高中英语作文概要写作入门ppt课件.ppt

在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Summary Writing在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60 词左右的内容概要。We shouldnt judge a person by their appearance but we do.In fact,the experts say that when we meet someone for the first time we make a decision about what that person is like in three seconds.But what do we look at?One of the most important things is clothes,but it isnt the brand of clothes that people wear that is important.The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion.Schools have always understood this and a lot of them ask their students to wear a uniform.Why?A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies.Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too.If all the students wear uniforms,they cant judge each other because of their clothes.It also avoids arguments about who or what is fashionable.However,it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way.We all have fixed ideas about what the people in a certain profession should wear.If we visit a doctor,we expect to see respectable clothes under the doctors white coat.When we go into a bank we expect the staff to wear suits or dresses.Police officers wear uniforms to deter crime by establishing a visible presence while on patrol,to make themselves easily identifiable to non-police officers or their colleagues who require assistance,and to quickly identify each other at crime scenes for ease of coordination.In fact,a lot of companies have dress codes for their staff because they know that the customers expect to see them dressed in certain types of clothes.But can our clothes really tell people what we are like?Maybe not,but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment.When people see us in the right clothes,they think we are serious about what we are doing.Furthermore,if we are clean,smart and polite,people will have confidence in us.Para.1Para.3Para.2Para.4在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么What is a Summary?A shortened passage(60words)Retain the key points of the original oneA restatement in your own wordsA readable continuous whole在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Original Passage Summary在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Reading for StructureHow many parts can we divide the passage?Para 1：Part1 argumentpara2:evidence/examplepara3:evidence/examplePart 2 supportingpara4:Part3 conclusion在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么 How to Get Key Points?3.1.:topic sentence 2.:topic sentence+examples supporting ideas Find CombineSummarize在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Read for Key PointsPara.1 We shouldnt judge a person by their appearance but we do.In fact,the experts say that when we meet someone for the first time we make a decision about what that person is like in three seconds.But what do we look at?One of the most important things is clothes,but it isnt the brand of clothes that people wear that is important.The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion._Point 1在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Read for Key PointsPara.2 Schools have always understood this and a lot of them ask their students to wear a uniform.Why?A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies.Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too.If all the students wear uniforms,they cant judge each other because of their clothes.It also avoids arguments about who or what is fashionable._Point 2在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Read for Key PointsPara.3 However,it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way.We all have fixed ideas about what the people in a certain profession should wear.If we visit a doctor,we expect to see respectable clothes under the doctors white coat.When we go into a bank we expect the staff to wear suits or dresses.Police officers wear uniforms to deter crime by establishing a visible presence while on patrol,to make themselves easily identifiable to non-police officers or their colleagues who require assistance,and to quickly identify each other at crime scenes for ease of coordination.In fact,a lot of companies have dress codes for their staff because they know that the customers expect to see them dressed in certain types of clothes._Point 3_在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Read for Key PointsPara.4 But can our clothes really tell people what we are like?Maybe not,but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment.When people see us in the right clothes,they think we are serious about what we are doing.Furthermore,if we are clean,smart and polite,people will have confidence in us._Point 4在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么List the Key PointsPara.Key points1But what do we look at?One of the most important things is clothes.The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion.2Schools ask their students to wear a uniform.Why?A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies.Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too.3 However,it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way.visit a doctorgo into a bank Police officers a lot of companies 4but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment.Furthermore,people will have confidence in us.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Paraphrase(say or write in a different way)Alex likes playing football and he likes basketball,too.Alex likes playing not only football but also basketball.Not only does Alex like playing foortball but also basketball.Not only is Alex fond of football but also.In addition to football,Alex loves playing.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么How to Paraphrase?2.use synonyms(同义同义)3.summarize examples(概括概括)bine sentences(并句并句)4.sometimes change the voice(语态语态)1.change the sentence structure(句型句型)在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么List the Key PointsPara.Key points1But what do we look at?One of the most important things is clothes.The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion.2Schools ask their students to wear a uniform.Why?A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies.Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too.3 However,it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way.visit a doctorgo into a bank Police officers a lot of companies 4but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment.Furthermore,people will have confidence in us.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Paraphrase Key PointsKey point 1But what do we look at?One of the most important things is clothes.The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion.Paraphrase1.Wearing the right clothes is important because people look at our clothes.2.Wearing the right clothes for the occasion is important if we want to leave good first impressions.3.Wearing proper clothes is important for first impressions.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Paraphrase Key PointsKey point 2Schools ask their students to wear a uniform.Why?A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies.Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too.Paraphrase1.Schools ask students to wear a uniform because it helps them in many ways,such as being serious about their study.2.Students are required to wear a uniform because it benefits in various ways,such as being serious about their study.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Paraphrase Key PointsKey point 3 However,it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way.visit a doctorgo into a bank Police officers a lot of companies Paraphrase1.However,not only schools but also places such as hospitals,banks,police stations and some companies want people to dress in a certain way.2.Besides students,other people who work for hospitals,banks,police stations and some companies are also supposed to wear uniforms because of convenience.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Paraphrase Key PointsKey point 4but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment.Furthermore,people will have confidence in us.Paraphrase1.Our clothes can show our attitude and make people have confidence in us.2.Our clothes represent our attitude and help us win trust from others.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么 How to Connect?but,yet,however,though,.as well as,in addition to,not only.but also,together with,besides,moreover,futhermore,.thus,therefore，as a result,consequently,.meanwhile,on the other hand,on the contrary,contrast with,.firstly/secondly/finally/.because(of),due to,in view of,on account of,.for example/instance,such as,and so onin short,in conclusion,in a word,all in all.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Connect Key PointsPoint1 Wearing proper clothes is important for first impressions.Point2 Schools ask students to wear a uniform because it helps them in many ways,such as being serious about their study.Point3 Besides schools,other places,like hospitals,banks,police stations and some companies also want their staff to wear uniforms because of convenience.Point4 Our clothes represent our attitude and help us win trust from others.For example,In conclusion,在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Write and Edit Wearing proper clothes is important for peoples first impressions.(要点1)For example,Schools ask students to wear a uniform because it benefits them in various ways.(要点2)Besides schools,other places,like hospitals,banks,police stations and some companies also want their staff to dress in uniforms because of convenience and seriousness.(要点3)In conclusion,our clothes can show our attitude and win confidence from others.(要点4)(67词)在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么How to Write a Good Summary?connect the key points with proper words;1.read 2.paraphrase 3.connect 4.write read two or three times to find the key points;rewrite the key points;write a draft and edit it.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么HomeworkFinish writing the summary and polish it.Read the passage on A4 of the newspaper(7)and write a summary,paying attention to the procudures of writing a summary.