读后续写和概要写作21-2020高考英语新题型读后续写+概要写作精选ppt课件(上).pptx
高考新题型高考新题型之之概要写作概要写作Summarywhat the summary writing is the criteria of a good summaryhow to write a good summary1235After this class,you will be able to know:普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明概要写作：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）词数词数少于少于4040的和的和多余多余8080的，的，从从总分中减去总分中减去2 2分分评分原则1 1、本题总分为、本题总分为2525分，按分，按5 5个档次给分。个档次给分。2 2、评评分分时时，先先根根据据所所写写概概要要的的内内容容和和语语言言初初步步确确定定其其所所属属档档次次，然然后后以以该该档档次次的的要要求求来来衡衡量量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。确定或调整档次，最后给分。3 3、词数少于、词数少于4040的和多于的和多于8080的，从总分中减去的，从总分中减去2 2分。分。评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：(1)(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；(2)(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；(3)(3)上下文的连贯性；上下文的连贯性；(4)(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况；对各要点表达的独立性情况；Narration（记叙文）（记叙文）Exposition Exposition（说明文）（说明文）（说明文）（说明文）Forms of LiteratureArgumentation(议论文）议论文）Whats the genre of the passage?A.Narration.B.Argumentation.C.Exposition.Step 1:Read for the genre Step 2:Read for the structure A.B.C.Whats the structure of the passage?Tips:Read the beginning and ending of each paragraph.Para1.Weight loss is most likely to be successful when people change their habits.Here are several ways to make that happen.Step 3:Read for the key points Para2.Regular physical activity burns calories and builds muscles-both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off.Walking the family dog,cycling to school,and doing other things that increase your daily level of activity can all make a difference.Para3.One reason people get less exercise these days is because of an increase in“screen time”-the amount of time spent watching TV,looking at the computer,or playing video games.Limit recreational screen time to less than 2 hours per day.When you really get away from“screens”,such as TV,computers,IPad or mobile phones,you will really benefit a lot.Para4.Portion sizes are bigger than they used to be,and these extra calories contribute to obesity.Another key factor in weight gain is that more people drink sugary drinks,such as sodas,juice drinks,and sports drinks.So choose smaller portions(or share restaurant portions)and go for water or low-fat milk instead of soda.Para5.People who skip breakfast often feel so hungry that they eat more later on.So they get more calories than they would have if they ate breakfast.In fact,people who skip breakfast tend to have higher BIMs than people who eat breakfast.Para6.If you really put the above into practice at once,you will definitely reduce your weight gradually.And wish you have a good figure.Para1.Weight loss is most likely to be successful when people change their habits.Here are several ways to make that happen.Step 4:Paraphrase the key pointsTip1：change the subject(变主语变主语)1.Changing some habits may be a good way to lose weight.2.Its necessary to change some habits for losing weight.3.Whether people can lose weight or not depends on their living habits.Para2.Regular physical activity burns calories and builds muscles-both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off.Walking the family dog,cycling to school,and doing other things that increase your daily level of activity can all make a difference.Tip2:Change the words 1.Taking more physical exercise will contribute to peoples health.2.Increasing the amount of physical exercise will benefit people a lot.benefit/contribute to physical exercise Para3.One reason people get less exercise these days is because of an increase in“screen time”-the amount of time spent watching TV,looking at the computer,or playing video games.Limit recreational screen time to less than 2 hours per day.When you really get away from“screens”,such as TV,computers,IPad or mobile phones,you will really benefit a lot.?Para3.One reason people get less exercise these days is because of an increase in“screen time”-the amount of time spent watching TV,looking at the computer,or playing video games.Limit recreational screen time to less than 2 hours per day.When you really get away from“screens”,such as TV,computers,IPad or mobile phones,you will really benefit a lot.Tip3:omit the detailed information（省略细节）（省略细节）1.Reducing the screen time is good for losing weight.2.We should reduce the“screen time”.reduce/lessenbe goood for/contibute to Para4.Portion sizes are bigger than they used to be,and these extra calories contribute to obesity.Another key factor in weight gain is that more people drink sugary drinks,such as sodas,juice drinks,and sports drinks.So choose smaller portions(or share restaurant portions)and go for water or low-fat milk instead of soda.Tip 4：combine（合并）（合并）the sentences and key wordsSticking to smaller portions and avoiding sugary drinks contribute to weight loss.Para5.People who skip breakfast often feel so hungry that they eat more later on.So they get more calories than they would have if they ate breakfast.In fact,people who skip breakfast tend to have higher BIMs than people who eat breakfast.Tip 5：Express it in an opposite way (正话反说，反话正说正话反说，反话正说)People should avoid skipping breakfast.Para6.If you really put the above into practice at once,you will definitely reduce your weight gradually.And wish you have a good figure.=Tip 2:Use words or phrases with similar meanings People will have a good figure if they follow the above suggestions.Para.1:Its necessary to change some habits for losing weight.Para.2:Taking more physical exercise will contribute to peoples health.Para.3:We are supposed to reduce“screen time”.Para.4:?Para.5:?Para.6:?How to be coherent?How to be coherent?conjunction words+First+Meanwhile/BesidesStep1:Read for the genre(体裁体裁)Step2:Read for the structure Step3:Read for the key pointsStep4:Paraphrase the key points accurately and brieflyStep5:Combine the paraphrases to form a coherent(连贯连贯)summarySteps for summary writingSteps for summary writing27Its time for you to write!complete 01correct 02concise 03 coherent 04 Changing some habits may be a good way to lose weight.First,taking more physical exercise will make much difference to peoples health.Meanwhile,we are supposed to reduce“screen time”.Besides,sticking to smaller portions and avoiding sugary drinks contribute to weight loss.Finally,people should avoid skipping breakfast.Therefore,people will have a good figure if they take the above suggestions.(60W)One possible version
