作文23 黑龙江大庆卷（作文+同类作文+素材积累）-备战2022年中考英语作文+万能模板+热点素材.docx

2021年中考满分作文特快专刊作文23黑龙江省大庆卷（黑龙江省大庆市2021年中考英语试题）2021年大庆初中升学体育考试已经过去，但却给你留下了深刻的印象。你决定向你校英文广播站投 稿，分享你的备考经历与收获。写作提示：1.测试前准备（例如：项目选择，练习过程等等）；2.测试结果；3.收获及感受。参考词汇：the solid ball （实心球）jump rope （跳绳）long jump （跳远）写作要求：1.词数80词左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）；2.写作过程中注意书写的规范和标点的正 确使用；3.文章中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；4.可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。Though the physical test in Daqing entrance examination for senior middle school was over, it left me a deep impression.旨题解1 .题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，介绍自己初中升学体育考试的经历；注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般过去时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二 段介绍测试前的准备和测试结果；第三段介绍自己的收获和感受。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。Though the physical test in Daqing entrance examination for senior middle school was over, it left me a deep impression.I did a lot of pre-test preparations to choose the most proper sports event for me. At last, I chose the solid ball, jump rope and long jump. At first, I didn't do well in jumping rope. But I didn't give up. I stuck to doing it for three minutes downstairs after school every day. It was very difficult at first, but after half a month, 1 made a little progress each time. Finally, I could reach the standard of excellence. I did well in the solid ball and long jump as well.I not only got full marks in the middle school physical education examination, but also learned the spirit of never giving up.2021年黑龙江省大庆卷中考英语书面表达为一篇材料作文，要求介绍自己初中升学体育考试的经历与 收获。近两年大庆卷中考作文题命题形式上有一定变化，由之前的命题作文逐渐过渡为应用型，例如2020 年给学弟学妹们分享学习经验，以及分享体育考试经验，更加贴近生活，这就要求学生能在日常生活中多 观察，并多练习相关话题书面表达。1 .Though the physical test in Daqing entrance examination for senior middle school was over, it left me a deep impression.【亮点】though引导让步状语从句，leave me a de叩impression：给我留下深刻的印象。2.1 stuck to doing it for three minutes downstairs after school every day.【亮点】stick to doing sth.坚持做某事。3.1 not only got full marks in the middle school physical education examination, but also learned the spirit of never giving up.【亮点】not only.but also不仅而且各地纷纷在中考中全面组织实施初中毕业生升学体育考试，并且体育成绩在学生中考成绩中占有的分量。 中考体育考试已经结束，但是我们体育的锻炼还应该继续。请你以中考体育考试备考经历写一篇短文。 写作要点提示：1）你的中考体育考试发挥的怎样？什么做得好、什么还要努力？ 2）你平时是怎样锻炼、克服困难的？ 3） 你的感受和对此的今后打算？ 写作要求：短文的内容应包含所提示的要点。语言要流畅。可围绕提示要点适当增加情节，以使短文的意思连贯；短 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名；短文的词数在90词左右。参考词汇：体育中考 senior high school entrance examination of P.E,跳绳 rope skipping 躯体前伸Body front【参考范文】Today I finished my PE test. There are four parts, they are rope skipping, body front, the long jump and the 1000m race. As a boy I had two parts. One is the long jump, and the other is the 1000m race. T did better in the 1000m race. It took me 5 minutes and 20 seconds. But I don't do well in the long jump. I only jumped 4.5 meters. I love sports. I often play football and basketball in my out-of-class activities. So I think I am pretty fit. This time the PE test is part of the Senior High School entrance test. Most of us are serious about it. I think we can make PE become one part of our life, then we can have a strong body. We can get good marks too.【考题解析】试题分析：根据本试题要求可知本文应该以第一人称书写。整篇短文分三部分：你的中考体育考试发 挥的怎样？什么做得好、什么还要努力？这一部分主要使用一般过去时态；你平时是怎样锻炼、克服困难的？这一部分主要使用一般现在时；你的感受和对此的今后打算？这一部分主要使用一般现在时。在写作 中要用准确的语言表达所给每个要点，不得遗漏任何一个。也可围绕要点适当发挥，以使短文的意思连贯。【亮点说明】本文使用了一些短语如do well in及一些复合句如：So I think I am pretty fit,及I think we can make PE become one part of our life,这些都为文章增色不少。考点：提纲作文。作为一名已参加过广州市体育中考的初三学生，你对中考体育考试也一定有自己的看法。请你为学校网站写一篇稿件，与七八年级的同学分享你的心得。内容包括：1 .你认为中考体育考试满分60分好吗？为什么？2 .你或你的同学之前在体育考试备考的具体做法。（至少两点）.呼吁七八年级的同学们重视体育锻炼，为体育中考做好准备。要求：1 .词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。3、句子结构正确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯；【参考范文】As we all know, the full marks of the P.E. test for Junior3 students are 60 points. This is good for students. We will exercise more so as to stay strong and healthy because of this policy.Take me as an example. In order to get good grades in the P.E. test, I listened to the teacher carefully in the P.E. class, and did everything as the teacher showed us. What's more, I made plans to get enough but not too much exercise, about thirty minutes every day. I also ate and rested properly to make sure that I had energy all day.My suggestions for Grade Seven and Eight students are as follows. First, you'd better pay great attention to the physical exercise. Second, don*t wait until you are in Grade 9 to begin exercising! Make good use of your timeto get ready for your P.E. exams now!【考题解析】 题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。要求针对中考体育考试和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺， 语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态综合运用一般现在时和一般过去时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到 文章当中，表达出自己的观点态度。高分亮点：短语： As we all know； so as to； What's more； make sure； pay attention to； get ready for 等。句型：I also ate and rested properly to make sure that I had energy all day. 使用 了 宾语从句。Second, don't wait until you are in Grade 9 to begin exercising! 使用 了 否定祈使句。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清文章的要求和要点；其次，理顺自己的行文思路；再次紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连 接与过渡；最后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误和标点的误用等，还要注意是否出现语法错误，有无重复 遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。据报道，由于缺乏锻炼，中学生的身体素质有所下降.这一情况已经引起社会的关注和教育部门的高度重 视。近年来，我市继续开展初中毕业生升学体育考试工作，旨在切实贯彻党的教育方针，全面提高学生身 体素质。同学们刚刚参加过初中毕业生升学体育考试，你有何感想？请你根据下面的提示和要求，写一篇 90词左右的英语短文。提示：1.锻炼身体的好处：strong, healthy, energetic.：2 .锻炼身体的方式：ball games, running, swimming.favorite sport；3 .请你谈谈对体育锻炼的看法和建议。要求：1.内容必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥；4 .开头已给出，不计人总词数；5 .语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整；Exercise one hour a day, keep illness away! As we know,【参考范文】As we know, taking sports will keep one healthy. It can help us keep strong. The more the young students exercise, the more energetic they will be. As a middle school student, I am busy with study. I have little time to take exercise, but I still do sports as often as I can. I play ball games, running, swimming and so on. My favorite sport is playing basketball. I often watch basketball matches. Whafs more, I think outdoor activities are sports, too. I also take an active part in other kinds of activities. At weekend I often go for a picnic with my family. I also like climbing mountains, flying kites , boating and so on. I enjoy colorful sports .Lefs take sports and keep ourselves healthy before it is too late.【考题解析】本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题是有关身体锻炼的内容，具体内容包括目前中学生的身体 状况和锻炼状况，提出锻炼的好处，锻炼的方式，以及个人对于体育锻炼的看法和建议，在写作时应注意 符合题意，同时应注意写作语言的准确性和连贯性。藕赢据了解，为了进一步引导中学生积极参加体育锻炼，提高身体素质，全国人大代表崔海霞建议，“将 中考的体育测试(physical education examination)由1次增加至3次，初中每学年末测试一次，中考体 育成绩由三次成绩相加得出。”作为一名参加过体育“中考”的学生，你对这样的建议持什么样的态度。请 根据写作要点提示，用英语写一篇短文表述你的观点。1 .要点提示：(1)观点明确(要么赞成，要么反对)(2)理由充分(可针对增加考试的项目和调整的次数，也可只选其一。限三条理由)；(3)给出建议(围绕你的观点提出一条合理化建议)。2 .注意事项：(1)字数：80词左右；(2)行文应连贯流畅；（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。【参考范文】In my opinion, I agree with the advice of “high school entrance examination physical education examination.It is reported that most young people are getting unhealthy. Without regular exercise, students are getting weaker and weaker. If the examination is increased from 1 to 3 times, the results are counted by adding up the three scores. Both teachers and students will undoubtedly realize great importance to physical education, and it's easy to imagine the situation that P.E. is always taken away will never be seen. Students will be healthier and have more energy in their study. It is helpful to improve students' wide ability and quality.I think every school should make a plan to train students9 interest in sports so as to improve students' physical quality.【考题解析】.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。谈谈自己对中考的体育测试次数增加这件事情的看法。1 .写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般将来时，人称主要使用第三人称。分为三段式：第一段表达 自己的观点；第二段说说自己的理由；最后一段给出建议。写作时应保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语 法和标点错误。假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Bill来邮件询问你平时体育锻炼及今年中考体育考试情况, 请你根据下面提示，给Bill回封英文邮件。提示:L谈谈今年中考体育考试分值提高到60分的意义（已给出）及体育锻炼的重要性;.你过去是如何进行体育锻炼的;3. 你将来有什么新的锻炼计划。要求:L语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；.必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥；2 .文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；.词数:80100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。Dear Bill,Thanks for your last e-mail. Fm glad to tell you that our scores of P. E. add up to 60 at the SeniorHigh SchoolEntrance Examination,which encourages us to take an active part in exercise. Look forward to your e-maiLYours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Bill,Thanks for your last e-mail. Tm glad to tell you that our scores of P. E. add up to 60 at the Senior High School Entrance Examination,which encourages us to take an active part in exercise. As you know,my favorite subject is P. E. I think doing sports is good for both my health and study. I did very well in the exam,too.In the past,! practiced carefully in each P. E. class,learning to play basketball,run and so on. On weekends I usually played ping-pong with my friends.However,! can't swim. In the coming summer vacation,r 11 learn it. During senior high school,! plan to join the swimming club. Can you give me more advice?Look forward to your e-mail.Yours,Li Hua【考题解析】 本文是一封书信，内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个 要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写， 有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【点睛】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如Thanks for；take an active part in； be goodfor； both and-； do well in； Look forward to 等； As you know,； In the past, ； However等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容 完整，是一篇不错的范文