必修一Unit4-earthquake-写作公开课课-概要写作课件.ppt

What is a summary?A summary is a _ passage which keeps _of the original（原文）（原文）in your _ words but without your opinion.shortenedthe key information ownmain idea of the passage+key points4-5 sentences60-80 wordsA Night the Earth Didnt Sleep1.Get a general understanding of the passagePart (Para1)_ the earthquakePart (Para2-3)_ the earthquakePart (Para4)_ the earthquake beforeduringafterIn 1976,a _ earthquake struck Tangshan,causing _.great/terrible/massive great losses2.Get the key points 1)Find the topic sentences if anyPart1:Strange things were happening in the countryside of northeast Hebei.Part2:It seemed as if the world was at an end.Everywhere they looked nearly everything was destroyed.Part3:All hope was not lost.Can we just put all topic sentences together to make a summary?Strange things were happening in the countryside of northeast Hebei.But the one million people of the city,who thought little of these events,were asleep as usual that night.2)Rewrite（summarize details 概括）概括）Strange things were happening.There were _ of earthquake.water;well walls;animals;lights;sound;pipessigns But people thought little of these events.1.There were signs of earthquake but people thought little of them.signsIt seemed as if the world was at an end.a _ earthquakeIn 15 terrible seconds a large city lay in ruins.2/3 of themthousands of families400,000_ the whole cityat 3:42directly belowone of the greatestwas felt200 kilometres away;1/3 of the nationa huge crack;steam burst;rivers of dirt_ many people terribledestroyedkilled+A terrible earthquake destroyed the whole city and killed many people.Everywhere they looked nearly everything was destroyed.All hospitals/75%factories/buildings/90%homes goneDams fell/Bridgesnot safe;Railway tracksuseless_ were _.Buildings and facilitiesCows never give milkPigs and chickens were deadSand filled wellsWater,food and electricity were hard to get._ were _.Suppliescut offNearly everything was destroyed,with buildings and facilities _ and supplies _.damagedcut offdamagedA terrible earthquake destroyed the whole city and killed many people.Nearly everything was destroyed,with buildings and facilities damaged and supplies cut off.2.A terrible earthquake destroyed the whole city,with many people _,buildings and facilities _ and supplies _.+killeddamaged cut offAll hope was not lost.Rescue camedig out the trappedbury the deadbuild shelterstransport water3.Rescue in different _ arrived,which made the ruined city _ again.hopeful forms1.There were signs of earthquake but people thought little of them.2.The terrible earthquake destroyed almost the whole city,with many people killed,buildings and facilities damaged and supplies cut off.3.Rescue in different forms arrived,which made the ruined city hopeful again.key pointsIn 1976,a terrible earthquake struck Tangshan,causing great losses.main idea In 1976,a terrible earthquake struck Tangshan,causing great losses._,there were signs but people thought little of them._,the whole city was destroyed,with many people killed,buildings and facilities destroyed and supplies cut off._,rescue in different forms arrived,which made the ruined city hopeful again.before the quakeWhen it hitsoon after the disaster3.Write into a summarylinking devices 连连接手段接手段Luckily,Actually,In 1976,a terrible earthquake struck Tangshan,causing great losses.Actually,before the quake,signs had appeared but people there _them.When it hit,within seconds,the city became simply hopeless,with _,buildings and facilities destroyed and supplies cut off.Luckily,soon after the disaster,rescue in different forms arrived,which made the ruined city hopeful again.synonym 同同义义替替换换4.Polish 润润色色 paid no attention to numerous lives lostA summary1.Main idea of the passage2.Key points1)Find topic sentencessupportmake it more clear and add necessary information3)Rewrite3.Write and Polishlinking devices（衔衔接）接）2)Summarize details (概括）概括）(synonyms)同同义义替替换换 Tips 1.A summary is a short passage of 60-80 words.2.It has 4-5 sentences,with the first one showing the main idea of the passage and others showing the key points.3.Write it in your own words and copying the original（原文）（原文）sentences is not allowed.4.Linking words should be added to make it coherent（连贯连贯）.5.Be careful to avoid language mistakes.6.Improve handwriting to make the paper neat.1.Review what is learnt about summary writing.2.Write a summary for the passage“A Safe Home”on Page 64.