中考英语复习初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导复习ppt课件【经典】.ppt

第三部分 中考题型专项训练第七节 书面表达01题 型 突 破02解 题 技 巧03真 题 分 析目录导航 模 拟 特 训04高 分 特 训05题 型 突 破一、题型分析 书面表达是广州市中考中一个比较难的、也是必考的题型，要求考生根据题目的要求写一段80词左右的短文。书面表达主要考查考生综合运用英语的能力，同时考查考生是否掌握所学过的语法知识、时态、句型和结构等。二、命题规律年份话题内容 文体课本出处2018校园生活建议信应用文九上Unit 4 Problems and advice2017科技飞行单车说明文八上Unit 4 Inventions年份话题内容文体课本出处2016校园生活志愿活动说明文八下Unit 1 Helping those in need2015校园生活特色课程说明文七上Unit 7 School clubs2014校园生活广州文化节说明文八上Unit 8 English Week 从表格分析可得，书面表达的话题一般都与学生熟悉的校园生活相关，并且紧贴单元话题，也会结合当下热点(比如2017年就与当年大热的共享单车话题有关)，因此要求考生不仅要打好基础，注重课内话题的训练，也要培养思维的发散性和解决问题的能力。三、评分标准 要求文章要切题并有所发挥；上下文连贯，用词造句流畅，表达得体；词汇的用量符合要求，拼写、书写格式和标点符号准确。总分15分，给分标准基本上是663，即：内容准确性流畅性。具体评分标准细则如下：书面表达评分标准要素档次内容(6分)切合题意，体现要点6 5.5 543210.50有所发挥要素档次准确性(6分)语法6 5.5 54321 0词汇机械性：大小写、拼写和格式等错误要素档次流畅性(3分)结构得体性与连贯性3 2.5 21.51 0.5 0解 题 技 巧 考生在考场上，可以按照以下几个步骤来完成书面表达题。第一步：认真审题，明确要求。审题是写好书面表达题的关键。通读试题所给的每一个字，观察所给的每一幅图画，从而明确该文的题目要求，判断作文的类型、特点，了解作文的重要内容，力求写作切中题意。1确定主题。通过仔细观察、认真分析，确定文章的主题，然后再围绕主题进行写作，以满足中考“切中题意”的要求。2确定格式。文体不同，格式也不一样。书信有书信的格式，便条有便条的格式。同样都是通知，口头通知与书面通知格式也不相同。因此，应根据不同的文体来确定写作时所采用的相应格式。3确定人称。因搞错人称而失分，实在令人可惜。所以，在动笔之前应先确定是使用第一、二人称还是第三人称。4审提示中所交代的时间、地点、人物及人物关系。第二步：依据要点，草拟提纲。根据内容提示，在草纸上列出各要点所用的单词、短语以及句式等。注意这是组织语言、形成短文的基础步骤。这一步骤的要求是：根据内容提示简单地列出提纲，将所需的语言材料准备好。可以只列出主要的词、词组、短语及句型；暂不考虑动词的时态、语态、第三人称单数等词形变化。第三步：扩展成句，连句成篇。将上述所列出的单词、短语等扩展成句。注意时态、语态的正确运用，并适当使用一些连接词将所列的语句连成完整的语篇。全文应结构紧凑，前后连贯。第四步：仔细检查，认真修改。检查修改是书面表达解题过程中必不可少的一个重要环节。检查修改的原则是大处着眼，小处着手。具体应从词法、句法、语篇三个方面入手仔细检查并认真修改。1从词法角度。主要检查词汇的运用是否妥当；拼写是否有误；名词、代词的数和格是否正确；词性是否混淆；词与词之间是否“搭配不当”；用词是否重复等。2从句法角度。主要检查句子结构是否完整；动词时态、语态是否正确；主谓是否一致等。3从语篇角度。主要检查文体格式是否正确；字数是否符合要求；要点是否齐全；语句是否简洁；上下文是否连贯、符合逻辑等。第五步：认真书写，讲究规范。中考书面表达对答卷的书写问题有明确具体的要求。因此，在考试中同学们应注意书写的美观性，千万不能因为书写问题影响自己的得分。另外，整洁干净的卷面，规范、美观的字体会给阅卷者好的印象，可以得到“印象分”。真 题 分 析(2018广州)你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。Bens problemsYour advice and reasons朋友少，感觉孤单1.参加学校社团(club)结识更多朋友2.？(请你补充)英语单词难记1.多阅读英语故事、新闻在运用中学单词2.？(请你补充)Dear Ben，I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school.In your letter you said that Good luck with everything!Li Hua注意：(1)回信应包括所有要点；(2)词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数)；(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。【写作指导】1审题。2018年广州中考英语书面表达题为针对人际关系及英语学习问题的建议信，话题与课本九年级上册Unit 4 Problems and advice相吻合，再次体现回归课本的重要性。建议信这个体裁近年较少出现，但却是九年级上学期的重点。要写好这篇文章，关键是把握文章整体结构，及各个要点之间的逻辑衔接。时态：一般现在时一般将来时；人称：第二人称；文体：应用文。2确定要表达的内容。写作的内容已经给出，需要说明Ben的两个问题，针对问题分别提出建议并陈述理由。问题1：have few friends，feel lonely建议及理由：(1)join clubs at school，make more friends(2)be friendly/kind to others，问题2：It is difficult to remember English words.建议及理由：(1)read more English stories and news，learn English in a practical way(2)write an English diary every day，【高分句型一】It isto do sth.改进计划：It is a good choice to join some clubs in your school.【高分句型二】Youd better提建议。改进计划：Youd better be friendly to others.【高分句型三】find itadj.改进计划：You find it difficult to remember English words.3运用适当的连接词，连词成句，连句成文。4仔细检查，认真修改。(1)查时态、人称。(2)查要点：对照题目里的要点，检查需要包含的内容是否介绍齐全，这篇文章至少包括4大要点。(3)查连接：是否有适当的引导词或连接词，让文章更加顺畅自然，比如besides，in addition等。提出建议时可用in my opinion或I think等。(4)查语法和词数：检查包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、单复数、主谓一致等；看词数是否足够。5认真书写，讲究规范。参考范文：Dear_Ben，I_am_sorry_to_hear_that_you_are_having_trouble_getting_used_to_life_in_middle_school.In_your_letter_you_said_that you always felt lonely because of having few friends.I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school.In this way,you can make more friends who share the same interest with you.Besides,youd better be friendly to others.Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return.On the other hand,you found it difficult to remember English words.Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way.In addition,if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day,it will be easier for you to remember more words.I hope you will find these suggestions useful.Good_luck_with_everything!Li_Hua广 州 真 题一、(2017广州)假如你发明的“飞行单车”在学校科技节中获奖，被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请用英语介绍你的发明，内容包括下图中14项。“飞行单车”1外观：两个轮子，两只翅膀2用途：行驶于地面和空中、可拍照、能对话3特点：速度快、使用太阳能、环保4改进计划(12点)注意：(1)参考词汇：轮子wheel 太阳能solar power(2)词数80左右(文章的开头己给出，不计入词数)。(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。My invention is a flying bike._It is fast,convenient and green!The flying bike has two wheels and two wings.It has a top speed of 300 km/h.You can go to farther places in a shorter time.It can run on land and fly in the air.If you shout“fly”，the bike will turn into a plane in 30 seconds.Then you can fly in the air.You will be as free as a bird.It can take photos,too.Instead of petrol,the bike uses solar power,so it will not pollute the air.I will add a seat behind it so that it can carry two persons.My invention will help people live a better life in the future.二、(2016 广州)五四青年节那天，你参加了学校组织的志愿者活动。你的英语老师要求你写一则英文日记，包括以下要点：1时间：2016年5月4日2地点：广东博物馆3内容：七年级学生：当导游，带参观者到不同展馆八年级学生：表演短剧，介绍广州历史九年级学生：制作海报，帮助人们了解岭南文化4意义(活动对你个人和社会的意义)注意：1.参考词汇：展馆(display room)、海报(poster)；2词数：80词左右(日记的开头已给出，不计入词数)；3不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Wednesday，May 4th,2016Dear Diary，I went to the Guangdong Museum with my schoolmates to do some voluntary work today._Students from three grades took part in it and worked as different roles.Students of Grade Seven worked as guides who took visitors to different rooms.And those of Grade Eight played a short opera,introducing Guangzhou history to tourists.As for students of Grade Nine，they made beautiful posters which helped people know Lingnan Culture better.In my opinion,it is of great help to hold such activities.On the one hand,it is a good chance for us students to develop a sense of responsibility as well as our work ability.On the other hand，the history and culture can be passed on from one generation to another.三、(2015 广州)你校将开设一些特色课程，学生可根据兴趣进行选择。请根据以下内容提示为学校英文网页写一篇短文，介绍这些课程、提出你建议增设的课程并说明理由。注意：1.参考词汇：模型制作 model making2词数80左右(文章开头已给出，不计入词数)；3不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest._These courses will help students relax themselves after school.There are many courses for them to choose，such as English drama，football，or model making.Here is more information.If you want to improve your oral English,English drama may be the first choice.It is a good chance to practice not only oral English，but also performing skills.If you are interested in football,take the football course.It is good for your physical health.Besides,you can learn more about teamwork.What about model making?You will be amazed by the science world and become interested in it.For my part,a painting course can be added,because students like drawing so much.I hope these courses would be helpful and each student would enjoy a bright and colorful school life here!模 拟 特 训(一)2018白云区一模 假设你是李华，为了响应“足球进校园”的号召，你们学校成立了一个足球俱乐部。作为足球爱好者，你加入了这个俱乐部。现在请你根据以下内容提示，给学校校报的英文版投稿，介绍足球俱乐部，并呼吁同学们加入到你们的行列来。名称足球俱乐部时间每周五下午放学后地点操场活动1.了解足球历史2学习足球比赛规则3观看足球比赛4足球训练、举行足球比赛你的感受和呼吁(至少两点)注意：1.词数80左右(文章的开头已给出，不计入词数)。2不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。As a football fan,I joined the Football Club last year.Let me introduce our club to you._ The Football Club is one of the most popular clubs in our school.On Friday afternoon,the members will meet after school.We will get together in the playground.In the Football Club,we can learn a lot about the history of football and some basic rules as well.In addition,we will also watch some exciting football games.More importantly,we will have some training together.The most exciting part is that we will have some football matches.Im very proud to be one of the members.If you are also interested in football,come and join our club.Im sure you will love it.(二)2018黄埔区一模 今年暑假，广州图书馆将组织“广州教育大阅读”宣传小分队，需要在初中毕业生中招募一批志愿者。假设你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封自荐信。个人读书情况(1)喜爱读书，每年至少读10本书；(2)喜爱读的书；(3)读书的感悟(至少两点)。个人自荐条件(1)擅长演讲，善于沟通；(2)暑期比较自由，家长支持。注意：1.词数80左右(文章的开头及结尾已给出，不计入词数)。2不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing to apply to be a volunteer to promote(宣 传)reading among middle school students in Guangzhou._ I have loved reading since I was young.I have a habit of reading in my spare time.At weekends,I also go to the library to do some reading.At school,I often read with my iPad.I often download some books from the Internet and read them with my friends.I read more than ten great books a year.I have many favourite books,such as The Little Prince,Robinson Crusoe and so on.Reading makes a full man.It not only increases our knowledge,improves our abilities to solve problems,but also helps us form a good habit.Whats more,I do well in making a speech and Im good at communicating with others.I have a lot of free time in the summer vacation.My parents also encourage me to do whatever I like.I think I am suitable for the job.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.(三)2018番禺区一模 假设你是“阳光中学”的学生，上周五学校举行了慈善活动，目的是为一家老人院筹集善款。请根据以下图示内容，写一篇英语作文介绍这些活动，并描述你参加了的活动和你的感受。注意：1.词数80左右(文章的开头已给出，不计入词数)。2内容必须包括图中的要点，但不要逐条翻译；3在所提示的要点之外，要求有适当发挥，加上自己个人的观点；4不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Charity Activities of the Sunny Middle School To raise money for the old peoples home,some charity activities were held in our school last Friday._They were very interesting and many students took part in them.The first activity was Sell and Buy.Students brought lovely things to school and sold them,such as toys,books,pictures and so on.The second activity was The Loving Cooks.Students who were good at cooking made their most delicious food for people to taste.The third activity was The Talent Show.The students danced,played music,or put on short plays.All the money from the sale,the food and the show was given to the old peoples home.I enjoy cooking and I can make very nice dessert,so I joined in the second activity.All in all,I was happy to do something helpful with my love and care.(四)2018花都区一模你们学校下周将举行科技节，一些美国学生也会来参观交流。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语作文，介绍你们小组的参展作品机器人ICAN。注意：1.词数80左右(文章的开头已给出，不计入词数)。2不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Here is our robot,ICAN！_ As you can see,ICAN is beautiful in appearance.It has a round head with two blue eyes as well as long legs and long arms.It can do lots of things,such as doing housework,helping children with their studies and taking photos.Besides,it can also have simple daily conversations with people in either English or Chinese.As a special robot,it has a pleasant voice,and it is friendly to the environment because it is driven by solar energy.Hope all of you like our robotICAN.(五)2018从化区一模 近年来，越来越多的外籍人士融入社区生活。假设你的小区也居住着这样一个群体，社区委员会为丰富他们的生活，计划在下周六专为外籍人士安排一次采摘荔枝活动，请你用英文写一份书面通知，把信息传达给他们。内容包括：(1)下周六上午8：00在北门集合，乘大巴去“幸福农场”采摘荔枝，下午4：30返回；(2)享受乡村自然美景，感受干农活的乐趣；(3)请在下周四下午6：00前去办公室报名；(4)你可以带上；另外注意：1.参考词汇：lychee荔枝 sign ones name报名 Happy Farm幸福农场2词数80左右(文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数)。3不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。NOTICEJune 25 In order to enrich the life of the residents(居民),the Community Union is going to organize a special activity next Saturday._ Wish you a wonderful time!The Community Union We have organized a bus trip to Happy Farm for foreigners,where we plan to pick lychees.We will gather at the North Gate at 8 am.and return at 4：30 pm.next Saturday.During the trip,we can appreciate the natural beauty in the countryside and have fun in farming work.Of course,you can take an umbrella so as not to get sunburnt.Besides,your safety should be taken into consideration.Sign your name in our office before 6：00 pm.next Thursday if you are interested.(六)2018越秀区第十六中学一模 6月5日是“世界环境保护日”，广州市教育局组织以“Being a Volunteer of Going Green”为题的英语演讲比赛。假设你是韩梅，决定参加比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿推荐自己，内容如下：品质助人为乐，善良，有礼貌爱好旅游，上网，阅读事迹组织慈善义演为WWF筹集资金，每年植树感悟地球是我们唯一的家园，保护环境，人人有责措施(至少两点具体做法)注意：1.词数80左右(文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数)。2不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Being a Volunteer of Going Green Hello,everyone.Im Han Mei.I want to be a volunteer of going green.I am glad to make a speech here._I am a kind and polite girl who enjoys helping others.My hobbies are travelling,surfing the Internet and reading.I once held a charity show to raise money for WWF.Besides,to help protect the Earth,I plant trees every year.As a student,I think that the Earth is our only homeland and its everyones duty to protect the environment.Here is something we can do to make a better world.First,we can save energy in our daily life，such as turning off the tap after using it and using both sides of the paper.Second,we can ask people around us to protect the Earth.(七)2018越秀区育才中学一模 为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，学校举办了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿。内容包括：1.交通安全：遵守交通规则，不闯红灯，走人行横道；2食品安全：吃健康食品，远离垃圾食品；3假期安全：不私自下河游泳，遇到困难向他人求助；4学校安全：(请你补充)注意：1.参考词汇：sidewalk人行横道2词数80左右(文章的开头已给出，不计入词数)。3不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。As teenagers,we should always keep safety in mind._But how can we keep safe?Here are some of my suggestions.First,we must obey the traffic rules when we go out.Dont cross the street when the traffic lights are red and remember to walk on the sidewalks.Second,stay away from junk food.Eat more healthy food like fruit and vegetables.Besides,dont hurt ourselves when we go out for a holiday.Also,its dangerous for us to swim in the river alone.Whats more,when we are in danger,the first is to keep calm and then ask for help.Last but not least,we shouldnt fight with each other when we have different opinions at school.In a word,we should take care of ourselves and know how to help others if they are in trouble!(八)2018广东华侨中学一模 学校开展题为“How to Solve the Exam Stress”的征文比赛，请你根据图片和表格中提示的内容写一篇英语短文，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点。适当的压力积极思考，认真学习。及时复习，防止遗忘。过重的压力无法入睡，非常疲倦。害怕考试，导致失败。应对的措施合理计划，准备充分。(你的23条建议)注意：1.词数80左右(文章的开头已给出，不计入词数)。2不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。How to Solve the Exam Stress Everyone may have the exam stress.A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us._If we have proper stress,we can think actively and work harder.Besides,it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them.So we can pass the exams easily.However,if we are under too much stress，we cant sleep well at night and we may feel tired out.We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end.In my opinion,to deal with stress,wed better plan and prepare well.We should also form some good habits,such as taking enough exercise and having healthy diets.Then well feel relaxed and do well in the exams.(九)2018番禺区象达中学一模 假设你是学校学生会主席李华，你们正计划组织义工服务，请根据下面的内容和提示，写一封公告，倡议同学们积极参加。注意：1.词数80左右(文章的开头已给出，不计入词数)。2不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。计划一计划二时间星期五下午星期天上午地点敬老院(the nursing house)星海公园活动1.与老人聊天 2.(请你补充)1.清洁公园里的垃圾 2.(请你补充)目的1.关爱照顾老人 2.(请你补充)1.保护环境 2.(请你补充)Dear fellow students，Our school is going to hold some volunteer activities._Let me tell you some of them.We will go to the nursing house this Friday afternoon to chat with the old.And we will help them clean the room.I think its a good way to take care of the old.I am sure what we do can help the old feel the warmth.Whats more,on Sunday morning,we will go to Xinghai Park to clean up the park and pick up the rubbish there.We will also plant some trees there.Its important to protect the environment in this way and it can make it more beautiful.Why not join us?Come on,everybody!(十)2018广州大学附属中学一模 最近电影摔跤吧！爸爸成为热门话题。这部电影讲述了一个摔跤选手失去了儿子当继承人的希望后偶然发现了女儿的潜能，并训练她们，创造了摔跤比赛历史的故事。故事很令人激动并引起了热烈的讨论。一些人认为1.努力并坚持努力才能实现梦想2我们应该敢于与传统做斗争一些人认为1.父母也要选择适合的方式教育小孩2父母不应该把自己的梦想强加在小孩身上你的观点(12点)？注意：1.参考词汇：keep on坚持 impose sth.on sb.强加于2词数80左右