《高日作业指导》PPT课件.ppt

Writing FundamentalsEnglish in Daily LifeAgendalThe first assignment lThe second assignmentThedeadlinel高级日常英语作业01(第1-4单元)l高级日常英语作业02(朗读题)MyRoutineTripInstructions:FollowingtheexampleinUnit4,Activity6,Task2,writeabriefaccount(120-150words)describingyourroutinetriptoaworkplaceortoastudyplace.p.189Now I study at the university,which is in the town centre.My home is on the outskirts of the town,about one and a half miles from the university.There is a regular busservice between the two but I prefer to walk when the weathers fine.It is a pleasant walk,downhill all the way!It takes me about forty minutes and I spend the time enjoying the peace and quiet of the early morning and thinking about the day ahead.I pass a lovely old church on the way and have to cross the river.Sometimes,if I have time,I stop to chat to one or two people on the way.If it is raining,I have to take the bus.The bus journey itself is quick but its a long walk from my house to the bus stop and then from the bus stop to the university.So it is actually quicker to do the whole journey on foot!It is cheaper too.The bus costs 54 pence,which is quite expensive for such a short distanceSomehelpfulwordslSubway/underground地铁lTaxi/bus/bike/bicycle/motorbikelhitchhiking搭便车lLong-distancebus长途客车lRegularbus班车lShuttlebus往返巴士Markingcriteria本课程作业为短文写作，满分为100分，分为语言（50分），内容（40分）、和结构或格式（10分）三部分，三部分分值相加即为作文的总分。语言l50分用词巧妙，词汇丰富，表达手法灵活多变，写作技巧精湛，明显超出普通水平。语法结构严谨。l40分用词正确，能灵活运用多种表达手法，偶有选词错误。语法结构一般。l30分（及格）用词能力稍差，表达手法单一，选词有较明显错误。语法结构需较多改进。l20分用词较差，表达手法单一。文中时用汉语词汇或拼音。选词有明显错误。语法结构急需改进。Example1Iusuallyleavemyhometomyworkingplaceatabout7:40am.Itisnotashortdistancebetweenmyhomeandworkingplace.Ineedtakeovergroundandundergroundtubetomyoffice.BatongLineistheovergroundoneandairconditioned.Itrunsevery3minutesatpeaktimeandhaveanaveragejourneytimeof30minuteswithpassengerspackedlikesardines.AftergettingofftheBatongLineIchangedtotheLine1tubewhichistheundergroundtube.SomeofthetraininLine1arenotairconditioned,itissoterribleinthesehotdays.Ifoundaladybesidemefaintedbecauseoftheheataftertwentyminitesjourny.Icompaniedhergotoffthecarriageandaskedthetubestafftakecareofher.Fornotimeadmit,Icontinuedmyjourney.WhenIgottomyoffice,Ithoughtisitsoexpensiveofthetimetosurviveinthisbigcity.Example1Iusuallyleavemyhometomyworkingplaceatabout7:40am.Itisnotashortdistancebetweenmyhomeandworkingplace.Ineedtakeovergroundandundergroundtubetomyoffice.BatongLineistheovergroundoneandairconditioned.Itrunsevery3minutesatpeaktimeandhaveanaveragejourneytimeof30minuteswithpassengerspackedlikesardines.AftergettingofftheBatongLineIchangedtotheLine1tubewhichistheundergroundtube.SomeofthetraininLine1arenotairconditioned,itissoterribleinthesehotdays.Ifoundaladybesidemefaintedbecauseoftheheataftertwentyminitesjourny.Icompaniedhergotoffthecarriageandaskedthetubestafftakecareofher.Fornotimeadmit,Icontinuedmyjourney.WhenIgottomyoffice,Ithoughtisitsoexpensiveofthetimetosurviveinthisbigcity.Example2Iwalkedjoyfullyalongthepaththatwaslitupbythegoldenraysofthemorningsun.Beautifulflowersofmanycolorswereblooming.Howfragranttheysmelled!Littlebirdsweresinginginthetrees,asifgreetingme“goodmorning!goodmorning!”.myheartwasburstingwithhappiness.我愉快的走在小路上，金色的朝阳洒满大地，盛开的花朵五彩缤纷，香气袭人，小鸟在树上歌唱，好像在向我道早安，我幸福的心花怒放MainDifferencesbetweenEnglishandChinesel1.narrationanddescriptioninChineseseemtobeabitmoreornateor“flowery”thaninEnglishl2.ChineseandEnglish-speakingpeopleseemtolookdifferentlyontheuseofsetphrasesandexpressions.GoodEnglishwritingencouragesoriginalityanddiscourages“clichs”e.g.千方百计，七嘴八舌，三令五申ascoldasacucumberl3.English-speakingwriterstendtobelessmilitantintoneandlanguagethanmostChinese.Theideaisto“letthefactsspeakforthemselves”.l4TheyhavedifferentmeaningsofwordsRead读书读书cook做饭做饭drive开车开车XLetsgoandeatourmealsXHesangsongsattheconcertXIdontsmokecigarettesordrinkwine.l5TheyhavedifferentwordformationsSuffix:er:work-workerwrite-writer员员:教员教员,学员学员,演员演员ly：beautifully,greatly,wonderfully地地:完美地完美地,高兴地高兴地,匆忙地匆忙地6Theydifferingrammar:Numberofnounse.g.Onebook,twobooks一本书一本书,两本书两本书们们:人们人们,同志们同志们,朋友们朋友们X猴子们猴子们,书们书们X三个人们三个人们l7TheydifferinTenseandaspect:Work,worked,willwork(现现在在)工工作作,(过过去去)工工作作,(将来将来)工作工作progressive:正在正在Theyarehavinglunch。perfect:已经已经l7Theyhavedifferentwordorders毛主席毛主席ChairmanMao劳动模范劳动模范Modelworker东北东北Northeast衣食住衣食住Food,clothing,andhousingl6)Useofverb我有点累了我有点累了Iamabittired他的眼睛是蓝的他的眼睛是蓝的Hehasblueeyes.8 Different ways of thinking and association ofthoughtanddifferentculturalbackground.Youhavemysympathy.我很同情你我很同情你(x你有我的同情你有我的同情)他老婆跑了他老婆跑了.Hiswifeabandonedhim.(XHiswiferanaway.)lExercise:l够够意意思思!不不过过我我的的意意思思你你还还是是收收下下,不不要要不不好好意思意思.lHow kind you are!But I insist that you should receive it.Dont feel embarrassed.l Wrap-up本课程作业为短文写作，满分为100分，分为语言（50分），内容（40分）、和结构或格式（10分）三部分，注注意意汉汉英英差差异异内容内容l40分文章内容切题，内容充实，思维新颖见解独到，思想水平卓越。篇幅适当，行文流畅，有较强的可读性和趣味性。l28文章基本切题，但思想表达能力有限，立意不清。篇幅较短。句子结构一般，有时意思模糊，理解较困难。可读性及趣味性较弱l24文章大致切题。篇幅不够，句子结构较差Example1Iusuallyleavemyhometomyworkingplaceatabout7:40am.Itisnotashortdistancebetweenmyhomeandworkingplace.Ineedtakeovergroundandundergroundtubetomyoffice.BatongLineistheovergroundoneandairconditioned.Itrunsevery3minutesatpeaktimeandhaveanaveragejourneytimeof30minuteswithpassengerspackedlikesardines.AftergettingofftheBatongLineIchangedtotheLine1tubewhichistheundergroundtube.SomeofthetraininLine1arenotairconditioned,itissoterribleinthesehotdays.Ifoundaladybesidemefaintedbecauseoftheheataftertwentyminitesjourny.Icompaniedhergotoffthecarriageandaskedthetubestafftakecareofher.Fornotimeadmit,Icontinuedmyjourney.WhenIgottomyoffice,Ithoughtisitsoexpensiveofthetimetosurviveinthisbigcity.结构结构l9/10分文章语篇结构清晰，能够自如使用连接词连接上下文，语篇逻辑关系清晰l6分文章语篇结构基本清晰，能够使用一些连接词连接上下文，语篇逻辑关系基本清晰；ContentslCapitalisationlCommavs.periodlConnectingsentencesland,so,but,alsolLayoutofEnglishpassageslIndentationlFull-blockCAPITALISATION-1A Report on the Trips“How was your trip?”I asked.He said,“My trip to Yunnan was interesting.”“My trip to Mount Tai,”she said,“was rather tiring.”I asked,“Really?Thats funny.”CAPITALISATION-2lFirstwordsofsentences(sentencefragments)lKeywordsintitleslNouns,verbs,adjectives,adverbs,longprepositionslPrepositionslPropernameslPeoplelPlaces(stars,continents,countries,cities,streets)lLanguageslHolidayslReligionslTitles(Mr.,Ms.,President,Sir,etc.)CONNECTINGSENTENCESland,but,so,orlalsolasaresult,thereforelWhen,before,afterlCONNECTINGSENTENCES1.Irealisenowthattheboyslovedme.2.Iwaslittle.3.Ioftenfeltlonelyandleftout.4.Theywerealwayshavingfuntogether.5.Iwastoosmalltoplaywiththem.6.IsupposeIwasquiteindependent.CONNECTINGSENTENCESIrealisenowthattheboyslovedme,butwhenIwaslittleIoftenfeltlonelyandleftout.Theywerealwayshavingfuntogether,butIwastoosmalltoplaywiththem.Asaresult,IsupposeIwasquiteindependentPunctuation&BasicSentenceStructureslIt too far from Beiwai,I think you can change your work to Tianjin.Its too far from Beiwai.I think you can Its too far from Beiwai,but I think you can As it is too far from Beiwai,I think you can Its too far from Beiwai,so I think you can Its too far from Beiwai;I think you can Its too far from Beiwai,and I think you can Punctuation&BasicSentenceStructureslMy brother like seeing films.lThe man and her daughter is here.lIt is early in the morning.I got up before my parents and AgreementCOMMAvs.PERIODlMaria是北京外国语大学的新生，她今年19岁，来自英国。lMariaisanewstudentatBFSU.Sheis19andisfromBritain.LAYOUTOFPASSAGESIndented styleFull block styleIworkatasoftwarecompanythatislocatednearFuXingmen,Xichengdistrict.MyhomeisinHai-dianDistrict,itsabout12kilometrefrommyworkplace.Therearemanywaystowentfrommyhometomyoffice.Ittakesalmostonehourbybustogettomyworkplacefrommyhome.Althoughitislongjourney,Thetransportisconvenient.Therearethreedirectbusservice.No716,No732andNo723withair-condition,thefeeofNo716isverycheap,only1Yuan,butNo732orNo723are2to3Yuans.Icanalsochoosetotakethesubwaytosavetime,butitmoreexpensiveandIneedtotakebustogettothesubwaystation.ItakesubwayonlywhenIgotuplate.Itspendsmeabout45minuteand6Yuan.Themostexpensivewaytogotoworkistaxi.Itsreallyexpensive,butnotsavememuchtimeactually.Italwayscostover20Yuanbecauseofthetraffic,soIseldomgettoworkbytaxi.IftheweatherisfineandIamfullofenergy,Iprefertogotoworkbybike.Onmywaytotheworkplace,Ipassmanyuniversity,theNationalLibrary,thePurpleBambooParkandDiaoyuTai.Itisalsoagoodformofphysicalexercisesforme,too.Canyouimproveit?IworkatasoftwarecompanythatislocatednearFuxingmen,XichengDistrict.Therearemanywaystogofrommyhometomyoffice.Ittakesalmostone732andNo723withair-conditioning.ThefeeofNo716isverycheap,only1subwaytosavetime,butitwillbemoreexpensiveandIneedtotakeabustoabout45minutesand6Yuan.Themostexpensivewaytogotoworkisbytaxi.Itsreallyexpensive,butnotsavingmemuchtimeactually.Italwayscostsover20Yuanbecauseofthetraffic,soIseldomgettoworkbytaxi.IftheweatherisfineandIamfullofenergy,Iprefertogotoworkbybike.Onmywaytotheworkplace,Ipassmanyuniversities,theNationalLibrary,thePurpleBambooParkandDiaoyutai.Itisalsoagoodformofphysicalexerciseforme,too.MyhomeisinHaidianDistrict,about12kilometresfrommyworkplace.Yuan,butNo732orNo723are2to3Yuan.Icanalsochoosetotakethegettothesubwaystation.ItakethesubwayonlywhenIgetuplate.Ittakesmehourbybustogettomyworkplacefrommyhome.Althoughitisalongjourneythetransportisconvenient.TherearethreedirectbusservicesNo716,NoAgendalThe first assignment lThe second assignmentlReadthefollowingtext,imitatingtheassignmentrecording.Pleaserecordyourownreadinganduploadittotheplatform.lIwasluckyenoughtofindaveryniceplacetoliveinsoonafterIarrived.Therentsonly45poundsaweek,plusmyshareofthebills.Itsaroominaflatinahigh-riseblock.Therearethreeothertenantsandthoughweeachhaveourownrooms,wesharethesittingroom,kitchenandbathroom.TheroomsarequitewellfurnishedandthereseverythingIneedinthekitchen-exceptacoffeemachine.Theresatelevisioninthesittingroombutnotelephone.Thatshouldsavemequiteabitofmoney.Illhavetogetusedtowritinglettersinstead!IhaventyetspentmuchtimewiththeothertenantsbutIdontforeseeanyproblems.lTheblockisinratheraroughneighbourhoodbutournext-doorneighbourseemsaniceguy.Hesratherquietbutveryhelpful.Hesalreadytoldmewheretofindthebestpubsandsoon.ThereareafewshopsnearbysoIcandomostofmyshoppinglocally,butIllhavetogointotownformostotherthings.Itsonlyabouttwentyminuteswalkfromthetowncentrewhichisjustaswellsincethebusesdontseemtorunveryoften!l出处：高级日常英语Unit5-Activity7-Task2l100分分l语音准确清晰，表现稳定；能准确自如地运用所有语音技巧，如语调、节奏、连读、弱读等。l90分分l除少数音外，语音基本准确清晰，表现基本稳定；能比较自如地运用多数语音技巧，如语调、节奏、连读、弱读等。l80分分l语音基本准确，表现大体稳定，有时不够清晰；能够运用一些朗读技巧，如语调、节奏、连读、弱读等。l70分分l多数语音准确，表现不够稳定，吐字不够清晰；朗读生硬，缺乏语音技巧，如语调、节奏、连读、弱读等。l60分分l语音多不准确，中式发音很重，吐字很不清晰；朗读生硬，缺乏语音技巧，如语调、节奏、连读、弱读等，造成一定听读困难。l1Mp3或录用笔l2电脑上录音：开始,程序,附件,娱乐,录音机l3下载录音软件：蓝光录音CoolEditPro