高中英语写作课件.ppt
Basic writing I 审题审题抓要点抓要点II 要点句子化要点句子化III 句子简单化句子简单化IV 连词成句连词成句V 合并句子合并句子并并润色润色基基础写作的写作步骤：础写作的写作步骤：假设你班在举行英文辩论会，讨论广告问题。假设你班在举行英文辩论会，讨论广告问题。请根据以下提示，用请根据以下提示，用5 5个句子写一篇发言稿。个句子写一篇发言稿。现状现状 广告非常普遍，在现实生活中起重要广告非常普遍，在现实生活中起重要作用作用优点优点 能告诉人们很多新产品的信息：质能告诉人们很多新产品的信息：质量、价格；能吸引潜在量、价格；能吸引潜在(potential)(potential)消消费者的兴趣，提高销量费者的兴趣，提高销量缺点缺点 广告不真实广告不真实建议建议 不能太相信广告，买产品前要看产品不能太相信广告，买产品前要看产品I 抓要点抓要点1.现在广告非常现在广告非常普遍普遍2.广告在现实生活中广告在现实生活中起着重要作用起着重要作用3.广告能广告能告诉告诉人们很多新产品的信息：人们很多新产品的信息：质量、价格质量、价格4.广告能广告能吸引潜在消费者的兴趣吸引潜在消费者的兴趣5.广告能提高广告能提高销量销量6.广告广告不真实不真实7.我我们不能们不能太相信太相信广告广告8.我我们在买产品前要们在买产品前要看看产品产品commonplay an importan role/part in tell sb.sth.quality and prices attract potential customers interest selling/sales quantity not true checktrust too much II 要点句子化要点句子化III 句子简单化句子简单化(快速快速 写下写下所需的词汇，所需的词汇，短语，句型短语，句型)1.现在广告非常普遍现在广告非常普遍2.广告在现实生活中起着重要作用广告在现实生活中起着重要作用3.广告能告诉人们很多新产品的信息：质量、价格广告能告诉人们很多新产品的信息：质量、价格4.广告能吸引潜在消费者的兴趣广告能吸引潜在消费者的兴趣5.广告能提高销量广告能提高销量6.广告不真实广告不真实7.我们不能太相信广告我们不能太相信广告8.我们在买产品前要看产品我们在买产品前要看产品commonplay an important role/part in tell sb.sth.quality and prices attract potential customers interest selling quantity not true checktrust too much 1.Nowadays,advertisements are very common.2.Advertisements are now playing an important role in our life.3.Advertisements can tell people a lot of information about new products quality,prices.4.Advertisements can attract potential customers interest.5.Advertisements can increase the selling quantity.6.Sometimes the advertisements are not true.8.It is best to check the products before we decide to buy them.7.We shouldnt trust advertisements too much.IV 连词成句连词成句1.恰当使用连接词恰当使用连接词A、表并列：B、表转折：C、表原因:D、表结果：E、表列举：V 合并句子、润色合并句子、润色2.2.恰当使用有把握的复杂句式恰当使用有把握的复杂句式A、从句（定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句）、从句（定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句）B、倒装句、倒装句/强调句强调句C、非谓语动词、非谓语动词and,besides,also,in addition,that is whats more,moreover,while,or.but,however,yet,because,because of,for,due toso,therefore,as a result,thussuch as,for example,for instance 1.Nowadays,advertisements are very common.2.Advertisements are now playing an important role in our life.3.Advertisements can tell people a lot of information about new products quality,prices and so on.4.Advertisements can attract potential customers interest.5.They can increase the selling quantity.6.Sometimes the advertisements are not true.8.It is best to check the products before we decide to buy them.7.We shouldnt trust advertisements too much.whichnot onlybut also so，thereforeWhatmore,in addition,besides However Advertisements,which are very common in modern society,are now playing an important role in our life.They can tell people a lot of information about new products quality,prices and so on.Whats more,not only can they attract potential customers interest but also help increase the selling quantity.However,sometimes advertisements are not true,so we shouldnt trust them too much.Therefore,it is best to check the products before we decide to buy them.打造写作亮点，提升写作档次打造写作亮点，提升写作档次1.短语优先原则 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采1.Developing a good habit is also important.Developing a good habit is also_2.As the number of English learners is increasing,it is not difficult for them to understand these words inChinese contexts.As the number of English learners is _,it is not difficult for them to understand these words inChinese contexts.of importance on the increase 2.避免重复原则避免重复原则尽量避免过多的使用某一个单词，必要时尽量避免过多的使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的通一次或词组来代替选择使用其他恰当的通一次或词组来代替1.I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches.I like reading while my brother _ watching football matches.2.Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also built a library where the old playground used to be.Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also _ a library where the old playground used to be.enjoy set up 3.常见写作高级词汇必备常见写作高级词汇必备第一第一first第二第二second最后最后finally总之总之in a word但是但是but机会机会chance选择选择choice考虑考虑consider充足充足enough最终最终finally结果结果result应该应该shouldto begin with to start with in addition Whats more last but not the leastto sum up in conclusion in summary however opportunityalternative take into consideration/account adequate eventually consequencebe supposed to be expected to 3.常见写作高级词汇必备常见写作高级词汇必备理解理解understand使用使用use也，和也，和as well as厌烦厌烦be tired of忙于做忙于做be busy doing不可能不可能impossible参加参加join in丰富丰富rich因为因为because of伤心伤心 be sad在我看来在我看来 in my opinion小心谨慎小心谨慎 be carefulmake sence of figure out make use of employ in addition to apart from be bored with be fed up with be occupied in doing from my point of view as far as Im concerned be cast down on account abundant participate in out of the question be cautious
