人教版新课标必修二-Unit-4-Wildlife-protection-writing-倡议信公开课件.pptx
1.1.写作思路:写作思路:这是一篇倡是一篇倡议书。倡。倡议书又称倡又称倡议信,是信,是就某些事情或就某些事情或问题向有关部向有关部门或群体或群体发出倡出倡议、提出、提出建建议时所使用的日常所使用的日常应用文。倡用文。倡议书一般由五部分一般由五部分组成,即:成,即:标题、称呼、正文、称呼、正文、结尾、落款。倡尾、落款。倡议书的的正文正文应当包括以下三个方面:当包括以下三个方面:(1)发出倡出倡议的背景和原因;的背景和原因;(2)倡倡议的主的主题和内容;和内容;(3)郑重地重地发出倡出倡议。【写作分析与指写作分析与指导】倡议书倡议书.2 开门见山提出倡议的目的开门见山提出倡议的目的(即写出主题句)(即写出主题句)简单陈述某一现象及其可能简单陈述某一现象及其可能带来的结果带来的结果提出具体的倡议提出具体的倡议.3支持支持/同意同意反对反对采取紧急采取紧急/强硬强硬/有效措施有效措施努力努力.对付对付面对面对众所周知众所周知预防同类事情再次发生预防同类事情再次发生摆脱摆脱尽我们所能尽我们所能不难得出结论不难得出结论综上所述综上所述简而言之简而言之总的来说总的来说获得成功获得成功be in favor of be in favor of be opposed to /oppose be opposed to /oppose take urgent/firm/effective measures to.take urgent/firm/effective measures to.make every effort/spare no effort to.make every effort/spare no effort to.deal with/cope withdeal with/cope withbe faced /confronted withbe faced /confronted withAs is known to all,/It is know to all that.As is known to all,/It is know to all that.prevent such things from happening againprevent such things from happening againget rid of/smooth awayget rid of/smooth awaydo our utmost/do our best leveldo our utmost/do our best levelWe can easily draw a conclusion that.We can easily draw a conclusion that.From what has been mentioned above,From what has been mentioned above,in short/briefin short/briefin a word/in conclusion/to sum upin a word/in conclusion/to sum upachieve successachieve success我写信号召每个人采取积极措施我写信号召每个人采取积极措施.夺人眼球篇首句夺人眼球篇首句无可否认,无可否认,.是一个极其严重的问题是一个极其严重的问题.政府应该坚决政府应该坚决/紧急采取行动来应对该紧急采取行动来应对该问题。问题。There is no denying that.is an extemely serous problem.The government should take firm/There is no denying that.is an extemely serous problem.The government should take firm/urgent action to deal with it.urgent action to deal with it.面对这个严重的问题,面对这个严重的问题,在情况恶化前应该采取有效措施在情况恶化前应该采取有效措施Faced with the serious problem,effective measures should be taken before things get worse.Faced with the serious problem,effective measures should be taken before things get worse.我认为我认为.是每个人的职责,以实现是每个人的职责,以实现.的目标。的目标。I think it is everyones duty to.to achieve the goal of.I think it is everyones duty to.to achieve the goal of.Im writing to call on everyone to take an active part.Im writing to call on everyone to take an active part.5让我们现在就行动起来让我们现在就行动起来 /从小事做起,每天不遗余力的尽一份力从小事做起,每天不遗余力的尽一份力Lets start now/start out small and spare no effort to do a little bit every day.总之,我们必须考虑这一问题并且总之,我们必须考虑这一问题并且.In conclusion/To conclude,we must take this problem into account and.请从现在起加入请从现在起加入.的活动的活动 please join in the action to.from now on.韵味无穷结尾句韵味无穷结尾句是时候我们人人都为地球母亲尽一份绵薄之力。是时候我们人人都为地球母亲尽一份绵薄之力。It is high time that we should contribute to the prosperity of our mother,the earth.6带着创立一个和谐班级的目的,带着创立一个和谐班级的目的,我们的班长采取了一系列的措施。我们的班长采取了一系列的措施。With the aim of creating a harmonious class,our monitor carried out a series of measures.面对面对,采取一些日常措施以保持采取一些日常措施以保持对我们而言十分重要。对我们而言十分重要。Faced with,it is of vital importance for us to take some everyday measures to stay.我们应竭尽全力来克服这些困难。我们应竭尽全力来克服这些困难。We should make every possible effort to overcome/conquer the difficulties.在还来得及之前我们应该采取行动了。在还来得及之前我们应该采取行动了。It is hight time for us to do something about the problem before it is too late.越早采取预防措施越好。越早采取预防措施越好。The sooner preventive measures are taken,the better it would be.提分句型提分句型.7只有我们现在采取有效措施来解决问题,我们才能防止不久的将来会面临的水患。只有我们现在采取有效措施来解决问题,我们才能防止不久的将来会面临的水患。Only if we take effective steps to deal with this problem now can we prevent a real water problem in the near Only if we take effective steps to deal with this problem now can we prevent a real water problem in the near future.future.简而言之,环境保护应受到我们更多的关注。简而言之,环境保护应受到我们更多的关注。In brief/short,the environmental protection should call for more of our concern.In brief/short,the environmental protection should call for more of our concern.综上所述,综上所述,我们可以得出结论,甚至是最小最普通的工作,如扫大街也是保持社会正常运我们可以得出结论,甚至是最小最普通的工作,如扫大街也是保持社会正常运转必不可少的部分。转必不可少的部分。From what has been mentioned above,we can come to a conclusion that even the smallest and the most From what has been mentioned above,we can come to a conclusion that even the smallest and the most ordianry job,such as cleaning the street is also the necessary part to keep society going smoothly.ordianry job,such as cleaning the street is also the necessary part to keep society going smoothly.人们应该尽快采取有效措施来确保此类事件再也不会发生。人们应该尽快采取有效措施来确保此类事件再也不会发生。People should take effective measures as soon as possible to make sure that such a thing will never happen again.People should take effective measures as soon as possible to make sure that such a thing will never happen again.面对这么严峻的问题,我们应该竭尽所能改善现状面对这么严峻的问题,我们应该竭尽所能改善现状Faced with such severe problems,we should make every possible effort to improve the present situation.Faced with such severe problems,we should make every possible effort to improve the present situation.必修二 Unit4 Wildlifeprotectionwriting1010月月4 4日是世界动物日(日是世界动物日(World Animals DayWorld Animals Day),请你用英语写一则),请你用英语写一则倡议书,来呼吁大家一起行动保护野生动物。内容包括:倡议书,来呼吁大家一起行动保护野生动物。内容包括:1.1.简介野生动物的现状,分析其数量减少的两个原因。简介野生动物的现状,分析其数量减少的两个原因。2.2.谈谈保护野生动物的重要性,并提出保护的方法(至少两种)。谈谈保护野生动物的重要性,并提出保护的方法(至少两种)。3.3.呼吁大家一起行动保护野生动物,保护我们美丽的家园。呼吁大家一起行动保护野生动物,保护我们美丽的家园。作文要求:作文要求:1 1不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。姓名。2 2语句连贯,词数语句连贯,词数8080个左右。文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数。个左右。文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数。1 1_that_ led to the disappearance of the poor _that_ led to the disappearance of the poor animals.animals.不能否认的是正是人类才导致了这些可怜的动物的消失。不能否认的是正是人类才导致了这些可怜的动物的消失。2 2_ to punish those who _ wildlife._ to punish those who _ wildlife.应采取强有力的措施去惩罚那些伤害野生动物的人。应采取强有力的措施去惩罚那些伤害野生动物的人。3 3_,we human being should learn to _ wildlife.we human being should learn to _ wildlife.总之,我们人类应该学会与野生动植物和平共处。总之,我们人类应该学会与野生动植物和平共处。There is no denyingit is human beings thatPowerful measures should be takendo harm toIn a wordlive in peace with佳句佳句佳句佳句1 1decrease v_2_ n n保存;保护保存;保护3survival n_4habitat n_5_ adjadj.和平的和平的6_ _认为认为很重要很重要7_采取行动采取行动8do _ _ _ we can 尽我们所能尽我们所能conservation幸存;存活栖息地peacefulattach importance to.as possible as减少;降低take action9_对对有伤害有伤害10keep the balance of._11be concerned about _12_砍伐砍伐13live in harmony with._14run out of_15raise peoples awareness of environmental protectiondo harm/damage to保持保持平衡平衡关注;担心关注;担心cut down与与和谐相处和谐相处用完;用尽用完;用尽提高人提高人们的的环保意保意识1._认为认为很重要很重要2._采取行动采取行动3._尽我们所能尽我们所能4._对对有伤害有伤害5._保持保持平衡平衡6._关注;担心关注;担心7._砍伐砍伐8._与与和谐相处和谐相处9._用完;用尽用完;用尽10._制定法律制定法律 11._创造良好的生态环境创造良好的生态环境12._残忍地杀害野生动物残忍地杀害野生动物attach importance to.take actiondo what we can/spare no effortdo harm/damage tokeep the balance of.be concerned about cut down be/live in harmony/peace with.run out ofmake/pass lawscreate a pleasant ecological environmentkill/hunt wildlife without mercy13.13.保护濒临灭绝的动物不被杀害保护濒临灭绝的动物不被杀害14.14.处于濒临灭绝的危险之中处于濒临灭绝的危险之中 15.15.严惩捕猎者严惩捕猎者punish the hunters severelypunish the hunters severelyprotect the endangered animals from being killedprotect the endangered animals from being killed(be)in danger of extinction/becoming extinct/dying out(be)in danger of extinction/becoming extinct/dying out16.16.致力于保护野生动物致力于保护野生动物17.17.唤醒人们保护野生动植物的意识唤醒人们保护野生动植物的意识18.18.采取有效措施保护珍稀动物采取有效措施保护珍稀动物19.19.改善动物的生存环境改善动物的生存环境20.20.保持保持/破坏生态平衡破坏生态平衡devote oneself to protecting wildlifedevote oneself to protecting wildlifetake effective measures to protect rare animalstake effective measures to protect rare animalsarouse peoples awareness of wildlife protectionarouse peoples awareness of wildlife protectionimprove the living environment of the animals improve the living environment of the animals keep/break ecological balance;keep/break ecological balance;keep/damage the balance of naturekeep/damage the balance of natureaffecthuntaccording to succeedin peacein danger of die outProtectfrom Pay attention to1 1)过度捕杀极大地影响了野生动物的数量。)过度捕杀极大地影响了野生动物的数量。2 2)野生动物处于濒临灭却的危险中。)野生动物处于濒临灭却的危险中。Hunting too much has affected the number of wild life greatly.The wild animals are in danger of dying out.A series of laws have come into effect.3)3)一系列的法律已经付诸实施。一系列的法律已经付诸实施。4 4)人类可以和动物和平共处。)人类可以和动物和平共处。The mankind can live in peace(peacefuly)with the animals/in harmony with the animals.根据新的法律,任何人都不允许捕杀野生动物。根据新的法律,任何人都不允许捕杀野生动物。According to the new law,no one is allowed to hunt the wild animals.我们会成功地阻止这种状况的恶化。我们会成功地阻止这种状况的恶化。The government has take a series of measures to pay attention to the situation.政府已经关注这种状况,并采取了一系列措施。政府已经关注这种状况,并采取了一系列措施。A series of measures have been taken by the to government to pay attention to the situation.Our government has paid attention to the situation and has taken a series of measures.to.句式一句式一句式三句式三句式二句式二We will succeed in protecting/stopping the situation from getting worse.升级平淡句升级平淡句(1)(1)用强调句型升级句用强调句型升级句(2)(2)将将句合并升级为结果状语从句句合并升级为结果状语从句It is hunting too much that has affected the number of wild animals greatly.We will succeed in protecting the situation from getting worse so that human beings can live in peace with animals.1.众所周知,打猎野生动物的人应该受到惩罚。众所周知,打猎野生动物的人应该受到惩罚。It is well known that the people who It is well known that the people who hunt the wildlife should be punished hunt the wildlife should be punished 2.毫无疑问,野生动物的生存环境正在被破坏。毫无疑问,野生动物的生存环境正在被破坏。There is no doubt that the environment of the wildlife is being destroyed.There is no doubt that the environment of the wildlife is being destroyed.3.我们应该关注野生动物的保护问题,因为它们我们应该关注野生动物的保护问题,因为它们 要么濒临灭绝,要么处于危要么濒临灭绝,要么处于危险中。险中。We should(are supposed to)pay more attention to the protection of wildlife because they are either dying out or We should(are supposed to)pay more attention to the protection of wildlife because they are either dying out or in danger.in danger.4.最重要的是我们应该唤醒大众对野生动物的最重要的是我们应该唤醒大众对野生动物的 保护意识保护意识.The most important is that we should raise the public awareness of protecting wildlife.The most important is that we should raise the public awareness of protecting wildlife.5.只有当我们保护这些野生动物不受伤害时,它们才能安宁地生活只有当我们保护这些野生动物不受伤害时,它们才能安宁地生活 Only when we protect wildlife from being harmed will they live in peace.Only when we protect wildlife from being harmed will they live in peace.3衔接成语篇(注意使用适当的过渡衔接词汇:as a result,fortunately)It is hunting too much that has affected the number of wild animals greatly.As a result,many wild animals are in danger of dying out.Fortunately,our government has paid attention to the situation and has taken a series of measures.A series of laws has come into effect.According to the new laws,no one is allowed to hunt wild animals.We will succeed in protecting the situation from getting worse so that human beings can live in peace with animals.写作素材写作素材(关于野生动物保护关于野生动物保护)1.1.大量捕杀影响了野生动物的数量。大量捕杀影响了野生动物的数量。2.2.一些动物已经灭绝,一些动物身处险境。一些动物已经灭绝,一些动物身处险境。3.3.政府已经关注这种情况,并采取了一系列措施。政府已经关注这种情况,并采取了一系列措施。4.4.我们要像保护我们的眼睛一样尽力保护环境。我们要像保护我们的眼睛一样尽力保护环境。5.5.只有这样我们才能成功地阻止这种状况的恶化。只有这样我们才能成功地阻止这种状况的恶化。提提示示:加加蓝蓝部部分分用用本本单单元元词词汇汇表表达达,并并且且请请使使用用动动名名词词短短语语作作主主语,倒装等。语,倒装等。连句成篇句成篇(将以上句子连成一篇将以上句子连成一篇50词左右的英语短文词左右的英语短文)Hunting Hunting too too much much affected affected the the number number of of wild wild animals animals greatly.greatly.As As a a resultresult,some some animals animals have have died died out out and and some some others others are are in in danger.danger.FortunatelyFortunately,our our government government has has paid paid attention attention to to the the situation situation and and has has taken taken a a series series of of measures.measures.We We must must take take every every effort effort to to care care for for the the environment environment as as we we protect protect our our eyes.Only eyes.Only in in this this way way can can we we prevent prevent the the situation situation from getting worse successfully.from getting worse successfully.话题佳作话题佳作你你校校计计划划进进行行一一次次宣宣传传活活动动,主主题题是是保保护护人人类类共共同同的的朋朋友友动动物物。现现请请你你就就此此写写一一份份宣宣传传材材料料,内内容容包包括括动动物物的的生生存存现现状状、动动物物对对于于人人类类的的重重要要性性等等,并并且且在在最最后后提提出倡议。出倡议。Dear friendsDear friends,佳作欣赏Have Have you you noticed noticed that that the the number number of of rare rare animals animals is is on on the the decreasedecrease?With With our our environment environment going going worseworse,many many animals animals cant cant adapt adapt themselves themselves to to the the new new changes changes so so that that many many species species are are endangered endangered or or have have even even died died out.out.BesidesBesides,human human activity activity also also has has a a great great influence influence on on them.them.For For exampleexample,people people often often kill kill them in order to get their meat or fur.them in order to get their meat or fur.世界与环境世界与环境/热点话题热点话题根据要求运用本单元所学知识完成下面小作文,并背诵成文。根据要求运用本单元所学知识完成下面小作文,并背诵成文。1当今,随着经济的发展,许多城市面临严重的环境问题,这当今,随着经济的发展,许多城市面临严重的环境问题,这对人们的生活造成了很大的危害。对人们的生活造成了很大的危害。(be faced with;environmental problems;do great harm to)2遗憾的是许多人没有意识到环保的重要性。遗憾的是许多人没有意识到环保的重要性。(Its a pity that.)3首先我们应该注意唤起人们的环保意识,其次政府应该立即采取措施保护环境。(pay attention to;raise peoples environmental awareness)4就我个人而言,保护生态平衡是每个人的责任。(protect the balance of nature)One possible version:One possible version:NowadaysNowadays,with the development of economywith the development of economy,many cities are faced with serious environmental problemsmany cities are faced with serious environmental problems,which does great harm to peoples life.It is a pity that many people dont realize the importance of which does great harm to peoples life.It is a pity that many people dont realize the importance of environmental protection.environmental protection.Firstly Firstly,we should pay attention to raising peoples environmental awareness.we should pay attention to raising peoples environmental awareness.SecondlySecondly,the government the government should take immediate measures to protect the environment.should take immediate measures to protect the environment.As far As far a as Im concerneds Im concerned,it is everyones duty to it is everyones duty to protect the balance of nature.protect the balance of nature.Im a student from Chongqing,China.I am writing to ask you to1._(Im a student from Chongqing,China.I am writing to ask you to1._(注意注意)the situation)the situation of Finless Porpoises(of Finless Porpoises(江豚江豚)Seriously affected by human activities,finless porpoises in the Yangtze River are Seriously affected by human activities,finless porpoises in the Yangtze River are 2._(2._(处于处于危险中危险中)dying out.To our disappointment,only about 1,000 are estimated to be still)dying out.To our disappointment,only about 1,000 are estimated to be still living at present.We 3._(sincere)hope that WWF can play a role living at present.We 3._(sincere)hope that WWF can play a role 4._(4._(保护这种濒危物种保护这种濒危物种).Firstly,a sponsorship will 5.).Firstly,a sponsorship will 5._(_(大有帮助大有帮助).But more importantly,we need information from experts in WWF to help us better).But more importantly,we need information from experts in WWF to help us better understand the animal.6._(understand the animal.6._(如果是那样的话如果是那样的话),we can take better care of them.),we can take better care of them.7._(in brief/in addition),we should 8._(7._(in brief/in addition),we should 8._(雇佣更多的工人雇佣更多的工人)to help us.)to help us.Though the task is challenging,we are confident that we will 9._(Though the task is challenging,we are confident