作文03 2021年河北卷（作文+同类作文+素材积累）-备战2022年中考英语作文+万能模板+热点素材.docx

2021年中考满分作文特快专刊作文03河北卷（河北省2021年中考英语试题）初中生活已近尾声，同学们即将步入高一级学校。请你仔细阅读下表中的内容和所给提示，从下面两 所学校中选择一所你喜欢的学校，并根据该校信息写一篇短文。NamesItems(条目)Purple SchoolOrange SchoolSchoolspublic, a long historyprivate, well-knownTeachershard-workingyoung and activeStudentsless homeworkcolorful activities提示：(1) Which school would you like to go to?2 2) Why do you choose it?注意：L短文须包括表格中你所选学校的全部信息和提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥;.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；3 .词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）I would like to go to都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的 词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。在这篇范文 中，大量使用了 it形式主语句型。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文 的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确， 词数是否符合要求等。本文是一篇材料作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。要求根据提示内 容，选择一所喜欢的学校进行写作。写作时需要注意要点齐全，必须点明喜欢的学校是哪一个并说明原 因。根据要表达的内容确定文章中使用的主要人称是第一人称,时态是一般现在时。写作中可适当发挥，可 适当运用相关连词和副词进行过渡和衔接。范文一I would like to go to Orange School.I like Orange School better because it is a private school and it is well-known in our city. There are a lot of new and modern teaching facilities. We can have access to the most advanced equipment and experience the best teaching effects. Whafs more, the teachers in Orange School are young and active. I think it is important and helpful for us to develop a good relationship with teachers. And it is good for our study. Last but not least, students there have colorful activities and I hope the school life will be wonderful there.范文二rd like to go to Purple School. Here are some reasons.First, Purple School is public and it has a long history. I think a school with a long history must be really good. Second, the teachers there are hard-working. And I think they have lots of teaching experience. Also, they often give students less homework. So I can have more free time to learn something I'm interested in. Third, Orange School is private. The teachers there are young. So they might have fewer teaching methods though they are active. Therefore, I prefer to go to Purple School and I believe I will study happily there.范文三I would like to go to Orange School. There are many reasons for choosing it. Let me introduce them to you.First of all, the reason why I prefer Orange School is that it suits me better. I am outgoing and eager to enjoy colorful school life. If I choose to go to Orange School, I can participate in a lot of activities with great passion. Besides, the teachers in Orange School are young and active. That makes it possible for me to make friends with my teachers. I am glad to build close relationship with them. Last but not least, although Orange School is a private school, it's well-known for its teaching level. So I believe I can make great progress and achieve all-round development in this school.2021年河北卷作文题题目类型跟前几年类似，均以英语问题形式提醒相关要点，与2020年作文相似的是,2020年以图表的形式给出，根据图片进行描述,2021年的写作则是根据所给表的信息进行选择，并进行适 当发挥。本题写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍学校的特点、学校 老师和学生的情况等。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。1 . What's more, the teachers in Orange School are young and active.【亮点】本句运用连词短语 "hat'smore”表增补，意为“另外;并且“，可用于替换“and”。2 .Last but not least, students there have colorful activities.【亮点】本句运用连词短语“last but not least”表列举，意为“最后. So I can have more free time to learn something I'm interested in.【亮点】本句运用定语从句,使得句子结构更紧密，使得文章句型更丰富。3 .There are many reasons for choosing it.【亮点】本句运用句型“There are many reasons for.意为"对于有很多原因”。4 .Tf I choose to go to Orange School, I can participate in a lot of activities with great passion.【亮点】本句运用“主情从现”，使用条件状语从句，使得句型结构更加丰富.5 .Besides, the teachers in Orange School are young and active.【亮点】本句运用连词"besides”，表增补，意为“另外;并且二可用于替换“and”。7,That makes it possible for me to make friends with my teachers.【亮点】本句运用句型“That makes it possible for sb. to do sth."，意为“对于某人来讲是可能的”，使得本文 句型结构更丰富。相似题为加深对英国文化理解，某英语学习小组对中英学生做了一次调查。请你根据以下调查结果，写一篇调查结果的报告。内容要点提示：中国学生英国学生性格更外向更安静校园生活学习更努力更擅长运动饮食习惯吃更多的蔬菜和水果吃更多的肉兴趣爱好30%喜欢看书；70%喜欢上网每周看四或五次电视60%喜欢踢足球；40%喜欢画画每周看一次电影要求：1 .要点齐全，可适当增加自己的看法；.词数80左右，文中不能出现自己的姓名;2 .报告的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。提示词:take part in参与Hello, everyone. Today I'd like to talk about the differences between Chinese students and English students.【参考范文】Hello, everyone. Today I'd like to talk about the differences between Chinese students and English students.In China, students are more outgoing. They study harder and have much more homework to do. In England, students are more serious and quieter. But they are better at sports and they like taking part in all kinds of parties. Whafs more, Chinese students like eating more vegetables and fruit. English students like to have more meat. As for hobbies, 30% of Chinese students like reading books. They watch TV four or five times a week. 70% of them go online on the weekend. However, 60% of English students play soccer every day. 40% of them like drawing. Most of the English students go to the cinema once a week.Though they are different, they can talk about and share something they like.【题目解析】.题干解读：文章属于材料作文，主要是介绍中英两国学生的一些不同，内容按照表格中所给的信息描 写，也可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。1 .写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称用第三人称展开描述。在介绍两国学生的性格、校园生活、饮 食习惯差异时，要使用比较级。写作时，要注意表达的顺序，适当使用连词和固定短语，表达要清楚条 理，意思连贯，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，适当使用复合句等高分句型。写完以后，注意检 查，确保语法、单词拼写和标点正确。相似题随着市场上各种电子产品的出现，电子书越来越受到了人们的欢迎。与传统纸质书相比，你是否更喜 欢电子书呢？请根据下面的内容要点，写一篇英语短文。要点：1 .传统纸质书（traditional paper book）和电子书（e-book）二者中，你更喜欢哪一个；2.你选择它的理由（请给出至少三点理由）。要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯，可以适当发挥；2.80词左右。提示词汇:prefer.to.（比起更喜欢），download （下载），store （储存）convenient （方便）。【参考范文】prefer e-books to traditional paper books.First, e-books save me money. Compared with traditional paper books, most e-books are free to download. Second, e-books save me a lot of time. Sometimes I have to spend much time looking for some books in the bookshop. However, if I get on the Internet, it'll be easier for me to find them. Third, e-books are more convenient and easier than the traditional ones to carry and keep. Finally, e-books save space.【题目解析】1、题干解读：题干中“与传统纸质书相比，你是否更喜欢电子书”说明作文必须以这个主题开展，同时需要 列出至少三点理由。2、例文点评：例文采用一段式；时态主要采用一般现在时为主；，题目表明自己观点，文章列举了四点 理由，理由详细具体，条理清晰，逻辑性强。3、高分亮点：短语：prefer.to.； compare with； a lot of； sb spend.(on)doing sth； it's + 形容词+for sb to do sth。句型：if I get on the Internet, it'll be easier for me to find them； e-books are more convenient and easier than the traditional ones to carry and keepo【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的 表达， 例如 pare with； a lot of； sb spend.(on)doing sth； it's +形容词+for sb to do sth。 以 及状语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可 适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有 无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正 确，词数是否符合要求等。相似题现代人的生活压力都很大，所以人们喜欢通过旅游来缓解压力，请围绕下列内容写一篇短文：L的人喜欢独自旅游，有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行.1 .种旅游方式的好处.2 .更喜欢哪种旅行方式，为什么？作文要求：1 .不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名.2 .语句连贯，词数80个左右.【参考范文】Now more and more people like traveling around the world. Because that can make them relax.When it comes to traveling ways, different people will offer different opinions. Some like to travel alone, but some like to travel with their friends or parents. I think traveling alone is good for enjoying more freedom. And I think traveling with others who have the same interest can share something happy with others.As for me, I prefer to travel with friends rather than travel alone. Because we can deal with the possible problems and difficulties in the journey. If you would like to travel, with Wish you to have a great trip!【题目解析】试题分析：本次作文为话题类作文，话题是旅游。认真阅读提示：1.人们喜欢通过旅游来缓解压力；2.有 的人喜欢独自旅游，有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行；3.各种旅游方式的好处；4.你更喜欢哪种旅行方式， 为什么？动笔前要认真思考，列好提纲，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓 一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，字数在80左右，不能照抄原 文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。写完以后，再读一遍，检查是否有写和语法错 误，语言是否通顺，要点是否齐全，条理是否清楚。【亮点说明】这篇文章语言规范，表达清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语言通 顺，要点齐全，字数符合要求，没有拼写和语法错误，上下文意思连贯，条理清楚。相似题有些人喜欢住在城里，有些人喜欢住在郊区，你喜欢住在哪里？请写一篇70词左右的短文，陈述你 喜欢住在那里的理由。提示词：like, live in, kind, shop, take a bus, subway, school, tall【参考范文】Some people like living in the cities. Some people enjoy living in the suburbs. And I like living in the cities. There are different kinds of shops in the cities. You can buy many things. When you go out, you can take a bus, a subway or a taxi. There are better schools in the cities than in the suburbs. The buildings in the cities are tall and nice. So I like living in the cities.【题目解析】.题干解读：题目要求写一篇议论文，要求就“愿意住城市还是郊区”这一问题陈述自己的观点。人称可使 用第一人称，时态应用一般现在时。1 .例文点评：例文开门见山，直接给出了喜欢住在城市的个人观点，然后对做出这一选择的原因进行了阐 述，列举了城市生活的便利。例文观点鲜明、逻辑严谨、表达流畅，让读者对作者态度一目了然，达到了 议论文的写作目的。2 .高分亮点：短语：live in, different kinds ofo句型：(1 ) Some people like living in the cities. (like doing sth.固定句型)(2) There are different kinds of shops in the cities. (there be 句型)(3) When you go out, you can take a bus, a subway or a taxi, (when 引导的时间状语从句) 相似题交通是每个人日常生活的一部分。有的同学喜欢骑自行车上学，有的喜欢坐公交车或坐地铁。家离学 校较近的同学比较喜欢步行，这样可以锻炼身体;住得离学校较远的同学，一般由家长开车接送。请介绍你 最喜欢的交通方式，不少于50个词。必须包含以下信息：1. Is your home near or far from your school?2. Which way of transportation do you like best?3. Why do you like it best?【参考范文】My best way of going to schoolOf all the ways of travelling, I like taking a bike best. As my home is not far from school. I always go toschool by bike.In my opinion, travelling by bike is the most convenient. You don't need to wait fbr the bus or subway, you can start and stop any time you like. Ifs also very relaxing, it won't be too tiring. IVs much more enjoyable and cheaper than any other way. You can breathe the fresh air in the morning and enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way. The most important, it's healthy and environmental-friendly.So next time, why not take a bike with with me?【题目解析】.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文，请介绍你最喜欢的交通方式，不少于50个词。必须包含以下信息:1.1s your home near or far from your school? 2. Which way of transportation do you like best? 3. Why do you like it best?1 .例文点评：例文采用第一、二人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主。适当使用了连词，注意了表达顺 序，表达有条理性，语句通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。2 .高分亮点：短语： Of all； go to school； by bike； the most convenient； be too tired； the most importanto 句型：1. In my opinion, travelling by bike is the most convenient.2. It's also very relaxing, it won't be too tiring.3. It's much more enjoyable and cheaper than any other way.4. The most important, it's healthy and environmental-friendly.【点睛】认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提 纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而 具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切