高中英语作文建议信HowtowriteAletterofadvice课件.ppt
How to write A letter of adviceSentence structures used to offer advice oYou should have a get together with your old friends.oYoud better stay at home and have a good rest .oWhy dont you/Why not go for a trip?oWhat/How about going climbing with your family members?oI suggest/advise/recommend(that)you (should)enjoy some blockbusters on the Internet.Summarize and match Para.1 Para.2 Para.3Para.4A.the analysis of the problemsB.the reason and purpose of writing C.summary/conclusion D.offering advice/making suggestions The structure of a letter of advice Para.1 the reason and purpose of writing Para.2 the analysis of the problemsPara.3 offering advice/making suggestions Para.4 summary/conclusion Read and find out some useful sentence patterns1)How to explain why we write the letter?2)What causes the problem?/what are the harm effects?3)How to offer some advice?4)How to end the letter/email?5)Find out some useful linking words.The reason and purpose of writing1)How to explain why we write the letter?a.You told me that you have trouble in Im writing to offer some advice onb.I know from your email that you are annoyed/upset because so Im writing to make some suggestions.the analysis of the problems1)Doing sth is harmful to/bad for 2)It is+adj.(fun/natural/hard )to do.3)If you do ,you willWhat causes the problem?What are the harmful effects?offering advice/making suggestionsHow to offer some advice?I d advise you to Why dont you do/Why not do?It would be a good/wise idea to do Youd better /You shouldIt is better to dosummary/conclusionHow to end the letter/email?1)If you follow my advice,you are sure to 2)I hope you can take my suggestions into consideration.Some useful linking words 1)first;to begin with/to start with;second;next;whats more/in addition;finally;last nut not least 2)on one hand,on the other hand;for one thing,for another;3)however,but;therefore;as a result,4)in a word;to put it simply;in other words;First of all;besides;furthermore;so;of course More sentence patterns concerning a letter of advice o Id like to express my opinion ono The reason why is that.o You found it hard to because .o If I were you,I wouldo In my opinion/as far as Im concerned,it is better to do.oI hope you will find these suggestions/recommendations useful/helpful.oIf you have any further problems,please contact me at any time.Practise writing a letter of advice o假设你是李华，是新华中学高二（8）班的班长。最近，王林同学从外地某校转入你班，感到很难融入新班级，为此他感到非常苦恼。请根据下面的写作提示，给他写一封英语建议信，内容包括：1.写信的原因 2.分析困难 3.提出几点建议注意：1.词数：120左右；提示词：融入新班级 fit in with the new class 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Wang Lin,I m sorry to know I hope you will find these suggestions useful.Yours,Li Hua oHow many paragraphs does your letter consist of?oHow to explain your reason for writing?What sentence patterns can be used?oWhat caused Wang Lins problem?oDo you think it is a natural thing for Wang Lin?oWhats your advice for him?Dear WangLin,o I am sorry to know youre having trouble fitting in with the new class,so you are annoyed these days.Here Im writing to offer you some advice.o Its natural that you need some time to adapt to the new surroundings because you are new here.Actually our teachers and classmates are friendly.They would like to make friends with you if they know you better.o First of all,its a good idea to talk to our classmates,which can help others know you better.Second,why not play sports games with us?It is a good chance to make friends.Besides,you should give others a hand if they need your help.o I hope youll find my advice useful.Yours,Li HuaSummaryWhat have we learned today?The structure of a letter of advice Para.1 the reason and purpose of writing Para.2 the analysis of the problemsPara.3 offering advice/making suggestions Para.4 summary/conclusion Useful sentence patterns othe reason and purpose of writing 1)I know from your email that you have trouble inso Im writing to make some suggestions.2)You told me that you are upset because .I am writing to offer some advice on.2)Id like to express my opinion on.o the analysis of the problems1)The reason why is that.2)You found it hard to,and the reason is that .3)It may cause you to 4)It is+adj.to do 5)Doing is harmful to/bad for ooffering advice/making suggestions1）It would be a good/wise idea to do2）If I were you,I would3）In my opinion/as far as Im concerned,it is better do.osummary/conclusion 1）I hope you can take into my suggestions into consideration.2）I hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful.3）If you have any further problems,please contact me at any time.Homework o1.Memorize the useful sentence patterns and phrases used in the letter of advice.o2.Revise your letter of advice.
