备战2023年高考英语一轮复习全国通用考点46 读后续写11 高频语法的运用（解析版）.docx

考点46读后续写11高频语法的运用（解析版）【命题解读】我们学习了一些读后续写中常用的词汇如果把一篇完整的续写文章比作一座房子，那么无疑词汇 就是建造这座房子的砖瓦，而我们本篇，要学习的续写高频语法就是建造这所房子所需要的水泥和钢筋。【思维导图】形容词作状语其实是同学们在高一就接触过的语法知识点，其主要功能是表达人物做某个动作的原因、 结果或者伴随状态。表原因1 . Depressed and helpless （又沮丧又无助），Eric burst into tears.2 .Curious to know what was happening inside （很想知道里面在发生什么），Eric pushed thedoor open and slipped into the house.讲解第1句中，Eric突然大哭是因为沮丧和无助，为了突出这一原因，该句使用了形容词depressed和helpless作原因状语。第2句中，Eric推开门溜进房子的原因是好奇，为了突出这一原因，该句使用了形容词结构curious to do. 作原因状语。表结果1 .Eric finally made it to the top of the mountain, hungry but excited （饥饿但去口 兴奋）.2 .Eric was encouraged by the teachefs smile, full of confidence in his plan （对计戈 U 充满 了 信心）讲解第1句中，Eric最后登上山顶时的状态是饥饿但兴奋，为了表达这一结果，该句使用After the match, the celebrity footballer walked to Rivaldo. Wearing a note of excitement, he spoke highly of Rivaldo's performance. When he learned that it was the first time Rivaldo had played in a match, he immediately invited him to play for the junior team. Rivaldo performed so well that later he went on to represent the senior team and for his country. In life, there will be many roadblocks. But you have to continue and wait. When the moment comes, grab it with both hands and fly towards your dream.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 Rivaldo从4岁开始踢足球，努力训练，即使在俱乐部呆了两 年，他也从未参加过一场比赛。直到一次慈善比赛上，Rivaldo被派上场，最终赢得了比赛，得到了足球 明星的肯定。1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“比赛开始时，Rivaldo跑得像只鹿。”可知，第一段可描写Rivaldo参加比赛并获胜 的经过。由第二段首句内容“比赛结束后，这位足球明星走向Rivaldo。”可知，第二段可描写足球明星对Rivaldo 的评价以及Rivaldo之后取得的成就。2 .续写线索：比赛开始取得胜利足球明星高度评价RivaldoRivaldo代表国家参赛感悟3 .词汇激活 行为类 开始:start/begin 控制：dominate/control 高度评价：speak highly of /think highly of 情绪类立即：immediately/instantly鼓舞：spirited / inspired高分句型 1 When he learned that it was the first time Rivaldo had played in a match, he immediately invited him to play for the junior team.（运用了 when引导状语从句和that引导宾语从句）高分句型 2 When the moment comes, grab it with both hands and fly towards your dream.（运用 了 when 弓| 导 时间状语从句）【模拟题3 （2022山东德州市教育科学研究院三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使其构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150 左右。The whole class burst out laughing as Mohi rushed into the classroom. He was a strange sight. His halfbuttoned white shirt revealed a red striped pajama （睡衣）top underneath, and instead of white school shoes, he had on a pair of bright green sandals that were two sizes too big. The physics teacher's hand froze in the middle of writing a formula on the blackboard.Mohi murmured,“Sorry, teacher,“and rushed to his seat. Mr. Tan glared at the rest of the students. The chuckles（咯咯笑）quickly died down. Mohi's classmates always looked forward to Mondays. Nine times out of ten, they would be entertained by Mohi's late arrival and his odd appearance which usually included inappropriate clothing. That day, it was the pajama top and green sandals.Mohi lived just a street away from the school. He walked to school daily. Students passing by in buses would yell his name at the same time just to see him jump and stop suddenly. When he spotted the merry crowd in the bus, he would wave good-naturedly. Although Mohi was likable, he was too lost in his own thoughts to make friends. His classmates found him amusing but they ignored him most of the time. Only Hamed, who sat next to Mohi, tried to be his friend.The following Monday, Mohi did not turn up at school. His classmates were a little disappointed but quickly forgot about him. After school, Hamed decided to walk over to Mohi's house to check on him. As he approached the gate, he could hear violin music. "Mohi must be listening to music, since he had never played music at schooLHamed thought. He called Mohi's name a few times but there was no response. The gate was not locked. Hamed let himself in. The music played on. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2 .按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As Hamed looked closely through a window, his eyes widened in surprise.When Teacher's Day came around, Hamed convinced the class to let Mohi perform.参考答案：As Hamed looked closely through a window, his eyes widened in surprise. In the middle of the living room, Mohi was playing the violin. His eyes were closed in concentration as he drew the bow over the strings expertly.He played flawlessly so much so that it sounded like a recording. Then an idea hit Hamed. It was the tradition of the school to have a concert for the teachers. Every class had to contribute an item. It was a good chance for Mohito show his talent and be accepted by his classmates. Thinking of that, Hamed left quietly.When Teacher's Day came around, Hamed convinced the class to let Mohi perform. Short of ideas, the class agreed. On the day of the concert, both the teachers and students were surprised to see the schooPs clumsiest student walking on stage with a violin. When he started to play, the audience fell silent. Jaws dropped. As the last note ended, there was a moment of silence. Then the audience erupted into thunderous applause. Mohi became a sensation and had many fans in his final year of school. Mohi and Hamed became the best of friends eventually.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了笨拙且不修边幅的Mohi一直是同学们的笑料，但好友Hamed 发现了 Mohi小提琴天赋，在Hamed举荐下，Mohi教师节音乐会上进行了表演，Mohi得到了同学们的 认可并成了轰动一时的名人。1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“Hamed透过窗户仔细看了看，惊讶地睁大了眼睛。”可知，第一段可描写Hamed发 现Mohi拉小提琴拉得完美无瑕，Hamed想出一个主意，让Mohi展示他的才华。由第二段首句内容“当教师节来临的时候，Hamed说服全班同学让Mohi表演。”可知，第二段可描写 Mohi的表演大获成功，得到同学们的认可。2,续写线索：发现秘密推荐表演技惊四座轰动一时3 .词汇激活行为类突然意识到：hit/strike/occur to展示他的才华：show his talent/demonstrate his talent开始做某事：begin to do/start to do情绪类专心/也：in concentration /intently沉默：silence /quiet高分句型 1 His eyes were closed in concentration as he drew the bow over the strings expertly.（运用 了 as 弓| 导 时间状语从句）高分句型 2 When he started to play, the audience fell silent. Jaws dropped.（运用 了 when 弓| 导时间状语从句）【模拟题4 （2022江苏省泰州市教育局模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。May 18, 1986, was the kind of beautiful, sunny day that regularly brought the Rodriguez family to Santa Catalina Island for some fishing on their nine-metre pleasure boat, the DC Too. They spent the day fishing in the Pacific Ocean, then left the island in the early evening.Soon thick fog rolled in. Louise fell into a light sleep beside her five-year-old sister, Trisha, at a table on the boat's lower deck. Their father sharp orders frightened her awake: "Get out of the boat. Ifs sinking!” Louise pushed her sister into the cold, dark water. The girls were followed by their mother, Petra Rodriguez. Both girls wore life jackets,but the adults did not. Within seconds, the boat capsized, leaving just the tip of its bow in the air.After some time, her father told them he would swim for help. Louise watched him disappear into the darkness. A while later, her mother went still. Then her sister died, too.Pisano and Strasser, both 25, were going on a fishing expedition. The fog was so thick that they couldn't even see the stern（月台尾）of the boat. They decided to try one more spot before going home. Late that afternoon, the fog cleared and the sun started shining. On their return voyage, about 11 kilometres away from Catalina Island, Pisano noticed something yellow floating in the water.Strasser steered（驾驶）the boat closer and Pisano jumped into the water. He swam toward the figure and grabbed the life jacket. Fortunately, Louise was saved and quickly sent to hospital. The little girl soon recovered, but the search fbr Louise's father, sister and mother was in vain.Louise was adopted by her aunt and uncle. She attended college, got married in 2013 and gave birth to a son. In her late 20s, Louise began to wonder about her rescuers. She even tried to find them but no luck. One day, Louise came across a magazine article featuring Pisano talking about the 1986 rescue.注意：L续写词数应为150左右；2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。Realizing Pisano was the very person she was looking for, Louise decided to find him.Louise recognized her rescuer the moment she saw Pisano.参考答案：Realizing Pisano was the very person she was looking for, Louise decided to find him. For a very long time, she had been expecting a chance to meet Pisano and Strasser personally and express her gratitude to her rescuers. Without any delay, she contacted the magazine, asking for the detailed information of Pisano. That evening, Louise finally dialed the number. When there came the voice of Pisano, Louise could feel her heart beating wildly. Though it was about 1,000 kilometers from where Pisano lived, Louise was determined to fly to meet Pisano.Louise recognized her rescuer the moment she saw Pisano, Taking a deep breath, Louise stepped forward and grasped the hands of Pisano tightly. "I'm Louise"，she said, her voice trembling with excitement and tears rolling down her cheeks. Pisano, now in his sixties, hugged Louise and patted her gently. Amid hugs, tears and surprise, Louise's dream of finding her rescuers came true and now that she'd reunited with them, she hoped to stay connected forever.【解析】本文以人物为线索，讲述了 1986年5月18日，Louise一家在出游时发生意外，唯有Louise被 外出打鱼的Pisano和Strasser救起幸存下来，后来被亲戚收养并结婚生子，在她20多岁时试图寻找当初 的救命恩人，但是没有找到，直到有一天她偶然在杂志上看到一篇Pisano谈论1986年救援的文章。1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“意识到Pisano就是她要找的人，Louise决定去找他。”可知，第一段可描写Louise 通过杂志社联系上Pisano并决定去找他。由第二段首句内容“Louise一看到Pisano就认出了她的救命恩人。”可知，第二段可描写两人的见面经 过。2 .续写线索：联系杂志社拨通Pisano的号码决心去找Pisano两人见面并拥抱感动、惊喜 3 .词汇激活 行为类联系某人：contact sb/get in touch with sb决定做某事：be determined to do sth/decide to do sth拥抱：hug/embrace情绪类感谢：express her gratitude/showing his appreciation 激动：excitement/be in storm高分句型 1. When there came the voice of Pisano, Louise could feel her heart beating wildly.（由从属连词 when引导的时间状语从句）高分句型 2. Though it was about 1,000 kilometers from where Pisano lived, Louise was determined to fly to meet Pisano.（由从属连词though引导的让步状语从句）高分句型 3. Amid hugs, tears and surprise, Louise's dream of finding her rescuers came true and now that she'd reunited with them, she hoped to stay connected forever. （now that 弓I导的原因状语从句）【模拟题5 （2022福建省福州第一中学三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Grandfather was a wise and honorable man. His house was not far from ours, and I would visit him often going home after school.No matter how rotten I had been, I could tell Grandpa anything. My secrets were safe. Whenever there was a problem, he gave me the tools to fix it. I knew I would always find the best answer from him. He always understood. He loved me.I remember a time when a bunch of us were playing baseball in the field behind Mrs. Ferguson's house. I hit one pitch just right and slam! It was a home run that soared high and away, and ended up breaking Old Lady Ferguson's kitchen window! We all ran! Walking home, my best friend, Tom, asked, “How will she ever know who did it? She's blinder than a bat!" He had a point.I was afraid that Mrs. Ferguson would stay mad at me, so I ran. I didn't know what she would do. I tried to calm down. However, my stomach was in knots. On the way home. I imagined that she was a mean witch （女巫） chasing me, and the further way I ran, the larger she grew. until finally she towered over the whole town, seeing my every move with an evil eye. Thoughts rushed through my mind. Would Mrs. Ferguson stay mad at me? Would she call police? Worse still, would she tell my parents I couldn't even imagine the disappointment on Mom and Dad's face. They were hoping I would act honestly and in a responsible wayI decided to stop by Grandpa's. I felt ashamed. I wanted to hide. I wanted to knock my head against a tree a thousand times and make the world just go away 一as if punishing myself could undo things.“I would tell everything to Grandpa J a voice inside me said.“I was wrong." I told him, with my head down. He must have known something was up by the expression on my face. He knew we had been warned many times about the dangers of playing where we shouldn't.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答Para 1: But he just listened while I continued talking.Para 2: Grandpa smiled when he knew I had figured it out.参考答案:But he just listened while I continued talking. "I was wrong. I hate myself fbr what I did”, I told him, with my head down. 1 didn't know what to do to make things right. I had been afraid that Mrs. Ferguson would stay mad at me. Finally my grandpa said, "What would you do if you were her?” After a while, I replied, "One solution is to tell her that I am sorry and offer to fix her window.”Grandpa smiled when he knew I had figured it out. "Doing what is right is not always easy,“ he said, handing me the phone am proud of you., He did not make me do it. It was always my choice. As it turned out, Mrs. Ferguson was very kind and we even became really close friends. "Admitting what you are not proud of is the hardest thing J said Grandpa. "Choosing to be honest makes others trust and respect you.【解析】这是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者在打碎了 Mrs. Ferguson的厨房玻璃后，心理挣扎着要不要向 她道歉，随后向自己的祖父需求帮助，祖父给了作者非常诚恳和耐心的指引和建议。1 .段落续写：（1）由第一段首句内容“但是，在我继续描述着事情的时候，他只是在听着”可知，该段落可以描写作者 在做错事之后的内心挣扎和祖父引导作者做正确的事。（2）由第二段首句内容“爷爷知道我已经明白了，他笑了。”可知，该段落可以描写在祖父的引导下，作 者决定做正确的事。2 .续写线索：向祖父诉说内心挣扎祖父的引导作者决定做正确的事向Mrs. Ferguson道歉3 .词汇激活行为类：继续，保持：continue/keep/maintain修理：fix/repair承认：admit/acknowledge信任：trust/believe in情绪类：害怕的：afraid/worried/scared生气的： mad/angry友善的：kind/friendly高分句型 1 I had been afraid that Mrs. Ferguson would stay mad at me. （that 引起的宾语从句）高分句型 2 "Admitting what you are not proud of is the hardest thing J said Grandpa. "Choosing to be honest makes others trust and respect you. （what 弓| 起的宾语从句）【模拟题6 （2022.山东师范大学附中模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。You know how when big things in your life aren't going well, the little things bother you more? Yet one tiny kind act that appears in the path may easily light up your whole life and give you hope again.Like many people during the pandemic, my husband, Paul, had been laid off. I was still working, but my job would likely be ending soon too. I was worried about money, Covid-19 and our future. That's when our mailbox really started getting to me.The mailbox, relic from the previous homeowners, had already been in rough shape when we moved in. The paint was faded. The metal pole holding up the box was rusted. It stood at the end of our long driveway, far enough away from our house. Every time I saw it, it just reminded me of all the problems in my life. "I wish we had a better mailbox, “I found myself thinking as I pulled out of the driveway. I probably would have forgotten all about it if it were not for the news we got one morning."Shelly just texted, “Paul said. Shelly was a neighbor and a good friend. CA girl drove her car right into the mailbox. Completely mowed it down. sighed, heart almost falling apart. "Shelly saw it happen. The driver, just a teenager, wasn't hurt, but she was really upset, “Paul added.As much as I wanted a new mailbox, getting it would be expensive. "That certainly wasn't in the budget, "I thought. I guess ifs true what they say: Be careful what you wish fbr.I went to work in