教育专题：8话题写作（八)　环境保护篇.ppt

英语英语新课标新课标（RJ)话题写作话题写作(八八)环境保护篇环境保护篇话题写作话题写作(八八)环境保护篇环境保护篇 与与环环保保相相关关的的书书面面表表达达通通常常是是先先列列举举环环境境中中出出现现的的某某一一现现象象，要要求求考考生生先先就就该该现现象象进进行行描描述述，然然后后提提出出建建议议，最最后后阐阐述述自自己己的的观观点点。主主要要涉涉及及低低碳碳生生活活、节节约约资资源源、保保护护环环境境等等。此此类类试试题题通通常常以以要要点点提提示示的的方方式式来来考考查。查。话题点睛话题点睛话题写作话题写作(八八)环境保护篇环境保护篇 1Its important for us to live a lowcarbon life to protect the environment.2The environmental pollution is more and more serious today.3Were trying to save the earth.4The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.常用表达常用表达5Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke.6To cut down air pollution,we should take the bus or subway instead of driving.7Remember to throw rubbish in the bin and keep public places clean and beautiful for everyone.8For example,you can save electricity by turning off the lights when you leave a room.话题写作话题写作(八八)环境保护篇环境保护篇从方框中选择恰当的短语，并用其正确形式填空从方框中选择恰当的短语，并用其正确形式填空cutdowninstead ofthrow awaytry ones bestride a bikein order toturn offtake action1We should _ to save water.2They must plant more trees and stop people _ them.3Dont forget _ the lights when we leave the classroom.4You mustnt _ rubbish here and there.5We can walk or _ to school.6Please go to work by bus _ driving a car.7Water is really important to us.Lets _ to save it from now on.8_ improve the environment,we should take our bags when shopping.基础写作基础写作ride a bike take action cutting;down to turn off throw away instead of try our best In order to 话题写作话题写作(八八)环境保护篇环境保护篇节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起。节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起。Li Ming 是是一个注重一个注重“低碳生活低碳生活”的中学生，假设你是他，请以的中学生，假设你是他，请以“My Lowcarbon Life”为题，写一篇为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，简单描述自词左右的短文，简单描述自己的己的“低碳生活低碳生活”。典例精析典例精析 话题写作话题写作(八八)环境保护篇环境保护篇要点：要点：1每天步行上学；每天步行上学；2离开教室时，关灯、关电扇、关电视等；离开教室时，关灯、关电扇、关电视等；3不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环使用水；不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环使用水；4不使用塑料袋；不使用塑料袋；5充分使用纸张。充分使用纸张。参考词汇：参考词汇：on foot,turn off,tap,reuse,make full use of,plastic bags 话题写作话题写作(八八)环境保护篇环境保护篇【思路点拨思路点拨】1明确主旨：节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做明确主旨：节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起；起；2写作要点：见要点提示写作要点：见要点提示15；3时态：一般现在时；时态：一般现在时；4人称：第一人称；人称：第一人称；5重点词汇和句型：重点词汇和句型：(1)fans,tap,reuse,plastic,necessary,environment,on foot,turn off,remember to do,make full use of(2)when引导的时间状语从句，引导的时间状语从句，that引导的宾语从句和引导的宾语从句和so引引导的结果状语从句导的结果状语从句(I think saving paper is necessary,so I often)，Itsadj.to do sth.话题写作话题写作(八八)环境保护篇环境保护篇【写作模板写作模板】话题写作话题写作(八八)环境保护篇环境保护篇【佳作欣赏佳作欣赏】My Lowcarbon LifeMy name is Li Ming.I am a middle school student.I go to school on foot every day.I always remember to turn off the lights,the TV and the fans when I leave the classroom.When I am not using water,I always turn off the tap.I often reuse water,for example,when I finish washing the clothes,I use the water to clean the floor.I never use plastic bags.I think saving paper is necessary,so I often make full use of paper.Its important for us to live a lowcarbon life to protect the environment.话题写作话题写作(八八)环境保护篇环境保护篇【名师点评名师点评】1频度副词频度副词(always,often,never)的使用让表达更加充分。的使用让表达更加充分。2结合要点，适当发挥，举例说明，使文章内容更加充结合要点，适当发挥，举例说明，使文章内容更加充实。实。3文章多处恰当地使用了文章多处恰当地使用了when引导的时间状语从句，结引导的时间状语从句，结果状语从句和宾语从句，从句的使用提升了文章的层次。果状语从句和宾语从句，从句的使用提升了文章的层次。话题写作话题写作(八八)环境保护篇环境保护篇环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习、生活，而我们的工作、环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习、生活，而我们的工作、生活、生产又使环境污染越来越严重生活、生产又使环境污染越来越严重如何保护我们的环如何保护我们的环境？请以境？请以“How to protect/save our environment/world？”为为题写一篇短文。题写一篇短文。提示：提示：存在问题：存在问题：1.水污染和大气污染越来越严重；水污染和大气污染越来越严重；2森林被破坏和砍伐；森林被破坏和砍伐；3白色垃圾随处可见。白色垃圾随处可见。要求：要求：如何改善如何改善/保护环境？写出保护环境？写出34个方面。个方面。词数：词数：80词左右。词左右。实战演练实战演练话题写作话题写作(八八)环境保护篇环境保护篇 How to protect/save our environment/world?The environmental pollution is more and more serious today.We nearly have no clean water to drink because of water pollution.And when trees are cut down,some animals disappear.There is more and more dirty smoke in the air.Peoples health has been greatly affected by air,noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life,its time for us to protect our world.Firstly,we shouldnt throw away rubbish everywhere.And we should recycle,reduce and reuse things,for this saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.Dont use plastic bags.Also,we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them.We hope our world will be more and more beautiful.话题写作话题写作(八八)环境保护篇环境保护篇