中考英语作文指导--人物介绍课件.ppt

【话题解读话题解读】人物介绍是人物介绍是记叙文中记叙文中常见的一种写作类型，常见的一种写作类型，内容可以是介绍自己，也可以是介绍别人。内容可以是介绍自己，也可以是介绍别人。在写此类文章时，通常需要对人物在写此类文章时，通常需要对人物进行由具体到抽象、由上到下、由外部到进行由具体到抽象、由上到下、由外部到内在性格特点的描写，这也是描写人物的内在性格特点的描写，这也是描写人物的基本顺序。注意在基本顺序。注意在结尾处简单做一个小结结尾处简单做一个小结或概括或概括。同时还应考虑具体的写作要求，。同时还应考虑具体的写作要求，突出重点。突出重点。【真题回放真题回放】校团委准备在教师节举行征文活动，请根校团委准备在教师节举行征文活动，请根据提示，回想自己在学习生活中遇到的最据提示，回想自己在学习生活中遇到的最喜欢的一位老师，以喜欢的一位老师，以“My FavoriteTeacher”为题，用英语写一篇为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。词左右的短文。内容包括：内容包括：1.对老师的相貌描写；对老师的相貌描写；2.喜欢老师的原因：喜欢老师的原因：讲课很好；讲课很好；与学与学生做朋友；生做朋友；要求：要求：1.所写内容应包括所提供的信息，可适当发所写内容应包括所提供的信息，可适当发挥；挥；2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。信息。(2016 山东济南山东济南)【真题分析真题分析】该书面表达要求介绍自己最喜欢的一位老师，该书面表达要求介绍自己最喜欢的一位老师，属于人物介绍。按照提示内容，具体可以分属于人物介绍。按照提示内容，具体可以分三段来写：三段来写：第一段第一段描写老师的描写老师的外貌特征外貌特征；第二段第二段说明说明喜欢老师的原因喜欢老师的原因，其中第三点可，其中第三点可以从老师的兴趣爱好、性格特点、行为习惯以从老师的兴趣爱好、性格特点、行为习惯等方面来写；等方面来写；最后一段最后一段可以对老师做一个可以对老师做一个总体评价总体评价。【标准范文标准范文】My Favorite Teacher Everyone has his favorite teacher,and so do I.My favorite teacher is Mr.Wang,our English teacher.He is about 40 years old.He is tall and strong and has big eyes.Why do I like Mr.Wang?Firstly,his classes are interesting;he explains things clearly and makes them easy to understand.Secondly,he is very friendly and is like a friend to us.Thirdly,he not only teaches us lessons,but also teaches us how to become a better person.I am lucky to be a student of Mr.Wang.He is really a wonderful teacher!【高分突破高分突破】My Favorite Teacher Of all my teachers,there is one teacher whom I love and admire the most.She is Miss Zhao,my science teacher.Miss Zhaois a pretty young lady.She is small and slim with a pair of glasses.I like Miss Zhao because of the following reasons:First,she is an ideal teacher.She has all those qualities which a good teacher is expected to have.Second,she is easy to talk to.We all regard her as a friend more than a teacher.Third,Miss Zhao gives equal attention to all her students.In her eyes,each student is an angel.Miss Zhao is a role model to all of us.I hope to be like her one day.【高分揭秘高分揭秘】1.习作既有对老师外貌的描写，也给出了喜习作既有对老师外貌的描写，也给出了喜欢老师的三个原因，符合写作任务的内容欢老师的三个原因，符合写作任务的内容要求。要求。2.习作句式丰富，既有简单句，也有复杂一习作句式丰富，既有简单句，也有复杂一些的定语从句些的定语从句。习作中还用了。习作中还用了admire,expect,regard.as.,equal attention,role model等较高级的词汇，给习作增色等较高级的词汇，给习作增色不少。不少。3.习作中习作中连接词连接词First,Second 和和Third 的使的使用使习作逻辑结构清晰、过渡自然。用使习作逻辑结构清晰、过渡自然。4.习作习作结构紧凑结构紧凑，由开头的，由开头的there is one teacher whom I love and admire the most 到结尾处到结尾处I hope to be like her one day，前前后呼应后呼应；文章结尾的句子也有力地升华了；文章结尾的句子也有力地升华了主题。主题。【素材积累素材积累】1.词汇词汇外貌：外貌：good-looking,pretty,slim,strong,medium build性格、品质性格、品质：outgoing,shy,active,friendly,honest,quiet,clever,smart兴趣爱好兴趣爱好：favorite,prefer,enjoy,be interested in,be fond of,show/have a talent for其他其他：admire,regard.as.,role model2.句子句子The best thing about her is her sense of humor.She never talks about people behind their backs.He is the kind of person you can always believe in.The woman is well-dressed and looks very fashionable.He is the same age as his brother but he looks much younger.The reason why I like her is that she has always madeeveryone around her feel safe and happy.There is no doubt that he is one of the greatest men in history.My neighbor is a kind old man and is generous to people around.When people first meet my father,they often think he is a very strict father.But when they get to know him better,they realize that he is very kind in fact.【写作任务】【写作任务】假设你是某校九年级假设你是某校九年级(1)班的学生，你校英班的学生，你校英文俱乐部正在举行文俱乐部正在举行“Young Star Award”的评的评选活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的选活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的同学李明，以供参评。内容要点如下：同学李明，以供参评。内容要点如下：1.高个，擅长篮球，成绩优秀；高个，擅长篮球，成绩优秀；2.乐于助人，积极参加活动，热衷慈善；乐于助人，积极参加活动，热衷慈善；3.去年，他去年，他；4.已筹集一千多元，准备寄给贫困地区学已筹集一千多元，准备寄给贫困地区学 生；生；5.得到高度赞扬，我们以他为荣。得到高度赞扬，我们以他为荣。注意事项：注意事项：1.短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；顺、意思连贯；2.第第3 要点的内容须围绕主题，用要点的内容须围绕主题，用23 句句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；3.词数在词数在90个左右。个左右。参考词汇：慈善参考词汇：慈善(charity)_ (2016江苏无锡江苏无锡)Young Star Award Li Ming is one of my classmates.He is a tall boy who is good at playingbasketball.He is so hard-working that he always gets good grades in exams.LiMing is helpful and he always takes an active part in different activities in his spare time.He is especially interested in charity.Last year,he held a school concert to raise money.The concert was successfuland he raised about one thousand yuan.He is going to send the money to studentsin poor areas.My classmates and I think highly of Li Ming and we are proud of him.