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资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值II.ManuscriptFormI.IntroductionPartOneManuscriptFormTeachingaimsTellingSssth.aboutthecourse;teachingthemsomeskills&principlesformanuscriptform资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值outputofinformationexpressionofviews&thoughtsapplicationoflanguage1.Whatiswriting?communicationI.Introduction资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值2.Theaimofthecoursewriting?DictionSentenceParagraphCompositionManuscriptwritingskillsthinkingability资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值3.Qualities&strategies?practicingcorrectingrewritingobservingthinkingqualitiesdiligencepersistencereadingstrategies资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值II.ManuscriptformTitleCapitalizationMarginsIndentingPunctuationWord-divisionhandwriting资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值1.Thetitle1)Identifythefollowingtitlesandcorrectthemistakes.FoodsafetybecomesnationalpriorityParksPromotionInPoorTasteCriticismontheEndingofMarkTwainsAdventuresofHuckleberryFinnReflectionsOnTheArticleMyHometownLeiFengSpiritToInspireNewGeneration.ShouldChinesePeopleRetireLater资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值2)Summary:principlesfortitles(1)Capitalization:allwordsinthetitleexceptarticles,coordinatingconjunctions,prepositions,theto ininfinitives(2)Italicizingunderliningthenameofabook(3)Usingquotationmarkswithquotesortitlesofarticles(4)Usingaquestionmarkifthetitleisadirectquestion(5)Noperiodisusedattheendofatitle(6)Writethetitleinthemiddleofthefirstline资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值1)Punctuatethefollowingandcapitalizetheletterswherenecessary.(1)hesaidmytriptomounttaiwastiringbutinterestingHesaid,“MytriptoMountTaiwastiringbutinteresting.”(2)mytriptomounttaihesaidwastiringbutinteresting“MytriptoMountTai,”hesaid,“wastiringbutinteresting.”summary:placesforcapitalizationkeywordsintitlesthefirstwordofasentenceofquotedspeechpropernames2.Capitalization资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值1)Readthefollowingparagraphandindentitproperly.HeBing,deputydeanofthelawschoolofChinaUniversityofPoliticalScienceandLaw,drovetothecampusoftheCommunicationUniversityofChinatogivealecturetoitsPhDstudents.Hewasstoppedatthesouthgate.Becausethestudentwhomethimatthegatedidnotobtainthepermitinadvance,hewasnotallowedtodriveontothecampus.Hetriedtoexplainthesituationtothesecurityguardandshowedhisbusinesscard.Buttheguarddidnotbudge.Intheend,hehadtouseasideentrance.2)Summary(1)Indentthefirstlineofaparagraph(spaceof4or5letters)(2)writeoneveryotherline(3)leavingamarginoneachsideofthepaper(leftandrightside)3.Margins&Indenting资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值,;.?!:“”()_4.Punctuationsemicoloncommaperiodexclamationmarkcolonquotationmarkbracketsdash1)RefreshSsknowledgeonpunctuation资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值2)Punctuatethefollowing（1）SamYoucanneverimaginehowhappyIwaswhenIopenedthegiftAnMP5playerofthelatestmodelthatsreallyamazingYoudoknowmeThanksamilliontimesforthegiftWishyouafairjourneyKelly,.!.!.资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值（2）Theaccountantcheckedthefiguresagainasaresultthemistakewasdiscovered（3）Whatwewantaretheprimarycolorsredblueandyellow（4）Thedailynewspapercontains:news,sports,entertainment,andclassifiedads.（5）ThePresidentbeganwithanannouncementLadiesandgentlemenwefeelhonoredtohaveMr.KofiAnnanwithus（6）Eachoftheflatstherearetwobedroomsineachhousessometenstudents（7）Bythetimethespeechwasoveritlasted3hoursIwasdozinginmychair;“,.：，.，.”）._.(资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值Attention:(1)Identifythedifferencebetween,.。overusingofexclamationmarkbeginningalinewithapunctuation(2)Avoidendingalinewiththefirsthalfofapairofbrackets,parentheses,orquotationmarks.资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值Summary:punctuations,joinsshort&closelyrelatedparallelsentences,sentenceswithacoordinator;addsaforcefulconnectionbetweensentences:toformallyintroducealist,alongquotation,oranexplanatorystatement(itisusedafteracompletestatement)()toaddinessentialinformation(nottocrossaword)toemphasizetheinsertion,tosetoffaseriesusedasanappositive资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值Examples&principlesDivideawordaccordingtoitssyllables,andneverputthehyphen()atthebeginningofaline.through,march(one-syllablewordcannotbedivided)alone,tricky(avoidwritingonelettersyllableattheendorbeginningofaline)China,Jane(propernamescannotbeseparated)sister-in-law,kind-hearted(separateatthehyphen)re-write,arrange-ment(separatebetweenthebasepartandthesuffixorprefix)Donotdividethelastwordofapage;writethewholewordonthenextpage.5.Word-division资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值Generalrule:neatly&clearlyattention:Whencrossingaword,notuse()toencloseit,butdrawathicklineacrossit.Whenaddingaword,writeitabovetheline,withaclearsignshowingwhereitistobeinserted.6.Handwriting资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值UnitsummaryIntroductionofthecoursewritingManuscriptform(ppt6)资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值1.Themeaningofawordandcorrectchoiceinwriting2.WaystoavoidsomepitfallsofChinglishPartTwoDictionI.TheMeaningofWords资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值1.ThemeaningofawordandcorrectchoiceinwritingConnotationDenotationCollocationAttitude1)aspectsofthemeaningofaword资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值A.Denotation&connotatione.g.mother,icemotherawomanwhoisaparentdenotationconnotationprotectiveness,unselfishness,affectionliteralandprimarymeaningofawordthesuggestedmeaningofaword资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值e.g.country,nation,state,and landExplain the meaning,looking closely at the denotative and connotative meanings of the italicized words.a.IntheWest,everyman wasaman.b.Anyway,sheisawoman.Suggestion:Properchoiceofwordsaccordingtotheirdenotationsandconnotations.Identifytheconnotationsofthethreesynonyms:portly,plump,andfata.Sheisplump.b.Sheisportly.c.Sheisfat.资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值2)Attitudec.Thegirlissoskinny.ThefeelingofthewritertothesubjectTask2.Recognizehowthewritersattitudechangesfromsentencetosentencea.Whataslimgirlsheis!b.Howthinthegirlis!a.Theylivedinasmalltown.b.IcanneverforgetthelittletownwhereIspentmyhappychildhood.Modest&humble资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值Task3.Completethetablewithsynonyms,payingattentiontotheiraffectivemeaningsFavorableComplimentNeutralUnfavorablestrangeUnique,quaintbizarre,abnormalResolute,steadfaststubborn,doggedpigheadedpraise,flatterlick ones bootsSenior citizenoldpersonfossilBachelorgirlsingle womanspinster资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值1)Hehasthemost_distinctionofhavingwrittenspeecheswhichwereeffectivewhendelivered.unique2)Manyofthemanagingpostsfilledupby_peopleonlybecausetheyhappentohavethehabitoforderingpoorpeopleabout.pigheaded3)Iwas_byyourinvitationtocometothisparty.flattered4)Hethoughthislandladywasamean_.fossil5)Hurry!Endofmysinglelife!Notanoldandbad-tempered_anymore!spinster资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值3.CollocativemeaningStrongweakcoffeethickthinsoupdosb.afavormakeaneffort,followthefashionLarge(notbig)amountnumberandquantitygreatcourage,confidenceabilitywisdommeaningthatishabituallyusedwithcertainwords资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值AvoidsomepitfallsonChinglish(UnidiomaticuseofEnglishbyChinesespeakers)Hecametosendmealetter.Iwenttothestationtosendmyfriendoff.Hisbodyishealthy.Histwoeyesareblind.Task5.a.请帮我们宣传一下这个新产品。b.他遇事总是先想着自己，真是太个人主义了。Pleasehelpuspropagatethisnewproduct.Heisself-concernedandindividualistic.Pleasehelpustoadvertisethisnewproduct.Heisself-concernedandselfish.资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值Task6a.大家一致感到那听起来不像是真的。大家一致感到那听起来不像是真的。b.那个主意听起来很有趣，而且两个主意巧合为一体。那个主意听起来很有趣，而且两个主意巧合为一体。c.这位跳高选手创造了新的世界纪录。这位跳高选手创造了新的世界纪录。a.Everyonefeels(withoutunanimously)thatdoesntseemtobetrue.b.thatideasoundedveryinteresting,andthetwoideashappenedtomerge(withouttogether).c.Thehigh-jumperhasseta(withoutnew)worldrecord.Attention:avoidrepetitionofmeaning资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值Exercises1.Translationa.你吃了吗？b.请多提宝贵意见。c.辛苦了！2.Correction&translationa.Hewastorturedmercilesslybytheenemy.b.Thatsanimpracticalillusion.c.Wehaveeliminatedtheenemyforceentirely.d.Howcanyoubelievethosegroundlesslies?资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值3.Summary1.Thefouraspectsofthemeaningofwords2.WaystoavoidChinglishDenotativemeaningconnotativemeaningaffectivemeaningcollocativemeaningavoidliteraltranslationavoidrepetitionofmeaninginEnglishwayofthinking资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值ReviewingexerciseCorrectingthemisusedwordsinthefollowingsentences1.Wesatdownbytheoaktree,enjoyingthewindcomingfromthelake.(breeze)2.Thatpoliticianisarespectablefigureinthepoliticalarena.(statesman)3.MyfatheropenedthecurtainalittlelestIseehim.(drawback)4.Ouruniversitycancontain20,000students.(accommodate)6.Itisessentialtocontrolenvironmentalpollutionsoastoprotecttheenvironment.5.Wemustpracticeeconomyandreduceunnecessaryexpenditure.资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值PartTwoDictionII.LevelsofWords1.DifferentiatevariousstylesinEnglish2.Identifytypicalfeaturesofdifferentlevelsofwords3.Recognizetheoccasionstousetheappropriatelevelsofwords4.Practicalwriting:Notices资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值I.ThreemainlevelsofwordsintermsofstyleThreemainlevelsofwordsformalGeneralcommoninformalII.Featuresofformal&generalwordscolloquialslang资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值e.g.formal&generalwordsGeneral:clear,end,agree,prove,stopFormal:lucid,terminate,concur,verify,adjournRevisethefollowingtoanaturalstyle1.Weneedtoutilizethemilkbeforeitsours.2.Thechildhaddifficultyascertaininghiswaytoschool.3.Theyoungwomanwasbombardedwithflowersandgifts.4.Themeetingadjournedat5p.m.withoutanyconsensusbeingreached.Thebestpolicyistousegeneralwordsinmostcasesandformalwordsinspecific,formalcontext.资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值colloquial&slangExcerpt1Thiswasgreat!Thankyouverymuch!IwantmyowncopyofthealbumnexttimewegotoBorders.P.S.IlookforwardtoSat._Seeyousoon.Excerpt2Thankyouverymuchforyourinformation.Iwonderifitispossibleforustomeetsometimenextweektohaveadiscussionaboutit.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou.Thankyouagain.Questions:1.Whatisthelanguagefeatureofeachstyle?2.Whomightbetheexpectedreaderofthenote?featuresoccasionstouse资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值II.Usetheappropriatewordsaccordingtothecontextandaudience2.Changetheinappropriatestyleofthefollowing:1)Thegeneralmanageraskedyoutohangonforasecond.2)Iaskedhimtocutouthismisconduct.3)aninsurancepolicyofoldstyle:UponthehappeningofanoccurrencereasonablylikelytoinvolvetheCompanyhereunder,writtennoticeshallbegivenassoonaspracticabletotheCompanyoranyofitsauthorizedagents.waitforstop资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值RevisedversionIfthereisanaccidentorincidentthatmaybecoveredbythispolicy,notifyusinwritingassoonaspossible.Youcangivethisnoticetoanyofourauthorizedagents.Theoccasionstouseappropriatelevelsofwords?SummaryThreemainlevelsofwords;Featuresofeachlevelofwords;Generalrulesinchoosingthelevelsofwords资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值III.Practicalwriting:NoticesThreemainpartsofanoticeactivitytimeplaceDayoftheweekdatetimethesign#isputbeforeanumber,notafterit资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值IV.Assignment1.Writeouttheabbreviatedformsforthedaysoftheweekandthemonthsoftheyear2.Noticewriting:onp287,1&2.资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值PartIII.TheSentenceI.CompleteSentenceandSentenceFragmentsI.ReviewingII.CompleteSentenceBasicstructureofasentenceSubjectPredicateIII.SentenceFragmentsIV.Summary资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值II.CompleteSentence1.BasicstructureofasentenceHecame.(subject+predicate)Shewrotealetter.(subject+predicate+object)Heisfine.Heisafamousprofessor.(Subject+link-verb+predicativecomplement)资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值1)Thechoiceofasubject2.Subject2)Positionofasubject资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值whichisbetter?Thecatchingoffishprovidesenjoymentforpolarbears.Polarbearsliketocatchfish.Hisappearanceindicatedtiredness.Helookedtired.Buyingthewinewashisresponsibility.Hehadtobuythewine.Whenyouwrite,focusonhuman,animateandconcretenounorpronounassubjectsandwatchoutfornominalizationtoavoidwritinginflatedandaffectedsentences.资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值Workinpairstoidentifythesubjectineachandrevisethosewhosemeaningisunclear.1)AreluctancetoworksteadilycausedhertobeunpreparedforthepresentationonMonday.2)Thehorrorofthefilmmademeunabletosleepforthreenights.3)Agreatdealoflearningtookplaceinmychemistryclass.4)Theembarrassmentleftmewordless.资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值Rodmissedthefunofcollegebymakingchemistryhissoleactivityandparticipatinginnoextracurricularactivities.Whichiseasiertounderstand?Why?2)PositionofasubjectMakingchemistryhissoleactivityandparticipatinginnoextracurricularactivities,Rodmissedthefunofcollege.资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值Exception:inversionInthecenterofthepaintingstandsaladyinwhite.DowninagreenandshadybedAmodestvioletgrew;Itsstalkwasbent,ithungitshead,Asiftohidefromview._JamesTaylor,“TheViolet”AtreacherousfellowistheSharkHenevermakestheleastremark._AlfredDouglas,“TheShark”(Toemphasize“downinagreenandshadybed”,“atreacherousfellow”,andtoachievetherhyme.)资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值Summaryfor“subject”Choosehuman,animateorconcretenounpronoun,watchoutforabstractonesornominalizationsasasubject.(clear,concise,easytofollow)Putasubjectatthebeginningofasentence.Exception:inversionforspecificeffect资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值activevoice3.PredicatepassivevoiceThroughherstudiesofchildrearing,personality,andculture,worldfamewasachievedbyMagaretMead.Throughherstudiesofchildrearing,personality,MagaretMeadachievedworldfame.1)ChoosingtheactivevoiceTheactivevoicestressestheactivityofthesubjectandhelpstomakeasentencedirect,concise,andvigorous.资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是时间的函数，随时间的推移而增值，其增值的这部分资金就是原有资金的时间价值Changethevoiceoftheverbsinthefollowingsentenceandtrytocomparetheeffects.1)Thehugeicebergwasrammedintobytheluxuryliner.2)AgoodracewasrunbytheFerrari.3)Someobjectsofartwerediscoveredbytheamateurarchaeologist.4)Beforemyworldrecordwasset,IwasagreatfanofThe Guinness Book of World Records andreadeachneweditionfromcovertocover.资金是运动的价值，资金的价值是随时间变化而变化的，是
