读后续写与概要写作微技能四-动作和神情描写课件.ppt

动作和神情描写是读后续写描述事件的最重要的描写方式。动作和神情描写要围绕续写文章的主题而设计，不要漫无边际的发挥。文中的动作和神情描写要侧重描述事件的过程和细节，使故事连贯流畅。描写时要着重身体动作描写，这样才能把文中人物描述的栩栩如生。描写时要多用具体性词汇，不要过多地用笼统性词汇，这样才能使故事更加形象生动。描写动作和神情时可以增添形容词、副词和介词短语等，使动作更加具体，表达更加到位。微技能四动作和神情描写微技能四动作和神情描写语言输入素材积累，为续写奠基.词汇积累1climb v攀登，爬2shrug v.耸肩3spread v.伸开，展开4nod v.点头5run v.跑6smell v.闻，嗅7water v.流口水8head v.前往9kiss v.亲吻10raise v.举起；使升高11stand up 站起身12walk gracefully 步态优美地走13a walk across the fields 穿过田野的散步14give a murmur of approval 低声表示赞同15say sth deliberately 故意地说16jump to ones feet 一跃而起17make ones first appearance 首次露面18cast a hasty glance at sb 朝某人匆匆瞥了一眼19cast an admiring glance at sb 向某人投以爱慕的目光20gaze up at the stars 凝望着天上的星星21look at sb with a fixed gaze 凝视着某人22throw a curious glance at sth 好奇地向某人看了一眼23hear the thunder rolling in the distance 听到远处的隆隆雷声24praise sb(up)to the skies极力称赞、大肆吹捧某人25never hear anything against sb从未听说过反对某人的话26.recognize sb at first hearing一听到声音就知道是某人27break into shouts of applause 爆发出阵阵喝彩声28listen impatiently 不耐心地听29pace back and forth 来回踱步30stroll about/around/through the town 在城里闲逛 31walk across a street 步行穿过马路32walk arm in arm 臂挽着臂走33walk through the pouring rain 在倾盆大雨中走34wander into the woods 漫步向树林里走去 35wander over the countryside 在乡间漫步.佳句背诵1His head drooped and tears fell into his lap.他耷拉着脑袋，眼泪滴落在大腿上。2He had a slight frown on his face.他的脸上呈现出有点儿愁眉不展的样子。3They walked hand in hand along the path.他们手拉手沿着小路走。4She rested her head on his shoulder.她将头靠在他的肩膀上。.基础练习补全句子1My mouth _ when I smelled the food.闻到食物的香味，我开始流口水了。2She _ to say something.她张开嘴要说什么。3She took the childs hand and _ 她拉住孩子的手牵着他爬上台阶。语言输出层级训练，让续写添彩started wateringopened her mouthhelped him climb the steps4She _.“Thats all I can tell you.”她耸耸肩，摊开双手说：“我只能告诉你这么多了。”5He _ and the waiter _他打了个响指，侍者跑了过来。shrugged and spread her handssnapped his fingerscame running.综合演练完成读后续写，注意动作描写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Robert and Henry were two friends in the same class.They always played together and went home together.One day Robert and Henry were going home from school,when,on turning a corner,Robert cried out,“A fight!Lets go and see！”“No，”said Henry.“Let us go home quietly and not meddle with(插手)this quarrel.We have nothing to do with it and may get into mischief(trouble)Also our parents are expecting to have dinner with us together at home and I dont want them to worry about me.”“You are a coward,and afraid to go，”said Robert,and off he ran.Henry went straight home,and in the afternoon went to school as usualBut Robert had told all the boys that Henry was a coward,and they laughed at him a great deal.From then on,they looked down upon Henry and didnt want to play with him together.Henry was sad but he wasnt angry with Robert for his rude behavior,because he learned that true courage is shown most in bearing misunderstanding when it was not deserved,and that he ought to be afraid of nothing but doing wrong.Thus,he just ignored the other boys laughter and continued to go to school and study as well.However,Robert didnt invite Henry to go home with him anymore.Instead,he had some other boys who also thought Henry was a coward.Every day after school,they didnt go home directly but went to the river or somewhere to play games and had a lot of fun.A few days later,Robert was bathing with his new friends in a river,and got out of his depth.He struggled,and screamed for help,but all in vain.The boys who had called Henry a coward got out of the water as fast as they could,but they did not even try to help him.【根据提示完成范文】Paragraph 1：Robert was fast sinking.It seemed as if Robert would be drowned.Just at the moment,Henry happened to be passing by.Hearing the screams,Henry _(跑向河边，脱掉衣服，跳进河里)without hesitation.He _(伸手够向罗伯特)just as he was sinking the last time.With great effort,and with much danger to himself,he _(把Robert带到岸边)ran to the riverside,threw off his clothes and jumped into the waterreached Robertbrought Robert to the shoreParagraph 2：Thus,Roberts life was saved.Robert and his new friends were ashamed at having called Henry a coward.They realized that Henry had true courage They _(向Henry道歉)for their rude behavior and asked for his forgiveness.Henry forgave them happily.He and Robert were friends again and they _(和往常一样一起回家)From this,Robert learned what true courage was:never be afraid to do good,but always fear to do evil.said sorry to Henrywent home together as usual