专题10（书面表达读后续写） 10月月考专辑--2023届高三英语名校新题快递 原卷版.docx

2023届高三英语名校新题快递-10月月考专辑专题10书面表达读后续写原卷版浙江省强基联盟2022-2023学年高三上学期10月联考阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。When school was over, the day was fading and it started to drizzle（毛毛雨）. I stood at the school gate, with a loaded backpack on my shoulders. It was Friday again: a weekend of joy with unlimited sleeping hours and dinner courses specially made to my taste, a weekend at home. I waved goodbye to my friends as they jumped into their fathers9 warm and comfortable cars. Curiously, this gave rise to a disturbing feeling in me. It was not exactly what they called jealousy, but something like dismay（沮丧）. I knew all I could expect was an old bike Mom would ride along on, with the badly-oiled chain creaking（嘎吱作响）against the wheel to announce her arrival.Every Friday when Mom came to pick me up for the weekend, it was a moment full of great expectation and great unease. I always felt my face burning as we rode our way in and out of the numerous cars and saw my friends9 faces sticking out of the car windows. It was like stepping into a ballroom with beautifully dressed ladies and finding yourself in a smelly T-shirt.To tell you the truth, Mom is quite a headache once in a while. She just looks a homely middle-aged housewife. Being a practitioner of DIY, she knits most of my sweaters, chiefly in old styles. Whenever caught by some curious classmates asking what brand my sweaters are, I'd force a smile and reply in a half joking manner: homemade.I couldn't remember when I started to find her such an embarrassment. As a little boy, I relied on her so much. She had been working at home, cooking in the kitchen, knitting by the lamp or riding across town to buy me a book I badly needed. It had always been much fun riding with mom. But just now there seemed to be something standing between us, something that made her so strange to me and me to her.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Today she showed up in a raincoat.Out from the doghouse and down the ramp（斜坡）ran Dolly followed by four little balls of fur. The little boypressed his face against the chain link fence （篱笆）.His eyes danced with happiness. As the dogs made their way to the fence, the little boy noticed something else moving inside the doghouse.Slowly another little fur ball appeared, this one noticeably smaller. Down the ramp it rolled. Then the little pup began awkwardly shaking its body toward the others, doing its best to catch up. "I want that one,“ the little boy said, quickly pointing to the little dog .The farmer knelt （蹲）down at the boy's side and said, “Son, you don't want that puppy. He will never be able to run and play with you like these other dogs would.“Just that one." With the answer, the little boy stepped back from the fence, reached down, and began rolling up one leg of his trousers. In doing so he showed a steel brace （支架）running down both sides of his leg attaching itself to a specially made shoe. It is obvious that the poor condition of the little fur ball also apply to the little boy.注意：L续写词数应为150左右。2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Looking back up at the farmer, he said,“No charge （费用）J answered the farmer,【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个农夫要卖掉他的小狗，一个小男孩要买一只小狗。当小男孩 选好小狗后，农夫告诉他这个小狗不合适，因为小狗有残疾，永远无法像其他的狗一样和他一起跑和玩。小男孩坚持要买那只小狗，并且让农夫看了看自己同样残疾的腿。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“他抬头看着农夫说”可知，第一段可描写小男孩向农夫解释原因，农夫听后的反响。由第二段首句内容“不收费，”农夫回答说，”可知，第二段可描写农夫把小狗免费送给了小男孩， 看着小男孩和小狗在一起快乐的样子，农夫有所感悟。2,续写线索：卖小狗一一买小狗一一选中小狗一一劝说一一得知原因一一免费送小狗一一感悟.词汇激活行类抱起来:pick up /lift up问：ask / inquire情绪类期盼：look forward to / expect兴奋土也：excitedly / with excitement【点睛】高分句型 1 I feel lonely because my leg stops me from playing with other kids, T because 引导原因状语从句）高分句型 2 I do know he will need someone who understands.（运用 了 who 引导定语从句）湖南省长沙市雅礼中学2022-2023学年高三上学期月考二阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左 右。Emily White came to the world 17 years ago, with so many birth problems in her body. Some of her organs, bones and muscles were out of shape. No one expected her to survive long. She did make it but with her strange body figure, everyone could recognize her, even from a distance.In her hometown, a yearly outdoor performance was held in the school auditorium （礼堂）.It had been performed for so many years and actually had become one of the most important events of the Christmas season for many of the own's people.Many people tried out each year for it, but so many were turned away. It can only in elude the most excellent people in the field.Emily had a beautiful singing voice. Last year she went to Mrs. Owensher music teacher to ask to join in the performance. Without letting her sing, Mrs. Owens took a glance at Amy's body and said, “Child, you are just not suitable. Everyone would stare at you and that would make you uncomfortable. It would make them uncomfortable, too. nWithout singing a single note, Emily was sent back through the door of the choral （合唱的）room. Hurt and upset, she decided never to try out again. But Mrs. Owens then retired.This year, there came a new music teacher, Mr. Butler. He heard about Emily and suggested that she have a try.Emily didn't want to be rejected again, so she hesitated about it. As Emily struggled, the door was pushed open and Mr. Butler called, "Emily, you're next” Kind of nervous as she was, Emily did as Mr. Butler told her to. Mr. Butler sat by the piano to keep Emily company. When Emily finished her testing performance, she thanked Mr. Butler and knew the result would be posted on the door of the choral room the next day.Emily couldn't sleep that night. She tossed and turned in bed one thousand times. She was suffering from the feelings that she didn't fit and the great need to be accepted. By the next morning, her stomach was even in pain due to stress.Paragraph 1:Emily hurried to the choral room and anxiously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room.Paragraph 2:Finally, the day of performance came.【答案】Emily hurried to the school and nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room. The fear of being rejected came to strike again. nJeff Green, Rose Black.n she murmured as her eyes moved upward. nWow! n Emily abruptly covered her wide-opened mouth, feeling as if her heart would jump out. There, at the top of the list was posted her name. The leading singer! However, whispers around her pulled her back to earth. Just then, she felt a pat on the shoulder. It was Mr. Butler. HWe selected you for our faith in your abilities and voice. " Inspired, Emily practiced even harder for the day of performance.Finally the day for the performance came. Emily's eyes danced with excitement as she stepped on to the stage. Standing still, she heard noises among the crowd. Obviously not cheers! Emily felt nervous again and even her legs began trembling. At that moment, her eyes parked on Mr. Butler at the corner. He nodded and exchanged a determined glance with her, which timely put her heart back in place. With the music rising, Emily began her singing. Her sweet voice poured and the audience fell into an abrupt silence. When she finished, the auditorium erupted into a sea of cheers. Emily White in tears, with so many birth problems in her body, became the shiniest star!【解析】【分析】这是一篇读后续写。文章讲述了天生有很多身体缺陷但嗓音甜美的Emily被音乐老师Owens拒绝 参加选拔，从而决定不再尝试。今年新的音乐老师Butler鼓励Emily去参加选拔。【详解】续写分为两个自然段。第一段的开头是：Emily匆忙赶到合唱室，焦虑地看着合唱室门上的名单。所以可以接着写：害怕被拒绝 的恐惧再次用上心头，Emily从最后开始，默念看到的每个名字。终于她念到了自己的名字，她很兴奋， 自己是第一名。但是耳边却传来了同学们的挖苦和讥笑。还好，Butler老师这时赶过来说，是因为Emily 的实力，才选择了她。第二段的开头是：终于，表演的那天来了。所以可以接着写：Emily忐忑地走上舞台，开始认真演唱，但 听到台下的议论她开始变得紧张。这时，站在角落里的Butler老师向她投来鼓励和信任的目光。Emily受 到鼓舞，认真表演直到结束。她的表演受到了大家的肯定，礼堂爆发出雷鸣一般的掌声和欢呼声。续写时注意所写内容要符合逻辑。续写的词数应为150左右。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用 了一些主从复合句，例如：Emily abruptly covered her wide-opened mouth, feeling as if her heart would jump out.中 as if 弓 | 导表语从句；He nodded and exchanged a determined glance with her, which timely put her heart back in place.中which弓|导非限制性定语从句。2023届广东省六校高三上学期第二次联考阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Crash! The old black pickup truck in front of me stopped. I didn't. I crashed into its back breaking the fender （挡泥板）and bending the driver's door of my car. To make matters worse, it wasn't my car. It was my father. I shouldn't have been driving it, and now I had destroyed it.A farmer jumped out of the truck, slowly and carefully, and looked at the damage. I sat sobbing （抽噎），my lip bleeding where I'd bitten it. He was in a hurry to leave, but we managed to exchange names and phone numbers before he pulled out onto the highway again. I followed, knowing I dared not go home. Td be in big trouble.It was my high school graduation day. I drove to school and climbed out through the passenger door. Surveying the broken fender and the door, tears flowed down my face, which was rapidly becoming swollen. I walked into the gym and joined my classmates to prepare for the graduation party. Bad news traveled fast, and soon a teacher came to me“You'll have to go home to get dressed for the graduation sooner or later/9 she said. "Sooner would be much better and you have to tell your parents.,9I finally agreed and slowly drove home. The Death March sounded in my ears.My mother took one look at my face when I got home and screamed, "What on earth happened?I hung my head and tears rolled down my face again. "I crashed Daddy's car.”She threw up her hands in panic and rushed to the backyard where Dad was making burgers. "Stop cooking, Ted. We're not going to eat. Jean has destroyed your car.”Dad looked at her and said quietly, “Is she hurt?“No, except for biting her"Well, then, what does that have to do with eating dinner? He put a burger on a plate with the others, then walked across the yard and put his arm around me. "Let's go inside and hear all about this if you're sure you're all right. I sobbed and nodded.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The phone was ringing when we got to the back door.I graduated that evening with my family in attendance.【答案】 One Possible Version:The phone was ringing when we got to the back door. After answering the phone, my father understood what had happened. It turned out that the farmer called to ask whether I was safe or had any other injuries. Father assured him that I was safe and sound and offered to make up for the damage I caused to his truck. To our surprise, the farmer declined my father offer. Meanwhile, my mother helped treat my lip and swollen eyes with some ice. “Don't worry about the car. Your safety matters most. my father comforted me. To my great delight, they decided to accompany me to the graduation ceremony.I graduated that evening with my family in attendance. With my parent's company, I enjoyed an unforgettable and meaningful graduation ceremony. Even many years later, the laughter and sweet memory we shared together still lingered in my mind. Had it not been fbr my father unconditional love and encouragement, I would have been sunk in depression and guilt. I finished high school, growing into a loving and confident person. I was so grateful that my dad taught me what's most valuable in my life.【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者去参加高中毕业典礼的路上，开着父亲的车去学校，结果在 半路上遇到车祸，致使父亲的车被毁，但万幸的是，作者并无大碍。作者非常害怕被父亲责备，但最终受 到父亲原谅的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我们走到后门时， 铃响了。”可知，第一段可描写农民打 问作者是否安全, 并拒绝作者补偿造成的损坏的提议，并且父母决定陪作者去参加毕业典礼。由第二段首句内容“那天晚上我毕业了，我的家人都出席了。”可知，第二段可描写在父母的陪伴下， 我度过了一个难忘而有意义的毕业典礼。2 .续写线索：询问一一拒绝补偿一一抚慰一一参加毕业典礼一一回忆一一感激.词汇激活 行为类接 ：answer the phone / pick up the telephone补偿： make up for / compensate决定做某事：decide to do sth. / determine to do sth.情绪类令某人高兴的是：to one's delight / to one9s joy感谢：be grateful / show my gratitude【点睛】高分句型 1 . It turned out that the farmer called to ask whether I was safe or had any other injuries.（运 用了 that引导的主语从句和whether引导宾语从句）高分句型 2. Had it not been for my father's unconditional love and encouragement, I would have been sunk in depression and guilt.（运用了虚拟语气的倒装形式）江苏省泰州中学2022-2023学年高三上学期第一次月检阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Dad and Madison were walking through the party store, gathering decorations fbr Madison's upcoming birthday party.“But I don't want to invite Lucy Gilbert! I don't like her!“Madison, you are being unreasonable. If every girl in your class is invited to party but you, you'll feel left out. It would be a big mistake not to invite Lucy to the party.”“She never even talks to me!”Dad sighed and moved down the aisle. "Lucy is a new girl in class. She just moved here a little over a month ago. Think about how that must feel. She doesn't know one single person in the school. She left all of her to get to know everyone."No, it won't. She will probably sit in the comer and not talk to anyone. Every day at lunch she sits all by herself. She wants to eat alone!” Madison shrugged and rolled her eyes.“Madison, I'm done discussing this. You will invite every girl in your class, including Lucy Gilbert!On Saturday morning, the family blew up balloons and decorated the house cheerfully. Madison was dressed beautifully for the day, wearing her new blue dress. It was not typical of her to dress herself like this. She usually wore sports clothes because she loved to be outside riding her horse Star with a lead rope （缰绳）.Madison greeted her friends at the doorstep, picturing various presents her friends would bring her. In the meanwhile, she was wondering whether Lucy would ruin the party if she came. Anyhow, all the girls she invited came finally, including Lucy.The girls had a fantastic time by singing and dancing while Lucy sat in the corner silently alone. Later, all the girls gathered around the table as Madison opened her presents. Opening them one by one, Madison thanked her friends, with a bright smile on her face. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下各式作答。Lucy's present was the very last to be opened.Deeply moved by what she said, Madison held the lead rope tightly in her hands.【答案 J Lucy's present was the very last to be opened. Worrying that it would ruin the party, Madison grabbed the present reluctantly and ripped open the gift-wrap paper. Inside was a delicately hand-made lead rope! Shocked, she widened her eyes, covering her hands over her mouth. "It's a lead rope for your horse Star. I made it by myself!” Madison pulled it out of the box and placed it on her lap, amazed at its beauty. Lucy added, "I heard you talking about your horse at school. That's when I got the idea to make you a lead rope.”Deeply moved by what she said, Madison held the lead rope tightly in her hands. It was, by far, her very favorite birthday present of the day. She suddenly felt so bad because she had been so mean to Lucy. With tears swirling in her eyes, she blinked hard to fight them back, feeling a mixture of regret and gratitude. "Thanks so much for this lead rope. I love it! Would you like to join us and be our friends? ” Lucy nodded cheerfully. Madison put her arm around Lucy's shoulders, both smilin