2014届高考英语一轮复习第一部分分类写作第五讲议论文课件新人教版.ppt

根根据据提提供供的的信信息息，如如图图画画、图图表表、提提纲纲等等表表达达自自己己观观点点的的作作文文，是是一一种种在在近近几几年年的的高高考考英英语语试试卷卷中中出出现现频频率率越越来来越越高高的的考考查查形形式式。要要求求考考生生根根据据所所提提供供的的信信息息写写一一篇篇短短文文，或或叙叙述述一一件件事事情情，或或介介绍绍某某一一事事物物，或或通通过过图图画画揭揭示示某某一一社社会会现现象，并象，并结结合所写内容合所写内容阐阐述自己的述自己的观观点。点。1写作攻略写作攻略 (1)把所提供的信息有机地串联起来，使之成为内容把所提供的信息有机地串联起来，使之成为内容 连贯的句子。连贯的句子。(2)确定短文需用的时态和人称。确定短文需用的时态和人称。(3)根据描述内容发表议论。根据描述内容发表议论。2高分制造技巧高分制造技巧(1)恰当地使用连词及过渡词，使所给信息连接自然；恰当地使用连词及过渡词，使所给信息连接自然；(2)该文体中常用一般现在时；该文体中常用一般现在时；(3)整篇文章一般分为三段：第一段提炼观点；第二段叙述或整篇文章一般分为三段：第一段提炼观点；第二段叙述或 描写所给信息；第三段发表自己的观点；描写所给信息；第三段发表自己的观点；(4)以日常阅读为基础，注意总结主题词汇，尤其是动词短语，以日常阅读为基础，注意总结主题词汇，尤其是动词短语，尽量符合语句表达的地道性要求；尽量符合语句表达的地道性要求；(5)注意借鉴佳作范文的成功之处，并且留心在日常写作练习注意借鉴佳作范文的成功之处，并且留心在日常写作练习 中反复尝试；中反复尝试；(6)经常进行三言两语的话题练习，多给自己增加一些写作表经常进行三言两语的话题练习，多给自己增加一些写作表 达的信心。达的信心。下图是某大学教授对其学生是否成功的判断标准以及人们下图是某大学教授对其学生是否成功的判断标准以及人们对于这种观点的看法。请根据所给内容用英语写一篇短文。对于这种观点的看法。请根据所给内容用英语写一篇短文。Just as the pie chart above shows./Just as is shown in the pie chart above.一、一、“三准三准”确保作文上及格线确保作文上及格线第一步第一步定体裁定体裁目标目标审题审题准准审题审题确定方向，行文确定方向，行文紧紧扣主扣主题题典例为图表式议论文。体现其特点的句型有：典例为图表式议论文。体现其特点的句型有：Opinions are divided among the surveyed people./Differentpeople hold different opinions.In my opinion/As far as I am concerned.第二步第二步定要点、关定要点、关键词键词及及动词时态动词时态目标目标要点准要点准要点全而不漏，要点全而不漏，时态时态合理运用合理运用要点一：最近进行了一项调查。要点一：最近进行了一项调查。关键词：关键词：时态：时态：_要点二：老师用学生所挣的钱来判断他们的成功。要点二：老师用学生所挣的钱来判断他们的成功。关键词：关键词：时态：时态：_ 要点三：从上面图画中可以看到，一个老师说一个学生到要点三：从上面图画中可以看到，一个老师说一个学生到了四十岁如果没有四千万那就意味着耻辱和失败。了四十岁如果没有四千万那就意味着耻辱和失败。关键词：关键词：时态：时态：_conduct/carry out现在完成时现在完成时earn现在完成时现在完成时mean一般现在时一般现在时要点四：在接受调查的人群中，观点不同。要点四：在接受调查的人群中，观点不同。关键词：关键词：时态：时态：_要点五：正如上面饼状图所示，要点五：正如上面饼状图所示，70%的人反对这位老师的观点。的人反对这位老师的观点。关键词：关键词：时态：时态：_要点六：他们认为老师不应该用金钱来评判他们的学生。要点六：他们认为老师不应该用金钱来评判他们的学生。关键词：关键词：时态：时态：_要点七：要点七：25%的人认为这是鼓励学生赚取更多金钱的一种好的人认为这是鼓励学生赚取更多金钱的一种好 方法。方法。关键词：关键词：时态：时态：_ be divided/be different/vary一般现在时一般现在时show;oppose/be against一般现在时一般现在时judge by一般现在时一般现在时encourage一般现在时一般现在时要点八：还有一些人没有发表他们的观点。要点八：还有一些人没有发表他们的观点。关键词：关键词：时态：时态：_要点九：就我看来，我们应该用一种理性的方法来理解成功。要点九：就我看来，我们应该用一种理性的方法来理解成功。关键词：关键词：时态：时态：_要点十：金钱肯定是衡量成功的一种方式。要点十：金钱肯定是衡量成功的一种方式。关键词：关键词：时态：时态：_要点十一：金钱不是衡量成功的唯一方式。要点十一：金钱不是衡量成功的唯一方式。关键词：关键词：时态：时态：_voice/express ones opinions一般现在时一般现在时in a reasonable way一般现在时一般现在时certainly/surely一般现在时一般现在时measure一般现在时一般现在时第三步第三步根据要点提示、关根据要点提示、关键词键词及及时态时态翻翻译译句子句子目标目标表达准表达准表达准确得体，避免表达准确得体，避免汉汉式英式英语语要点一：要点一：_要点二：要点二：_ _要点三：要点三：_ _ _要点四：要点四：_ _Recently,a survey has been conducted.A teacher judges his students success by the money they have earned.As can be seen from the picture,a teacher says that a student without 40 million yuan at the age of 40 means shame and failure.Opinions are divided/different/vary among the surveyed people.要点五：要点五：_ _要点六：要点六：_ _要点七：要点七：_ _Just as the pie chart shows,70%of them oppose the teachers view.They think that teachers shouldnt judge their students success by money.25%of them think this is a good way to encourage students to make more money.要点八：要点八：_ _(用用who引导定语从句引导定语从句)要点九：要点九：_ _要点十：要点十：_要点十一：要点十一：_There are also a few people who dont voice/express their opinions.In my opinion/As far as I am concerned,we should understand success in a reasonable way.Money is certainly one way to measure success.Money is not the only way to measure success.二、二、“四美四美”走出平庸创高分走出平庸创高分第四步第四步词汇词汇、句式升、句式升级级目标目标语语言美言美追求高追求高级级表达，表达，张扬张扬个性个性风风采采升级句式一：用升级句式一：用whether引导的同位语从句连接要点一和要点二引导的同位语从句连接要点一和要点二_升级句式二：用形式主语升级句式二：用形式主语it改写要点三中的状语从句改写要点三中的状语从句_Recently,a survey has been conducted about whether a teacher should judge his students success by the money they have earned.It can be seen from the picture that a teacher says that a student without 40 million yuan at the age of 40 means shame and failure.升级句式三：用升级句式三：用what引导的主语从句改写要点五引导的主语从句改写要点五_升级句式四：把要点八的定语从句改成非谓语结构升级句式四：把要点八的定语从句改成非谓语结构_升级句式五：把要点十中的升级句式五：把要点十中的certainly改成改成it is certain that._What the pie chart shows is that 70%of them oppose the teachers view.There are also a few people not voicing/expressing their opinions.It is certain that money is one way to measure success.第五步第五步巧用巧用过过渡渡词词目标目标衔衔接美接美巧妙巧妙衔衔接接过过渡，渡，读读文如沐春文如沐春风风 要点三与要点四之间可使用表示转折关系的连词要点三与要点四之间可使用表示转折关系的连词 或副或副词词 ；要点五、六表达的反方观点和要点七表达的正方；要点五、六表达的反方观点和要点七表达的正方观点可以使用并列连词观点可以使用并列连词 。第六步第六步正确分段正确分段目标目标结结构美构美行文条理清晰，力避一段到底行文条理清晰，力避一段到底buthoweverwhile第一段：第一段：提出论点提出论点(要点一、二要点一、二)第二段：第二段：根据饼状图，介绍各种观点根据饼状图，介绍各种观点(要点三至八要点三至八)第三段：第三段：发表自己观点发表自己观点(要点九至十一要点九至十一)第七步第七步完善成文完善成文目标目标外在美外在美书书写清晰写清晰规规范，卷面漂亮美范，卷面漂亮美观观 Recently,a survey has been conducted about whether a teacher should judge his students success by the money they have earned.It can be seen from the picture that a teacher says that a student without 40 million yuan at the age of 40 means shame and failure.But opinions are divided among the surveyed people.What the pie chart shows is that 70%of them oppose the teachers view.They think that teachers shouldnt judge their students success by money,while 25%of them think this is a good way to encourage students to make more money.There are also a few people not voicing their opinions.As far as I am concerned,we should understand success in a reasonable way.It is certain that money is one way to measure success,but it is not the only way._ _ _ 目前，家长开车接送孩子上学已成为一种普遍现象，目前，家长开车接送孩子上学已成为一种普遍现象，人们对此做法褒贬不一，请根据下面表格如实反映人们的人们对此做法褒贬不一，请根据下面表格如实反映人们的不同看法，并发表自己的观点。不同看法，并发表自己的观点。支持者的支持者的观观点点反反对对者的者的观观点点省省时时，安全，增，安全，增加交流加交流增加家增加家长负长负担担(时间时间、精力、开支、精力、开支)，容易，容易造成交通堵塞，使学生的依造成交通堵塞，使学生的依赖赖性增性增强强你的观点你的观点参考范文：参考范文：_ _ Nowadays its a common phenomenon that parents drive their children to school and back home,which causes a heated discussion.We can see the supporters believe that more valuable time can be saved for students to get enough sleep,and they consider it reasonable just for the sake of childrens safety.Meanwhile,it can offer more chances for parents to communicate with their children.However,other people hold different opinions.They believe that it results in more traffic jams.Besides,driving kids to and from school will undoubtedly add to the parents burdens in aspects like time,energy and expenses.Still,in the long term children may be more dependent on their parents,which does no good to them.In my opinion,it would be better if they choose to cycle or walk to and from school instead of taking a car,which will definitely help them keep fit._ _ _