教你如何扩展句子.ppt

写作进阶提升之三写作进阶提升之三 怎样扩展句子怎样扩展句子 写作进阶提升写作进阶提升简单句的5个基本句型5 主语主语+系动词系动词+表语表语 S+Link.V+P 1.主语主语+谓语谓语 S+V.2.主语主语+谓语谓语+宾语宾语 S+Vt+O3.主语主语+谓语谓语+间宾间宾+直宾直宾 (S+Vt+Oi+Od)4.主语主语+谓语谓语+宾语宾语+宾补宾补 (S+Vt+O+O.C)Mary was a girl.She smiled.Tom liked her.He gave her a picture.She put the picture on the wall.1.Mary was a(n)_ girl.（形容词）2.She smiled _ .(副词）3.Tom liked her _ .（副词）4.He gave her a picture _ _ （定语从句）5.She put the picture on the wall _ _ （状语从句）beautiful happily secretly that he had drawn for her.so that she could see it conveniently.方法一方法一 添加修饰成分添加修饰成分：形容词、副词、不定式短语、分词短语、介词短语、定语从句、状语从句等。Mary was a beautiful and girl.Tom and liked her very much.They soon became good friends.On Marys birthday,Tom gave her a picture and She smiled happily,them and put the picture on the wall.clever Jack a bunch of roses.accepted方法二方法二 添加并列成分：添加并列成分：Jack was rich.He had his own company.He made a fortune.He bought Mary a diamond ring.Neither Jack nor Tom knew what Mary thought.During that night before Marys birthday,Jack had a dream in which he asked Mary to marry him.During the same night,Tom couldnt get to sleep untilhe finished drawing the picture of Mary from his memory.方法三方法三 构成并列句：构成并列句：用并列连词 and,so,but,while,for（因为）等。Jack was rich,he had his own company made a fortune,he bought Mary a diamond ring,neither Jack nor Tom knew what Mary thought.During that night before Marys birthday,Jack had a dream in which he asked Mary to marry him Tom couldnt get to sleep until he finished drawing the picture of Mary from his memory.forandso butwhileAfter her birthday party,Mary couldnt helplooking at the picture now and then because in her eyeslooking at herself in the picture was like looking at a superstar on the screen.To see is to believe.The picture proved that Tom had a talent for painting and her choosing him as her boy friend was a wise decision.方法四方法四 使用使用V-ing短语、不定式短语或名词性从短语、不定式短语或名词性从句等做主语、宾语或表语等。句等做主语、宾语或表语等。that _ _ Summary扩扩展展句句子子的的方方法法方法一：添加修饰成分方法一：添加修饰成分方法二：添加并列成分方法二：添加并列成分方法三：构成并列句方法三：构成并列句方法四：使用方法四：使用V-ing短语、不定短语、不定 式短语或名词性从句式短语或名词性从句 作主语、宾语或表语等作主语、宾语或表语等It was obvious that Jack was unhappy.What made him angry was that the diamond ring he had bought for Marys birthday was refused by her.When he told Mary that not only he was more handsome than Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money，Mary said softly but firmly，“I am very very sorry，Jack.You should know the fact that liking you does not mean loving you.To have money is not to have everything.However，we remain good friends as before.”Step 1.Finish reading the following paragraph in one minute to get the main idea.It was obvious Jack was unhappy.made him angry was the diamond ring he had bought for Marys birthday was refused by her.he told Mary that not only he was more handsome Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money，Mary said softly firmly，“I am very very sorry，Jack.You should know the fact liking you does not mean loving you.To have money is not to have everything.，we remain good friends as before.”thatWhatthatWhenthanbutthatHoweverStep 2.Fill in the missing words according to the context.Step 3.Read aloud the following paragraph,ready to repeat it.It was obvious that Jack was unhappy.What made him angry was that the diamond ring he had bought for Marys birthday was refused by her.When he told Mary that not only he was more handsome than Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money，Mary said softly but firmly，“I am very very sorry，Jack.You should know the fact that liking you does not mean loving you.To have money is not to have everything.However，we remain good friends as before.”It was obvious that _.What _was that the diamond ring _ wasrefused by her.When he told Mary that not only _ than Tom，_ he had a car,a flat _.Mary said _ but _,“You should know the fact that liking you does not mean _.To have money is not _.However,we remain good friends as before.”RepeatWho will win the game?Step 4 Homework:Do exercises 1 and 2 in your paper.