牛津版英语八年级下册Unit-2-Travelling-Task公开课ppt课件.ppt

Unit 2 TravellingTaskTIP:kittys albumOrganize her ideasWrite about her tripWhen,where,who,what,howMain pointsDetails Kittys trip to Hong KongMainpointsDetailsWhenThewinterholidayWhere HongKongWhoMyparentsandIWhatVisitingplacesofinterestsDisneylandparadeofDisneycharactersexcitingSpaceMountainrideOceanParkdolphinshowandbirdshowOtheractivitiesVisitedmuseumsWentshoppingEatingDeliciousseafoodHowEnjoyedthetripInteresting,exciting,fun,niceWanttovisititagainOrganize her ideasThinkofsomethinginterestingandspecialtowriteabout.Thedayfinallyarrived.MyparentsandIleftfortheairportintheearlymorning.IttookusaboutthreeandahalfhourstoflytoHongKong.Thenextday,wewenttothemostfamousthemepark(1)_.Ilovedwatchingtheinteresting(2)_ofDisneycharacters,andtheSpaceMountainridewasvery(3)_.Onthethirdday,wevisitedanotherfamousthemeparkinHongKong(4)_.Wewatchedthe(5)_andthebirdshowthere.Theyweregreatfun.Onthefourthday,wevisitedsomemuseums,andthenwewent(6)_.Mymotherenjoyedthatdaymost.Sheboughtalotofpresentsforourrelativesandherfriends.Wewenttoaseafoodrestaurantonthefifthdayandhada(7)_meal.ThefoodinHongKongwasreallynice.Weenjoyedthistripverymuch,andIhopeIcanvisititagainsomeday.DisneylandparadeexcitingOceanParkdolphinshowshoppingdeliciousWrite about her tripWrite about her tripStructure of Kittys articleThedayfinallyarrived.MyparentsandIleftfortheairportintheearlymorning.IttookusaboutthreeandahalfhourstoflytoHongKong.Thenextday,wewenttothemostfamousthemeparkDisneyland.IlovedwatchingtheinterestingparadeofDisneycharacters,andtheSpaceMountainridewasveryexciting.Onthethirdday,wevisitedanotherfamousthemeparkinHongKongOceanPark.Wewatchedthedolphinshowandthebirdshowthere.Theyweregreatfun.Onthefourthday,wevisitedsomemuseums,andthenwewentshopping.Mymotherenjoyedthatdaymost.Sheboughtalotofpresentsforourrelativesandherfriends.Wewenttoaseafoodrestaurantonthefifthdayandhadadeliciousmeal.ThefoodinHongKongwasreallynice.Weenjoyedthistripverymuch,andIhopeIcanvisititagainsomeday.Para.1Para.2Para.3Para.4Para.5Para.6Introduce the time,the place and the character.The key words&the topic sentences can be helpful.When,Where,Who Para.2-5 Main body MainpointDetails Details MainpointDetails MainpointTalk about the places to go,the activities to do and the food to eat.WhatMainpointWrite about the feelings.HowDetails 1.IntroductionWhen,Where,Who2.MainbodyWhat3.ConclusionHowIntroduction Mainbody Conclusion It took us to fly to.Useful expressionsThe next day,we went to.I loved watching the interesting.was very exciting/beautiful/fantastic.On the third/fourth day,we visited.We went to on the fifth day.was the best part of the day.We enjoyed this trip very much.e.g.Last summer holiday,my parentsand I went to Suzhou.It took us aboutthree hours by coach.When?Where?Who?How?Last summer holidayTwo months agoLast weekendLast May Day holidayNanjingHainan IslandBeijing Suzhou By train By planeFly toTake the coachMy parents and IMy family and I My classmates and I My friends and I Write section by sectionCollectthemainpoints Choose a holiday Think of when,where,who and how(the way of transportation)IntroductionThedayfinallyarrived.MyparentsandIleftfortheairportintheearlymorning.IttookusaboutthreeandahalfhourstoflytoHongKong.TipsWriteanintroductionaboutyourtriptoSuzhou.Write section by section Mainbody MainbodyThenextday,wewenttothemostfamousthemeparkDisneyland.IlovedwatchingtheinterestingparadeofDisneycharacters,andtheSpaceMountainridewasveryexciting.Onthethirdday,wevisitedanotherfamousthemeparkinHongKongOceanPark.Wewatchedthedolphinshowandthebirdshowthere.Theyweregreatfun.Onthefourthday,wevisitedsomemuseums,andthenwewentshopping.Mymotherenjoyedthatdaymost.Sheboughtalotofpresentsforourrelativesandherfriends.Wewenttoaseafoodrestaurantonthefifthdayandhadadeliciousmeal.ThefoodinHongKongwasreallynice.Think about three or four main points.Write one or two sentences to support each point.Organize the ideas in clear time logic.Use the simple past tense.Use adj.and adv.to make your article more interesting.TipsWhat?Details Visiting places of interestsee the Tiananmen Square visit the Palace MuseumOther activitiesclimb the Great WallEatingtry delicious local foodNanjingHainan IslandVisiting places of interestvisit Tianya Haijiao visit YalongBayOther activitiesgo to the beach and swim in the seaEatingtry delicious seafood and fresh fruit BeijingVisiting places of interestclimb Purple Mountain visit Nanjing Underwater WorldOther activitiesgo to ConfuciusTemple,buysouvenirsEatingtry traditional local snacks MainpointsSuzhou CollectthemainpointsanddetailsWrite3paragraphsaboutthetriptoNanjing.The next day,we climbed _.I loved the fresh air and the beautiful view.We took many photos.Organizetheideasinproperorder._on the fourth day.We tried lots oftraditional local snacks.They were very _.After that,I _ some nice souvenirs for my cousin.On the third day,we visited Nanjing Underwater World._ _ _WewenttoConfuciusTempledelicious/tastyboughtPurpleMountainWesawmanykindsofanimalsinthesea,suchasdolphins,sharks,penguins,etc.Thenwewatchedadolphinshow.Itwasgreatfun.e.g.We enjoyed the trip very much,and I hope I can visit here with my parents again in the future.Write section by section ConclusionWeenjoyedthistripverymuch,andIhopeIcanvisititagainsomeday.Tips Write about the feelingsHow?Interesting,exciting,fun,nice,greatenjoy the tripWant to visit it againThinkaboutthemainpointsWriteaconclusionaboutyourtriptoHainanIsland.Complete sentencesComplete sentencesWeThefoodherewenttoSanya.tookmanyphotos.wasdelicious.MyfamilyandIWe visited some museums.They were great fun.SubjectBricksVerbBricksWrite good sentences u have a subjectu have a verbu state a complete thoughtMyfamilyandItookmanyphotos.Thefoodherewasdelicious.WewenttoSanya.Different expressionsDifferent expressionsuUse different ways to express our thoughts and opinions.Write good sentences IttookusaboutthreeandahalfhourstoflytoHongKong.11WespentaboutthreeandahalfhoursflyingtoHongKong.22WespentaboutthreehoursandahalfgoingtoHongKongbyair.Mymotherenjoyedthatdaymost.Mymotherlikedthatdaymost.Thatdaywasmymothersfavourite.Enjoy A tripWho How When What Where Discussion Group workMake your fact fileMainpointsDetailsWhenWhereWhoWhatHowWriting timeIntroduction Mainbody ConclusionWrite the first draft It took us to fly to.The next day,we went to.I loved watching the interesting.was very exciting/beautiful/fantastic.On the third/fourth day,we visited.We went to on the fifth day.was the best part of the day.We enjoyed this trip very much.Writing timeLastmonth,myfamilyandIhadatriptoBeijing.ItspentusabouttenandahalfhourstoreachBeijingbytrain.Thenextday,wewenttotheTiananmensquare,thebiggestcitysquareintheworld,manyvisitorswerethere.Wefeltveryexcited.Onthefifthdaywewenttobuysomepresents.Mymotherenjoyedthatdaymost.Sheboughtlotsofparentsforourrelativesandfriends.Thereweretoomanypeopleintheshoptocount.Wealsotiredsomelocalfood.Itwasdelicious.IlikeBeijingDuckbest.Weenjoyedthetripverymuch,andIhopeIcanvisititagainsomeday.MovepartstotherightplaceAddCutoutunnecessarydetailsnewmaterialsRevise Writing timeWevisitedthePalaceMuseumonthethirdday.Thebuildingswereverybeautifulandthereweremanyoldthings.Itwasveryintresting.Onthefourthday,weclimbedtheGreatWall.Itwasverygreat.MyMyfathertookmanyphotos.Weweretired,andwewereveryhappy.We watched the raising of the national flag.We watched the raising of the national flag.Revise GrammarSpellingPunctuationCapitalizationLastmonth,myfamilyandIhadatriptoBeijing.ItspentusabouttenandahalfhourstoreachBeijingbytrain.Thenextday,wewenttotheTiananmensquare,thebiggestcitysquareintheworld,manyvisitorswerethere.We watched the raising of the national flag.We watched the raising of the national flag.Wefeltveryexcited.WevisitedthePalaceMuseumonthethirdday.Thebuildingswereverybeautifulandthereweremanyoldthings.Itwasveryintresting.Onthefourthday,weclimbedtheGreatWall.Itwasverygreat.MyMyfathertookmanyphotos.Weweretired,andwewereveryhappy.Onthefifthdaywewenttobuysomepresents.Mymotherenjoyedthatdaymost.Sheboughtlotsofpresentsforourrelativesandfriends.Wealsotiredsomelocalfood.Itwasdelicious.IlikeBeijingDuckbest.Weenjoyedthetripverymuch,andIhopeIcanvisititagainsomeday.Writing timeSquare Square tooktook Thoughweweretired,wewereveryhappy.interesting interesting Many triedtriedRewrite Writing timeLastmonth,myfamilyandIhadatriptoBeijing.IttookusabouttenandahalfhourstoreachBeijingbytrain.Thenextday,wewenttotheTiananmenSquare,thebiggestcitysquareintheworld.Manyvisitorswerethere.Wewatchedtheraisingofthenationalflag.Wefeltveryexcited.WevisitedthePalaceMuseumonthethirdday,.Thebuildingswereverybeautifulandthereweremanyoldthings.Itwasveryinteresting.Onthefourthday,weclimbedtheGreatWall.Myfathertookmanyphotos.Thoughweweretired,wewereveryhappy.Onthefifthdaywewenttobuysomepresents.Mymotherenjoyedthatdaymost.Sheboughtlotsofpresentsforourrelativesandfriends.Wealsotriedsomelocalfood.Itwasdelicious.IlikeBeijingDuckbest.Weenjoyedthetripverymuch,andIhopeIcanvisititagainsomeday._ _ _ _Payattentiontoyourhandwriting.Items Comments Marks自自评评他他评评师师评评Structure(2)Aclearorder(introduction,mainbodyandconclusion)2分Content(6)Include mainpointsandmoredetails(when,where,who,whatandhow)6分Language(8)Goodsentencesandrichexpressions5分Organizetheideasincleartimeorder1分GrammaticallyCorrect2分Others(4)Correctspelling,capitalizationandpunctuation2分Beautifulhandwriting2分Totalmarks 20分Assessment table Myholiday1IntroductionIntroduction(when,where,(when,where,who)who)2Mainbody(what)Mainbody(what)3Conclusion(how)Conclusion(how)Summary Fact fileDraft Revise Rewrite How to write1.Talk about your holidays with your friends.2.Choose one of your holidays.Make a fact file and write another article.Homework