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书面表达专题二：说明利弊议论文 三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目是：学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始？请你根据下表题目是：学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始？请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。一些同学认为一些同学认为 另一些同学认为另一些同学认为1应从儿童时期开始学习英语应从儿童时期开始学习英语2儿童时期记忆力好，可以记儿童时期记忆力好，可以记 住很多单词住很多单词3能为以后的英语学习打下坚能为以后的英语学习打下坚实的基础实的基础1.不应从儿童时期开始学习英不应从儿童时期开始学习英语语2.儿童时期既要学汉语拼音又儿童时期既要学汉语拼音又要要 学英语，易混淆学英语，易混淆3.会影响汉语学习和今后的英会影响汉语学习和今后的英语学习语学习讨论未取得一致意见讨论未取得一致意见注意：注意：1文章的起始句已给出；文章的起始句已给出；2词数：词数：100左右（不包括已给的起始句）；左右（不包括已给的起始句）；3参考词汇：基础参考词汇：基础 foundation 汉语拼音汉语拼音 Chinese pinyin 你的观点（理由）你的观点（理由）作文模板作文模板1 _ had a discussion about whether_.Opinions are differnt on the question(过渡句过渡句)._of the students think _ should _.To begin(start)with，_.Whats more,_.On the other hand,_ of the students think _ shouldnt _ .Because _.Whats worse,_.In short,_ have not arrived at any agreement yet.本人观点：本人观点：As far as I am concerned./(In my opinion,.;Its my opinion that),For one reason,.For another reason In a word,.作文题目作文题目理由一理由一理由二理由二（反观点）（反观点）理由一理由一理由二理由二（正观点）（正观点）介绍讨论的主题介绍讨论的主题(开头句开头句)：我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是 We had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood我们已经作了一个调查，调查内容是学生如何选我们已经作了一个调查，调查内容是学生如何选择高考志愿择高考志愿 Weve had a survey on how to choose their courses,majors and universities.Opinions are divided on this issue.Opinions are mainly divided into two groups.Different people,however,have different opinions on this matter.在这个问题上大家意见有分歧。在这个问题上大家意见有分歧。主要有两种不同意见。主要有两种不同意见。然而，在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法。然而，在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法。过渡句过渡句介绍正方观点：介绍正方观点：Sixty percent of the students are for the idea.Sixty percent of the students think it necessary toSome people think that According to them,all of us should.Some believe that进一步介绍正方观点进一步介绍正方观点Whats more,we can as well as Besides,its,which However,of the students thinkOn the other hand,of the students thinkHowever,others have different opinions.But of the students thinkOthers argue that，In their opinion,介绍反方观点介绍反方观点进一步介绍反方观点进一步介绍反方观点Whats worseWhats moreIn addition,Besides,Plus,First,Second,Third,In short,no agreement has been reached yet.So far,no agreement has been reached.In short,the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.总结句总结句(未达成一致未达成一致)本人观点：本人观点：As far as I am concerned,.(In my opinion,.;Its my opinion that)For one reason,.For another reason In a word,.Can you translate?1.15%1.15%的人们认为不应该在公众场合禁烟。的人们认为不应该在公众场合禁烟。2.2.抽烟是长期的习惯无法立刻改变。抽烟是长期的习惯无法立刻改变。TranslateTranslate禁烟禁烟不应该不应该禁烟禁烟15%认为认为我们不应该禁烟我们不应该禁烟15%认为我们不应该认为我们不应该在公共场在公共场所禁烟所禁烟stop smokingshouldnt我们我们不应该禁烟不应该禁烟we15 percent of us thinkin public places.1.2.一种习惯一种习惯抽烟是抽烟是一种习惯一种习惯抽烟是一种抽烟是一种长期的长期的习惯习惯抽烟是长期的习惯抽烟是长期的习惯无法立刻改变无法立刻改变。a habitSmoking islong-time that can not change immediately.英语写作翻译时要注意抓住关键词，英语写作翻译时要注意抓住关键词，然后抓主干句子，再进行添枝加叶，然后抓主干句子，再进行添枝加叶，表达完整的句子。表达完整的句子。英语句子的翻译步骤英语句子的翻译步骤Step 1:Step 1:找出主干找出主干(who-do-what)(who-do-what)Step 2:Step 2:添枝加叶添枝加叶(how-where-when-why)(how-where-when-why)Basic writing skills Try to translate the sentences into English in your test paper!英语写作基本步骤英语写作基本步骤Step 1:Step 1:关键词（关键词（key wordskey words）Step 2:Step 2:基本句子基本句子(sentence)(sentence)Step 3:Step 3:段落段落(passage)(passage)Thinking假如昨天你们班级以假如昨天你们班级以No smoking in public places?为题开了一次讨论会。请根为题开了一次讨论会。请根据以下情况写一篇据以下情况写一篇60字左右的报道，介绍讨论字左右的报道，介绍讨论会的情况。会的情况。结果结果 15%认为不应该认为不应该在公共场合禁烟在公共场合禁烟85%认为应该在认为应该在公共场合禁烟公共场合禁烟理由理由 1、吸烟是个人自、吸烟是个人自由。由。2、吸烟能提高工、吸烟能提高工作效率。作效率。3、长期的习惯无、长期的习惯无法立刻改变。法立刻改变。1、吸烟有害健、吸烟有害健康。康。2、吸烟浪费金、吸烟浪费金钱。钱。3、吸烟对环境、吸烟对环境和他人也造成了和他人也造成了伤害。伤害。Step 1Step 1：想出关键词：想出关键词1.15%的人们认为不应该在公众场合禁烟。percent think stop smoking in public places2.抽烟是长期的习惯无法立刻改变。its hard to change 3.吸烟对环境和他人也造成了伤害。do harm to people environmentStep 2Step 2：写出基本句子：写出基本句子1.15%认为不应该在公众场合禁烟。15 percent of us think we should not stop smoking in public.2.抽烟是长期的习惯无法立刻改变。People have smoked for so many years,so its hard for them to give up smoking3.吸烟对环境和他人也造成了伤害。Smoking does harm to the health and environment.Step 3Step 3：把句子连成段落：把句子连成段落15%认为不应该在公共场合禁烟认为不应该在公共场合禁烟 1、吸烟是个人自由。、吸烟是个人自由。2、吸烟能提高工作效率。、吸烟能提高工作效率。3、长期的习惯无法改变。、长期的习惯无法改变。15 percent of us think we should not stop smoking in public place.Because they think that people have their own freedom/right to smoke.Smoking can improve their work.Its hard to give up smoking for those people have smoked for many years.85%认为应该在公共场合禁烟认为应该在公共场合禁烟1、吸烟有害健康。、吸烟有害健康。2、吸烟浪费金钱。、吸烟浪费金钱。3、吸烟对环境和他人也造成了伤害。、吸烟对环境和他人也造成了伤害。85 percent of us think we should stop smoking.Because:Smoking does harm to peoples health and the environment.Smoking will cost us so much money.15 percent of us think we should not _(在公共在公共场场所禁止抽烟所禁止抽烟).Because they think that people _(有有权权利做利做)smoke.Smoking can im_ their work.They have smoked for many years,So its hard to _(放弃抽烟放弃抽烟)85 percent of us think we should stop smoking in public places.Because:Smoking _(对对有害有害)peoples health and the environment.Smoking will cost us_ (如此多钱如此多钱).初步成文初步成文stop smoking in public placeshave their own freedom/right toprovegive up smokingdoes harm toso much money文章结构文章结构正反正反观点观点对比对比类的类的文章文章提出问题提出问题不同观点对比不同观点对比说明自己观点说明自己观点(根据要求，根据要求，要求写才写要求写才写)观点一：观点一：观点二：观点二：15 percent of us think we should not stop smoking in public place.85 percent of us think we should stop smoking in public places.基基本本结结构构理由：理由：Because they think that people have their own freedom/right to smoke.Smoking can improve their work.Its hard to give up smoking for those people have smoked for many years.理由：理由：Because:Smoking does harm to peoples health and the environment.Smoking will cost us so much money.自己的观点自己的观点（要求写就写不要（要求写就写不要求就不写）求就不写）In my opinionI(dont)thinkI agree/disagree with提出问题提出问题Yesterday we had a discussion about whether or not we should stop smoking in public places.范文：范文：Yesterday we had a discussion about whether or not we should stop smoking in public places.Eighty-five percent of us think it is necessary to stop smoking in public places.Most of us think smoking does harm to peoples health and the environment.Besides,people should not spend so much money on the cigarettes.Meanwhile,about fifteen percent of us didnt agree.In their opinion,people should have their own right to do the things they like,such as smoking.It is very hard to give up smoking for those people who have smoked for many years.And they think smoking is useful for people to improve their work.Summery 英语写作基本步骤英语写作基本步骤Step 1:找出关键词（找出关键词（key words）Step 2:句子句子(sentence)Step 3:段落段落(passage)正反正反观点观点对比对比类的类的文章文章提出问题提出问题不同观点对比不同观点对比说明自己观点说明自己观点(根据要求，要根据要求，要求写才写求写才写)Thats all!Thanks for listening!