英语八下写作课Unit5Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame课件.pptx

8B writing memories(回忆、记忆回忆、记忆)new&smallimportant&unforgettableWhat were you doing at 2 p.m.last Sunday?I was.at 2 p.m.last Sunday.They were.at the same time?What was at 2 p.m.last Sunday?He/She was.at 2 p.m.last Sunday.Weekend activities:watch TVshopdo ones homeworkfly kitestalk with friendsdo housework While I was,my best friend .What were at the same time?/parentsAn important eventWhat?When&Where?What were people doing?Why was it important?important&unforgettableEarthquake(地震地震)What?An important event that I remember well was the the basketball gamea trip to the beacha traffic accidentAn important event (earthquake)What?When&Where?What were people doing?Why was it important?important&unforgettableWhen&Where?It happened on/at/in May 12th 2008,in/at Sichuan.on表示某一具体日期、某个特定的上下午表示某一具体日期、某个特定的上下午at表示某一具体时刻表示某一具体时刻in表示表示上下午、上下午、月份、季节、年份月份、季节、年份1.The accident happened _ Saturday evening _ Huzhou.2.The sports meeting was _ autumn _ the primary school.3.It happened _ home _ last year.oninininat/An important event (earthquake)What?When&Where?What were people doing?Why was it important?important&unforgettableWhat were you doing?1.When the happened,I was 2.At that time/at the same time,I was What were your friends(family)doing?my friends/family were my friends/family were An important event (earthquake)What?When&Where?What were people doing?Why was it important?important&unforgettableWhy was it important?Why do you remember?This event was very important because I remember this event well because it tells us that help each other when in difficultieswork hard and try ones best/never give up teamwork is usefulPara 2Para 1Para 3What?When?Where?What was I doing?Friends and family?What did I do?An important event that I remember well was the Wenchuan Earthquake.It happened on May 12th,2008 in Sichuan.When I heard the news of this event,I was having a class in the university.At the same time,my friend was having a rest in the bedroom.Then we both decided to do something to help the people in danger.We raised a lot of money and food for them.This event was very important because although a lot of people lost their houses or families in the earthquake,it brought them closer together.Why was it important?An important eventJacks important eventAn important event that I remember well was the 1000-meter race.It happened _ my first year of middle school._ the race began,I tried my best to run._ I was running,my friends _(be)shouting to cheer me on.Then,I felt so tired that I wanted to give up.But they _(keep)on encouraging me.So I _(make)up my mind to do my best.Finally,I was the first to reach the finish line.I remember this event well because I _(learn)that friendship is very important in our life.With the help of our friends,we can be _(good)than we do it by ourselves.Read and fillinWhenWhile learnbetterWhat?When?Where?What were he&friends doing?Why important?were kept made What did he do?An important event that I remember well was.It happened on/in in/at.What?When?Where?What were you doing?Friends and families?What did you do?When the happened/At that time,I was And my friends were We did Why was it important?This event was very important because/I remember this event well because it tells us that An important eventLets writePara 2Para 1Para 3help each other when in difficultieswork hard and try ones best/never give up teamwork is usefulwhile，at the same time,then,however,finally 第五档第五档：（：（13-15分）分）包含内容要点，语言基本无误。行文连贯，包含内容要点，语言基本无误。行文连贯，能使用修饰词或表示顺序、逻辑关系的连接词，表达清楚。文字优能使用修饰词或表示顺序、逻辑关系的连接词，表达清楚。文字优美，语言精彩，略有拼写错误，可不扣分。美，语言精彩，略有拼写错误，可不扣分。第四档第四档：（：（10-12分）基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文分）基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第三档：（第三档：（7-9分）包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。分）包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。第二档：（第二档：（3-6分）语言错误多，影响意思表达；错误百出，不知分）语言错误多，影响意思表达；错误百出，不知所云。所云。第一档：（第一档：（0-2分）白卷或文不对题，只抄了提示词。分）白卷或文不对题，只抄了提示词。What has passed is past.(过去的已经过去。)You cannot improve your past,but you can learn from the past and improve your future.（你改变不了过去，但是你可以从过去的经历中学习，来改变你的未来。）1.Finish the article“An important event”.2.Exchange(交换)the article with your partner,mark it and find the beautiful sentences.What was the event?An important eventWenchuan Earthquake