back to my family home.【模拟题2 （2022广东佛山一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Daniel got a job as a delivery man to work his way through college. His parents couldn't save up all the money he needed to get into law school, so since he was 15, he would take summer jobs and find some other jobs between studies to earn extra cash.The boy was determined and every day he would wake up at 5 a.m., summer or winter, riding on his old bike to deliver parcels. It wasn't an easy job, especially during winter. Besides that, his old bike was slow, making things harder. But that wasn't a problem for Daniel.DaniePs schedule was always the same every day and people in the neighborhood already knew him.He called them by their names, and they would often wave and greet him as he passed.It was a normal day and Daniel was delivering parcels as usual. "Morning, Daniel! Check out my brand-new mountain bike!” called out a man whose home Daniel visited frequently. "Morning, Mr. Warren! Thafs a really fancy bike!” Daniel screamed back at him as he rode towards his first delivery. He couldn't help imagining what it would feel like to own a bike like the one Mr. Warren had just shown him. "My deliveries would double with that” he thought longingly.Suddenly, Daniel lost balance and fell on the road. He got up and leaned the bike against the wall to see what had happened. He found a nail stuck in the back tire （轮月台）and he unluckily had a flat tire.As he turned around and tried to think of what to do, he saw something unusual. A strange man Daniel had never seen before furtively （鬼鬼祟祟地）looked around and placed a package under his jacket. "Hey!" Daniel shouted at the man. “Hey there! What are you doing? That's not yours!” The man heard Daniel and started to run as fast as he could.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右：2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。After having a look at his bike's flat tire, Daniel quickly started to run after the man.Mr. Warren arrived on his new bike, and then helped pin （按住）the thief down.【模拟题31 （2022.江苏.南京市第一中学二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。At eleven years old during my summer holiday, my main concern was money. I wanted to buy the new must- have thing my classmates had. I already had a 'job" as a sales representative with a kids-based sales company, and I sold wrapping paper and greeting cards with the best of them. On my bedroom floor, I arranged the bills and change from my purse to see what I had. I wished it would multiply before my eyes, but of course it didn't. I went to my mom. "Mom, I need more money," I said, leaning against the kitchen counter while she cooked dinner.” What else can kids do for a job around here?” Mom responded with a smile, "Okay, let me ask around/9The next day, she had an answer “Your grandmother will pay you to help her deliver lunch each day to the elderly." Yes! 1 pumped my fist into the air. I couldn't wait to start my new job on Monday after school dismissed for the summer.When my grandmother picked me up, I thanked her for the job and started asking the job. "It's simple. We pick up a large container full of hot meals in a nearby town and then we go on our delivery route/ she answered.We arrived at the pick-up kitchen and got dozens of little shiny silver boxes with white lids that were hot. After our load was arranged in the backseat, my grandmother drove us to our first stop: a small white house. I took a meal and a small box of milk from the back and walked beside my grandmother to the front gate. She opened it and nodded to me to go in. I walked along the cracked walkway. Tall grass tickled （使发痒）my ankles.Did someone really live here? I couldn't imagine that. The house didn't look nice, but I kept going. In front of the door leading to the enclosed front doorway, I paused, and my grandmother called out, "Mrs. Hershel, we've brought you some lunch.” 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The reply in a low voice came from my left, "Come on in.”On the road home, my grandmother said J For some of them, we're the only person they see and a kind word and a smile go a long way.”【模拟题4 （2022.广东广东.一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Probably, most of you had the feeling before, at least once-you had been waiting for a long time, yet being afraid of getting. It was exactly my state of mind before the first day at college. I had been working hard to pass the necessary tests and have my application to the undergraduate programme in management approved. And when the time had come for me to visit the college for the first day of the study,I couldn't sleep all night because of being anxious about how to look good physically in front of the whole new world I was about to enter.However,the positive attitude and readiness to accept support from others helped a lot in a new environment.It was Monday morning. Being too excited to sleep the night before, I came to the college half an hour earlier for the first lecture and was walking nervously through the hallway. About 15 minutes after I came, the hallway started to be full of students. Professors who walked on their business probably didn't pay attention to me. I knew which hall to go to and had already checked that it was open. However,! was hesitant to enter the hall and sit there alone. People were moving around me as if they hadn't seen me. I felt disappointed with the fact that I had nobody to talk to in the new and seemingly unfriendly place.Suddenly,a well-dressed man who seemed to be in his late twenties approached me. He introduced himself as Mathews and asked whether I was lost and whether he could help me with anything.In that situation,! realized it was very kind of him and that he was exactly the person I wanted to ask in my thoughts a minute before, but then I was too nervous for a friendly chat. As a result, instead of welcoming the opportunity to make the first acquaintance （相识）,I told the man to mind his business and leave me alone since I was an adult capable of finding my class without anybody's assistance. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Luckily,the man didn*t seem to be angry.Professor Mathews turned out to be an excellent speaker and the lecture went really well.【模拟题5 （2022.辽宁东北育才学校一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Two fast friends were Willie and his little dog Bounce. Willie could never think of taking a walk without Bounce. Cake and play were equally shared between them. Willie taught his dog many cunning tricks, and often said that Bounce could do almost anything in the world but talk. Then on a bright summer afternoon, Willie had strolled with Bounce down to the river, which was not more than two blocks from his father storeMr. Brown's store.Willie began to throw stones into the water, and to watch ripples as they made one circle after another. Bounce lay on the grass, watching the flies buzzing around his nose, and catching any that came too near.There were some logs floating in the river near the bank. Willie jumped upon one of them to see if he could throw a stone across the river. He drew back, sent the stone with all strength, just as it left his hand, the log turned and he fell into the water. He was frightened, for he did not know how to swim, and there was no one to hear, though he called as loud as he could for help.If he had been a big water dog, he could have jumped in and brought his master out. 注意：L续写词数应为150左右；He ran up and down the bank two or three times, barking, looking first at Willie and then around.Finally, the father came to the river.【模拟题6 （2022江苏盐城一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成篇完整的短文。December 5, 2012, was a very special day for Josephine and Scott Lansing, as it marked the fourth adoption for the Lansings.When they began the journey to adopt their first daughter, Cloe, years ago, Josephine and Scott Lansing never imagined they would eventually have a house full of girls. The couple later adopted Josie in 2011 and Annabelle in 2012. For the Lansing family, adoption is about giving every child the opportunity to grow healthily in a loving home. Scott and Josephine are great advocates for each of their daughters, and they make sure each child knows how special and loved they are.In February of 2009, Bethany entered into the care of Child Protective Services due to her mother's inability to care for her and her brothers and