英语作文提分技巧课件.ppt
范文赏析范文赏析Today,moreandmorestudentsgotoschoolwithmobilephones.Studentsattitudestowardsthisvaryfrompersontoperson.Thosewhosupportthissayithelpsstudentstokeepintouchwiththeirparentsandfriends.Moreover,usingmobilephonescanbefun.However,otherstudentsholdtheoppositeopinion.Theythinkthatusingmobilephonescancauseproblems.Firstly,studentswithmobilephonesatschooldonotconcentrateonstudyingduringclass,butplaygamesorsendtextmessagesinstead.Besides,itcostsalottouseamobilephone.Asforme,thereisnodenyingthatusingmobilephoneshasitsadvantages,butIdstillpreferstudentstousethemathomebecausestudyshouldcomefirst.1书面表达系列讲练书面表达系列讲练 之之 赢取高分策略赢取高分策略2NMET书面表达评分原则书面表达评分原则1、先根据文章的、先根据文章的内容内容,语言和整语言和整体感体感觉初步觉初步确定档次确定档次。第五档第五档.2125分分第四档第四档.1620分分第三档第三档.1115分分第二档第二档.610分分第一档第一档.15分分0分分3语言地道，语言地道，规范规范覆盖所有内覆盖所有内容要点容要点2、主要内容：、主要内容：内容要点；内容要点；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；上下文的连贯；上下文的连贯；语言的得体性语言的得体性应用了较多应用了较多的语法结构的语法结构和词汇和词汇有效地使有效地使用了语句用了语句间的连接间的连接成分成分43、拼写和标点拼写和标点是语言是语言准确性的一个方面，准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考际的影响程度予以考虑。虑。54、词数、词数少于少于80和和多于多于120的，从总分中减去的，从总分中减去2分。分。5、如、如书写较差书写较差，以至影，以至影响交际，将分数降低一响交际，将分数降低一个档次。个档次。6技技巧巧1.使用较高级的词汇使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉整篇文章因此而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有篇有“英语味英语味”的文章很的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式71.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.2.Weallthinkheisagreatman.3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.4.Thestudentsthereneedntpayfortheirbooks.5.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather,ourjourneywascomfortable.一、怎样使用较高级的词汇一、怎样使用较高级的词汇Weallthink highly of him.A good idea occurred to me./A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.8二二丰富的句式：丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。1.感叹句e.g.HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!Whatakindboyheis!Howdisappointedhewas!2.强调句e.g.Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.93、倒装句e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.There comesthepolicecar.Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhen theymettheyoungman.4、省略句e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.5、with短语e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.106、定语从句e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.Letscometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.7、各种名词性从句e.g.ThatswhatIshoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoeverneedshelpatpresent.118、各种状语从句e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.Themomentwereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.Solongasweworkharderatourlessons,wellcatchupsoonerorlater.DocallmebeforehandsothatIcanmeetyouattheairport.Theyhadtowaitbecausetherainwasgettingmoreandmoreheavily.12三三高考大纲中常用的高考大纲中常用的连接词连接词1.表示递进表示递进;另外，还有：whatismore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition2.表示转折关系表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary.133.表示因果关系表示因果关系因为，因此，所以:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;4.表示条件关系表示条件关系如果，只要:if;oncondition(that);aslongas除非:unless否则:orelse145.表示时间关系表示时间关系当当的时候的时候:when;while在在之后之后:after在在之前之前:before直到直到:until一一就就:assoonas后来，后来，然后然后:later;afterwards不久不久:soon近来近来:lately;recently自从自从:since从那时起从那时起:fromthenon常见的对称关系的过渡词语常见的对称关系的过渡词语1.Foronething,foranotherthing,2.Ononehand,ontheotherhand,156.表示特定的顺序关系表示特定的顺序关系首先，最主要的:aboveall其次:secondly然后:then;next最后:finally;intheend；lastbutnotleast7.换一种方法表述换一种方法表述换句话说:inotherwords;thatistosay;168.进行举例说明进行举例说明例如，比如:forinstance;forexample;like;suchas9.用于陈述事实用于陈述事实实际上:infact;actually;asamatteroffact跟你说实话:totellyouthetruth1710.对一个话题进行总结对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说:onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword；inconclusion;.Tosumup;inbrief11.其它常用到的表达其它常用到的表达1.intermsof就而言2.asfarasbeconcerned3.inmyopinion/view4.AsfarasIknow5.Asforsb,18假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“LetsRideBicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1汽车虽然便利但带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。参考词汇：低碳生活lowcarbonlife节能energysaving注意：1.词数：120词左右；2演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，且该部分不计入总词数。Goodmorning,everyone,IamLiHuafromXingguangMiddleSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“LetsRideBicycles”_19Dearclassmates,Imverygladtohavethischancetotalktoyou.ThetopicofmyspeechisLetsrideabicycle.Asisknowntoall,withtheimprovementofpeopleslivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.However,theyhavealsocausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.Howcanwesolvetheseproblemsthen?AsfarasImconcerned,ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution.Foronething,bicyclesdontneedanypetrolandtheyareenergy-saving.Foranother,bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecausetheywontgiveoffwastegas.Whatsmore,ridingbicyclesisagoodwayforustoexerciseanditisgoodforourhealth.Therefore,letstaketheresponsibilitytobuildupalow-carboncitybyridingbicycles.Comeonandjoinus!Thankyouforlistening!2020012001年春季高考作文年春季高考作文给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。Iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife.Before,wehadmanyclasseseveryday.Ihadtodoalotofhomeworkafterschool.Iwenttobedat11:30intheevening.Ihadnotimetoplay.Iwasverytired.NowIcanvisitmuseums.Icanlearncomputeranddrawing.Intheevening,IcanreadbooksandnewspapersandwatchTV.Igotobedat10:00now.1717分分21高考满分作文Imverypleasedtotellyouthechangesinmylifesince our homework has reduced.Before that,learningduringthedaywasverysimple.Havingclassanddoinghomeworkwas the only thing weshoulddo.Intheevening,wealsohadalotofhomeworktodo.Wecouldnotgotobed until11:30.Nevertheless,sincereducingthelearningload,mylifehasbecomemuch moreinteresting.Ioftenvisitmuseumsandcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesin my spare time.Intheevening,I alsohavetimetowatchTVandreadnewspapers.Ino longer stayuplate;on the contrary,Igotobedatabout10pm.In short,Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow.22书面表达常用语句书面表达常用语句1.1.书信书信 Thanksforyourlastletter.IamwritingjusttoinformyouInreplytoyourlastletter,Iamwritingtoexplainthetwoquestionsasfollows:开头Lookingforwardtoyourreply/hearingfromyou!Thanksforyourconsideration.Doremembermetoyourparents!结尾232.2.叙事叙事Itisquiteobvious/clearthat(很显然)Thereisnodoubtthat(毫无疑问)Takeasanexample.(以为例）Ononehand,ontheotherhand(一方面，另一方面)Onlyinthiswayshallwe(只有这样我们才能)Asfarasisconcerned,Iprefer(就而言，我更)Measures/Actionshouldbetakento(必须采取措施去)Forthereasonsgivenabove,Ifeelthat(鉴于以上原因，我觉得Whatthesepeoplefailtoconsideristhat(这些人没有想到的是.)Undoubtedlythereisalongwaytogobefore(毫无疑问要还有很长的路要走）24Therefore,Istronglyrecommendthat(因此，我强烈建议Allthefactsshowthat（所有的事实显示)Ilikenotonlybecausebutalsobecause(我喜欢不仅因为而且因为)Iamwritingtoyoutoinquireabout(我写信给你想询问)Iamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionwith/at(我给你写信表示我对的不满）Iapologizetoyoufor(我为向你道歉）Iamgratefultoyoufor(我为向你表示感谢）Mr.Green,mybestfriend,isteachingMr.Green,afavoriteteacherfromtheUSA,isteaching25
